1、Section Writing a summary 学范文背佳句它山之石，可以攻玉范文诠解参考范文名师论道British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs.Such a habit is so popular that many people plant easytogrow herbs in their own tea gardens.There are many flavours of fruit and herbal teas, including traditional lemon and ginger, as well as m
2、any unusual flavours such as mango, strawberry, apple, pear, blackberry leaf and dandelion.Aside from the variety of flavours, herbal tea also has various health benefits.Some can help people relax, and some like ginger tea, are good for the immune system, while others, such as mint tea, are benefic
3、ial for digestion.学语言本文为概要写作，范文分为三部分，三部分中心内容分别为Their popularity, Unusual flavours, Health benefits。范文正是从文章中心内容入手，然后用不同的表达，如so .that .结构，there be句型等；另外作者用不同的连接词或短语将不同段落的内容连接起来，使文章更加顺畅；除此之外，范文还对信息进行了适当地整合与重组。学结构中心内容(Their popularity, Unusual flavours, Health benefits)段落大意(many people grow their very o
4、wn tea gardens with easytogrow herbs/mango, strawberry, apple, pear, blackberry leaf and dandelion/It can be good for digestion)添加细节，丰富内容整合句子，重组文章添连词，连全文。佳句背诵1.When some waste chemicals are put into the sea, they can hurt or kill animals and fish.当一些化学废料被排放到海洋时，它们会伤害或杀死动物和鱼类。2.As can be seen from th
5、e chart, an increasing number of people own mobile phones in China now.从图表中可以看出，现在中国拥有手机的人越来越多。3.Nowadays some teenagers prefer to watch TV at home rather rather than go out for exercise.如今，一些青少年宁愿在家看电视也不愿意出去做运动。4.Our city has developed into a big one, which is four times the size of what it used to
6、 be.我们的城市已经发展成了一个大城市，是原来的4倍大。5.The harder you work, the greater progress you will make.你学习越努力，取得的进步越大。6.Theres no doubt that it can enhance peoples consciousness of health, but it is likely to result in over anxiety.毫无疑问，它能增强人们的健康意识，但更有可能引起过度焦虑。仿佳作找差距巧借外力，事半功倍题目要求阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。The famili
7、ar yellow school bus is the largest system of mass transportation in the US and every school day transports roughly 25 million young people to school and home again after the school day ends.Meanwhile, they are the safest method for getting kids to and from school, according to the National Highway
8、Traffic Safety Administration (NHTSA)Children are 70 times more likely to arrive at school safely on the school bus than if they had traveled to school driving themselves or riding with friends.These school buses meet more of the nations motor vehicle safety standards than any other vehicles on the
9、road.Also, several new technologies available today are making school buses even safer, such as video cameras on the inside and outside, stop arm cameras, GPS tracking and collision lessening systems.Another safety tool on school buses is high seat backs, closelyspaced seats and energyabsorbing seat
10、ing.But even the safeness of school buses would not completely sum up why children are safer when riding the big, yellow bus.The bus is only as safe as the professional men and women who drive them.All drivers must obtain a Class B or C Commercial Drivers License(CDL)They are randomly tested for alc
11、ohol and drugs, usually have their driving record checked, and are given the same review for criminal history as teachers and other employees who have contact with students.In order to serve as a school bus driver, most applicants are required to successfully complete a training course, along with i
12、nstruction in the classroom and behind the wheel.School buses are safe for the environment, not only because each bus replaces 36passenger cars that would, but for the buses, be on the road taking and picking up school children.Additionally, school buses use alternative green fuels like natural gas,
13、 and electric power.Todd Monteferrario, President of the National School Transportation Association, said parents should remember that the safest and smartest choice is to put their children on the big yellow bus when they can.写作指导概要写作是在正确理解文章的基础上，在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。在写概要时，要
14、按照“六步法”的程序进行，具体操作方法如下：1Scan the passage览全文，定体裁2Underline the main points划要点3Miss the details省细节4Analyse the structure析结构5Restate the points换表达6Yoke the sentences to a passage连全文文章体裁议论文话题It is the safest way for kids to and from school by the yellow school bus.结构总分总分要点校车满足了较高的车辆安全标准且技术配备先进。not only .
15、but also .，meet，equip可能用到的词汇和句型校车司机必须通过严格的资格考试和安全驾驶培训。pass, qualification, training校车以绿色燃料为动力，减少了私家车上路，因此很环保。power, reduce, hit the roads, environmentally参考范文：The school bus is the safest and wisest choice to school in the US for the following reasons.(要点1)Firstly, school buses not only meet high ve
16、hicle safety standards but also are technologically equipped.(要点2)Secondly, the bus drivers have to pass strict qualification tests and safety driving trainings.(要点3)Thirdly, school buses, powered by green fuels, are environmentally safe by reducing the number of private cars hitting the roads.(要点4)Therefore, children are encouraged to go to school by school bus.(要点5)
