1、短文改错精讲精炼0624.此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。Dear Editor，Im writing to tell you opinion about water saving.76._Water is important. We, a
2、s well as animal, cannot live77._without water and neither agriculture or industry can go78._without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79._Many countries in the world find we dont have enough water.80._To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all81._out to plant trees thou
3、gh trees will help save water. Next, no82._drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find83._ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84._water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.85._Sincerely，Li Hua解析 Dear Editor，Im writing to tell youopinion abou
4、t water saving.76._my_Water is important. We, as well as animal,_cannot live77._animals_without water and neither agriculture or industry can go78._nor_without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79._seems_Many countries in the world find we dont have enough water.80._they_To deal with
5、 a problem, I think, we should first go all81._the/this/that_out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no82._because/since/as_drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find83._ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84._used_water forKG3mm which is q
6、uite a lot, and that will save much water.85._for_Sincerely，Li Hua76. opinion前加my tell sb sth告诉某人某事，题目中直接宾语opinion是作者的看法，故在其前面加 my。77. animalanimalsanimal是一个单数可数名词不能单独使用，这里表示类别，用复数。78. ornor与前面的neither呼应，构成固定搭配neithernor既不也不。79. seemedseems全篇文章都是以一般现在时为主，再根据后面的is，可知用现在时。80. wethey 根据前面的Many countrie
7、s可知用they替代这些国家。81. athe/this/that这里的problem指缺乏水的情况，因此属于特指。82. thoughbecause/since/as根据后面的trees will help save water是解释种树的原因，所以用because/since/as。83. 84. usingused根据后面的in washing可知是洗衣服用过的水，所以用used。85. 去掉forwhich指代water，作主语，不需要for。25.Time and tide wait no man. My mother is becoming a middleage woman qu
8、ietly. She had been busy running after us all the years. My father is very busy every day outside. But the heavy burden falls on my mothers shoulder. Because my school is far from my home, I have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the station every time. I often choose a seat
9、where is close to the window, so I can see her. However, I always cant help run tears from my eyes. All the buildings and people outside the window disappear. I wave gentle to my mother and I look at her till the view of her back disappears . Up to now, even if he is busy, she still does it as usual
10、. The view of my mothers back will never change in my heart.解析 Time and tide wait no man.My mother is becoming a _middleage woman quietly. She ha been busy running after us all the years.My father is very busy every day outside.Bu the heavy burden falls on my mothers shoulde.Because my school is far
11、 from my home，I have to go to school by thetrain and my mother sees me off at the station every time.I often choose a seat wher is close to the window，so I can see her. However，I always cant help ru tears from my eyes.All the buildings and people outside the window disappear.I wave gentl to my mothe
12、r and I look at her till the view of her back disappears.Up to now，even if h is busy，she still does it as usual.The view of my mothers back will never change in my heart.（二）2012银川实验中学月考 Last year, I was addicted with playing computer games. I found it hard to breaking away from the bad habit. My tea
13、cher talked to my parents about this, and they made me to promise not to play those games again. I tried hard, but I found it uselessly. The moment my fingers left the keyboard, I would feel very uncomfortable. Because I was determined to forget the games, I still could not concentrate on the lesson
14、s giving in classes.Fortunately, psychological advisor in our school came to know this. He talks with me about his problem. At last, he offered his advices on how to get rid of the addiction. Now I can manage to control myself. 解析 Last year, I was addicted wit playing computer games. I found it hard
15、 to breakin away from the bad habit. My teacher talked to my parents about this, and they made me to promise not to play those games again. I tried hard, but I found it uselessl. The moment my fingers left the keyboard, I would feel very uncomfortable. Becaus I was determined to forget the games, I
16、still could not concentrate on the lessons givin in classes.Fortunately, psychological advisor in our school came to know this. He talk with me about hi problem. At last, he offered his advice on how to get rid of the addiction. Now I can manage to control myself. 26.I learned early in life that I h
17、ad to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was ha
18、ppening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “Thats it. No more toys to you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.解析 I learned early in life that I had to be more patient
19、and littl aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my to. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things di wrong, I got angry and broke i. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see whic was happening. When I tea apart m
20、y fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “Thats it. No more toys t you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I mus make my toys tolast. My attitude changed from then on.1. littleless考查副词的用法。根据句意：我不得不多一些耐心而少一些挑衅性。此处less修饰形容词。2. toytoys考查名词的单复数形式。根据each of 可知
21、，应该是“我”的玩具中的每一个，故用复数形式toys。3. didwent或者did 后加go考查固定短语的表达法。解题关键：掌握短语go wrong意为：出错。4. itthem考查代词指代一致。此处指前文的toys，所以后文用them。5. 在parents前加my考查代词的用法。英语中需前后一致，my parents bought me new toys.此处my和me对应。6. whichwhat考查名词性从句的连接词。此处what作宾语从句的主语。句意：明白所发生的一切。7. teartore考查动词时态。通过观察整个文章的时态以及my fifth birthday可知，此处用一般过
22、去时。8. tofor考查介词的用法。此处意为：不再给你买玩具了。toys for sb意为：给某人的玩具。9. mustcould/might考查情态动词。根据句意：拥有更多的耐心，“我”就可能使玩具使用得更久。10. 去掉last前的to考查不定式作宾语补足语。解题关键：make sb/sth do，此处make作“使”解，其后接不带to的不定式作宾补。27.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误
23、及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be wor
24、ried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.答案 Two years befor， I traveled to Brazil and I ren
25、ted fora car. Unfortunat， I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two wee. I called my parents, s I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they wil be worried about mysel because I was so farthe away, and that my mother would not sleep if she
26、knew. Therefore, I told them intereste stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.28.My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to g
27、o to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably doubleroom with a big bath. What I liked best were the free highspeed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful
28、with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.解析 My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visi Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, bu it is easy to go toanywh
29、ere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortabl doubleroom with a big bath. What I liked best wer the free highspeed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared fo my friends many photos takin in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonabl
30、e prices, and we enjoyed several local dis.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of m who is going to Beijing.1visitvisited根据时间状语last month可知本句时态是一般过去时，故动词用过去式。2butand/so前后文是承接或因果关系，故连词用and或so。3to去掉anywhere是指地点的副词，其前不用介词。4comfortablycomfortable修饰名词doubleroom应用形容词。5werewaswha
31、t引导主语从句，其谓语动词应用单数形式，故系动词were改为was。6forwith动词share与介词with构成搭配，意思是“和某人分享”。7takingtakentake与所修饰词photos是逻辑上的动宾关系，故用过去分词作后置定语。8dishdishes由several修饰，名词应用复数。9such后加asuch修饰的hotel是可数名词单数，需加不定冠词a。10memine双重所有格的构成是“of 名词性物主代词或名词所有格”。29.Dear Mary，Ive received your email. Dont worried about me. Im getting on wel
32、l with my research work in the lab. But in my surprise, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lose interest. Im afraid I cant agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and it is widely used in the world today an
33、d it will be important tool in the future. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. I am sure that if you study hardly, you will succeed. Im looking forward to hearing a good news from you !Yours，Li Hua 解析 Dear Mary，Ive received your email. Dont 或 about me. Im getting on wel
34、l with my research work in the lab. But i my surprise, you say you will give up lear English. The reason is becaus you have not done well in it recently and you have los interest. Im afraid I cant agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, an it is widely used in the world today and it
35、will be important tool in the future. Besid， it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. I am sure that if you study hardl， you will succeed.Im looking forward to hearing a good news from you !Yours，Li Hua 30.Dear Wei Fang，Its a long time since I heard from you in last time. Now Id lik
36、e to tell you a impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career. A boy, Li Ming, whom father died a month ago, was late for school. He stood outside the classroom silent. I smiled to him and let him come. After a while, he began to cry. Seeing this, I walked to him and asked wh
37、at has happened. He told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for her. At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness. Moved by his word, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named “Mother” for the students. From then on, I began to realize we should re
38、spect our parents and did our best to help them. Do you think so? Im looking forward to your reply. 解析 Dear Wei Fang，Its a long time since I heard from you in last time.Now I d like to tell you impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career.A boy, Li Ming, who father died a mo
39、nth ago, was late for school.He stood outside the classroom silen.I smiled to him and let him com 或. After a while, he began to cry.Seeing this, I walked to him and asked what ha happened.He told me his mother was ill bu he had to get some medicine for her.At the same time, he apologized to me for h
40、is lateness.Moved by his wor， I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named “Mother” for the students.From then on, I began to realize we should respect our parents and di our best to help them.Do you think so? Im looking forward to your reply.31.Dear Diana，Thank you for the lovel
41、y day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Annes friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service statio
42、n and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our own way to home.解析 Dear Diana，Thank you for the lovely day we hav with you. It was so kind f
43、o you to let us bring Annes friend, Gina. Unfortunat， the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, fo a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mil. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unles the road was clear.
44、 In the car park her Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. The finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our own way to home.76. havehad。全文讲述的是过去的事情，因此用过去时。77. forof。Its kind of sb. to do sth.为固定句式。78. UnfortunateUnfortunately。副词作状语，修饰全句。79. for a
45、result中的foras。as a result为固定短语，意思是“因而”。80. milemiles。前面有six修饰，因此名词应该用复数形式。81. unlessuntil/till。空后的内容是前面的时间状语。82. herethere。讲述离自己远的地方用there。83. as car中间加a。car是可数名词单数，因此用a。84. TheyWe。全文用第一人称讲述发生在自己身上的事情。85. 去掉home前的to。home是副词，前面没有介词。32. We senior school students do have some growing pains. Take some o
46、f my classmate for example，they often feel upset because the expectations from parents，endless homework and the pressure of exams. These serious affect their physical and mental wellbeing. Therefore，I think about it quite necessary to take measures to relieve the pains. First，that is a good idea to
47、have hearttoheart talks with our parents，tell them we wont disappoint them. Meanwhile，its advisable to spare some time to take some exercise beside our devotion to the studies so that we will always feel relaxing and energetic. As long as we were fully prepared，we are sure to achieve great success i
48、n my academic performance. 解析 We senior school students do have some growing pains. Take some of my classmat for example, they often feel upset because the expectations from parents, endless homework and the pressure of exams. These seriou affect their physical and mental wellbeing. Therefore, I thi
49、nk about it quite necessary to take measures to relieve the pains. First, tha is a good idea to have hearttoheart talks with our parents, tel them we wont disappoint them. Meanwhile, its advisable to spare some time to take some exercise besid our devotion to the studies so that we will always feel relaxin and energetic. As long as we wer fully prepared, we are sure to achieve great success in m academic performance.
