1、高中英语写作-How to write an argumentation（议论文）Advertisements词汇,句型,语法多样化 1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词What is a good compositionHow to write a good compositioncross-question(审题)main idea styleverb tense personseize the major points(抓要点)figure out the outline(提纲)sentence connectio
2、n(连句成文)words/phrases passageensure the fluency(添加过渡，确保连贯)conjunctions(连接词语)error correcting(查错改错）sentencesLearn to organizePart1:Part2:Part3:introduction to your topicadvantages/disadvantagesown opinionAs science and technology develops,we can see advertisements almost everywhere.Advertisements help
3、 people get much information about new products.Company can sell more products than before.And some advertisements educate the public.Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life.It wastes a lot of natural resources,which increases the cost of products.They mislead or even cheat consumers.
4、They make us upset.I think advertising is useful.If we have enough facts from ads,we can easily make a much better choice.(introduction)(advantages)(disadvantages)(own opinion)(86 words)Learn to polish 增分策略一 使用高级词汇As science and technology develops,we can seeadvertisements almost everywhere.替换为：with
5、 the development of science and technologywith science and technology developing 替换为：people are constantly exposed to adspeople have access to/are accessible to adsadvertising finds its way into/floods into our daily life.增分策略 二 使用非谓语形式1.It wastes a lot of natural resources,which increases the cost
6、of products.1)increasing the cost of products.2)causing/leading to/resulting in/contributing to/bringing about the higher prices of products.2.If we have enough facts from ads,we can easily make a much better choice.1)having enough facts from ads,we can.2)armed with/equipped with enough facts from增分
7、策略三 巧用过渡连接表达1.Para2 is about advantages of advertisements.Para3:Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life.However,advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life.(段际过渡)2.It wastes a lot of natural resources,which increases the cost of products.They mislead or even cheat consumers
8、.They also make us upset.In the first place,it wastes.In the second place,they mislead.Furthermore,they make us upset.(段内句子之间衔接)增分策略四加强一义多形How to express ones opinion or suggestion1.As far as I am concerned/As to me/From my point of view we should attach more importance to 2.Personally/But for me,I
9、would rather/prefer to.增分策略五句式变换Advertisements help people get much information about new products.1)It is ads that help people get.2)It is believed that ads help inform people of new products.3)If it were not for ads,people wouldnt get With the development of science and technology,people are const
10、antly exposed to ads.Ads benefit us in many ways.It is believed that ads can inform people of new products.Making use of ads,companies can promote the sales of products.Advertisements educate the public.However,there exist some bad effects on our daily life.In the first place,it is a waste of natura
11、l resources,increasing the cost of products.In the second place,not only do ads mislead or even cheat consumers but alsomake us upset and disturbed.As far as I am concerned,advertising is of use.If we are armed with enough facts from ads,it is easy for us to make a much better choice of goods.(123 w
12、ords)1.(因为)_ his help,I finished the work at last.Thanks toAs a result ofOwing toDue to 原因Because of /withconjunctions2.More roads will have to be built with more cars,_（所以）well have less field to grow rice.thereforesoas a result/consequencethus结果3.The rent is reasonable,_,the location is perfect.房租
13、很合理，另外，位置也很好。whats moremoreover/furthermorein additionbesides 另外(递进）4.The young man didnt enjoy his old job._(相反)he finds the new job very interesting.On the contraryHowever转折But/yet/while5._(总之),we should make good use of computer.In generalIn a word/all in all总结In short/briefIn conclusionSummary T
14、o be complete To be accurate To be coherent To be varied 三性一复杂内容的完整性用词的准确性篇章的连贯性句子的复杂度1.With the machine_(help)us,we could finish the work on time.2.With everything_(do),she went home happily.3.If he_(take)my advice,he wouldnt make such a mistake.4._(hear)the bad news,they couldnt help crying.5._(en
15、courage)by his heroic deeds,they worked harder.6.It is from the sun_we get the light and heat.Exercisehelpingdonehad takenHearingEncouragedthat当前越来越多的人们关注住房问题。有人喜欢住在传统的房子里，有人喜欢住在公寓里，请你以“Live in a traditional house or live in an apartment”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文。1.住在传统的房子里：可以在院子里种花，树，可以养宠物，可以在院子里锻炼身体。2.住在公寓里：干净，安全，离工作地方近3.我的看法及理由。注意：词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数）HomeworkLive in a traditional house or live in an apartmentNowadays,more and more people pay more attention to their lives.But people differ in their opinions on the matter.
