1、专项技能保分练(二十二)短文改错Test 12019陕西省第二次联考I am a person who always has a smile in my face. I dont like to be sad at any giving point in time. Whenever I came across any difficulties in my life, I get worried for a few minute as I am a human being and I have feelings, too. But again, I will tell one thing to
2、 me life is short and you shouldnt waste time being sad, so just to cheer up. You are the one which needs to face the trouble. Wherever it is, you have to try to solve it. Be brave and accept the challenge with a smile or you will feel it was such small thing.答案与解析：I am a person who always has a smi
3、le my face. I dont like to be sad at any point in time. Whenever I across any difficulties in my life, I get worried for a few as I am a human being and I have feelings, too. But again, I will tell one thing to life is short and you shouldnt waste time being sad, so just cheer up. You are the one ne
4、eds to face the trouble. it is, you have to try to solve it. Be brave and accept the challenge with a smile you will feel it was such small thing.in改为on作地点介词时，in意为“在内”，on意为“在上面”，笑容应是展现在脸上，故将in改为on。giving改为given分析句子成分可知，此处在句中作定语，修饰限定point，given在此为形容词，意为“指定的，特定的”；at any given point in time意为“在任何特定的时间点
5、”，符合语境，故将giving改为given。came改为come根据语境可知，此处在描述个人性格特点，应用一般现在时，故将came改为come。minute改为minutesminute为可数名词，其前有a few修饰，应用复数形式，故将minute改为minutes。me改为myself根据语境可知，此处表示“我会告诉我自己一件事情”，谓语will tell的主语和宾语同指一人，此处的宾语应用反身代词myself，故将me改为myself。删除toso表示“因此”时，为连词，后面应是完整的句子，to do不定式不能构成完整的句子，因此应删除to，构成祈使句，故删除to。which改为tha
6、t/who此处为定语从句，先行词为不定代词one，修饰不定代词时，引导词只能用that，不用which，又因为先行词在这里指人，也可用who，故将which改为that/who。Wherever改为Whateverwherever在从句中充当状语，whatever充当主语、宾语或表语，分析句子成分可知，此处缺少is的表语，故将Wherever改为Whatever。or改为and“祈使句and/or/otherwise陈述句”为固定句式，当表示动作顺承时，用and连接；表示转折时，用or/otherwise连接。根据语境及句意可知，此处表示顺承，故将or改为and。在small前加athing为
7、可数名词，单数形式前应用不定冠词，such a small thing指“如此小的一件事”，故在small前加a。Test 22019安徽安庆二模Last weekend I went fishing with my cousins by a river, where was two miles away from my home by bike. When we were about to return for home, we found one of our bike lost. We were really nervous then. Asking about the lost bik
8、e, nobody told the truth except me. And to my surprise, my parents dont scold me. Instead, they said I was a honest boy. I have benefited great from my family rules. Im not the best at schoolwork, but classmates trust me and nearly everyone is willing to making friends with me. It helps me know bett
9、er about “Honesty is the best policy”答案与解析：Last weekend I went fishing with my cousins by a river, was two miles away from my home by bike. When we were about to return home, we found one of our lost. We were really nervous then. about the lost bike, nobody told the truth except me. to my surprise,
10、my parents scold me. Instead, they said I was honest boy. I have benefited from my family rules. Im not the best at schoolwork, but classmates trust me and nearly everyone is willing to friends with me. It helps me know better about “Honesty is the best policy”where改为which此处引导非限制性定语从句，先行词是a river，关系
11、词在从句中作主语，故将where改为which。删除forhome为副词时，不与任何介词连用，故删除for。bike改为bikes“one of可数名词复数形式”为固定搭配，意为“中的一个”，故将bike改为bikes。Asking改为Asked此处为分词作状语，ask与其逻辑主语we之间为被动关系，应用过去分词形式，表示被问，故将Asking改为Asked。And改为But/Yet句意为：但是令我吃惊的是，我的父母没有批评我，而是说我是个诚实的孩子。根据句意可知，此处前后为转折关系，表示“但是/然而”，故将And改为But/Yet。dont改为didnt根据时间状语Last weekend可
12、知，此处表示发生在过去的动作，应用一般过去时，故将dont改为didnt。a改为anhonest中的字母h不发音，该词的发音以元音音素开头，其前有不定冠词时，应用an，故将a改为an。great改为greatly此处修饰动词benefited，应用副词，故将great改为greatly。在classmates前加my此处指“我的同学们”，应为特指，故在classmates前加my。making改为makebe willing to do sth.为固定搭配，意为“乐意做某事”，故将making改为make。Test 32019湖南省师大附中月考五Recently, a lot of stude
13、nts in our school has fallen ill due to the bad weather. I notice they dont ask doctors for help but tried medicines by themselves in order to save time. Personally, I dont agree with them. First, it is not easier for us students to make a wise choose of medicines to cure illness. For example, when
14、having a cold, most of us prefer to take antibiotics, which in fact is not necessary at most cases. And medicines have side effect, which may pose a threat to us because we dont have the enough knowledge of them. From I stand, I strongly suggest we talk to the doctor after taking medicines. Because
15、stay healthy is more important than anything else. As a saying goes, an ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.答案与解析：Recently, a lot of students in our school fallen ill due to the bad weather. I notice they dont ask doctors for help but medicines by themselves in order to save time. Personall
16、y, I dont agree with them. First, it is not for us students to make a wise of medicines to cure illness. For example, when having a cold, most of us prefer to take antibiotics, which in fact is not necessary most cases. And medicines have side , which may pose a threat to us because we dont have eno
17、ugh knowledge of them. From I stand, I strongly suggest we talk to the doctor taking medicines. Because healthy is more important than anything else. As a saying goes, an ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.has改为have本句主语为a lot of students，谓语动词应用复数形式，故将has改为have。tried改为try分析句子结构可知，try为句子的谓语，
18、与前面的dont ask为并列关系，时态应保持一致，故应用一般现在时。故将tried改为try。easier改为easy“It isadj. for sb. to do sth.”为固定句式，意为“做某事对某人来说是的”。easy在句中作表语，句中没有比较之意。故将easier改为easy。choose改为choicemake a choice为固定搭配，意为“作出选择”。故将choose改为choice。at改为inin most cases意为“在大多数情况下”，是固定短语。故将at改为in。effect改为effectseffect为可数名词，side effect意为“副作用”。由于其
19、前没有冠词修饰，所以此处应用复数形式。故将effect改为effects。删除theenough knowledge在句中非特指，所以，前面的the是多余的，故将the删除。在From后加where分析句子结构可知，此处为宾语从句。句意为：从我个人的立场看，我强烈建议我们在服药前和医生谈谈。引导词在句中作地点状语，应用where引导该从句。故在From后加where。after改为before 根据常识可知，应在服药前咨询医生。故将after改为before。stay改为staying此处作句子主语，应用动名词形式。故将stay改为staying。Test 42019衡水中学考试As my p
20、arents and I was on our way to pay for our parking space, a woman came up to them. She said she had just paid for hers but she had called back home just now and was curious about how we would like to have her parking pass. She refused to take up any money for it and insisted that we took it. We glad
21、ly accepted it and thanked her. We got down to the beach in time to watch the sun setting because of this womans kind and we were so thankfully. It was a wonderful experience and a sunset was so delighted a sight!答案与解析：As my parents and I on our way to pay for our parking space, a woman came up to .
22、 She said she had just paid for hers but she had called back home just now and was curious about we would like to have her parking pass. She refused to take any money for it and insisted that we it. We gladly accepted it and thanked her. We got down to the beach in time to watch the sun setting beca
23、use of this womans and we were so . It was a wonderful experience and sunset was so a sight!was改为were本句主语为my parents and I，所以系动词应为复数形式，故将was改为were。them改为us此处指代前面提到的my parents and I，所以，应用第一人称复数宾格代词。句意为：一位女士向我们走来。故将them改为us。在had后加beenshe与call back之间为被动关系，因此应用过去完成时的被动语态。故在had后加been。how改为whether句意为：她说她已
24、经付了停车费，但是刚被打电话叫回家。她想知道我们是否愿意用她的停车通行证。about后接宾语从句，从句引导词意为“是否”，且位于介词后，应用whether。故将how改为whether。删除up句意为：她拒绝因此而要任何钱并坚持要我们接受她的停车通行证。take up意为“占据(一定的时间或空间)”，此处take意为“接受(某人给的东西、提议等)”。故删除up。took改为takeinsist作“坚持主张；坚决要求”讲时，后接宾语从句用虚拟语气，谓语用“should动词原形”的形式，should可以省略。故将took改为take。kind改为kindnesskind在此作介词of的宾语，其前有
25、womans修饰，应用其名词形式，意为“善良”，故将kind改为kindness。thankfully改为thankful此处在句中作表语，应用形容词形式。句意为：因为这位女士的善举，我们才能及时去到海边看日落，我们对此很是感激。故将thankfully改为thankful。a改为the因前文已经提到过sun setting，所以此处应表示特指，其前应加定冠词the，故将a改为the。delighted改为delightful句意为：这是一次美好的体验，并且日落也是如此美丽的景色。delighted意为“高兴的”，常用人作主语；delightful意为“令人愉快的”，常用物体作主语。此处形容日落令人愉快，应用delightful。故将delighted改为delightful。
