1、遂 宁 市 高 2014 级 零 诊 考 试英 语 试 题本试卷分第I卷（选择题，共90分）和第II卷（非选择题，共60分）两部分。满分150分，考试时间120分钟。注意事项：1. 答题前，考生务必认真核对条形码上的姓名、准考证号和座位号，准确无误后将本人姓名、准考证号和座位号填写在答题卡相应位置上；2. 答选择题时，必须使用2B铅笔将答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。如需改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再选涂其它答案标号；3. 答题时，必须使用黑色签字笔，将答案规范、整洁地书写在答题卡规定的位置上；4. 所有题目必须在答题卡上作答，在试卷上答题无效；5. 考试结束后将答题卡交回，不得折叠、损毁答题卡。第
2、I卷(选择题，共90分)第一部分英语知识运用(共两节，满分40分）第一节 语法和词汇知识(共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分) 从A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上涂黑。1. Its almost midnight. Why dont we leave the clothes until tomorrow? Good idea. _A. My pleasure. B. Come on! C. I am almost beat. D. Its a good deal.2. Gradually, you will realize the things that m
3、atter are that cant be bought with money.A. these B. those C. ones D. some3. Can you come to my birthday party tonight? Id love to, but I_ on a patient at 6 oclock. A. will operate B. am operating C. will be operating D. will have operated4He diedinApril 1, 2003. But hissongs will be played and sung
4、 for manyyears .Ato comeBhaving comeCcomingDto be come5. Hello, may I speak to Mr. Wu? Im afraid he is not in now. _ I take a message? A. Should B. Can C. Will D. Shall6. I hear this hotel has got a new manager. Thats_ the rooms and the meals are better now. A. why B. because C. what D. how7. Today,
5、 we will begin what we stopped yesterday _ no point will be left out.A. becauseB. although C. so that D. as long as 8. Five people were killed as Typhoon Fitow hit Zhejiang Province, _ more than three million people. A. to affect B. affecting C. being affected D. affected9. The accident occurred at
6、3:10 a.m. at the Zhengsheng Coal Mine, _ 42 workers were working underground A. which B. when C. where D. that10._not to miss the lecture at 15:00, he set out for the classroom in a hurry.AReminding Bto be reminded CHaving reminded DReminded第二节 完形填空(共20小题；每小题1. 5分，满分30分）阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)
7、中，选出可以填入空白处 的最佳选择，并在答题卡上将该选项涂黑。There was a time when I traveled quite a bit on business. One day, after the days 11 was done, I checked some e-mails and 12 home to check up on the kids. It seems there was a 13 match going on at the other end of the line. It sounded like Tony was 14 ,but Tom was maki
8、ng some noise, too. I 15 that Peter could not be far behind. “Can you just 16 down a bit?” I said into the phone. “ 17 , yourself!” I heard the man in the next room shout 18 . I chose to 19 him. “Come on guys. Cant you just stop 20 for a minute?” “Ill show you what fighting means,” I heard 21 the wa
9、ll. “I cant even hear myself think,” I complained into the phone. “Hey! Ive had just about 22 of you,” the guy on the other side of the wall screamed. Suddenly I got very 23 . I hung up the phone and I 24 a strong, six-foot-two weightlifter crashing his fist through the wall, wondering how I could 2
10、5 the fighting. Luckily, nothing happened. No fist. No crashed wall. I decided to go downstairs for a stress-relief walk. As I was 26 my door, the man living in the next room came out, too. 27 , he was no weightlifter. I was about to ask him 28 he had shouted at me through the thinner-than-toilet-pa
11、per wall while I was trying to discipline my 29 kids, when he called to me, “Hey you, I was on the phone with my wife. Why did you have to heckle(对起哄) me? All of a sudden, I knew how 30 the walls were. And they did not even come close to toilet paper.11. A. researchB. workC. lessonD. study12. A. wen
12、tB. sentC. arrivedD. phoned13. A. shoutingB. readingC. singingD. running14. A. losingB. leadingC. failingD. winning15. A. sensedB. knewC. smelledD. sounded16. A. lieB. putC. quietD. sit17. A. Speak upB. Go upC. Shut upD. Close up18. A. happilyB. angrilyC. softlyD. curiously19. A. adviseB. punishC. e
13、ducateD. ignore20. A. fightingB. laughingC. playingD. crying21. A. acrossB. inC. throughD. on22. A. enoughB. muchC. noneD. many23. A. scaredB. hurtC. interestedD. moved24. A. foundB. picturedC. heardD. discovered25. A. beginB. breakC. attendD. avoid26. A. openingB. repairingC. closingD. leaving27. A
14、. SuddenlyB. FortunatelyC. SurprisinglyD. Easily28. A. whatB. whyC. howD. when29. A. smartB. foolishC. noisyD. silent30. A. thickB. hardC. prettyD. thin第二部分阅读理解(共两节，满分50分) 第一节 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。（共20小题;每小题2分，满分40分）AEthiopia has greatly reduced its death rates for children
15、 under the age of five years during the last two decades, new UN statistics show. The report says Ethiopia has cut the number of child deaths, by two thirds or so, to 68 per 1,000 births compared to that in 1990.The government owed the improved figures to its growing economy. Despite the reduction,
16、the UN Childrens Fund said Ethiopia needed to do much more to improve health facilities(设施) for pregnant women.Ethiopia is one of Africas poorest states, although it has experienced rapid economic growth in recent years and is one of the continents leading coffee producers. Its economy centers aroun
17、d agriculture, which in turn relies on rainfall.The BBCs Emmanuel Igunza in the capital, Addis Ababa, says Ethiopia was once representative of poor nutrition in Africa. But the latest UNICEF(联合国儿童基金会) figures show Ethiopia is one of the few African countries on the path to realizing the development
18、goal of reducing child death rates, he says.Ethiopias Health Minister Kesetebirhan Admasu said increasing family incomes had helped improve peoples health. This has also resulted in better nutrition for children and women; this has translated into better medical conditions all these have a direct or
19、 indirect influence on the survival of children, he told BBC Africa. He said the government has also been aggressively expanding its primary health care network.We have now 93% coverage(覆盖) of one health centre for 25,000 people, which basically means one health facility within a 7km area, he said.3
20、1. How many in 1000 births would die in Ethiopia in 1990? A. about 680 B. about 330 C. about 68 D. about 20032. Which of the following statements is true? A. Ethiopian children benefit from its fastest economy growing. B. Ethiopia has a long way to go to improve health facilities. C. Ethiopia is the
21、 economic center because of its rich rainfall. D. Ethiopia has already become a rich state in Africa.33. What do we know according to the latest UNICEF figures? A. Many African countries have high child death rates now. B. Ethiopia is the only country that has reduced child death rates. C. Ethiopia
22、is the most successful in reducing child death rates. D. Ethiopia was once known for its poor nutrition in Africa.34. What Kesetebirhan Admasu said shows that_. A. agricultural incomes have helped improve all the peoples health in Africa B. now the health care network is perfect in Ethiopia C. 93% o
23、f the 25,000 people enjoy health centers in Ethiopia D. the government has been taking active measures to improve peoples healthBGood Housekeeping has discovered that even if a child wear a helmet when she bikes, or skates, it may not protect her from a serious head injury. Every year, 390,000 child
24、ren under age 15 go to hospital emergency rooms with bike-related injuries. Of that number, about one third children suffer head injuries and an estimated 200 die. By wearing a helmet, a child can reduce her risk of injury by as much as 85 percent. But remember a bicycle helmet must fit properly to
25、be safe. Here are five steps to making sure your childs helmet fits properly. 1) If you havent bought your childs helmet already, you might want to consider one with a rear stabilizer(稳定杆). A rear stabilizer holds the back of the head gently and helps the helmet stay correctly positioned. 2) The hel
26、met should fit closely and shouldnt slide from side to side or front to back. If your child can put two fingers on both temples inside the helmet, its too big. Try a smaller size. But if the next size down is too small, use the fit pads(护垫). Fit pads come in different sizes and attach to the helmet
27、with Velcro. 3) Tell your child to open her mouth widely and ask if she can feel the helmet push down onto the top of her head. If she cant, you need to readjust her helmet. 4) To prevent strap slippage, wind a rubber band around the strap where it meets the fastener. 5) Recheck the fit regularly. Y
28、ou should replace the bicycle helmet: If she has been in an accident with it. If the buckle(金属扣) breaks or if a piece breaks off. If it doesnt have a U.S. Consumer Product Safety Commission, American Society for Testing and Materials, or Snell Memorial Foundation sticker. If it doesnt fit correctly.
29、 Even if the helmet fit perfectly two years ago, it might be too small now.35. Who is this passage mainly written for? A. Children. B. Teachers. C. Parents. D. Helmet producers.36. What does the author mainly want to stress in the second paragraph? A. The bike-related injury is a serious threat to t
30、he children. B. The bicycle helmets must fit properly while the children are biking.C. Its necessary for the children to wear helmets while biking. D. Many students suffer bike-related injuries every year.37. If a girl finds a helmet a little bit big for her head, what should she do? A. She must buy
31、 a smaller size. B. She can use some fit pads. C. She can put fingers on both temples inside the helmet. D. She must make helmet slide from side to side.38. Phil White, a father, found the buckle of his girls helmet broken, he can_ A. buy a new bicycle helmet for her B. mend the bicycle helmet himse
32、lf C. continue to use the bicycle helmet D. throw away the broken buckleCOn a freezing-cold February morning in Indiana, Jhaqueil Reagan, 18, left home to walk to a job interviewten miles away, over snow-covered roads.Reagan had been looking for work for months. His mother had died two years earlier
33、, and he was the only caretaker of his younger brother, Cole, 16, and sister, Jazzlyn, seven. He was desperate for a regular salary after cutting lawns(草坪) and doing other temporary jobs.Three hours into his hard trip, Reagan had covered only three miles. He paused outside a Cajun restaurant called
34、Papa Roux to ask for directions from owner Art Bouvier, who was clearing ice and snow from the parking lot. “I told him to get on the bus,” says Bouvier. “He thanked me and went on his way.”Fifteen minutes later, Bouvier pulled up in his car beside Reagan as he walked along. “Youve really got to be
35、on the bus,” he told Reagan. “I dont have money for the bus,” Reagan replied. Bouvier offered him a lift. On the way, he asked the boy about his job search.“I thought, This is the kind of kid I want working for me,” says Bouvier. He got the teens phone number and dropped him off for his interview.La
36、ter that day, Bouvier wrote about Reagan on Facebook. “He doesnt know it yet, but he starts on Monday,” Bouvier wrote. “Its been a while since Ive met someone so young with a work ethic（伦理） like that!” A few hours later, Bouvier called to offer Reagan a job. Shocked, the teen accepted on the spot. A
37、 television reporter caught wind of the story and interviewed the pair on camera that night.Today, Reagan is washing dishes, filling orders, and greeting Papa Roux customers for $8.50 an hour. The publicity(宣传) has brought in so many new customers that Bouvier plans to open a second restaurant by th
38、e end of the year.39.Why did Jhaqueil Reagan have to find a job ? A. Because he had to make enough money to support his family. B. Because his parents had died two years earlier. C. Because he wanted to change his job. D. Because he was desperate for a good job.40. Which of the following can be used
39、 to replace the underlined part in the sixth paragraph ? A. reported B. delivered C. heard D. told41. Which of the following words best describes Bouvier? A. honest B. warm-hearted C. modest D. independent42. Whats the best title of the passage ? A. A Young Man Who Had an Interview B. A Young Man Wh
40、o Found a Job C. A Boss Who Offered a Job D. A Boss Who Took a ChanceDNowadays more and more people are trapped in too busy work to relax themselves. We have no time to tell a bed-time story to our children, or enjoy a nice dinner with our family, or take a break to think about how we live the preci
41、ous life, or even meet friends. All we notice is that the distinctions that used to guide and steady us - between Sunday and Monday, public and private, here and there - are gone. We have more ways to communicate, but less and less to say. Partly because were so busy communicating. Maybe thats why m
42、ore and more people I know, even if they have no religious belief, seem to be turning to yoga, or meditation, or tai chi. Some friends of mine try to go on long walks every Sunday, or to “forget” their cell phones at home. A series of tests in recent years has shown that their brains become both cal
43、mer and sharper after spending time in quiet rural settings. In my own case, I often turn to extreme measures to try to keep my sanity and ensure that I have time to do nothing at all. Ive not yet used a cell phone and Ive never Tweeted or entered Face book. I try not to go online till my days writi
44、ng is finished, and I moved from Manhattan to rural Japan. None of this is a matter of principle or asceticism (苦行主义): its just pure selfishness. Nothing makes me feel better-calmer, clearer and happier-than being in one place, absorbed in a book, a conversation, a piece of music. Its actually somet
45、hing deeper than mere happiness: its joy, which David Steindl-Rast describes as “that kind of happiness that doesnt depend on what happens.” That is the highest of the highest we have been longing for-The Joy of Quiet. 43. The writer sometimes doesnt do anything because _.A. he is out of work B. wha
46、tever he does makes no sense C. he can enjoy himself in his leisure time D. he is worried about his writing44. What does the writer mean when using the word “forget” (in the 2nd paragraph)?A. Trapped in busy work, they are really forgetful.B. They think cell phone is not a suitable means of communic
47、ation.C. They leave their cell phones at home on purpose.D. They hate modern techniques such as the cell phone.45. Which of the following is right? A. The writer is unwilling to help others since he is selfish. B. Slowing down to find deep-down joy is necessary. C. It is better to go back to the anc
48、ient times since we are so busy now. D. We have more to say because we have more ways to communicate.46. What is the main idea of the article?A. The importance of spending time in quiet.B. We can do some sports such as yoga to relax.C. To feel better, we should do nothing at all.D. The more we commu
49、nicate, the better we will feel.EJunk food is everywhere. Were eating way too much of it. Most of us know what were doing and yet we do it anyway.So heres a suggestion offered by two researchers at the Rand Corporation: Why not take a lesson from alcohol control policies and apply them to where food
50、 is sold and how its showed?Many policy measures to control obesity (肥胖症) suppose that people can consciously and reasonably choose what and how much they eat and therefore focus on providing information and more access to healthier foods, note the two researchers.In contrast, the researchers contin
51、ue, many regulations that dont suppose people can make reasonable choices have been successfully applied to control alcohol, of which the overdrinking, just like eating too much food, leads to serious health problems.The research references studies of peoples behavior with food and alcohol and resul
52、ts of alcohol limits, and then lists five regulations that the researchers think might work if applied to junk foods. Among them:Fewer stores: licenses to sell alcohol arent handed out unplanned to all comers but are allotted (分配)based on the number of places in an area that already sell alcohol. Th
53、ese make alcohol less easy to get and reduce the number of psychological cues(暗示) to drink.Similarly, the researchers say, being presented with junk food causes our desire to eat it. So why not limit the food stores, particularly ones that sell food rich in empty calories? And why not limit sale of
54、food in places that arent primarily food stores?Display and sales limits: California has a rule banning alcohol shows near the cash registers in gas stations, and in most places you cant buy alcohol at drive-through facilities(设施). At supermarkets, food companies pay to have their products in places
55、 where theyre easily seen. One could remove junk food to the back of the store and ban them from the shelves at checkout lines. 47. What can be inferred from Paragraph3 and Paragraph4 ?A. The people should choose what and how much they eat consciously.B. The people can make reasonable choices becaus
56、e of the regulations.C. Many policy measures to control obesity do not work at the present time.D. The measures to control obesity are different from those to control alcohol.48. Which of the following measures may the writer support to control obesity? A. Improving the quality of food. B. Banning s
57、pecial price deals for junk foods. C. Paying more attention to food safety. D. Banning selling the food rich in sugar.49. The two researchers give the suggestions to control obesity mainly by _.A. description B. discussion C. example D. comparison50. What may be mentioned right after the last paragr
58、aph of this passage? A. Some other measures to control obesity. B. Some other states banning junk food. C. Some effects of the measures to control obesity.D. Some people giving up alcohol successfully.第二节根据对话内容，从对话后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项，然后将答案 写到答题卡相应的位置上。选项中有两项多余。（共5小题;每小题2分， 满分10分。）A: Whats wrong with
59、you, Tom? You look upset today. 51 B: No, Mum, butA: _ 52 B: Well. What shall I do? I happened to break a window in Mr. Henrys house.A: Oh, did you apologize to Mr. Henry?B: _ 53 A: Come on, dear, please tell me the truth. B: Paul and I were together. 54 A: You shouldnt have done that.B: I know, but
60、 I darent phone Mr. Henry. And Im also very sorry for Paul.A: 55 Then youd better hurry to see Paul. Give him back the money and if you like, invite him to tea tomorrow.B: I will do as you say.A. I think you must make an apology to Mr. Henry.B. We both ran away.C. But the trouble isD. Come on, son,
61、tell me what has happened.E. I was able to run away but he was caught and had to pay for the damage.F. Can I help you?G. Is there anything wrong?第II卷(非选择题，共60分)第三部分写作(共三节，满分60分)第一节阅读表达(共5小题;每小题2分，满分10分）阅读下面短文并回答问然后将答案写到答题卡相应的位置上(请注意每题词数要求)。1One Friday night in May 2010, Oliver and Ione Kleven heard
62、angry shouts coming from their front lawn(草坪). Ione, 65, stepped onto the porch（门廊） and saw two men in dark clothes struggling with something on the groundright where she and her grandson had planted a flower bed the weekend before.2 “Go fight somewhere else!” she shouted, worried her plants would g
63、et damaged. At the sound of her voice, the face of a boy appeared from beneath the two men. He looked 14. “Theyre trying to kill me!” the boy screamed. Ione ran toward them and, without hesitation, caught the boys arm, pulling him out.3 “Leave him alone!” she shouted. When the men stood up, Ione saw
64、 what looked like a sharp object in one mans hand. When she turned back toward the boy, he was moaning（呻吟） in pain and holding his stomach. The attackers began to move in on the boy again when Iones husband shouted: “Get lost!” The two men walked quickly and quietly across the street and drove off i
65、n a dark car.4“I have to get to the hospital!” the boy cried. He lifted his shirt, and Ione could see a bloody wound on his stomach. Oliver hugged the trembling(发抖的) boy while Ione caught her cell phone and car keys inside the house. She handed the phone to Oliver. “Call 911,” she told him. “Im goin
66、g after them.” Ione took off but was unable to find the car. 5The Klevens then learned what had happened . Earlier that night, as the boy waited for his parents to pick him up from the high school across the street from the Klevens house, two men approached and demanded his wallet. When he refused,
67、one of the men hit him in the face. The boy ran across the street. The men caught up with him, and one hurt him in the back and stomach with a sharp knife. Thats when Ione stepped in.56. When was Ione born? (within 2 words) 57. Why did Ione shout at the two struggling men? (within 8 words) 58. Whom
68、does the underlined word “him” (in Para.3) probably refer to? (within 3 words) 59. Why did Ione hand the phone to Oliver? (within 8 words.) 60. What was the boy doing when the two men approached him? (within 10 words.) 第二节 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1. 5分，满分15分。）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最
69、多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。In my view, the Internet is helpful. It is known to all, the Internet is playing a important part in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news home and
70、 abroad and got as much information as we can. We can also attend to the net school and read many books. We can even do shopping online. Beside, our ability to operate the computer can be improved great. So we should not be addicted to the Internet, or well get our life and study destroying. In addi
71、tion, we should keep off the harmful website. Anyhow, this doesnt prevent the Internet from becoming our friend.第三节 书面表达(满分35分）假设你叫李林，正在读高三，你的好友张华最近给你来信，想了解你的近况，请你用英语给他写一封回信，告诉他进入高三以来你学习以及生活情况的变化，主要内容包括：1 学习态度与学习压力的变化；2 时间安排的变化；3 你后期的打算（两点）。注意：1. 内容包括以上要点，但不要逐句翻译； 2. 字数120左右，文章开头已提供，不计入总词数。Dear Zhan
72、g Hua，Im happy to have received your letter. Now Im writing to express my thanks for your care and tell you something about my study and life._ _ Best wishes!Yours Li Lin 遂 宁 市 高 2014 级 零 诊 考 试英 语 试 题 答 案第一部分英语知识运用(共两节，满分40分）第一节语法和词汇知识(共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分)1-5 CBCAD 6-10 ACBBD第二节完形填空(共20小题；每小题1. 5分，满分3
73、0分）11-15 BDADA 16-20 CCBDA 21-25 CAABD 26-30 CBBCD第二部分阅读理解(共两节，满分50分) 第一节（共20小题;每小题2分，满分40分）31-34 DBAD 35-38 CBBA 39-42 ACBD 43-46 CCBA 47-50 C B DA第二节（共5小题;每小题2分， 满分10分）51-55 G D C E A第三部分写作(共三节，满分60分)第一节阅读表达(共5小题;每小题2分，满分10分）56. In 1945.57. Because she worried her plants would get damaged.58. The
74、boy.59. To call 91160. He was waiting for his parents to pick him up.第二节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1. 5分，满分15分）In my view, the Internet is helpful. It is known to all, the Internet is playing a important part As anIn our daily life. On the Internet, we can read newshome and abroad and got as much At getinformati
75、on as we can. We can also attend to the net school and read many books. We can even do shopping online. Beside, our ability to operate the computer can be improved great. Besides greatly So we should not be addicted to the Internet, or well get our life and study destroying. In But destroyedaddition
76、, we should keep off the harmful website. Anyhow, this doesnt prevent the Internet from websitesbecoming our friend第三节 书面表达(满分35分） 一、评分原则 1.本题总分为35分，按5个档次给分。 2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5.拼写与标点符号是评议准确性的
77、一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程序予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6.如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、要点认定:1、学习态度的变化；2、学习压力的变化；3、时间安排的变化；4、你后期的打算（两点）。三、要点认定： 1、考生必须有较完整的句子表达出要点。如只有关键词而无主谓结构，不可视为要点。 2、在表达要点的句子中，如果主谓结构有严重语言错误,可视为半个要点。 3涉及到要点的句子中，如果不认可该要点，便不再扣该句的语言分。 4围绕要点的发挥，如有语言错误，则扣语言分。 5如果出现大小写和标点错误，不扣语言分。重复语言错误只扣一次分。四、各档次的给分范围和要求
78、第五档：（29-35分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句之间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档：（22-28分）完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档：（15-21分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆
79、盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档：（8-14分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。有些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档：（1-7分）未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未能理解试题要求。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内
80、容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。(One possible version)Dear Zhang Hua，Im happy to have received your letter. Now Im writing to express my thanks for your care and tell you something about my study and life.Since entering Senior Three, a great change has
81、taken place to me. First of all, Im studying much harder than ever with the purpose of preparing myself for the College Entrance Examination. Besides, so many tests do we face every day that I feel extremely stressful, even lose sleep sometimes at night. Whats more, occupied with my study, I cant af
82、ford any time to take up my hobbies, let alone, playing computer games as before.However, I have decided that I will try to adjust myself to Senior Three. While studying, I will make wise use of my time. By keeping a balance between study and rest, the learning efficiency, I believe, can be improved and my dream will come true. Best wishes! (121words)Yours Li Lin
