1、读后续写-环境渲染优秀表达例一Para 1But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.(增加细节描写it was dark)-The sun hid himself behind the mountains, making it hard to seeanything in the thick darkness. 太阳躲在山后，在黑暗中什么也看不见。例二Para2We had no idea where we were and it got dark.(增加细节描写it got dark)-Silence between
2、 Dad and me made me more nervous and scared. At that moment, it was completely dark except the faint light given out bya few stars in the sky 爸爸和我之间的沉默让我更加紧张和害怕。那一刻，天空一片漆黑，只有几颗星星发出微弱的光。例三 Para2We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along theway. （增加细节描写 saw lots of great sights
3、 )-I chose my eyes in the speeding car. Winding rivers, lofty mountains, deep valleys and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascination. 我把目光投向了飞驰的汽车。蜿蜒的河流、巍峨的山脉、深谷和阳光明媚的海滩完全让我着迷。1. lighten up the cloudless sky 照亮无云的天空2. falling leaves in the cool mid-autumn air 凉爽中秋空气中的落叶3. Snow blanked every
4、 rooftop and weighed on the branches of the stunted mulberry trees.雪花覆盖了每一个屋顶，矮小的菜葚树枝上也堆满了积雪。4. The night brought an unrelenting darkness that wrapped their eyes and mouths, burying them beneath a starless sky.夜晚带来了一片无情的黑暗，包裹着他们的眼睛和嘴巴，把他你温没布一片没5. A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, en
5、veloping everything within its soft embrace.一股浓郁的泥士般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。6. As the night advanced, the clouds closing in and densely overspreading the whole sky, then very dark, it came on to blow harder and harder.当深夜来临时，云急剧地合拢起来，整个天空乌云密布，昏暗无比。7. A bright light streamed through the window, flood
6、ing the opening and spreading in a wide circle on the ceiling.道明亮的光线流过窗户，淹没了窗口，并在天花板 上呈现一个光圈。8. The landscape, beautiful on its own, somehow comes to life and breathes because this woman is engaging with it虽然风景本身就很美,但它因为这个女人的加入而变得生动起来。9. All the world was bright and fresh, and the sunshine was kissi
7、ng every lovely face.整个世界都是明亮而清新的，阳光亲吻着每一张可爱的脸。10. She thought of the flowers glittering in the sunshine and the mountains turning rosy in the setting sun.她想起了阳光里闪耀的花儿，落日 下慢慢变成玫瑰色的山脉。11.It was bitterly cold now and the ground was frozen hard.现在天气冷极了，地面都冻硬了。12. The last word went like a bullet to my
8、heart.最后一句话像一颗子弹击中了我的心。2. A ripple of sadness welled up inside him. 他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤3. He felt the warmth surging through his body.他感到身体里涌动着一股暖流。4. The loneliness and grief comes in waves. 孤独和悲伤不断涌上心头。5. So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.她十分羞愧，以至于脸如充血般发烫。6. Her eyes misted
9、over as she immersed herself in their good memories.、当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆时，双眼蒙上了一层水雾。7. Her brain quickened and all her senses were alert.她的大脑快速运转，所有的感官都处于戒备状态。8. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.一看到那只凶猛的狼，我就被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗。9. When the
10、 host announced that she won the prize, her heart wasthumping with excitement. 当主持人宣布她获奖时，她激动得心砰砰跳。10. Her rage swept through her like a tidal wave, surrounding her like a foul stench.愤怒像潮水一样席卷了她，像悉臭的气味将她包围。11. So the young man realized the police had arrested the wrongperson, and he took the great
11、courage to expose the real criminal.所以这个年轻人意识到警察抓错了人，他骨气巨大的勇气去揭发罪犯。12. Seeing the helicopter in the distance, Jenny felt as if it had been comforting her with its thunderous noise and saying, Your waiting pay off” 看到直升机，珍妮感到它好像在用它的轰吗声安慰自己，说，你的等待是值得的。13.Patient as I was, I grew frustration.尽管我很有耐心，但我越来越沮丧。13. Still, most of us volunteers breathe a sigh of relief when the season comes to a close. 然而，当季节结束时，我们大多数志愿者都松了一口气。14. My fatigue became almost unbearable 我的疲劳几乎无法忍受。15. When we handed him the bag of food, he lit up and thanked&s with watery eyes.当我们把那袋食物递给他时，他露出了吃惊的神情，随后含着泪感谢了我们。
