1、山东枣庄市2016高考英语(二轮)书面表达选编（1）及参考范文2016高考书面表达。你有一位英国网友,名叫Tom, 他听说了中国故宫，但知道不多，于是给你发来e-mail。请你向他介绍一下有关中国故宫的一些情况。请根据下面提供的一些要点给他回一封电子邮件：1. 故宫（the Palace Museum），又叫紫禁城（the Forbidden City）。它于1407 年开始修建，20万人花了13年多的时间，于1420年建成。2. 它所有的宫殿一共有9999个房间。在中国，9这个数字传统地被认为是一个吉祥数。3. 现在，故宫免费向中国中学生于每周星期二开放。4. 故宫有着中国历史上五千多年的珍
2、宝（precious treasure)。请他亲自来看一看。 注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 信的开头已经为你写好：Dear Tom ,It is nice to receive your e-mail. Now Id like to tell you something about the Palace Museum._【参考范文】书面表达： The Palace Museum is also called the Forbidden City. It took 200,000 workers more than 13 years to build the Forbidden City.
3、The Forbidden City was finished being built in 1420. The largest museum in the world ,the Palace Museum, holds cultural treasures from the past 5,000 years of Chinese history . The citys palaces have 9,999 rooms altogether. Chinese people traditionally have thought of nine as a lucky number . Studen
4、ts from all over China now visit in groups at no charge every Tuesday . I hope you can come to China and take a look at this museum with your own eyes. Best wishes. Yours, Li Ming【天津市蓟县二中2014高考英语模拟试题】写作（满分30分）Michael是一名美国中学生，在学校里选修汉语。他利用暑假到中国进修，希望进一步了解中国文化。有一天，他看到下面有关成语的漫画，不大明白其中的意思。请你用英语把漫画所表达的故事和寓
5、意写成一篇短文，向他解释。注意：1、词数：801202、参考词汇：撞上bump into;锄头 hoe 【参考范文】写作（满分30分）One possible version:Once upon a time there was a farmer who worked hard in the fields every day.One day, while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a bumping sound. He saw a rabbit lying by the trunk. He picked it up and found that
6、 it was a fat rabbit. He thought to himself,Since it is so easy to get a rabbit like that, why should I work so hard all daylong?! He threw his hoe away and lay by the tree every day, dreaming for more rabbits to come. When he finally realized his foolishness and returned to his fields, he found tha
7、t all his crops were dead. The story tells us that we should not wait for unexpected gains by trusting chance and luck. Or, we should not hope to get rewards without hard work.一、评分原则1本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3词数少于120和多于150的，从总分中减去2分。4评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词
8、汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点观点正确，态度积极向上，文体不限。三、各档次的给分范围和要求第一档：（2125分）很好地完成了试题规定的任务。对题中所提供的信息进行了恰当的描述，清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证。语法结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第二档：（1620分）较
9、好地完成了试题规定的任务。对题中所提供的信息进行了描述，表达了自己的观点并进行了论证。应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第三档：（1115分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。能描述题目中的信息，表达了自己的观点并尝试进行论证。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。第四档；（610分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。能涉及到题目所提供的信息，体现了对问题的看法及其原因。语法结构单调，词汇知识
10、有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第五档：（15分）未完成试题规定的任务很少涉及题目中所提供的信息，个人观点表达不清，而且没有阐述原因。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。0分信息未能传达给读者。未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；所写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法辨认。【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（9）】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分） 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
11、Electronic books, more commonly known as e-books, are books that are in digital form. They are much like your traditional books that are made of paper -just more advanced and without the heavy weight. Because of their extreme efficiency, many now say that they may replace traditional books in the lo
12、ng run, however, in order to deter-mine this for sure, it would be better to investigate further, While I was on vacation for three weeks, I thought I would catch up on some reading. Instead of going to my local WH Smith to buy some books, I downloaded the Kindle app onto my Tablet, and bought a cou
13、ple of e-books to read. Here are some advantages of e-books over printed books: 1. They can use multimedia. 2. Free shipping cost. 3. Searchable. 4. Easy to update. 5. Weigh less. 6. Portable and take less space. 7. Cost less for the publisher. 8. Copyright. 9. Readable. With the rising number of e-
14、book users all over the world, and with more and more excellent e-book readers springing up in the market it cannot be denied that this new innovation will become even more popular as the days go by. As to whether they will actually replace traditional printed books - only time will tell - but one t
15、hing is certain; they do make your life easier.写作内容1以约30个词概括本文内容：2以约120个词就“电子书能否取代传统纸质书”这一话题发表自己的看法，并包括如下要点： (1)阐述电子书的优势； (2)说明纸质书的优势； (3)你的观点及理由。写作要求1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】读写任务 (One possible version)The author thinks that e-boo
16、ks are better than traditional ones, but only time will tell whether e-books will actually take the place of traditional printed books.E-books have many advantages. They can offer people immediate access and allow them to carry as many books as they want with no extra weight. They cost less money be
17、cause they dont need to take up so many resources, which is rather environmentally friendly.However, still many people prefer traditional books for their unique functions, such as being kept as a collection or sent as a gift. Therefore, those who love reading might be willing to keep a printed copy
18、even though they have read the electronic form of it.As far as I am concerned, I like both of them because traditional books today are still the leading method of reading daily. However, with the development of information technology and the popularity of the Internet, e-books will replace traditional books in the future, I believe.
