1、Section Integrated skills 写一篇交友日记写作指津本单元的写作项目属于新课标中应用体类别中的“日记”，语境话题是交友。日记就是用文字记述自己一天生活中发生的有意义或重要的事，以及自己对某事的感受或评议。1主体人称为第一人称。记叙已发生的事多用一般过去时；描述自己对某事的感受或评议时多用一般现在时。2第一行左上角写日期和星期，右上角写天气，接下来写内容。3开头可以以“Dear Diary (亲爱的日记)”起笔，也可以省略掉。4日记作为一种个人写作形式，内容通常不是任何人都能读到的。5语言风格上尽量使用非正式的英语，好像你在和一个亲密的朋友说话。 第一人称“I”经常用于日记
2、中。词句助力一、写作常用词汇1friendly adj.友好的2friendship n. 友谊3quality n. 品质4supportive adj. 支持的；拥护的5trouble n. 麻烦6confused adj. 困惑的7selfless adj. 无私的，忘我的8overcome vt. 克服；战胜9honest adj. 诚实的10humorous adj. 幽默的11helpful adj. 乐于助人的，有益的12respect vt. 尊敬13bring out 展现出；使显露14get over 克服 15get along well with 与和睦相处16have
3、 difficulty/trouble (in) doing sth 在做某事上有困难二、写作常用句式(注意彩体表达)1I am so anxious about losing my good friend Jack.我很担心失去我的好朋友杰克。2Today is a sunny day.I went camping with my good friend Peter.今天阳光明媚。我和我的好友彼得去露营了。3It is normal for teenagers to have some conflicts among them.青少年之间有一些冲突是正常的。4I hope my friend
4、 is humorous and fun.我希望我的朋友幽默又有趣。5I want to get along well with everyone.我想和大家和睦相处。6He is selfless and we all highly respect him.他是无私的，我们都很尊敬他。7Hes very hard on me./Hes mean to me.他对我一点儿都不友好。8I owe him a lot for everything he has done for me.我非常感谢他为我所做的一切。9What happened today has left a deep impres
5、sion in my memory.今天发生的事在我的脑海里留下了很深的印象。10Everyone who knows him likes to make friends with him.每个认识他的人都乐意与他交朋友。11In my opinion, he is a kindhearted, humorous and responsible teacher.在我看来，他是一位心地善良、幽默、有责任心的教师。12Thanks to his help, I have made much progress and caught up with others.多亏他的帮助，我取得了很大进步并赶上了
6、其他同学。典题导学假定你是李华，你和好朋友Jenny因为一次误会影响了你们之间的友谊。请你写一篇日记，倾诉自己的苦恼，并说出你的打算。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。Saturday,2 OctoberSunnyDear Diary，-四步成文第一步：审题谋篇审题审人称：以第一、三人称为主审时态：以一般现在时为主，少量一般将来时谋篇第一段：诉说失去好朋友的苦恼。第二段：剖析原因及个人打算。第三段：抒发对我们未来友谊的信心。第二步：要点翻译1我很担心失去我的好朋友珍妮。(anxious)I am so anxious about los
7、ing my good friend Jenny.2我希望我们能消除我们之间的误解。(rid，宾语从句)I hope we can rid the misunderstanding between us.3这些天我一直在反思自己。(reflect)I have been reflecting myself these days.4即使是最好的朋友有冲突也是正常的。(it作形式主语)It is normal for even best friends to have a conflict.5我不需要为此感到太难过。(need, upset)I dont need to feel too upse
8、t about it.6我应该主动和她交谈。(should, offer)I should offer to talk to her.7我应该找出真正的问题是什么。(what引导的宾语从句)I should find out what the problem really is.8我必须尊重和支持她做的选择。 (respect, support，定语从句)I must respect and support the choice she makes.9如果可能的话，我愿意承认我的错误，并真正原谅她。(admit, forgive)If it is possible, I will offer
9、to admit my mistakes and truly forgive her.10通过我们的谈话，我相信我们仍然是好朋友。 (宾语从句)Through our conversation, I believe were still good friends.11在不久的将来，我们的友谊将比以往任何时候都更加牢固。 (比较级)In the near future, our friendship will grow stronger than ever.第三步：词句升级1用连词so将句4和句5合并为一个并列句It is normal for even best friends to have
10、 a conflict, so I dont need to feel too upset about it.2用动词不定式作目的状语升级句6和句7I should offer to talk to her to find out what the problem really is.3用状语从句的省略升级句9If possible, I will offer to admit my mistakes and truly forgive her.第四步：连句成篇Saturday,2 OctoberSunnyDear Diary，I am so anxious about losing my g
11、ood friend Jenny.I hope we can rid the misunderstanding between us.To be honest, I have been reflecting myself these days.It is normal for even best friends to have a conflict, so I dont need to feel too upset about it.Then, I should offer to talk to her to find out what the problem really is.I must
12、 respect and support the choice she makes.Most of all, if possible, I will offer to admit my mistakes and truly forgive her.Through our conversation, I believe were still good friends.In the near future, our friendship will grow stronger than ever.即时演练每位同学都希望自己具有良好的人际关系，成为班级中受欢迎的人。假定你是李津，请写一篇日记，描述一下
13、受人喜爱的人所具备的美好品质(对待集体；对待他人；对待自己)。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。Sunday,3 OctoberCloudyDear Diary，-参考范文：Sunday,3 OctoberCloudyDear Diary，We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. To enjoy popularity, we should regard the class as our big family and even offer to give up
14、 our personal interests whenever necessary.To be a popular student, firstly, we are to show respect and concern for others.Secondly, we ought to be strict with ourselves and make every effort to achieve allround development, being good not only at our lessons but also at other fields.In time of success we remain modest, while in time of difficulty we keep strongminded.All in all, popularity comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities.
