1、广东省佛山市2016高考英语二轮：短文改错训练（5）参考答案短文改错When I first learned to write in English， I ran into 1. _many difficulties. The main problem was in that I 2. _always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything 3. _into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. 4. _I followed her advice and should pu
2、t down 100 words 5. _or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on 6. _paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. 7. _One day I wrote a little story and showed to my 8. _teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. 9. _They all said the story was a good one. The
3、ir word were 10. _a great encouragement to me.答案及解析1. 此行无错。2. 删去 in。根据句意及句子结构， 此处为表语从句。3. anything 改为 everything。此处为肯定句， anything 意为“任何一件事”， 侧重个体； 而 everything 意为“一切事情”， 侧重整体。4. my 改为 a。keep a diary 为固定短语， 意为“记日记”。5. 删去 should。and 连接两个并列的平行结构， 前后时态均为一般过去时态。6. talk 改为 talking。enjoy doing 为固定用法。故此处必须用
4、动名词作宾语。7. me 改为 myself。express oneself 为固定短语。8. showed 后加 it。show 为及物动词， 后面应接宾语。9. reads 改为 read。and 连接两个并列的平行结构， 前后时态均为一般过去时态。10. word 改为 words。根据句意， 此处应为“他们的话语， ”用 words。短文改错。Uncle Marion was one of my mothers younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to
5、 hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three oclock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make
6、 a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.答案：Uncle Marion was one of my mothers younger . He has been for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught how to hunt in the New Jersey woods the hours before dawn. We
7、 usually left home at three oclock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then on to one of his hunting destinations. Just dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, I lear
8、ned to be brave and through the experience.【短文改错】My wife and I go to the theatre whenever wehave time. But before we buy ticket, we would 76. _like to know whether the play is good and bad. 77. _When a new play open, we usually read the 78. _reviews on our local newspapers to get information 79. _ab
9、out it. Last week a new comedy opened at the 80. _theatre. The newspaper story said it was very amused, 81. _so we decided to go on the Saturday night. It took 82. _my wife a long time to make her mind what to wear 83. _and we left a little later. By the time we got there, 84. _the first act already
10、 begun. We were sorry we missed 85. _part of the play, because the rest of it was very funny.【参考答案】76.ticket 改为tickets 77. and改为or 78.open改为opens79. on改in 80. 81. amused 改amusing 82. 去掉the 83.make后加up84. later改late 85. act后加had【短文改错】Today I attended a meeting holding by our school 76_At the meeting
11、more than thirty students praised 77_ For our happiness, Bruce, monitor of our class, 78_ who was among them . We all felt proud of him 79_ Then the headmaster gave them a talk. He wanted 80_ us to learn these model students and hoped that 81_ more and more students will be praised at the 82_ next s
12、chool meeting. I was great encouraged and 83_ made up my mind to work harder. Next week 84_ there will be an English exam. Ill try to get good mark. 85_ 【参考答案】76holding held 77praised前加were 78For To 79去掉who 80them us 81Learn后加from 82 .will would 83. great greatly 84 85 mark marks短文改错。I still remembe
13、r my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then 76. in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home 77. at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We 78. had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However , 79. we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We en
14、joyed our happy life . 80. At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool81. or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat 82. each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any83. difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84. It has
15、 been five years when we graduated , but those memories85. are as sweet as ever before . 【参考答案】I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then 76. yet in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home 77. were at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life .
16、 We 78. an had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However , 79. ourselves we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life . 80. helpless At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool81. swim or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat
17、 82. treated each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any83. difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84. others It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories85. since are as sweet as ever before .短文改错Not all people like to work and everyone
18、likes to play. All over76. _the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since77. _long ago , many adults and children called their friends together78. _to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people 79. _like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In ot
19、her words, 80. _they help to keep people strong and feel good . When people are81. _playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities82. _for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy. 83. _Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In American84. _b
20、ig cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.85. _【参考答案】76. and but 77. womanwomen 78. called前加had 79. play- playing80 正确 81. feel-feeling 82. how-why 83. make-makes84.去掉the 85. sell-buy短文改错。One day Mrs. Smith went shopping. Since she came back76. home, she said to her hus
21、band, “I saw beautiful dress in 77. a shop this morning. It costs fifty pounds.” “Fifty pounds to 78. a cotton dress?That is very much!” But every evening Mrs. 79. Smith spoke only the dress, and at last, after a week, 80. her husband said, “Oh, buy the dress!” She was very happy. 81. But the next d
22、ay evening, when Mr. Smith returned home and 82. asking, “Have you got the dress?”, she said, “No.” “Why not?” 83. he said. “Well, it is still in the window of the shop in a 84. week. I think, nobody else want this dress, so I dont 85. want it either!”短文改错A persons age no longer tells you something
23、about 76. _his social position, marriage or healthy. Theres no longer 77. _a particular year which one goes to school or goes to 78. _work or gets married or start a family. The social clock 79. _that kept us on time and told us when go to school, get 80. _a job, or stop working isnt as strong as it
24、 was used to be. 81. _It doesnt surprise us to hear a 28-year-old university 82. _president or a 35-year-old grandmother, or 70-year-old 83. _man who has become a father for the first time. What we 84. _ all know, publics ideas are changing nowadays. 85. _ 【参考答案】76. something anything 77. healthy health 78. which when（或 year in） 79. start starts 80. when to 81. was 82 83.or a 84. What As 85. publics public
