1、写作素养提升练Module 11 Photos本模块以“Photos”为话题，通过介绍摄影比赛的作品，让学生学会如何对一张照片进行描述。通过对该模块的学习，学生应该学会用“which，that或者who”引导的定语从句进行描述，包括描述照片上的人物，该照片背后的故事等。photo,photographer,prize,competition,camera单 词：be taken by,take part in,enter the competition,win the prize,take photos短 语：1.The photo which I like best shows my fam
2、ily members.2.It was taken at the age of 12.3.It shows the beauty of leaves in the park.4.I like the picture which shows the beauty of leaves in the park.句 型：假设你是王玲玲，你在学校举办的摄影比赛中获得了最佳摄影奖，并将在颁奖典礼上发言。请根据下列提示写一篇80词左右的英文发言稿，内容可以适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。提示：1.你对这次获奖的感受；2.你想感谢你的老师们，他们鼓励你参赛并教给你许多拍照技巧；3.你还想感谢你的
3、叔叔，他在你13岁生日时送给你一台照相机。Ladies and gentlemen,Good afternoon!_Thanks!1.体裁：应用文2.人称：第一人称3.时态：一般现在时和一般过去时【审题指导】【思路构建】Ladies and gentlemen,Good afternoon!I am Wang Lingling.I feel so excited that I won the photocompetition in our school.First,Id like to thank my teacherswho encouraged me to enter the compet
4、ition and also taughtme many skills in taking photos.Then,Id like to thank my【范文赏析】uncle.At the age of 12,I became interested in taking photos.When I was 13,he gave me a camera as my birthday present.Since then,I have become more and more interested intaking photos.And I want to be a famous photogra
5、pher inthe future.Thanks!点评：本文是参加摄影比赛得奖后的获奖感言。作者首先介绍了自己和获奖的心情(so.that.)，然后用了一个who引导的定语从句来感谢自己的老师，感谢老师的鼓励和传授技巧。最后感谢叔叔送了相机作为生日礼物。本文条理清楚，亮点突出。尤其是运用了定语从句将两个简单句合并在一起。假如你是李华，你们学校英语校刊正在招聘摄影师，你有兴趣去参加。请根据下列信息，用英文写一封申请信。80词左右，可适当增加细节。姓名：李华性别：男年龄：15 岁兴趣：摄影，写作，户外运动性格：活泼，开朗，精力充沛Dear Editor,_Yours,Li Hua_Dear Edi
6、tor,Im writing to apply for the position of the photographer.Im Li Hua,a 15-year-old boy.In terms of hobbies,I enjoywriting and outdoor activities,but photography is myfavourite.I ever won second prize in different kinds of competitions._My hobbies have also helped me build some goodqualitiesI am ou
7、tgoing and energetic.In addition,I amgood at communicating,and many friends of mine ask mefor help when they have problems.In order to take part insocial activities and enrich my life,I am eager to have theopportunity to work for you._I believe I am the person that you are looking for.I amlooking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua
