1、第五模块 短文改错1(2014届黑龙江省哈三中高三上学期第三次验收)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。As is known, that it is interesting to teach children to swim w
2、hile they are still babies. Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months old. The first step is to have child get
3、 rid of the fear with water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water. 【答案】1.去掉that 2. town改成 towns 3. particularly 改成particular4. which改成where 5. were改成are 6. have与child之间加a 7.
4、 with water 改成 of water8. teaching改成taught 9. with改成without 10. him改成himself 2（2014届浙江省温州中学高三上学期期中）Dear Mr. Black,Im very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get help from you in my English learning. And Im
5、afraid I cannot go to your place in this summer. Ive promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with her. She misses me too much that I find difficult to refuse her request. Im busy preparing for my examinations in present. I planned to visit you in winter if its conveni
6、ent to you.Best wishes.Yours truly,Li Ying【答案】1. thank改为thankful2. come改为coming3. dreamed改为dreaming4. And改为But5. 去掉in6. she改为who7. too改为so8. find后面加it9. in改为at10. planned改为plan3(2014届浙江省浙北名校联盟高三上学期期中联考)下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面
7、写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and devote all my spare time to practise it. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination, which made me great disappointed. So I asked my grandpa for advice when I got to home. Hearin
8、g that I told him, he said, “To some extent, examination results are sometime unexpected by your study level. You cant judge your progress by one examination.” He encouraged myself to work hard for long time to check my results. I took my grandpas advice. Now I realize that the process of learning i
9、s much more important and my English is more better than before. From my experience, I feel that we should listen to opinion from old people.【答案】1. devote devoted2. practise practicing3. great greatly4. 去掉to。 5. that what 6. sometime sometimes 7. myself me8. for和long 之间加a。 9. more much10. opinion op
10、inions 4（2013-2014学年内蒙古包头市一中高三入学考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。A man was driving on the road. Suddenly his cars stopped. He got out of the
11、car tried to find out the trouble. “Its the motor.” Said the voice behind him. He was surprising and turned around. But he saw only an old horse. “Did you say something?” he asked. “I said you should check yours motor.” The horse replied. The man rushed to the nearest house. With a very excited voic
12、e, he told the farmer had happened. The farmer, therefore, showed no sign of excitement. He explained, “He didnt know anything about cars. He can only repeat what I often say.【答案】1. cars改成car2. triedtrying3. thea4. surprisingsurprised5. somethinganything6. yours your7. With In8. the farmerhad what9.
13、 thereforehowever10. didntdoesnt5（2014届浙江省江山实验中学高三上学期第一次阶段性测试）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weeke
14、nd in learning in the English Club. Although we have been members for a short period of times, we have made a great progress. That is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make
15、the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!【答案】1. real-really2. weekend-weekends3. times-time4. 去掉a5. 去掉much6. and-but7. his-their8. interested-interesting9.
16、 ushave10. see-seeing6（2014届浙江省湖州市八校高三上学期第二次联考）下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 I cant swim so I have a strong fear of water. Look back at my childhood, I think that three reason
17、s might explain fear. Firstly, I am not allowed to go near the water when I was a child, as my mother had an unreasonable fear of it. Therefore, I was taught to see to the water as something danger. Secondly, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldnt see some
18、thing, and this increased my fear. Whats worse, for a child I once saw a neighbor drowned. Since then I have been more frightening.【答案】1. sobecause2. looklooking 3. 加the4. amwas5. 去掉to 6. danger-dangerous7. glass-glasses8. something-anything9. for-as10. frighteningfrightened 7（2014届云南省部分名校高三第一次联考（11
19、月）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。People often have troubles getting used to a new culture. They are usually curious when they first a
20、rrive a foreign country. Therefore, if they stay for a long time, they may start to feel different stages of culture shock. They can feel alone or sad because he cant deal with the local people. How quick people get used to culture differences may be depend on the way they learn. Thats a problem if
21、they cant speak the language. On other hand, some can study the situation and make good guesses about the culture. When they finally began to understand some of the language and make some new friends, they will gradually enjoy themselves and feel satisfying. 【答案】1. troubles改为trouble。 2. arrive后加in。3
22、. Therefore改为However。4. alone改为lonely。5. he改为they。6. quick改为quickly。7. may be depend on中删去be。8. other前加the。9. began改为begin。10. satisfying改为satisfied。8（2014届黑龙江哈师大附中高三上学期期中）【答案】1. shall-should2. specially-special3. responding to4. the best 5. appreciation 6. will prefer -prefer 7. which-what8. bringi
23、ng9. means10. ourselves9（2014届河北省衡水中学高三上学期四调考试）英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。Dear Joe,Thanks for you mail. Im glad to know you are intereste
24、d in the 2014 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses providing. Also, activities arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family,
25、so you can learn American English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certainly add up the fun of the camp. Join in the camp and you will have the better knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it. Yours truly Li Hua【答案】1. youyour2. that
26、which3. 在“get”后面加a或experiencexperiences4. speakingspoken5. providingprovided6. 在“arranged”前面加are7. HoweverBesides/Also/Morever8. up to9. 去掉in10. thea10（2014届河南省南阳市高三五校联谊期中考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处浯言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在
27、错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均限一词。 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。My neighbor Jackie is always consideration to others. One day , I was going to deliver a speech at an institute while I found my car wouldnt get started. I rushed to the street to hire a taxi. Just at that time I come across Jackie. He
28、 was hurried going to attend his sick mother in hospital.Furthermore, when he learned about my problems, he didnt hesitate to give me a lift. I arrived at the lecture hall in time, when the audience had been present . I owe my great thanks to my neighbour Jackie , he is a person ready to help the ot
29、hers at any time.【答案】1. consideration改成considerate2. While改成when3. come改成came4. hurried改成hurriedly5. attend后面加to6. Furthermore改成however7. problems改成problem8. when改成where9. he改成who10. 去掉the11（2014届黑龙江省齐齐哈尔实验中学高三上学期期中考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处浯言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺
30、词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均限一词。 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I went hiking to a mountain with my friend last summer. It was a good trip in the beginning and something unexpected happened halfway. One of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his s
31、tomach and he couldnt move any far. Nobody knew how to deal it. One girl tried to call her mum over her mobile phone, but there is no signal in the mountain area. Lucky we had brought a tent with us. We put it up and let him to rest in it. After taken some pills, he drank some water and ate some foo
32、d. After a while, I felt much better and we walked on. We all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.【答案】1. 第一句：friend改成friends;2. 第二句：and改成but3. 第三句：far改成farther4. 第四句：deal 后加with5. 第五句：is改成was6. 第六句：Lucky改成Luckily 7. 第七句：去掉rest前面的to8. 第八句：taken改成taking9. 第九句：I改成he10. 第十句：us改成ourselves12（2014届浙江省衢州一
33、中高三上学期期中考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处浯言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均限一词。 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dormitory. Instead, they rented houses outside
34、 the school. There are advantages for them all. Living in a dormitory can increase friendship and cooperation among classmates, but of course it is saferBesides, a dormitory is more like a society, where enables students to learn to get along with the each other，thus preparing the social life later.
35、 As for renting houses to live lonely, its better for your study as you can feel freely in your own room without being interrupted by others. As a result，you can have a plenty of time to devote yourself to review your lessons wholeheartedly. But there may appear a few safety problem as you live outs
36、ide the school. Anyhow as a student, I prefer living in a dormitory.【答案】1. rented改为rent2. all改为both3. but改为and4. where改为which5. repairing后面加for6. lonely改为alone7. freely改为free8. 去掉a9. review改为reviewing10. problem改为problems13（2014届浙江省湖州中学高三上学期期中考试）假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的
37、地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet
38、. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it
39、in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, Ill think of this experience.【答案】1. 加上for2. past passed3. feet foot4. when than5. a the6. other another7. do did8. possible possibly9. 去掉it10. lose losing14（2014届辽宁省抚顺市六校联合体高三上学期期中考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、
40、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词；删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉；修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。As students, all of us will be faced a problem after passed the college entrance examination. Should we choose a good major and a good university first? Here are some different
41、ideas. Some more prefer to choose a major first so they can learn that they are interested in. In this way they can put their hearts into study and got their favorite jobs in the future. Other believe that the environment is important to ones develop and that graduates from key universities are more
42、 likely to find good jobs. As long as Im concerned, the best choice is a good university if we cant obtain all.【答案】1. faced后面加上with2. passed改成passing3. and改成or4. Some后面的more 去掉5. learn后面的that改成what6. got改成get7. Other改成Others8. develop改成development9. long改成far10. all改成both15（2014届吉林省长春外国语学校高三上学期期中考试）
43、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词；删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉；修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Editor, Im the only daughter of my parents. So they worried about everything I do. For example, when I r
44、ide my bike, my parents wont let me to ride by myself. They are afraid I might fall off my bike and hurt myself. They are taking great trouble to support a bike, withmy mother even carried a first-aid box. Im not free to ride and I often say angry, “Why not let me ride alone?” Now, most family have
45、one child. Parents want to do everything for his children. This does no good on them. Too many love from parents may prevent children from independent. In my opinion, parents should let their children do that they should do alone. 【答案】1. worriedworry/加are2. 去掉to 3. the-a4. carriedcarrying 5. angryangrily 6. his-their7. family-families8. many-much9. on-to10. that-what
