1、专 题 突 破 第 二 部 分 专题六 书面表达【考点分析】全国卷3年考点分布表年份卷别体裁主题内容命题形式2019卷申请信申请成为当地中国画展的志愿者中文提纲卷电子邮件告诉队友球队将要参加的比赛中文提纲卷邀请信邀请英国朋友Allen参加学校的音乐节中文提纲年份卷别体裁主题内容命题形式2018卷电子邮件回复在中国朋友家做客的风俗习惯中文提纲卷邀请信观看英语短片Growing Together中文提纲卷答复信关于学校体育运动情况的回复中文提纲2017卷电子邮件告知英国朋友Leslie下次上课的计划中文提纲卷邀请信邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸艺术展中文提纲卷邀请信邀请留学生朋友Eric加入校
2、乒乓球队中文提纲【结论】从上面的表格可以看出，在近三年的九套试题中，体裁以信件(含邮件)的形式最多，有八个，包括邀请信、申请信、答复信等，而邀请信又占了4个，达到了近一半的比例。可见，在高考作文中，写信件已经成了最重要的写作形式。在命题方面，我们可以看出，在这九套试题中，全部是以“中文提纲”的形式呈现给考生，这样有助于考生更好地构思写作提纲，从而更加流利地进行创作。上面的表格告诉考生，“书面表达”所要求写作的内容均与考生的学习和生活密切相关，常涉及语言学习、活动开展、人际关系，以及关于中国传统文化方面，如参观中国画展、参观中国剪纸艺术展、在中国朋友家做客，等等。【展望2020】通过以上的分析，
3、我们可以预测，在2020年的高考中，考查的形式仍然可能会以文字提纲类为主，也可能仍然是要求考生写一篇书信(或邮件)。考生在平时的训练当中，应该适当地注重这些方面的练习。考 点 突 破(2019 全国卷)假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1写信目的；2个人优势；3能做的事情。高 考 例 析 注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3结束语已为你写好。项目内容体裁和格式 应用文：书信主体时态一般现在时为主，可兼顾现在进行时中心人称第一人称为主段落层次第一段：写信目的；第二段：信件正文；第三段：结尾，表达期望与祝愿写作要点
4、第一段：自我介绍、写信目的；第二段：信件正文，描述申请优势、工作经验或专业知识；第三段：结尾，套用书信的相关语句学生习作得分_25_Dear Sir/Madam，Im Li Hua,an exchange student from China during this summer vacation.Im delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery.Now Im writing to apply
5、 for the position.The reasons for my application are as follows.First of all,having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age,I can communicate freely with others in English.Whats more,years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer,which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in orde
6、r.The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.All in all,my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer.Id appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Yours，Li Hua名师点评这篇书面表
7、达属于应用文中的申请信类型，可以按照申请信的思路来写，同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。首先作者进行自我介绍，简要交代了写作背景，阐明写信目的。第二段是文章的主题，把题干给到的提示完整地体现出来了。文章用First of all，Whats more,The most important factor is that 等过渡性结构自然地串联三个要点。同时灵活运用多样化的句式与众多的高级词汇。最后使用求职信的常用套话及书信的常用套话结尾。参考范文Dear Sir/Madam，I am Li Hua,a student currently studying English in London
8、.Having known a Chinese painting exhibition will be held recently,I am writing to apply for the post of volunteer.I think I am quite qualified for the position.Firstly,I have a good command of English,specially my spoken English which is good enough to communicate with native speakers fluently.Besid
9、es,being an energetic and outgoing girl I get well along with all my classmates and always get ready to help others.Most importantly,having been a student majored in art,I am confident that I can give the visitors a brief introduction about Chinese painting with less difficulty.I would be grateful i
10、f you could give me a full consideration.Yours，Li Hua第1讲 应用文栏目导航1.书信2.发言稿3.通知英语书信写作的关键在于对书信主体的处理：1称呼(salutation)：收信人称呼从信左边开始写，一般以“Dear”或“Mydear”开头，后面常用逗号。2正文(body)：正文是书信的主体，它质量的高低将直接决定作文得分的高低，因此在书信的训练和写作中对其要精雕细刻，力求做到层次清晰、要点齐全、过渡自然、行文流畅和文笔优美。若是回信则应根据实际需要告诉对方自己何时收到信件，自己的感受或自己的近况，而后切入正文。1书信 正文结束时，常会另起一
11、行，写上一些表示祝福或期待的话语，如：Bestwishes！/Looking forward to your early reply./Good luck！等。3结尾(complimentary close)：是写信人表示自己对收信人的谦称，常用表达有Yours，Yours sincerely，Yours truly或Yours faithfully等。一、常用开头1邀请信：It is a pleasure for me to invite you on behalf ofto/We would liketo inviteto/We are more than glad to invite y
12、ou to2申请信：My name isI would like to work as/apply for3祝贺信：We are very happy to know that you have successfullyAllow me/usto give our most sincere congratulations on/I was delighted to hear(to receive)the newsthat4投诉或抱怨信：Im writing to tell you something about which I think is notsatisfying.5慰问信：We ar
13、e very sorry to learn of/learn that/I am very sorry to have heardof your present situation that6建议信：Im glad to receive your letter asking for advice on how toHere aresome tips for you.7询问信：I would like to ask some information on/Im writing to ask whetheryou are able to do me a favor.8欢迎信：Glad to hea
14、r from you and youre welcome to9回信：Thank you for your letter of/Thanks so much for your letter,whicharrived/I am writing to tell you about/Im glad to receive your letter.Its a pleasure forme to tell you my plan of10其他：Now I am so excited that I cant wait to share with you/I would alsolike to know if
15、 you can/Im very excited to learn that/It is indeed a wonderful ideato二、常用结尾1鼓励型：How delighted I am now!Actually,whatever happens,we must stay clam first andthen find a wise solution.Try and write me in Chinese next time.2祝愿型：I hope whats mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.
16、I will value them for ever.Many happy returns of the day(年年有今日)3请求询问型：By the way,could I？Thank you very much in advance.4展望型：I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve ourenvironment.This is one of the steps we take to make our country an even cleaner place.I believe that
17、 this magazine will surely strengthen our ties,and I am looking forwardto reading it.5目的型：I am writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and makemore improvements.6期待型：Im looking forward to your early reply.If you happen to know the news,please inform your classmates of it.
18、I hope all of youcan learn a lot in this activity.(2019全国卷)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1比赛信息；2赛前准备；3表达期待。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。项目内容体裁和格式 应用文：邮件主体时态一般现在时为主中心人称第一人称为主，第二人称为辅写作要点1.表明写信目的：参加近期的排球比赛；2告知比赛的基本情况、奖项设置及精心准备；3表达期望。学生习作22Dear Chris，How is everything going?I have good new
19、s to tell you.A volleyball match is going to be held a few weeks later and our team will participate.As for the detailed information of the match,there will be probably dozens of teams.They are going to make a revolving competition.Additionally,not only can the top three teams each be awarded a meda
20、l but all the other teams taking part in it will get a reward as well.The most attractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them.Therefore,we must do enough preparations before the match
21、,such as training as frequent as we can.So excited am I that I cant wait to join in it.How about you?Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Hua名师点评失分诊断1a few weeks later可以表示“几个星期以后”，但是不能用于一般将来时态中，这是典型的中式思维，应该改为in a few weeks。2can the top three teams each be awarded a medal是一个倒装句型，可是这里不必用倒装语序，应该改为正常语序，即
22、：the top three teams can each be awarded a medal。3虽然句中的training是一个动名词，但是，结合前面的do enough preparations可知，它完整的意义应该是表示train frequently，故要使用副词形式frequently。打造靓点1.将句子改为含有定语从句的复合句：_2.将句子改为含有主语从句的复合句：_参考答案1As for the detailed information of the match,there will be probably dozens of teams which are going to
23、make a revolving competition.2What will be the most attractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them.参考范文Dear Chris，How is everything going?I have good news to tell you.A volleyball mat
24、ch is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participate.As for the detailed information of the match,there will be probably dozens of teams which are going to make a revolving competition.Additionally,not only can the top three teams each be awarded a medal but all the other teams taking
25、 part in it will get a reward as well.What will be the most attractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them.Therefore,we must do enough preparations before the match,such as training a
26、s frequently as we can.So excited am I that I cant wait to join in it.How about you?Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua(天津静海一中20182019学年高三学生学业能力调研试卷)假如你是晨光中学学生李华，你们学校有一个生态农场，种植各种蔬菜和果树。为弘扬中国传统农业和提升环保意识，你校打算召开一个夏令营。请你给朋友Peter 写信邀请他参加这个活动。要点如下：1邀请的时间和地点；2活动安排(如中国传统农业种植介绍，体验中国传统农业种植与管理，自由采摘等)；3注意
27、事项(如衣物，安全等)。注意：1词数不少于 100 词；2开头已给出，不计入总词数；3可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：生态农场 ecological farmDear Peter，It is my pleasure to write to you._Yours，Li HuaOne possible version：Dear Peter，It is my pleasure to write to you.Will you be available this weekend?In order to let us learn something about Chinese tradition
28、al agriculture and enhance the awareness of environmental protection,our school is going to hold a summer camp on our schools farm.We will gather at the school gate at 8：00 am.and go there on foot.When we arrive there,we will meet the farmers who will introduce Chinese traditional planting.Then we w
29、ill be given a small piece of land to experience Chinese traditional planting and management.Finally,we will enjoy the pleasure of picking our favorite fruit and vegetables.Do remember to wear comfortable clothes and shoes.And youd better wear a hat incase you get burnt.Besides,wherever you go and w
30、hatever you do,keep safety in yourmind.If you are free and want to go,please let me know as soon as possible.Yours，Li Hua课 后 作 业 发言稿是指人们在一些特殊场合发表的讲话，在生活中常用的有致辞和演讲稿两大类。1致辞：指不同情况、不同场合所做的简短发言。常见的致辞有：欢迎词(Welcoming Speech)、欢送词(Sendoff Speech)、告别词(Valediction)、开幕词(Opening Address)、闭幕词(Closing Speech)、贺词(C
31、ongratulation Speech)等。2发言稿 2演讲：指在公众场所，针对某个具体问题发表自己的见解和主张，阐明事理或抒发情感，进行宣传鼓动的一种语言交际活动。此类文章写作要注意以下几点：称呼要合适：根据不同场合和特定的听众选用得体的称呼，如“Ladies andgentlemen”“Dear friends”“Boys and girls”等。结构要完整：一篇演讲稿主要有开场白、主题和结尾三部分构成。尤其是在演讲稿中要努力做到开头引人入胜，主体扣人心弦，结尾掀起高潮，从而自始至终吸引住听众。语言要得体：演讲主要使用口头语言达到与听众沟通的目的。因此，在语言运用上首先要明确听的对象，根
32、据听众的文化层次选择语言形式，使用听众能听得懂的语言讲话，做到语义明白流畅、通俗易懂。其次，为了增强语言的感染力和说服力，还要通过使用一些常见的修辞如排比、拟人等手段力求使语言生动形象、富于美感。一、表示欢迎1Warmly welcome to2We feel greatly honored to see/meet/be with3We feel it a great honor to4We are very excited and delighted at5Now lets give our warmest welcome to6On behalf of I am delighted to
33、welcome all of you to7Im honored to have this opportunity to welcome all of you to8It gives us a great pleasure to get together with our honorable guest fromFirstof all,I would like to introduceto you.二、表示欢送1Please take our kind respects to2Lets give our best regards and respects to3We wisha pleasan
34、t journey home and good health.4Wishthe best of health and success.5I am looking forward very much to seeingagain.6Goodbye is a sad thing to say,but I must say goodbye and I hope Illseeagain.三、演讲常用语1开头常用语：The topic of my speech isIts nice/wonderful/exciting/inspiring to speak/talk aboutAs we all kno
35、w/Its known to us all thatEveryone desires to and so do IBut what is the secret to？As far as Imconcerned,there arefactors.2结尾常用语：To sum up/To conclude/All in all/In conclusion/In a wordWhat I want to stress/emphasize isPersonally,I think it necessary/important/valuable/useful/beneficial/vital/a good
36、 ideafor sb.toAs for myself,I will/must/shouldDear lets try our best/do our best/spare no effort/do what we can toAs for my suggestion,I thinkAs we should be aware of the importance ofSo long as(2016天津)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。(1)回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活
37、、体育、文艺等方面)；(2)谈谈收获或感情；(3)表达祝愿与期望。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends，How time flies!_Thank you.项目内容体裁和格式应用文：发言稿主体时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主中心人称第一人称和第二人称写作要点1.自我简介；2.回顾双方交流活动；3谈收获或感情；4.表达祝愿与期望。学生习作得分21Dear friends，How time flies!I am Li Jin,president of Student Union of Chengua
38、ng Middle School.Its a great honor for me to recall the beautiful days when we spent together.During the twoweek activities,we not only shared the ways of learning andliving,but also do some interesting sports.All the activities left us a deep impression.As far as Im concerning，we have benefited a l
39、ot from the activities.For one thing,many of your good qualities such as teamwork and devotion inspired us a lot.For another,our friendship has deepened by participating in various activities.Finally,I sincerely hope our friendship will last forever.Wish you all the best!Thank you.名师点评失分诊断1spent是及物动
40、词，在定语从句中缺宾语，应使用关系代词引导定语从句。故应将中的when改为that或which。2not onlybut also是并列连词，前后谓语动词应保持形式一致。故应将中的do改为did。3as far as Im concerned为固定搭配，故应将中的concerning改为concerned。4friendship与deepen构成被动关系，故应将中的deepened改为been deepened。打造靓点1.将第一处划线句子改为倒装句：_2将第二处划线句子改为强调句型：_参考答案1not only did we share the ways of learning and li
41、ving,but also we did some interesting sports.2it was many of your good qualities such as teamwork and devotion that inspired us a lot.参考范文Dear friends，How time flies!I am Li Jin,president of Student Union of Chenguang Middle School.Its my great privilege to be here,sharing this unforgettable moment
42、with all the fellow friends from the Great Britain.During the twoweek activities,we surely exchanged our ideas on learning,ways of life,PE and cultures,which enriched the days we spent together.The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship.It is your enthusiasm,teamwork and good spirits tha
43、t impress us.Through the diverse activities,we have promoted the understanding of each other.And I sincerely hope our friendship will last forever.Wish you all the best!Thank you.(河南省中原名校2019年高考预测金卷)假如你是学生会主席李华。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。内容包括：1回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文
44、艺等方面)；2谈谈收获或感想；3表达祝愿与期望。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends，How time flies!_Thank you.Yours，Li HuaOne possible version：Dear friends，How time flies!Two weeks have passed since you came to our school for the exchange program,which we all have benefited from.During these two week
45、s,we have studied and lived together,which gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship.Doing sports as a team has enabled us to know each other better.Your art skills are excellent and admirable,which leaves me a deep impression.I think all our classmates have learned a lot from our communica
46、tion and the various activities.Now,on behalf of my schoolmates,I wish you a safe return.I also hope that there will be more events of this kind in the future.Thank you.Yours，Li Hua课 后 作 业 通知的写法有两种，一种是以布告形式贴出，把事情通知给有关人员，如学生、观众等，通常不用称呼；另一种是以书信的形式，发给有关人员，此种通知写作形式同普通书信，只要写明通知的具体内容即可。通知要求言简意赅、措辞得当、时间及时。
47、布告形式的通知：通常此类通知上方正中写Notice或NOTICE(通知)，发出通知的单位的具体名称可放在正文前，也可放在正文后，右下角处，发出通知的日期写在左下角处。3通知 一、常用词语deliver/give a speech 发表演说give a concert 举行音乐会hold a meeting/celebration 举行会议/庆祝活动attend a meeting/lecture/party 参加会议/讲座/晚会set up a club 成立俱乐部set out/off for 出发到show sb.around a place 带领某人参观meet/gather at th
48、e gate of 在的大门口集合take part in/participate in 参加二、常用句型There is going to be a lecture/talk on有一个关于的演讲The meeting/activity will be held/is to be held in会议/活动将在举行The party will begin at and end at晚会将于开始，在结束The concert will begin at and last音乐会将于开始，持续We are going to hold a discussion over我们将会就展开讨论All the
49、 members are expected to attend it.所有的成员都要出席。Anyone who is interested will be welcome.欢迎任何感兴趣的人参加。You are required to takewith you.你要随身携带Please attend it/be there on time.请准时出席/到那儿。Make sure that you/Be sure to确保(2018年全国卷)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together。内容包括：1短片内容：学校的发展；2放映时间、地点；
50、3欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。项目内容体裁和格式应用文：通知主体时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主中心人称第一、二人称(兼用第三人称it)写作要点1.简单介绍短片内容；2仔细交代放映时间、地点；3表达对短片的意见学生习作 得分_22_NoticeIn order to have a better understanding of our school,an outstanding English short movie(1)about our school will be shown in the library from 2：30 to 4：0
51、0 in the afternoon on June 9th.It is organized by the Student Union.Here are some relevant details about it.To begin with,the name of the movie is Growing Together,which is about the development of our beloved school.As we all expect,it will be not only meaningful but also interested.(2)And everyone
52、 of you will be welcome to take part in it,enjoying the movie,having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments on it.The Student UnionJune 8,2018名师点评失分诊断本文结构完整，连接顺畅，行文流利，语言地道优美。考生能在有限的时间里写出这样的作品，实属不易，难能可贵。1outstanding意为“杰出的；优秀的”时，常用来修饰人，建议换为excellent。2It 所指不详，最好明确。前文中仅出现了主语“an outs
53、tanding English short movie”，但根据文意，应该非所指，且movie 不能作organize的宾语。结合后文的“some relevant details about it”和“take part in it”可知，此处It应该指这次观看短片的活动，即“the activity”。3结合文意及前面的meaningful可知，此处是指这部短片“不仅很有意义，而且还很有趣”；而interested一般是指人“对某物很感兴趣”，因此，此处应该用interesting。打造靓点1.请用非限制性定语从句修改第一处：_2.请用高级词汇修改第二处：_参考答案1which is ab
54、out our school2Whats more,you are welcome to participate in it参考范文NoticeBoys and girls，May I have your attention,please?Recently,an excellent movie will be shown in our campus.Welcome to join us end enjoy it!Here are some relevant details about it.To begin with,the name of the movie is Growing Toget
55、her,which is about the development of our beloved school;as a result,it will be not only meaningful but also interesting.Besides,it will be in the library from 2：00 to 4：00 in the afternoon on June 9th.Whats more,everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it,enjoying the movie,having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.Hopefully,you would make it to our activity.I have the confidence that you will have a great time.The Student UnionJune 8,2018课 后 作 业 谢谢观看
