1、2015高考英语短文改错及书面表达练习（3）及答案短文改错The Problem with TelevisionNow I cant watch much television but a few years 1. _ago I was used to watch it every night. I was often 2. _a little tired after a days work and watch TV 3. _demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are 4. _too many people among my famil
2、y. Some wanted 5. _to see the programme while others preferred 6. _another. I am happy with any programme but 7. _the others spent a lot time arguing and there 8. _was no way of settling the matter except by 9. _selling the TV set. Now someone at home reads instead. 10. _答案及解析1. 删去 much。“I cant watc
3、h much television”意为“我不能看许多电视”， 上下文逻辑不通。much 属于多余。2. 删去 was。由上文句意可知“我现在不看电视， 而过去每晚都看电视”， 因此应用 used to do。3. watch 改为 watching。作句子主语需用动名词。4. Unfortunate 改为 Unfortunately。此处应用副词作状语。5. among 改为 in。“in my family”为习惯搭配， 意为“在我家中”。6. the 改为 one。由下文的another可知， 上文用one。7. am 改为 was。综观全文时态可知。8. a lot 后加 of。9.
4、此行无错。10. someone 改为 everyone 或 everybody。someone 意为“某个人”； everyone/ everybody 意为“每个人”。根据上下文逻辑可知。【2014高考英语广东省梅州市质检试卷】读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Right after the Second World War, Germany was in ruins. Almost all the houses, factories and schools were destroyed. Plenty of people were ho
5、meless as well as jobless. Worse still, the supply of water and electricity was often cut off in the city. Two American journalists interviewed a German family living in the basement. The husband was disabled from the war and the wife was just dismissed from a clothing company. Worse still, there we
6、re bills for them to payfour children to care for and food to buy. Life was hard for them at that time.After the interview, the journalists chatted with each other on the way back to the company.“Do you think the Germans could rebuild their homeland?”“Absolutely.”“But I cant see any hope for the cou
7、ntry at all. How can you be so certain about that?”“Have you noticed what they put on the table in the basement? There was a vase of flowers. A nation, suffering at such moment, hasnt forgotten about flowers. It shows that hopes are not lost. They are still able to dream. A nation with hope can crea
8、te miracles. They are sure to be able to rebuild their homeland.”【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；2. 以约120个词就梦想改变命运的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：(1) 你赞同文中的观点吗？(2) 举例证明你赞同或不赞同的原因；(3) 谈谈你对梦想的看法。【写作要求】1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】One possible version:Two
9、 American journalists interviewed a German family after the war. Though living a poor life, the family still placed flowers on the table, which convinced a journalist that Germans were bound to rebuild their homeland.As is often the case, a man who can dream will try hard to overcome any difficultie
10、s in front and make it in turn. Therefore，I agree that dreams can change ones life. Lisa is my friend and former classmate. She was an energetic girl who always dreamed of becoming an actress. However, at the beginning almost everyone tried to persuade her out of her dream because she was no more th
11、an 1.55 meters tall. There is no denying that actresses are usually much taller than her. However, she didnt lose heart. With great determination, she wrote a play by herself and eventually acted as a leading role in it. The show was a success.As far as I am concerned, one who has a dream can see fu
12、rther, work harder, and gain much more. Please hold fast to your dreams.读写任务评分说明读写任务是有材料作文：要求考生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文；主要考查考生的篇章概括和语言表达能力。在评分时，应注意以下几方面：1 按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分；2 概括的要点包括：Two American journalists interviewed a German family after the war. Though living a poor life, the family still placed flower
13、s on the table, which convinced a journalist that Germans were bound to rebuild their homeland.二、读写任务评分标准项目分值评分标准概括5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。4基本按照要求概括了主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。3基本按照要求概括了主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。2不能按照要求概括主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭
14、。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。0-1没有按照要求概括主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。写作18-20包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。14-17包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。11-13包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较
15、好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。7-10包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。4-6只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。1-3只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。0以下几种情况，给0分：1）完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）2）文不对题3）只写一些零
16、散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容【2014高考英语湖北省八校联考】短文写作（共1题；满分30分）“Beijing plans to reduce the English section of National College Entrance Examination, the Gaokao, from 150 points to 100 points by 2016.”请依据上面这则新闻，结合实际，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对英语学习的认识，并简单陈述你的理由。注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右。_【参考范文】There i
17、s some news that English may account for a lower proportion in our national college entrance examination, but I dont think it has any effect on our English learning. English is still playing an important part in our daily life.With the development of Chinas economy, more and more people are rich eno
18、ugh to travel or study abroad. English is the first problem they are faced with. Besides, as devices and household appliances of foreign brands are flooding our daily life, English takes a more important part. Whats more, armed with a good command of English, we will be better prepared for the chall
19、enges of globalization. However, reducing the English section is good for us students. It helps to lessen our academic burden. But this change does not mean English study can be ignored. Being tested for less score doesnt mean the subject can be taken lightly. In my opinion, the national enthusiasm
20、for English will keep on.【2014高考英语安徽省合肥市质量检测】书面表达 (满分25分)近日，是否要在中学进行英语口语考试的话题引起了学生们的热议。你校校报也举办了以 Spoken English Tests in Middle Schools 为主题的征文活动,请你根据下面提示内容, 用英语每一篇短文投给校报。1. 简要介绍你们班同学目前英语口语水平；2. 说明你对英语口语考试的态度, 并给出至少两个支持 (或反对) 的理由。注意：1.词数120左右。短文的开头已给出（不记入总词数）；2.文中需要包含提示内容,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。Recently there
21、 has been a heated discussion among students about whether its necessary to have spoken English tests in middle schools. _【参考范文】书面表达（滿分25分）One possible versionRecently there has been a heated discussion among students about whether its necessary to have spoken English tests in middle schools.As far
22、as I know, most of my classmates can read English aloud fluently and only a few of us find it difficult to read long words correctly. Some of them lack confidence when speaking English in public.I strongly believe it a necessity to hold a test of spoken English in middle schools because students wil
23、l have more time and opportunities to practice their listening and speaking in English classes. Whats more, the ability to speak fluent English will bring us a wide variety of chances. We could become successful applicants for some posts by talking directly to experts from English-.speaking countries in the future.Whether Ill take the test or not, I will spare no effort on my spoken English.
