1、广安市20192022学年第一学期期末高一质量检测英语应用文写作汇编(共三年)文末附作文评分标准2021-2022学年高一期末考试1.假定你是李华,从网上得知你市将举办智能机器人展览且正在招募志愿者。请你用英文写一份申请信,内容包括:1. 表明写信目的及自我介绍;2. 简述个人优势;3. 希望获准。参考词汇:智能机器人:intelligent robot 志愿者:volunteer注意:1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯_Yours, 参考范文:Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua, a middle school stude
2、nt. The other day I happened to know from the Internet that an intelligent robot exhibition will be held in our city and some volunteers are needed. Im quite interested in it and writing to apply for it.As a teenager, I am outgoing, energetic, and responsible. Not only do I have great interest in ro
3、bots, but also I have such a good command of English that I can communicate with others in English fluently.Whats more, I have had some similar working experiences before.I do hope that I can be a volunteer in your exhibition. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua2020-2021学年高一期末考试第二节 应用文
4、写作(满分20分)2.假如你是某中学高一学生李华,最近正忙于准备期末考试,但你的美籍朋友Terry并不适应学校生活,导致无法集中精力学习。他来信向你求助,请你给他回信,要点如下:1.规划学习时间2.参加课外活动3.结交中国朋友注意:1.词数100左右:2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;4提示词:期末考试final exam适应adapt.toDear Terry,I am Li Hua,_Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua参考范文:Dear Terry,Im Li Hua. Recently, all of us have been busy
5、preparing for the final exam. But Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting yourself to your new school life, and this situation distracts your attention from study. But it can be easily changed if you take my advice.First of all, you should make a reasonable time schedule about study, w
6、hich can liberate you from mountains of homework. Moreover, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in after-school activities, which will help make life more colorful. Most importantly, bear in mind that you can make friends with people around you. They can help you to know more about Ch
7、inese culture, and friendship can help you forget your loneliness. By doing so, you will be happier with your new life soon. I hope you will find these ideas useful.Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua2019-2020学年高一期末考试第二节 应用文写作(满分25分)3.假如你是校学生会主席李华, 新年即将到来, 学生会将举办一个新年晚会。你校外籍教师Jack对中国文化很感兴趣, 请你根据以下提示, 用英语向他发出邀请
8、。内容包括1. 举办晚会的目的2. 时间与地点;3. 活动内容(不少于两点)。注意1. 词数100左右, 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。2. 开头语和结束语已为你写好, 不计入总词数。3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校。参考词汇学生会 the Students Union Dear Jack, _Yours, Li HuaA possible versionDear Jack, The New Year is just around the corner and the Students Union will host a New Years Party to celebrate the N
9、ew Year. So I am writing this letter to invite you to participate in our New Year Party. The party is going to be held in the school meeting hall from 7:00 to 9:00 p.m. next Friday. Many wonderful performances presented by the teachers and students in our school will be shown on the stage, such as t
10、he Chinese folk songs and dances, Chinese musical instruments, short plays of traditional style and so on. So it will surely offer you a good opportunity to obtain a clear picture of Chinese traditional culture. We should be very glad if you could come, and meanwhile, our evening party would be more
11、 cheerful if you could also deliver a performance.Yours, Li Hua评分原则:1. 本题总分为20分,按5个档次给分。2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。3. 词数少于60从总分中减去2分,多写原则上不扣分。4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。如书写较差以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。各档次的给分范
12、围和要求第五档(1720)分完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑,完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全完成了试题规定的任务。第四档(1316分)完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一两个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档(912分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽
13、漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档(58分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。语法结构单调,词汇项目有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档(14分)未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。