1、如何写叙事性记叙文【写作任务】请以“One Thing Im Proud of”为题，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下： 1.记述事情经过； 2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。注意：文章的标题已给出（不计词数）。One Thing Im Proud of 【写作指导】一、审题定调本写作要求记叙一件自己认为得意的事情，属于叙事性记叙文，因此，写作时，我们可以时间为线索，以事件发生的先后顺序来记叙，同时通过议论来说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。写作时，素材的选取是重中之重。选材应从表现文章主题的需要出发，重点突出、详略得当。另外，通过审
2、题可知，本篇习作应以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时为主。二、谋篇布局本篇习作可分为三部分来写：第一部分：点出故事主题，导入正文（何事令“我”感到自豪）。第二部分：具体讲述故事发生的过程（交代清楚“六要素”）。第三部分：总结和感想（说明感到得意的原因或得到的启示）。三、组织语言1.第一部分：点出故事主题，导入正文。普通表达高级表达Everyone has things to be proud of, including me.I still remember how I saved .Everyone has things which he is proud of, so do I.I will
3、 never forget how proud I felt when I saved .2.第二部分：具体讲述故事发生的过程。普通表达高级表达It was a sunny afternoon, and everything seemed OK. Suddenly, a terrible thing happened.Luckily, . was saved by .Five minutes later, .She was deeply thankful for my timely and selfless help.On a sunny afternoon, everything seeme
4、d to be in harmony when a terrible thing happened suddenly.Thanks to ., . was saved in time.After what seemed 5 minutes, .She said gratefully that . couldnt have been saved without my timely help.1.第三部分：总结和感想。普通表达高级表达I am proud of what I did.I wont regret doing it.By no means will I regret doing it
5、despite the fact that I was in danger.【范文展示】普通范文One Thing Im Proud ofI still remember how I saved a boy three days ago.It was a sunny afternoon, and everything seemed OK. Suddenly, a terrible thing happened. A dog was running after a little boy. I thought that the boy was in danger. So I threw stone
6、s at the dog. However, the dog wasnt afraid. It wanted to bite me instead. Luckily, I was saved by a passer-by. Five minutes later, the boys mother arrived. She was deeply thankful for my timely and selfless help.Seeing the relieved look of the mother, I knew I would never regret saving her son. I a
7、m proud of what I did.高级范文One Thing Im Proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I saved a boy.On a sunny afternoon three days ago, everything seemed to be in harmony when suddenly a terrible thing happened. A boy was being chased by a fierce dog. It hit me that the boy was in danger. I thre
8、w stones at the dog, but it fought back! Thanks to a passer-by, I was saved just in time. After what seemed 5 minutes, the boys mother arrived. She said gratefully that her son couldnt have been saved without my timely help.I am proud of it. By no means will I regret doing it despite the fact that I
9、 was in danger.温馨提示：同学们，仔细阅读两篇文章之后，你会发现二者采用了不同的表达方式来表达相同或相近的含义。因此，大家在平时的写作中，也应该多使用一些复杂结构或高级词汇，同时，也应学会使用简单词汇或句式来表达复杂的意思。说明：该写作任务选自2013年高考英语浙江卷，范文由作者提供。【实战演练】假设你是红星中学的学生李华，下面四幅图描述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你的老师上课不慎摔倒后所发生的事。注意：词数100左右（标题和开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。An Accident Happened in Our C
10、lassroomLast Monday, we were having Chinese class when _ 答案【实战演练】One possible version:An Accident Happened in Our ClassroomLast Monday,we were having Chinese class whenour teacher suddenly slipped and fell. With the help of some other students, my classmate Liu Qiang was able to carry her on his bac
11、k to the school clinic immediately. It turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in hospital. The following day, we went to visit her with flowers and fruit. Seeing her lying in bed with her leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry and hoped that she would recover soon. This Thursday she returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons.We were all deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher.
