1、2014高考英语书面表达基础训练题（10）及答案【2014高考英语广东省梅州市质检试卷】读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Right after the Second World War, Germany was in ruins. Almost all the houses, factories and schools were destroyed. Plenty of people were homeless as well as jobless. Worse still, the supply of water and electric
2、ity was often cut off in the city. Two American journalists interviewed a German family living in the basement. The husband was disabled from the war and the wife was just dismissed from a clothing company. Worse still, there were bills for them to payfour children to care for and food to buy. Life
3、was hard for them at that time.After the interview, the journalists chatted with each other on the way back to the company.“Do you think the Germans could rebuild their homeland?”“Absolutely.”“But I cant see any hope for the country at all. How can you be so certain about that?”“Have you noticed wha
4、t they put on the table in the basement? There was a vase of flowers. A nation, suffering at such moment, hasnt forgotten about flowers. It shows that hopes are not lost. They are still able to dream. A nation with hope can create miracles. They are sure to be able to rebuild their homeland.”【写作内容】1
5、. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；2. 以约120个词就梦想改变命运的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：(1) 你赞同文中的观点吗？(2) 举例证明你赞同或不赞同的原因；(3) 谈谈你对梦想的看法。【写作要求】1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】One possible version:Two American journalists interviewed a German family after the war. Though
6、living a poor life, the family still placed flowers on the table, which convinced a journalist that Germans were bound to rebuild their homeland.As is often the case, a man who can dream will try hard to overcome any difficulties in front and make it in turn. Therefore，I agree that dreams can change
7、 ones life. Lisa is my friend and former classmate. She was an energetic girl who always dreamed of becoming an actress. However, at the beginning almost everyone tried to persuade her out of her dream because she was no more than 1.55 meters tall. There is no denying that actresses are usually much
8、 taller than her. However, she didnt lose heart. With great determination, she wrote a play by herself and eventually acted as a leading role in it. The show was a success.As far as I am concerned, one who has a dream can see further, work harder, and gain much more. Please hold fast to your dreams.
9、读写任务评分说明读写任务是有材料作文：要求考生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文；主要考查考生的篇章概括和语言表达能力。在评分时，应注意以下几方面：1 按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分；2 概括的要点包括：Two American journalists interviewed a German family after the war. Though living a poor life, the family still placed flowers on the table, which convinced a journalist that Germans were bound to
10、rebuild their homeland.二、读写任务评分标准项目分值评分标准概括5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。4基本按照要求概括了主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。3基本按照要求概括了主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。2不能按照要求概括主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。0-1没有按照要求概括主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。写作18
11、-20包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。14-17包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。11-13包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。7-10包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词
12、汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。4-6只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。1-3只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。0以下几种情况，给0分：1）完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）2）文不对题3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容【2013界广东省潮州市高三上质量检测卷】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分) 【写作内容】目前，越来越多的青少年参
13、加各类电视节目的才艺表演（talent shows）。对此，中学生的看法各不相同。赞 同不 赞 同1、丰富社会经验；2、增强自信；3、全面发展。1、模仿多，原创少；2、沉迷于“明星梦”；3、不利于学习。【写作要求】1、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）At present an increasing number of teenagers are taking part in TV talent shows, about which students opinion
14、s are divided. Some think that it is a stage to show their talents of art, contributing much to their social experience and self-confidence. Whats more, its good for their overall development.However, other students hold the different idea that the teenagers are just imitating others rather than sho
15、wing something original. Besides, some are such “star dream” followers that they cant put their heart and soul into their study, thus affecting their study badly.【2013界广东省潮州市高三上质量检测卷】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。A poor boy had one penny left. He was so hungry that he decided to beg f
16、or a meal at the next house. A lovely young woman opened the door. She thought he looked hungry and brought him a large glass of milk. He drank it slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you？” “You dont owe me anything.” She replied. “Mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” As H
17、oward Kelly left that house, he felt stronger physically and mentally.Years later the young woman became critically ill and was sent to a big hospital. Dr. Howard Kelly, now famous, was called in for the consultation (咨询). He recognized her at once and he was determined to do his best to save her li
18、fe.After a long struggle, the battle was won. Dr. Kelly requested the business office to pass the final bill to him for approval. He looked at it and then wrote something on it. The bill was sent to her room. She opened it, and the note on the side of the bill caught her attention: “Paid in full wit
19、h a glass of milk, (signed) Dr. Howard Kelly.”【写作内容】1、以约30词概括上文的主要内容；2、以约120词谈谈你阅读了该故事后的感受，内容包括：(1) 你从这个故事领悟到什么道理？(2) 举一个例子说明当你遇到困难时，你的朋友是怎么做的？(3) 同时，你是如何报答你朋友的帮助的？【写作要求】 1、在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）When a poo
20、r boy was hungry, a young woman gave him a glass of milk. Years later, as a famous doctor, he saved the womans life and returned the final bill to her in return for her help.Greatly inspired by the story, I learn that once helped by others, we should be grateful. If my friend is in need of help, I w
21、ill comfort him and spare no effort to help him out.It occurred to me that once I was about to go home when it started to rain heavily. Having left my umbrella at home, I could do nothing but stay in the classroom. At this moment, my classmate Henry gave me his umbrella. His kindness and willingness
22、 to help greatly impressed me. Several days before an important exam, Henry fell seriously ill. Every day after school, I went to the hospital to accompany him, helping him catch up with his lessons. Eventually, he got a good mark.【2013界广东省东山中学高三下入学摸底考试】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）假设你叫李华，是新浪微博（sina microblog）的一
23、名实名注册用户。最近你在网上看了一部经典的电影阿甘正传（Forrest Gump），觉得很值得一看，并在微博中向广大博友推荐该部影片。观看影片：阿甘正传；出品年份：1994年；主演：Tom Hanks，获六项奥斯卡大奖内容介绍：阿甘（Forrest Gump）用乐观的态度，面对生活中不确定的因素带来的各种挑战和困难推荐理由：1、树立了一个好榜样，激励我们勇敢面对挑战，永不放弃,对我们高三学生很有指导意义； 2、观看英文影片有利于提高我们英语的听说水平，帮助我们了解更多的外国文化。建议： 博友们介绍几部自己最欣赏的电影，相互交流转发(1154)| 收藏| 评论(950) 今天15:39 来自新浪
24、微博【写作内容】根据以上内容要点，用英语写一篇微博推荐该影片，写作要点：1. 向大家推荐这部制作于1994年的经典影片； 2. 推荐的理由；3. 向博友们建议。参考词汇： 奥斯卡Oscar【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 开头已为你写好。 【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）Dear bloggers，I am glad to share one of my favorite movies, Forest Gump, with you. The film Forest Gump, made in 1994, was starre
25、d by a famous actor Tom Hanks and finally won six Oscar prizes. In the movie, Mr. Gump sets us a good example to face challenges bravely and never to give up, which is instructive to us Senior 3 students. Besides, watching English movies is good to improve our listening and speaking skills in Englis
26、h and it can also help us learn more foreign culture. My dear bloggers, I suggest we each recommend several movies so that we can share our favourite.【2013界广东省东山中学高三下入学摸底考试】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150左右的英语短文。 My Mothers Hands 50 years ago, for some reason, I was not accepted by the school.
27、However, it was my mum, who held my little hands and tried countless schools and managed to get me registered 50 years later, the day after my mother had slipped into a coma from a stroke, I sat next to her, holding her hand, stroking it, watching her body heaved up and down as she breathed heavily,
28、 like she was struggling with something. A few days later. Mum died. At her bedside, I spent some time just looking at my mother, soaking in the finality of her death. There she was, my mother, motionless and lifeless. I took hold of her still warm but lifeless hand, holding it for the last time, re
29、calling every piece of precious moment we spent together. . . I finally let go of her hand-1ifeless, yet having given so much life to so many of us-and placed it next to her body. I found myself saying silently to her the only words that came to my mind, “Goodbye Mum, thank you for everything.” Than
30、k you, Mother, for not giving up, so that I could go to school. Thank you for coaching me, for reading to me, for ironing my school uniforms, for combing my hair, for tying my shoe laces, for making sure I had a little handkerchief inside my pocket Rest in peace, Mother, you are still very much aliv
31、e in us. Happy Mothers Day【写作内容】 有人说, 因为上帝不能无处不在, 所以他创造了“母亲”。你的母亲是一位怎样的女性?请以“母亲”为主题写一篇记叙文, 结合自身的经历讲述母亲对你的爱或者她对你成长的影响。内容要点包括： 1. 以约30个词概括以上短文内容。 2. 然后以约120个词讲述母亲对你的爱或者她对你成长的影响, 并包括以下要点： （1）描述你的母亲; （2）简述她对你的影响; （3）你准备怎样表达对她的感激之情?【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）参考范文:1 The writer expresses his gratitude for his m
32、others dedication and endless effort in raising him. In his memory, it is her hand that leads him through various moments in his life. Like the author, I also appreciate my mother for everything she devotes to bringing me up. My mother is a kind and gentle woman, a math teacher at a middle school .A
33、s a teacher she works diligently and treats the students patiently, so she is always praised and respected by both her students and colleagues alike. As Mother, she takes good care of me and offers me the best thing she can afford. Every day the moment she steps into the house after work, she sets a
34、bout doing housework and preparing delicious dishes for me. My mother is a thrifty and industrious woman. She never buys expensive or fancy dresses for herself. Nor does she dine out in luxurious restaurants. Though she lives a simple life, she never complains. My mother not only sets me a good exam
35、ple in life, but also in work. She often says, Work while you work, and play while you play. That is the way to be happy and gay.” What a piece of good advice! I will always bear it in mind. As far as I am concerned, nothing can be compared to Mothers love to me, and my gratitude to her is beyond wo
36、rds. The only thing I am able to do at present is to work hard and make greater progress in study, so that I can be her pride one day.参考范文：2 The writer expresses his gratitude for his mothers dedication and endless effort in raising him. In his memory, it is her hand that leads him through various m
37、oments in his life. The passage reminds me of my mother, from whom I learn to be a better person. Mum is an ordinary housewife. She is not beautiful, but she is very popular. You can always see her sitting together with some old ladies doing some little craftworks, with attention focused on the work
38、 while chatting with others. She always tells me, Never put your palms upwards but downwards! I didnt know why, so I would stare at her hands whenever I had nothing to do. Then I found that they were busy doing cleaning, washing, cooking, and helping others. I never knew such short small and fat han
39、ds could do so many things. Holding her hands, I asked mum why we couldnt put the palms upwards. She told me it meant we should never depend on others for help. Instead, we should try to solve problems ourselves or make our own bread. But if others needed help, we should give our hands at the fist second.I forever bear in mind the lesson she taught me. To show my gratitude to her, I will spare no effort to work harder so that she can have a better life in the future.
