1、写作素养提升练Module 4 Home alone本模块以“Home alone”为话题,讲述了孩子与父母的关系,以及父母离开后孩子独自在家生活的情况。学习了本模块后,学生应该能正确对待与父母的关系,并学会用简单的状语从句来描述生活中的一些经历以及独自在家的规则。careful,safe,lock,wake,worried,unhappy单 词:worry about,keep.in mind,keep safe,be carefulwith,lock the door,call the police/fire service/hospital,make sure,be late for.,
2、get up on time,leave a contact number短 语:1.Get up on time every morning.2.Dont be late for school.3.Tell the child to keep safe at home and point outpossible dangers.4.Tell the child not to answer the door to strangers.句 型:5.Remember to lock the door when leaving.6.Tell the children when they should
3、 come back and make sure they are back on time.要点提示:1.爸爸出差,下午放学回家后你发现妈妈生病了;2.陪妈妈去医院;3.从医院回到家后,给妈妈和妹妹做了晚饭。要求:要点完整,语法正确,上下文连贯,可适当发挥。词数:80-100。16th September,2020 WednesdayCloudy_1.体裁:记叙文2.人称:第一人称3.时态:一般过去时【审题指导】【思路构建】Whengot home from school in the afternoonWherehome&hospitalWhathappenedDad:was on bus
4、inessMum:was sickHow to dotook Mum to the hospital,returned hometogether,cooked dinnerFeelingsbusy but proud16th September,2020 WednesdayCloudyThis week my dad was away on business.When I got home from school in the afternoon,I found my mum lying in bed.She told me she was sick.Although I was worrie
5、d and nervous,I thought I should look after her.Then I took my mum to the hospital.Luckily,there was nothing serious【范文赏析】with her.After that,we returned home together.I cookeddinner for my mum and my sister.I was so busy that I had to do my homework at 9:00 pm,but I was proud of myself I could help
6、 do something formy family.点评:本文言简意赅,将事情发展的原因、过程及结果简洁明了地表达了出来。When,Although 引导的状语从句的使用,是得分的亮点。连接词Then,After that 使内容与文章要点紧密相连。假如你叫David,你的美国笔友Jack 给你发来电子邮件,问你父母不在家时,你会做与不会做的事。请根据表格的提示内容,给Jack 回信。词数:80-100。会做的事不会做的事按时醒来做早饭整理床铺打扫卫生间洗衣服独自给狗洗澡_Dear Jack,Im glad to receive your email.Let me tell you what
7、 Ican do and cant do when my parents are away.I can wakeup on time,although I cant make breakfast.Ill have it atschool.I can make the bed although my mum often does itfor me.But I cant tidy up the washing room.Its difficultfor me.I can wash my clothes but I cant give my dog a_wash alone.Its so difficult that I cant do it.When my parents are away,I will miss them,but Ithink I can look after myself very well.What about you?Looking forward to your reply.Yours,David