1、Section Integrated skills 写一封建议信写作指津建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。本单元主要就青少年生活、心理健康等问题提出建议。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确。提出的建议要合情合理，语言要礼貌得体。建议的角度要多样化，要避免重复，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等依次陈述建议。 具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”结构。词句助力一、写作常用词汇1advise vt.建议2upset adj. 难过的，伤心的3p
2、ersuade vt. 说服4teenager n. 青少年 5conflict n. 冲突6helpful adj. 有帮助的7confidence n. 信心8overcome vt. 克服；战胜9explain vt. 解释10worry about 担心11feel lonely 感到寂寞/孤独12turn to sb for help 向某人寻求帮助13settle the problem 解决这个问题14stick to 坚持15make it 成功16make up with sb 与某人和解17give sb some advice/tips/suggestions on .
3、就给某人一些建议二、写作常用句式(注意黑体表达)(一)精彩开头语1I am sorry to hear that you feel lonely and upset when entering a new school.我很遗憾听到你进入新学校后感到孤独和心烦不安。2I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.我知道你现在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。3Im glad to receive your letter asking for my a
4、dvice on .很高兴收到你就征求建议的来信。4Here are some tips./Here are a few suggestions.这里有一些建议。5I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会成功的。(二)主体常用语1The conflict between you and your parents lies in subject choosing.你和你父母之间的冲突在于选课。2First(ly), why not join a club? If you do this, you
5、can make friends.首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。3Second(ly), you should/can try to talk with others.Then/That way, you will feel better.其次，你应该试着与人交谈。这样你会感觉好点。4Third(ly), it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this, you will calm yourself down.第三，看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。这样你会使自
6、己平静下来。5Last but not least, you should talk with her first.最后但同样重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。(三)结束点睛句1I hope you will find these ideas useful.希望你会发现这些办法很有用。2As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above.如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加理解你，会愿意和你交朋友的。3I hope m
7、y advice will be of help to you.我希望我的建议对你有帮助。典题导学假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack 因为选课问题，与父母意见不同，发生冲突，情绪低落，写信向你求助。请给他写一封回信，帮他分析冲突原因，提出和解建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 四步成文第一步：审题谋篇 审题审人称：以第二人称为主，适当使用第一、三人称审时态：以一般现在时为主谋篇第一段：委婉安慰，表示理解，表明写作目的。第二段：分析发生冲突的原因，并给出建议。第三段：表达希望或祝福。第二步：要点翻译1我很遗憾听到你在选课上与你的父母有一些冲突。(have confli
8、cts with，宾语从句)I am sorry to hear that you had some conflicts with your parents on subject choosing.2我认为没有必要感到不安。(there is no need to .，复合句)I think there is no need to feel upset.3像这样的事情通常会发生在青少年身上，包括你在内。(included，简单句)Things like this usually happen to teenagers, you included.4你和你父母之间的冲突是选择对你有益的东西还是你
9、感兴趣的东西。(whether to do; what宾语从句)The conflict between you and your parents is whether to choose what is beneficial for you or what interests you.5如果你坚持根据你的喜好选课，你就应该耐心向你的父母解释。(状语从句，stick to)If you stick to choosing subject according to your preference, you should explain to your parents patiently.6我建议
10、你告诉他们你必须选这些课程的原因。(why引导定语从句)I advised you to tell them the reasons why you must choose the subjects.7你也应该保证你会学好你选择的东西。 (what宾语从句)You should also promise that you will learn what you choose well.8这也是我说服父母允许我选择我喜欢的科目的方法。(persuade，宾语从句)These are the ways I persuaded my parents to allow me to choose wha
11、t I like.9期待你的回复，希望你能和父母和好。(make up with, 宾语从句)Looking forward to your reply and hoping that you can make up with your parents.第三步：词句升级1用因果并列连词合并句2和句3I think there is no need to feel upset, for things like this usually happen to teenagers, you included.2用It is过去分词that .改写句6It is advised that you sho
12、uld tell them the reasons why you must choose the subjects.第四步：连句成篇Dear Jack，I am sorry to hear that you had some conflicts with your parents on subject choosing.But I think there is no need to feel upset, for things like this usually happen to teenagers, you included.Needless to say, the conflict b
13、etween you and your parents is whether to choose what is beneficial for you or what interests you.As far as I am concerned, if you stick to choosing subject according to your preference, you should explain to your parents patiently.It is advised that you should tell them the reasons why you must cho
14、ose the subjects.Besides, you should also promise that you will learn what you choose well.These are the ways I persuaded my parents to allow me to choose what I like.Looking forward to your reply and hoping that you can make up with your parents.Yours，Li Hua即时演练假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Ann在一个月前来到中国上学，她发来邮件说她与同
15、学相处方面遇到了一些问题。请你根据以下提示给她回一封邮件，内容包括：1表示理解；2提出建议；3表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Ann，I am sorry to hear that youre having trouble in getting along with your classmates in your new school. Yours，Li Hua参考范文：Dear Ann，I am sorry to hear that youre having trouble in getting along wi
16、th your classmates in your new school.Theres no need to be too anxious, because many teenagers may find theyre faced with the same situation when in a new environment.The problem is easy to solve if you take my advice.To begin with, try your best to communicate with your classmates more often and pa
17、rticipate in discussions held in your class, which is an effective way to get on good terms with your classmates.Next, being a good listener is very important, as it makes the speakers feel that you are sincere.Whats more, its a good idea to help others when necessary, for it will enable you to develop a close relationship with them.Hope my advice will be of some help to you.Yours，Li Hua
