1、2018高考英语写作专题（2）（道歉信）含参考范文02道歉信写作模板Dear_(对象),I am truly sorry that _(道歉的原因).The reason is that _(介绍原因). Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my appologies and understand my situation.Yours Sincerely,Li Ming写作模板Dear _,I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that _ (直
2、接表达自己不能实现先前的愿望或约定). Now, I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret_ (表达歉意). Please accept my sincere apology_(诚恳希望对方能接受道歉). I fear you are displeased at _(表达出自己的心情，并请求对方原谅).I hope you will understand me and excuse me for_(过渡句). Let me explain(开始介绍道歉的原因). The reason for my delay/
3、absence was that _(阐述自己当时的处境和情况). I had no way out because _ (总结自己道歉的原因). Therefore its not in my power to _(希望下次再次实现愿望). Naturally, I want to suggest _. I shall be glad if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you_(约定下次约会的时间和地点)We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.Sincerely Yours
4、, Li Hua写好道歉信的关键在于措辞要朴实、委婉，语气要诚恳、真挚，解释要详细明了。例如Im excessively sorry、sincere apology、deep regret等都是致歉之词，这就恰如其分地表达了写信人的真诚歉意。道歉信通常包括三部分内容：1.表示歉意，道歉的原由；2.出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施；3.请求原谅。语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。4.补充说明。客套话。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。范例Dear Mr. Brown, Much to my regret, I was unable to keep my engagement to me
5、et you at the park gate. I fear you are displeased at my failing to keep my promise, but I trust you will forgive me. Let me explain. My mother suddenly fell sick early yesterday morning, and I had to send her to hospital. I shall be glad if you will kindly write and tell me when and where we may me
6、et again. I hope to see you soon. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming1.道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话I am writing this letter to express my regret我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾I am writing to apologize for我写信是为道歉。I would like to give you my apology for我想向你道歉。I am very sorry to say that我很抱歉I must apologize about (not) doing sth对于做了/没做，我必须道歉。Pl
7、ease accept my sincere apology for请接受我对于.的真诚道歉。I am writing to say sorry for我写信是想对说抱歉。I am terribly sorry, but我很抱歉，但是2.道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套话Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。Please allow me to say sorry again.请允许我再一次说抱歉。Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my si
8、tuation.希望你们能够接受我的道歉，理解我的处境。I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.我真诚的希望你能够站在我的位置想一想，并且接受我的道歉。I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。I am sorry that I cant but trust that you will be able to understand.很抱歉我不能，但我相信，你会理解的
9、。高考真题01（2016新课标卷III）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【范文赏析】Dear Bob,Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope
10、 the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any ti
11、me after school next week.Yours,Li Hua亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的状语从句so that well have more time to read and select books；条件句If its convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合，使内容显得更加丰富。【名
12、师点睛】此作文是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出，表达歉意的同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时应注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。高考真题02（2014北京卷）你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括： 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。注意： 1.词数不少于50；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Chris,_Yours,Joe【范文赏析】Dear Chris,How is everything
13、going?I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.Im sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand.Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours, Joe高考真题03（2014山东卷）假如你是新
14、华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件：1.未及时回信的原因；2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）注意：1. 词数：120-150；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【思路分析】本题要求写的书面表达为书信类型，而为了考查考生审题能力，命题人并没有把如感谢、道歉、建议、申请等明显的字眼放在题中，而是通过考查学生对题干的审题能力暗示学生此书信体作文应大体包含道歉和告知两个方面。因此文章的主干部分要先表示歉意、解释原因，后写假期的打算。 从写作要点和得分点来看，考生应在宏观上把握书信体写作的
15、要求，如格式、文体等，写作段落以三段式为宜，首段体现问候、写信背景等，尾段再次致歉、也可询问Tom暑假里的打算，体现书信体的交际性；而中间段具体交待未及时回信的原因、假期的打算。考生在微观层面上应具体把握写作的内容和语言，做到句子之间有效的连接，长短句结合，多用doing及物做主语，句子加半句原因、结果、目的等具体细节的解释、利用简单而有效的中文思路扩展英文细节。考生若能在写作部分做到内容充实符合要求、语言精彩与众不同、结构清晰一目了然，相信这样的文章能让考生获得一个相对满意的成绩。【经典套路】第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的第二段：道歉部分(相当于写信背景)第三段：假期安排部分第四段：补充说
16、明+客套话【范文赏析】Dear Tom,How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, Ive been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell
17、you some specific details.Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visi
18、t some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life.I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the
19、way, whats your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li HuaWriting1假如你是李华。你和外教Christina原定于本周六上午一起参加中国传统文化日活动。但因故你不能履约，请根据下面的写作提示，用英语给她发一封电子邮件。内容包括：1.告诉她不能履约；2.解释爽约的原因；3.希望她谅解。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【必背范文】Dear Christina,I am Li Hua. Im writing
20、 to apologize to you for not being able to participate in the Chinese Traditional Culture Day activity to be held on the Saturday morning with you as we planned last week.To be honest, I wish I could join in the activity, but I am afraid I will not be available because I was informed yesterday that
21、I would have to go to Beijing for a contest on the morning of Saturday. That is why I cant go with you. I am awfully sorry for breaking my promise and I apologize for any inconvenience it brings to you. I hope you can understand me.Wish you a good time there.Yours,Li HuaWriting2假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学
22、的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：1. 表示歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 另约时间。_写作指导：这是一篇应用文，要求写一封道歉信。写作要求只给出了大体的框架，因此具有很大的开放性。道歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意，请求对方谅解自己的过失。写道歉信时要明确不是找借口为自己辩护，而是承认自己的过错并提出弥补过错的具体建议和方法。此类信件的关键是用词准确，表达真诚。在写作时可以根据提示的要求按照三段式的模式布局谋篇。首段：重述自己做错的事，表示歉意。主体段落：说明道歉的具体原因，应尽量详细描述做错事的经过。写信时应该注意在申述理由时要照顾读信人
23、的感受，切忌强词夺理。结尾段：再次表明承认错误的态度，请求收信人的谅解。也可以提出补救的办法。【必背范文】Dear Tom，I am indeed very sorry that I cant go to Beijing with you next week, which I have promised. I feel badly about it and want you to know what happened.Just now, my cousin, Li Qiong, who left home to Australia for his further study last year
24、, informed me that he will return this Saturday morning. And ask me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know, we havent seen each other for nearly a year.I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date
25、to show you around Beijing. Once again, Im sorry for any inconvenience caused.Sincerely yours,Li HuaWriting3假如你是小明，前天踢足球时你撞倒了你的好朋友李华，因而你俩发生争吵。经过两天的冷静思考，你觉得不应该因为这件小事而失去一个好朋友，于是决定写一封道歉信，希望和他冰释前嫌，内容包括：1.说明写信的目的；2.承认自己的错误；3.指出李华的不足；4.提出希望，重归于好。注意：1.请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；2.可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；3.词数不少于100，开头和结尾已给出
26、，不计入总词数。Dear Li Hua,Im sorry_Best wishes.Yours,Xiao Ming【必背范文】Dear Li Hua,Im sorry to have quarrelled with you about knocking you down the day before yesterday. I feel that its not necessary for me to do that, so I make a sincere apology to you and hope that you will forgive me.As a friend, I should
27、 not have quarreled with you about a small thing. Whats worse, its foolish of me to have said bad things to hurt you, though I was sure I didnt mean to. On the other hand, you were not so sensible then. If you had asked me why I knocked you down, the quarrel would have been avoided.Therefore, we sho
28、uld keep calm no matter what happens in the future. Only in this way can we deal with things correctly and maintain our friendship. At last, I hope we will have a lifelong friendship!Best wishes.Yours,Xiao MingWriting4假如你是李华。上周，外教Shelley外出度假之前给你留言，让你为她喜欢的茉莉花浇水。你因故忘记为茉莉花浇水，导致茉莉花干死。你决定给Shelley写一封信，内容包
29、括：1.表示歉意；2.解释原因和补偿措施；3.请求原谅。注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：茉莉jasmineDear Shelley,_Yours,Li Hua【必背范文】Dear Shelley,Im writing to apologize for not watering your jasmine, which caused its death, while you were away. Now let me explain what happened to me and my family.I was so bu
30、sy preparing for the coming exam that I had no time for other things. Whats more, my mother had her ankle injured while she was walking, so I had to take good care of her, who stayed at home alone. That was why I failed to water your favorite plant. I would like to buy a new one as a compensation fo
31、r your loss. Please forgive me.I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies.Yours,Li Hua【思路分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封道歉信。写作时，应用第一人称，感情要真挚，语气应委婉。道歉这一话题与考生的日常生活息息相关，符合高考的命题趋势，充分体现了高考注重对考生语言交际能力的培养。根据试题说明，本文应分三个部分：第一段：开门见山，说明写信目的向对方道歉。第二段：主要陈述因何事需要向对方道歉，并给出具体的补偿措施。第三段：再次表示歉意，希望得到对方的谅解。写作时注意语言要真挚。写作素材1.我写这封信是因而道歉。I
32、m writing to apologize for/say sorry for.2.为做了某事我深表歉意I am really sorry for doing.3.某事发生的原因是The reason why .was that.4.没有时间做某事have no time for.5.那就是某事发生的原因。That was why.6.我真诚地希望你接受我的歉意。I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies.Writing5假如你是育才中学的学生李华，昨天你在英语课上做数学作业被英语老师Miss Cheng发现了，你的数学书被英语老师收走了。请用英
33、语给英语老师写一封道歉信，内容应包括以下要点:1.向老师道歉；2.解释上课为什么做数学作业；3.提出自己的请求并作出保证。注意：1.词数120左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Miss Cheng,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua【范文】Dear Miss Cheng,I sincerely apologize to you for doing maths homework in your class. I would appreciate it if you can forgive me.Having been caught
34、doing other things in your class, I know any excuse may be meaningless. However, I did so because my mother happened to fall ill yesterday and I had to send her to hospital and look after her by myself, for my father is a migrant worker working far away. As you know, the next class would be maths. I
35、f I couldt finish my maths homework before it, I would be severely punished.Anyway, doing other things in class is not acceptable to any teacher. I swear it will never happen again. But I do need my maths book back.Will you be so kind as to give it back to me? Thanks a lot!Best wishes!Yours sincerel
36、y,Li HuaWriting6假如你是新华中学的学生李华，上周在外教Mr. Jackson的口语课上使用手机被老师发现，手机被收走。请用英语给Mr. Jackson写一封道歉信，内容应包括以下要点：1.表示歉意；2.解释上课使用手机的原因；3.提出自己的请求并适当表态。注意:1.词数：100左右；信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节以使文章连贯。Dear Mr. Jackson,I am really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your class last week._Best wishes!Yours sincer
37、ely,Li Hua【必背范文】Dear Mr. Jackson,I am really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your class last week. Please accept my heart-felt apology for being so rude a student.I know any word might sound a make-up excuse. But I didnt use my mobile phone in class for no reason. I was trying to find a par
38、t-time job last week and that day, I got a job offer and they needed my further information immediately. Therefore, I got no choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you caught me.Anyway, using a mobile phone in class was not acceptable to any teacher. I swear it will not happen again. But I do need my phone back to keep in touch with others.Will you be so kind as to give it back to me? Thanks a million!Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua
