1、返回目录 The conquest of the Universe Module 5 返回目录 Section Writing 新闻报道返回目录 写作技法指导佳作构建示例目录Contents 返回目录 写作技法指导一、基本结构1提炼好新闻标题：标题是新闻报道的灵魂和精华。新闻标题既要把最吸引人的地方体现出来，又要做到言简意赅、直击主题。2写好新闻导语：新闻导语是新闻报道开头的第一句话，它一般是对整个报道的一个概括。返回目录 3详述新闻事件的过程：写完导语后，文章接下来要按照事件发展的时间顺序具体阐述导语中的相关信息，形成对导语的有力支持。4对事件进行必要的评论：根据写作的需要可对新闻事件进行简
2、要的评论，以达到深化主题，给读者留下深刻印象的目的。5署名：在文章的最后注明新闻报道的作者或提供单位。返回目录 二、增分佳句1 One morning/day/Last week/Saturday/On a winter day/This morning/It was June 20,2017/On May 4,20172was doing sthwhen suddenly/As soon as主句/When主句/Before I could主句3Just then/At that moment/time/Just after/Hardly hadwhen4As/Because/Since从句
3、主句返回目录 5After some time/After a while/A few minutes later/A moment later/Then6 Some were doingsome were doingand/while others were7When it was time for/towe8He thanked Jack./He said“Thank you”to Jack./He expressed his thanks to Jack./He said to Jack,“Thank you very much.”9 And/So/Therefore/As a resu
4、lt/For that reason/Because of this返回目录 佳作构建示例【题目要求】一家房地产公司为了建造新房子，想拆掉一些古建筑物，许多人反对。请根据下表所提供的信息写一篇新闻报道，介绍有关情况。房地产公司的意见反对的意见1.古建筑破旧不堪，没钱维修；2拆掉古建筑，建住房，解决部分人的住房需求。1.古建筑是文化遗址，保护文化遗址人人有责；2可通过开发旅游赚钱维修，还可使用荒地建房。返回目录 注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：房地产公司 estate company 荒地 wasteland第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为
5、一篇_；2确定中心人称：本文主要人称为_；3确定主体时态：_。新闻报道第三人称一般现在时返回目录 二、构思第一部分：开篇新闻导语 一家房地产公司想拆掉古建筑，建造新房子。第二部分：房地产公司阐述拆掉古建筑，建造新房子的原因。第三部分：阐述反对者的意见和看法。返回目录 第二步：核心词汇想周全1_ 房地产公司2_拆毁3_古代的4_令人厌恶的5_文化遗迹6_荒地，不毛之地estate company pull down ancient ugly cultural relics wasteland 返回目录 第三步：由词扩句雏形现1一家房地产公司想拆掉古建筑，建造新房子。(不定式作目的状语)2他们认为
6、古建筑快坍塌了，政府无法修复它们。(fall into pieces;afford)An estate company wants to pull down the ancient buildings to build new houses.They think the ancient buildings are falling into pieces and the government cant afford to repair them.返回目录 3而且，在我们的城市里有很多人没有房子住。(haveto live in)4如果他们拆掉古建筑，就可以满足这方面的需要。(if 引导条件状语从
7、句)Whats more,a lot of people in our city have no houses to live in.If they do pull down the ancient buildings,it can satisfy this need.返回目录 5另一方面，很多人认为拆掉古建筑是不对的。(on the other hand)6政府可以向游客开放，使用赚取的钱来保护和修复它们。(openup)On the other hand,a lot of people think to pull down the ancient buildings is wrong.Th
8、e government can open them up to tourists and use the money earned to protect and repair them.返回目录 7此外，房地产公司还可以开发荒地建造新房子。(不定式作目的状语)Besides,the estate company can develop the wasteland to build new houses.返回目录 第四步：句式升级造亮点1用 it 作形式主语改写句 52用 v.-ing 作伴随状语改写句 6On the other hand,a lot of people think it i
9、s wrong to pull down the ancient buildings.The government can open them up to tourists,using the money earned to protect and repair them.返回目录 第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Ancient Buildings and New HousesAn estate company wants to pull down the ancient buildings to build new houses.They think the ancient buildings are
10、 falling into pieces and the government cant afford to repair them.They make our city look ugly.Whats more,a lot of people in our city have no houses to live in.If they do pull down the ancient buildings,it can satisfy this need.返回目录 On the other hand,a lot of people think it is wrong to pull down t
11、he ancient buildings.Ancient buildings are cultural relics.Without them,we cant know our history.Everyone has the duty to protect them.The government can open them up to tourists,using the money earned to protect and repair them.Besides,the estate company can develop the wasteland to build new houses.
