1、第20讲 书面表达二经典精讲(上)题一：请根据下面所示内容，用英语写一篇短文，比较高中学生“减负”前后的有关情况。小时8642课棠时间作业时间睡眠时间其它时间小时过 去现 在(“减负”前)(“减负”后)8642来源:学科网ZXXK1. 短文须包括所有图表内容，可以适当增加细节，使短文连贯；2. 词数为100个左右。题二：假设你是李华. 你将代表学校参加国际中学生论坛，就你所在城市的教育状况发表演讲。请根据以下两幅图表,介绍你市高中学生构成情况及毕业去向的选择，并针对两幅图表中的任何一个数据所反映的情况发表你自己的看法。注意：1. 文章开头和结尾已经给出（见答卷）；2. 词数120左右（不包括已
2、给部分）3. 参考词汇：图表： chart 职业学校: vocational school外来务工人员: non-local workersLadies and gentlemen,Im Li Hua. Today, Im greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. Im going to talk about the high school education of my city. _I believe the future of education in our city is promising!Thats all. Th
3、ank you. 题三：根据下列图示, 以 “The New Grading System in Our School”为题, 为某一中学英语报写一篇短文, 说明你校目前新课改中的这一举措以及你对学校实施这一举措的认识。要求: 词数120字左右, 开头已为你写好, 不计人总词数参考词汇: 评分体制grading system 参与participation（n.） tests notes homework class participation team work题四：2010年央视春晚的广告收入创新高，但节目中的植入广告引发了热议。最近，某网站举行了一次题为“对今年春晚植入广告的态度”的调查
4、，请根据以下饼图（pie chart）所示信息用英语写一篇短文，并提出你自己的看法。注意：1. 对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯2. 词数150左右，开头已给出,不计入总词数。3. 植入广告：product placementThe 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes. 题五：下图是你校学生会在全校
5、同学中就北京奥运会给你留下最深刻印象是什么这一问题的调查结果。请根据此图写一篇短文，客观描述调查结果并发表个人观点。注意：1、短文必须包括图表的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2、短文开头已为你写好，不记入总词数；中国运动员的出色表现60.4%26.1%13.5%恢弘盛大的开幕式成功的组织工作 3、词数：100左右。 题六：下面的图表显示了某校高三学生周末放假的学习生活情况。Ways to spend the weekend 回家休息60%在校学习25%户外运动15%回家休息在校学习户外运动根据上图信息，请以 “Ways to spend the weekend” 为题，用英语写一篇100120个词的
6、短文。 要求如下：1. 简要描述图中的信息； 2.说明原因 （为了高效学习；锻炼身体；争分夺秒）;3. 谈谈你的看法。注意：文章标题和开头已给出（不计词数）Ways to Spend the WeekendAs can be seen from the chart, _ _题七： 最近，你班同学就“父母是不是最好的老师”这一话题展开讨论，有些人认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然。请根据下表提示，介绍讨论结果以及你的个人观点。 观点原因同意不完全同意1教会如何生活过分溺爱2指出缺点，指明方向强加兴趣、价值观3教会富有爱心希望值过高要求：1、根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯。2、词
7、数：100词左右。3、开头已给出，不计人单词总数。Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students 题八： 最近国家教育部门就“是否取消中学文理分科”面向全国征求意见。下面是腾讯网就“中学文理是否应该分科”这以话题进行调查的结果。网友观点投票数百分比理由应该分科来源:Zxxk.Com17279348.48中学生负担太重来源:学科网现代社会更需要专业人才不应该分科18359351.52分科不利于人的全面发展分科导致全民整体素质下降请你
8、结合上表，写一篇英语短文，并谈谈自己的看法。注意：1. 词数120左右； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。题九： 假期将至，据一份网上调查，显示出了学生、家长对于补课的不同观点。请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文。假期补课调查表学生观点60%不同意40%同意理由疲惫；应给予时间空间放松、调节能多学点东西家长观点同意但收费过高理由有人看着安全，补了总比不补好，多少学点要求：1.字数：120词左右；2.必须谈出自己的看法。参考词汇：extra lessons n.补课 relax v.放松题十： 假如你是高三的学生，最近你就高三模拟考试该偏难还是该偏易这个问题进行了一次调查。请结合下表内容，用英语写一
9、篇短文，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的看法。赞成偏难，反对偏易赞成偏易，反对偏难1. 喜欢挑战，越难越好；2. 有助于学生了解自己的薄弱环节，改进学习方法。1. 题目太难，学生会泄气，会害怕今后的高考；2. 题目容易，易得高分、获自信。注意：1. 词数120左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior Three should be difficult or easyOpinions are divided
10、on this matter._题十一： 同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况并发表自己的感想。一些同学认为另一些同学认为1. 应从儿童时期开始学习英语2. 儿童时期记忆力好，可以记住很多单词3. 能为以后的英语学习打下坚实的基础1. 不应从儿童时期开始学习英语2. 儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又要学英语，易混淆3. 会影响汉语学习和今后的英语学习讨论未取得一致意见参考词汇：为打下坚实基础lay a solid foundation for 汉语拼音Chinese pinyin 题十二：随着高考的临近，部分住校生
11、要求搬出学生宿舍，在学校附近租房子住。请你根据下表提供的内容，写一篇英语短文，阐述学生和家长的观点，并表达自己的看法。高三部分住校生搬离学生宿舍，在学校附近租房子住多数学生1. 宿舍吵闹，影响学习和休息熄灯制度限定了学习时间许多家长提供好的学习环境方便照顾饮食起居你的看法注意：1. 陈述所有要点，可适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2. 词数 120 150 （开头已写好，不计入总词数）。 3. 参考词汇：熄灯制度- blackout rule With the college entrance examination approaching day by day, some Senior Three
12、 students are moving out from their dorms and living in a rented apartment near their schools. 第20讲 书面表达二经典精讲(上)题一：In the past, senior middle school students were heavily burdened with all kinds of homework. Because of various examinations, they spent about 6.5 hours in their classroom a day. At hom
13、e, about 3.5 hours was spent on their homework and therefore most of them got less than seven hours sleep a night, with only about three hours free time for other things. As a result, their health was badly damaged.Now things are getting better. About five hours is spent in class and hours for homew
14、ork is shortened to about two so that they can have two more hours sleep and also two more hours free time to do whatever they like. 点评：本文根据这两个柱状图把高中学生“减负”前后情况准确地表达了出来；本文使用了一些高级短语、宾语从句、状语从句和过渡词。题二：Ladies and gentlemen:Im Li Hua. Today, Im greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. Im goin
15、g to talk about the high school education of my city. From Chart 1, we can see high school students are from different family backgrounds. Besides local students, who make up 91 percent, eight percent of the students are the children of non-local workers. There are even 1 percent foreign students. A
16、ccording to chart 2, the students choices after graduation have presented a wider variety. Sixty percent of them intend to go to university. Thirty percent choose to enter vocational schools, and the rest ten percent plan to go abroad for further studies. （1）I think we have more freedom to choose wh
17、at we would like to do after graduation. Going to college is no longer the only choice for most of us as it was years ago. OR:（2）I think our city government has made more efforts to help the non-local workers. For example, their children can enjoy the equal right of a good education with the city st
18、udents. OR:（3）I think with the economic development of our city, more foreigners are attracted to set up businesses here and they are happy to send their children to local schools to learn more about China and Chinese culture. I believe the future of the education in our city is promising!Thats all.
19、 Thank you. 点评：作者准确地把两幅图表所反映的高中学生构成情况及毕业去向的选择表达出来，并针对两幅图表中的任何一个数据所反映的情况发表了自己的看法；作者使用了宾语从句和一些高级词汇短语。题三：The New grading system in Our SchoolIn order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system. This chart show
20、s how it works.The students final score will be made up of 5 parts. About 30% of it will come from their test results. The rest of the score is decided by the performances of the students in the following parts: 20% comes from your notes, and another 20% is decided by how you do your homework. If yo
21、u take an active part in classroom activities, you can get another 20% of the score. Teamwork in class is also important. If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.In my opinion, our school has made a good decision. To begin with, this new grading system
22、 has changed the way the students performances in school only depended upon their test results. Secondly, it will certainly help to improve ourselves in many ways.点评：作者把图表所反映的学校新的评分体系准确地表达出来并发表了自己的看法；作者使用了使用状语从句、定语从句、不定式、被动语态、高级短语和过渡词。题四：The 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercia
23、l rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.As is shown in the pie chart, 20% of the people surveyed think it acceptable, for the product placement appears in the programmes naturally. And 15% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to make mone
24、y from product placement, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself.However, among the people surveyed, more than one third of them complain that the product placement has nothing to do with the programmes. 25% of them even feel hurt seeing so much of it. Furthermore, the rest 10%
25、hold the view that great harm has been done to the image of CCTV.From the chart we can draw a conclusion that most of the people surveyed are against product placement in the programmes. In my opinion, product placement nowadays is almost unavoidable, but it should not damage the art of the show and
26、 should take the audiences feelings into account.点评：能够把饼状图中“人们对今年春晚植入广告的态度”准确地表达出来；文中使用了定语从句、同位语从句、并列句，使得文章具有更强的表达力；此外，本文还多处使用过渡词，使上下文衔接紧密。题五：Recently, a survey has been done by our school Students Union to find out what impressed the students most about the Beijing Olympic Games. The results are sh
27、own below. More than half of the students, to be exact, 60.4%, are deeply impressed by the excellent performances of Chinese Athletes. On the other hand, 26.1% of the students cant forget the grand and fantastic Opening Ceremony, which almost doubles the number of those who think the successful orga
28、nization of the Beijing Olympic has impressed them the most.In my opinion, the Beijing Olympic has been a successful one in every aspect, including the performance of the Chinese athletes, the Opening Ceremony and the organization.点评：作者把图表中所反映的学生对北京奥运会最深的印象准确地表达了出来并发表了自己的看法；作者使用了定语从句、过渡词和插入语。 题六：Way
29、s to Spend the WeekendAs can be seen from the chart, senior three students have different ways to spend their weekends. Going back home and having a good rest is what most students would like to do, while 25% students choose to study at school during weekends. The fewest students , accounting for 15
30、% , take outdoor activities to spend their weekends.Various reasons are responsible for their different choices. Those who choose to go back home believe that a good rest does help them relax and work more efficiently during the school time. Outdoor-activity lovers hold the opinion that taking exerc
31、ise is a wonderful way to refresh themselves. However, a small number of students living far away from home tend to stay at school to save every minute to study.Personally, despite the heavy study pressure, senior three year doesnt necessarily mean studying all the time. Sometimes a good rest and pr
32、oper exercise can be of vital importance.点评：作者把图表中所反映的度过周末的方式准确地表达了出来并分析的原因和发表了自己的看法；作者使用了名词性从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、高级词汇短语和过渡词。 题七： Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers . Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their
33、 mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life. Whats more, parents love helps to teach them how to love others, So parents are their most important teachers .However, not all of us hold the views, Some think that their parents give them too much love, and they a
34、re too eager to pass on their values and interests to them. Moreover , their parents some times expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach.In my opinion , parents are our important teachers, But parents should also try to understand their children more and limi
35、t the generation gap .点评：作者把表中的信息完整地表达了出来并发表了自己的观点；作者使用了同位语从句、宾语从句、状语从句和过渡词。题八： 0ne possible version:Recently, the Tencent Website launched an online survey on the topic whether science and arts should be separated.According to the survey, about 48 percent of the people are in favour of the practice
36、 of separating science and arts education. They think, for one thing, high school students today are suffering from a heavy learning load; for another, what the modern society needs are more professionals in various fields while more than percent of the netizens dont think so. They believe that the
37、practice of separation goes against a persons all round development and it leads to the falling of overall quality of the entire nation.In my opinion, science and arts education are of equal importance and neither should be ignored. Even though the practice of separation is acceptable, a student sho
38、uldnt abandon either science or arts education completely. 点评：作者把表中的信息完整地表达了出来并发表了自己的观点；作者使用了名词性从句、状语从句和过渡词。题九： 60 percent of the students are against giving extra lessons during vacation. They think they should be given enough time and freedom to develop their own interests and enjoy some outdoor a
39、ctivities to relax and prepare for a better start. However, the others about 40 percent are in favor of it and they want to learn something more during this period of time.Compared with the views of their children, parents agree to it, though they complain about the high price they have to pay. They
40、 think having someone take care of their children is better than leaving them about, and that students can get something out of classes, however little it is.点评：作者把表中的信息完整地表达了出来并发表了自己的观点；作者使用了名词性从句、状语从句、使用了非谓语动词和过渡词。题十： Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior T
41、hree should be difficult or easy. Opinions are divided on this matter.Some students think that a difficult exam is just like a challenge. The harder, the better. It can help students find out where they are weak in studies and improve their learning approaches.Others, however, are against a difficul
42、t examIn their opinion, if it is very difficult., they may become discouraged and feel terrible about the coming College Entrance Examination. Besides, with an easy exam, they can get high marks and gain confidence.I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy, because if it is too easy, teac
43、hers will not know how we are actually getting on with our studies, and if it is too difficult, we will lose heart.点评：作者把表中的信息完整地表达了出来并发表了自己的观点；作者使用了名词性从句、状语从句、高级句式和过渡词。题十一： The students of No. 4 High School had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Som
44、e of them think that English learning should start from childhood. As little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chi
45、nese pinyin at school. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very easy for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning. In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.点评：作者把
46、表中的信息完整地表达了出来并发表了自己的观点；作者使用了宾语从句、状语从句、高级词汇短语和过渡词。题十二：With the college entrance examination approaching day by day, some Senior Three students are moving out from their dorms and living in a rented apartment near their schools. Most students think although school dorms bring them fun and friendship,
47、the blackout rule to guarantee students sleeping hours doesnt leave them enough time to finish homework. Worse still, the noise in the dorms not only influences their studies but also ruins their rest. To many parents, theyd like to provide a better environment for their children so that they can st
48、udy more efficiently. Besides, they can take care of their childrens daily meals and laundry, s o t heir children can eat better and have a comfortable life.In my opinion, whether a student should rent a house outside his school depends on his need. I am in favor of renting a house for the sake of study. After all, time is pressing. But I strongly recommend that parents should care much about their children while they are outside school.点评：作者把表中的信息完整地表达了出来并发表了自己的观点；作者使用了宾语从句、状语从句、高级词汇短语和过渡词。
