1、温州市第五十一中学 尤思阗How to write your experience I fell in love with Yosemite National Park(约塞米蒂国家公园)the first time I saw it,when I was 13.That has been my lifes passion ever since-climbing the rocks and mountains of Yosemite.Ive long made Yosemite my home.I often hear people complain about their surroundi
2、ngs.If you are one of them,I would say the only way to change things is by doing rather than complaining.We need to teach by example.You cant blame others unless you start with yourself.Para1 Topic Para3 Opinion Para 2 An experienceSmall acts:Results:Did the writer succeed?Feelings:Para2 An experien
3、ce It was beyond me why,only to do I got so tiredthat It was amazing Good sentences can be used in your writing.1.It was beyond me why2.I went to the park 3.I got so tired that 4.It was amazing that Have a try5.we made a big difference to the park.6.I asked my classmates to work together.7.many peop
4、le didnt care about the environment.8.only to find it was full of trash.AB1.It was beyond me why many people didnt care about the environment.3.I got so tired that I asked my classmates to work together.4.It was amazing that we made a big difference to the park.2.I went to the park only to find it w
5、as full of trash.2014年 湖北高考题请根据以下提示，并结合具体实例，用英语写一篇短文。Small things make a big difference(小事件能带来大的改变).The small thing we do can make us a responsible member of the society.注意：1.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例。2.词数100-120字。WritingOn a Sunday morning,students_(看望老人)in the nursing home.visited the oldTwo months ago,our
6、school _(组织）and _(筹集)400 yuan.a charity sale organizedraisedSmallLast winter,volunteers _(分发礼物）to the poor children,_ moved them.gave away giftswhichHelp the children in needVisit the old in the nursing homeOrganize a charity saleTry to use the sentences in the reading material.It was beyond me why,
7、only to do I got so tiredthat It was amazing Small things make a big difference小事件能带来大的改变Experiencescriteria(标准)for writing 1.Did you use the correct tense?2.Did you use words and sentences required?3.Did you include the three parts?4.Are there any spelling mistakes?Score:Its what you do right nowth
8、at makes a difference.1.Continue to polish your passage after class.2.Read more cloze tests from the test papers and write down some useful sentences.On a Sunday morning,_(看望老人）in the nursing home,_ great happiness to them(给他们带去了欢乐).students visited the oldbringingTwo months ago,our school _(组织）and _(筹集)400 yuana charity sale organizedraised
