1、专题三 书面表达读写任务要求考生首先阅读一篇短文,然后用约30词概括短文全文或短文某个方面的内容,再按写作内容要点要求用约120词就某个主题发表观点。具体来说,这类试题有以下几个特点:1在写作内容上,要求先对所给的英文语言材料进行客观、准确且全面的概括,可使用意义相同或相近的单词、短语或句式,或使用不同的句子结构表达同一意思,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子;然后再根据要求,发表个人观点,做出判断,表明态度,并加以分析论证等。2在写作词数上,要求比较宽泛,概括所给短文和发表考生个人看法的部分的词数要求分别控制在30个词和120个词左右;“至少包含以下的内容要点”的字眼表明考生可以适当增加相关内容。3
2、在语言运用能力上,侧重考查考生转述他人观点、提出自我观点、论证所提观点的思维能力,考查考生概括能力、思辨能力和较高的语篇布局能力。4在写作形式上,包括三部分,即概括、正文、结尾。概括:第一段为概括,一般用一两句话,约30个词进行提炼归纳原材料的中心主题。正文:一般写作内容有几个要点就分几段,每段的主题句最好放在段首。结尾:可以是总结,也可以是强调主题中心句等。1审题:审读阅读材料,寻找作者的论点、论据。2概括:找出原文观点,转述作者的论点、论据和结论。3设计:设计文章结构,谋篇布局。4整合:把原文观点和自已观点整合成文。5整体润色,增加亮点。一、如何写好概括.记叙文的概括 先通过阅读材料,找出
3、所给材料(记叙文)的六要素,再按一定的逻辑关系将六要素串联起来,组成能体现文章中心的一两句话,如:何时(when)何地(where)谁(who)做了什么事情(what),结果怎样(how)或为什么会这样(why)。用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么,不能拖泥带水讲细节,而且最好讲出故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理。注意人称和时态(一般原文用什么时态,概括就用什么时态)的使用。忌罗列细节或掺入个人思想。【典例剖析】阅读下面短文,然后以约30个词概括其内容要点。After graduating from college,I decided to try for a job at aradio sta
4、tion,and then I would become a sports announcer.I wentto Chicago and knocked on the door of every station,but gotturned down every time.Seeing I was disappointed,my mother said,“Everythinghappens for the best.If you keep on trying,one day somethinggood will happen.Youll realize that it wouldnt have
5、happened ifnot for that previous disappointment.”In one studio,a kind lady told me that big stations couldnt riskhiring an inexperienced person.“Go to small towns to find a smallstation thatll give you a chance,”she suggested.So I tried WOC Radio in Davenport,Iowa.The program director,Peter MacArthu
6、r,told me they had already hired an announcer.So I was refused.As I left his office,I asked aloud,“How can a fellow get to be a sports announcer if he cant get a job in a radio station?”Suddenly MacArthur asked,“What did you say about sports?Do you know anything about football?”Then he let me standb
7、efore a microphone and asked me to broadcast an imaginary game.The program director was satisfied with me and I became a sports announcer the next day.Whenever I faced disappointment,my mothers words would come to my mind.【思路点拨】1这是一篇记叙文,概括前需找出:(1)谁?(the writer/author)(2)干了什么事?(failed lots of times i
8、n looking for a job)(3)结果如何?(felt very disappointed)(4)经验教训(his mother inspired him to keep on,and hesucceeded at last)2然后用自己的话将上述要点表达出来,便是本文概要。Summary:While looking for a job,the author suffered one failure after another,which made him feel very disappointed.It was his mothers encouraging words tha
9、t inspired him to go on trying until he succeeded.3记叙文读写任务写作模板 第一段:The writer mainly tells us that.which.第二段:After reading the story,I am deeply moved by thehero,who reminds me of.The story reminds me of another story that happened to.第三段:I subscribe to the view that the whole society shouldattach i
10、mportance to.Only when we raise peoples awarenessof.can we.夹叙夹议文的概括 夹叙夹议文,先按照记叙文的概括方法,然后加上作者的看法或观点,指出该故事说明了一个什么道理或给人有什么启示或从中得到的哲理。【典例剖析】阅读下面短文,然后以约30个词概括其内容要点。To many people even the word“work”sounds unpleasant,not necessarily because they are lazy.The same man,who dislikes his job in the factory or
11、 even in the office,may work hard at the weekend,painting the house or digging the garden.What is the reason,then?In most cases,it is because thesepeople simply do not enjoy the job they are doing.It does not givethem any real satisfaction.It may be quite easy,like making upwooden boxes,but it is ve
12、ry boring.Very often they are doing ajob which is just a small part of a much larger one,such asattaching a door handle to a car.But the part they play in actuallymaking the car is so small that they can never say:I have madesomething!Yet in modern society somebody has to do ordinary jobs such ascle
13、aning streets because this is the way society is organized.Nomatter how ordinary a job is,it plays a part in society andtherefore deserves our due respect.Society cannot function a singleday without the“dull and boring”jobs.【思路点拨】1这是一篇夹叙夹议文,概括前需找出:(1)文章叙述了什么?(In modern society,many peoples jobs,like
14、 cleaning streets,may be boring,small and unsatisfying,butthey are necessary.)(2)有什么启示?(Ordinary jobs like cleaning streets are worth respecting.)2然后用自己的话将上述要点表达出来,便是本文概要。Summary:Though many people find their jobs boring,small and unsatisfying,ordinary jobs like cleaning streets are necessary in mod
15、ern society.And these jobs are worth respecting.说明文的概括 说明文通常会有明确的主题句,先抓住关键词,并根据各段落的主题,有序地组织语言,完整表达出文章的中心内容。如果是分析型说明文,概括时要找出文章所说明的现象、产生该现象的原因及解决问题的方法或建议,然后用自己的话重组信息点。阅读下面短文,然后以约30个词概括其内容要点。You may not be very familiar with“eco-tourism”a new term intodays tourism industrybut in an era of growing envir
16、onmentalconsciousness,it is not too difficult for us to imagine and work outthe meaning of this new form of holiday.Eco-tourism is typically defined as travel to places where the unique flowers,plants,animals and the cultural heritage are the primary attractions.It is considered as a kind of respons
17、ible tourism which seriously takes ecology and culture into consideration.Therefore,programs involving the conservation and preservation of some natural and cultural sites also form a part of eco-tourism.Eco-tourism is developing at great speed.According to a report bythe World Tourism Organization,
18、eco-tourism in recent years hasenjoyed an annual growth of about 5%worldwide.Over 80 activitieshave been listed for eco-tourism,such as birdwatching,hiking,diving,photography,mountaineering and participating in variouskinds of local cultural events.Although big cities are still the major places that
19、 absorb tourists in our society today,it looks like some smaller towns and rural areas rich in ecological,cultural and historical resources may well become the new destinations for people to visit tomorrow.【思路点拨】1这篇文章的主题段在第二段及最后一段,主要告诉人们什么是生态旅游。因此,在概括时要把文章的主题段的中心话题cultural heritage,takes ecology and
20、 culture into consideration,historical resources用自己的话表述出来。为避免抄袭嫌疑,原文的takes ecology and culture into consideration可以用attractstourists by natural and cultural heritage进行平行互换。2建议模板:建议用“一个主句一个非限制性定语从句/分词短语”,即写作对象is.,which.注意:1.不必提及具体数字;2不能出现个人观点字眼。如:I think/I agree with/I feel sorry for.Summary:Eco-tour
21、ism is a new fast developing form of holiday which attracts tourists by natural and cultural heritage as well as historical resources.It can be a way to protect the environment.议论文的概括 议论文一般包括“观点(或问题)、论据、结论”三个方面,所以,议论文的概括需要先弄清楚文章的论点、论据、结论,然后用一两句话将这三部分有机地结合起来,使之能反映文章的中心内容。概括对方观点首先是要转换视角,即以“第三人称”或“无人称”
22、来概括。关注文章的首尾句、首尾段及每段的首尾句。如果文中有一分为二的观点,两种观点都要概括,不要漏掉其中一方的观点。注意:议论文的主体部分是论证的过程,论据占有很大的部分,但在写概括的时候,不需要详细写论证的过程,一切细节信息,都应该剔除,所以议论文的概括应当将“观点、论据、结论”三个方面同等对待。【典例剖析】阅读下面短文,然后以约30个词概括其内容要点。Students should think now about what extracurricular activitiesthey would like to participate in may help them deepen the
23、ir physical,creative,social,political,and career interests by bringing them intocommunication with other like-minded people they didnt previouslyknow.You can join groups as a way to get support from other students.Aclub or group can also be a great way to meet people who are different from you.Lots
24、of youth programs bring people together with those who are different as a way to break down the barriers between people.Participating in extracurricular activities helps you in otherways,too.It looks good on college and job applications and showsadmissions officers and employers youre well rounded a
25、ndresponsible.Specific activities help with specific goals.The most basic reason for joining a club or team is that it givesyou something better to do than staring at the wall,wandering thehall,or sleeping all afternoon.People who are participating are lesslikely to pick up bad habits,like smoking o
26、r drinking.【思路点拨】1这篇议论文主要论述了参加课外活动的好处,一个段落说到一个好处(may help you deepen your interests,break down thebarriers,helps you in other ways,are less likely to pick up badhabits),在概括时只需把这几个段落的大意用自己的话转述出来。第 一、二 段 可 以 用 widensocialcircleandimprovecommunication skills来表达,第三、四段用prepare for their futureand form go
27、od habits来概括。再运用定语从句和一些并列连词and,as well as把信息点合并成一个句子。2建议模板:用一个句子阐述文章的中心论题或作者的观点,再用分词短语或非限制性定语从句作补充说明。如:The writer argues.中心论点,which分论点/The writer told us that.3然后用自己的话将上述要点表达出来,便是本文概要。Summary:The writer argues for the strengths of extracurricular activities,which help students better themselves in w
28、idening their social circleand improving communication skills,making preparations for theirfuture as well as forming a good habit.4议论文读写任务写作模板 第一段:From what is mentioned above,we know.第 二 段:Thosewhoareinfavourofitstate/claimthat.Opponents of this view argue that.第三段:I hold the view that priorities s
29、hould be focused on.书信的概括 如果读写任务所给阅读材料是书信体,那么,作为回信的开头,summary通常是写读信后的感受、回信的目的等书信特点,同时,考生要能概括原文,正确使用人称,体现出书信交流的功能,而且要注意写信的格式和语气。【典例剖析】阅读下面短文,然后用约30个词概括其内容要点。Dear David,I am writing you this e-mail because you are so busy every day with your studies and after-school activities that we seldom have chan
30、ces to talk face to face.There is something that I am very worried about.You have always been an active boy,willing to help othersand always looking for an opportunity to try something new orlearn something different.I think these are wonderful qualities but Iam concerned that they may be affecting
31、your studies.In the pastthree months alone you have joined at least four different studentclubs.I see these activities taking up more and more of yourtime.Youre always discussing something with your classmates orsurfing online.Youre also devoting less time to homework and evenyour teachers say you a
32、re looking very sleepy in class.I know that these kinds of activities are fun and can help yourdevelopment,but I think they have started to damage yourperformance at school.Please remember the most important thing atthis stage of your life is your studies.Right now you should do yourbest in your exa
33、minations as what will give you more choices isyour future.I beg you to focus on your main goal and not to throwaway all your years of hard work.Your loving mother【思路点拨】1按照“我已收到了你的来信/邮件,信中表达了(信件的内容)”这一种思路组织结构。2建议模板:Ive received your letter/e-mail expressing.(信件的内容)Summary:I have just received your e
34、-mail expressing your concern that I am being distracted from my studies because of my many after-school activities and about the consequences of this for my future.二、如何写好正文和结尾.写好段落主题句 概括后要根据要点来写作,通常按要点分段,每一段的第一句最好是主题句,涵盖整段的内容,条理清晰。常考要点及主题句写作模板如下:1引出经历 The story reminds me of my own experience.这个故事让
35、我想起了我自己的经历。This story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend.这个故事让我想起我朋友的一次相似的经历。2分析原因 Reasons for this are varied.Some people think.Others think.其原因是多方面的,有人认为另外一些人认为 3说明某事物的重要性 Hobbies and interests play an important role in ones growing.兴趣和爱好在人们的成长过程中起着重要作用。4发表看法(1)As far as I am concerne
36、d,I cant agree more with.I hold myview for the reason.So it goes without saying that.就我而言,我完全同意其理由是因此,不用说(2)From my point of view,I oppose the idea/statement that.Forone thing.For another.依我看,我反对一是二是 5利弊对比 Itsadvantagescanbelistedasfollows.Foronething.Foranother.However,just as a saying goes,“Every
37、coin has twosides.”.is no exception,and in other words,it still has its negativeaspects.To begin with.In addition.其好处如下:一方面另一方面然而,正如一句谚语所说,“事物都有两个方面。”也不例外,换句话说,它也有不好的方面,首先其次 6举例说明 Such examples can be seen easily in our daily life.A good case is.这样的例子在我们的日常生活中很容易见到,一个很好的例子就是 7心得体会 Having finished re
38、ading the story,I was deeply touched.读完这个故事,我被深深地打动了。8提建议 Suggestions on.can be listed as follows.关于的建议如下。Here are my suggestions on.这是我关于的建议。9问题解决 The following ways can be adopted to solve the problem.可以采取下面的方法解决这个问题。To solve the problem of.effective measures should be taken.Forone thing.For anoth
39、er.为了解决的问题,应当采取有效措施。一方面另一方面 10观点对比 Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionson.Somepeoplethink.because.However,others think.for the reason that.关于不同的人有不同的看法。一些人认为因为然而,另外一些人认为因为 11说明异同 There are some similarities between A and B Both ofthem.However,some differences are also obvious.A和B之间有一些相似,他们都然而,差别也是很明
40、显的。12假设处境 If I had/were.I would.假如我我会【典例剖析】请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Most people think its fine to be“busy as a beaver(海狸)”But actually,although beavers may work hard,oftenthey dont get much done.Beavers are good at building dams and most beaver dams are wonders of engineering.The best ones are s
41、trongly built of trees,stones,and mud.They are wide at the bottom and narrow at the top.Beavers think nothing of building a dam more than two hundredfeet long.One dam,in Montana,was more than two thousand feetlong.The largest one ever seen was in New Hampshire.It stretchedfour thousand feet.It made
42、a lake large enough to hold forty beaverhomes.So beavers do build good dams.But they dont always build them in the right places.They just dont plan.They will build a dam across the widest part of the stream.They dont try to find a place where the stream is narrow.So a lot of their hard work is waste
43、d.Beavers should learn that its not enough to be busy.You have toknow what youre doing,too.For example,there was one Oregonbeaver that really was a worker.It decided to fix a hole in a man-made dam.After five days of work it gave up.The hole it was tryingto fill was the space that boats go through.【
44、写作内容】1用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2用约120个词就“制定规划与达成目标”这一主题进行议论,内容包括:(1)海狸修水坝的故事给你的启示是什么?(2)请结合你的生活经历阐述“制定规划与达成目标”之间的关系。【写作要求】1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。【参考范文】Beavers are very diligent dam-builders who can build extremelygood dams.However,they someti
45、mes dont know where to buildthe dams or which dams should be fixed only because they have noconsciousness to make a plan.The beavers story illustrates the importance of planning.Without a plan the best intentions and efforts will not produce results.We shouldnt work blindly but have a clear idea of
46、our purpose,the actions needed to achieve it,and how these should be ordered.As a junior student,I achieved considerable success inlearning English through the combination of hard work andplanning.I prepared good materials with the help of my teacher,made plans for my daily study and self-monitored
47、the wholeprocess of my learning.I made rapid progress and became veryconfident.I think I couldnt have done it without a good plan.Diligence is a key to success,but in my opinion,good plan is also essential.Through planning,we can develop clear goals,find more efficient and effective methods and thus
48、 have more opportunities to reach our goals than through hard work alone.掌握拓展模式 1细化主题型(主题)In my opinion,cheating in exams will have a very bad effect on middle school students study/learning habit.(细化)Those who often cheat in exams will never treat their study seriously because they believe they can
49、 get good marks without working hard.Those who never cheat in exams will consider its unfair for them,thinking studying hard is not necessary.2举例说明型(提出观点)Good doctors should possess some good qualities.(举例证明)Take my mother,a doctor,as an example.She is a well-informed,learned and experienced woman.N
50、ot only does she treat every patient fairly,but also encourages everyone around her to do exercise every day in order to keep healthy.Whats more important,she is patient with every patient and considerate to them.Under her selfless care many patients have recovered from their illness.3经历感受型(感受)This
51、story reminds me of my uncle,who has a similarexperience(经历)Born into a poor family,he had to help hisparents with farming work in the field when he was(still)10.Later,he had to sell ice creams from house to house to earn money whenhe studied at middle school.After he entered college,he took 3part-t
52、ime jobs.Though busy and tired,he felt proud,as he hadbecomestrongminded,independentandcompetent.Aftergraduation,he was smoothly employed by a brand company inShanghai.4心得体会型(体会)After reading the passage,I felt terribly sorry for theeagle.To some extent,we are just like the eagle.(心得)We donthave a t
53、horough realization of ourselves,not knowing whatadvantages we have.We even dont know what we want tobecome or to get.Worse still,some of us dont exploit ourpotential.Therefore,we should try to avoid such tragedyhappening to us.Whenever we want to give up ourselves to fate,we should give it a second
54、 thought.5利弊优劣型 Three minutes speech in English at the beginning of a period benefits us a lot.(利)Its strengths can be listed as follows.For one thing,it is a good chance for us students to practise our listening ability as well as speaking ability.For another,to prepare for it,we need to refer to s
55、ome books and newspapers,which in return enriches our knowledge.(弊)However,just as a popular saying goes,“every coin has two sides”,and it is no exception.To begin with,it costs the limited time in class.Besides,if we cannot make sense of the speeches,we will lose confidence in learning English.6观点对
56、比型(观点)Opinions are largely/sharply/widely divided on the point/issue/matter/problem of choosing the university.(对比)The majority of the students believe that they would like to choose a key university regardless of the major while others argue that they would prefer to go to a university where they c
57、an study what they like.Still others insist/argue that they dont care on condition that they can go to university.7处境设想型(处境)If I were you,(设想)I wouldnt give up learning maths.Onthe contrary,I would first have confidence in myself.Then,Iwould put some time into this subject and learn it step bystep.W
58、hats more,I would consult my teacher about the ways tolearn it well.8计划安排型(计划)I want to learn English well,and I have my own methods.(安排)Firstly,reading is of great significance/importance because it can help me improve my memory somehow.Secondly,I will write down whatever interests me in order to p
59、ractise my writing.Lastly,I will often talk to my classmates in English to better my oral English.9建议措施型(建议)The earths environment is worsening.We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.(措施)For one thing,law should be passed to punish any enterprise polluting the envir
60、onment.For another,enterprises should be responsible for their pollutants by purifying the waste gases or water before releasing them.Finally,as for individuals,try not to use the disposable things.Not only can it help the environment,but it can also save your money.10陈述原因型(呈现观点)Reasons for the prob
61、lems of buying tickets online are divided.(分析原因)On the one hand,for peasant workers,lacking the knowledge of computers has got them into trouble.Onthe other hand,the ticket-selling system is not advanced enough to deal with different situations.掌握结尾技巧 虽然读写任务并没有明确要求写总结,但一篇带总结的文章会使结构更显完整,能够得到更好、更高的印象分
62、。因此,建议考生用简短的语言总结全文。1常见的总结方式有:(1)进行总结或概括:用简洁的语言概括中心内容,起画龙点睛的作用。(2)提出建议或呼吁:就某一社会现象或问题,提出积极正面的建议或呼吁。(3)重申观点,强调重要性。2总结句前常用的短语有in brief,all in all,to sum up,to summarize,in conclusion,to conclude,in a word,therefore等。.常用句式 1概括类句式(1)The passage mainly discusses that.(2)We can know from the passage.(3)As f
63、ar as the author is concerned,.(4)The chapter above is.(5)Thearticlegivestheviewthat.should/shouldnt.(主题).(补充论据)(6)The passage highlights(强调)the importance of sth.(7)The author argues that.2过渡类句式 表示赞同(1)This is what I want to say.(2)I fully support the statement above because I am very sure.(3)I qui
64、te agree with the writers idea.(4)I cant agree more with what the writer said/says.表示不赞同(1)To be fair,the author is right in that.but he just goes too farin saying that.(2)I dont agree with the writers view.(3)Im strongly against the writers idea.(4)This opinion sounds right but is hardly practical.
65、3例证类句式(1)First,.Second,.Last,.(2)On the one hand,.on the other hand,.(3)For one thing.and for another.(4)Furthermore/Besides/In addition,.(5)Some think,.while others may.4总结类句式(1)To sum up/In short/In conclusion/In a word/All in all.(2)Taking all the factors into account,we can draw a conclusionthat
66、.(3)From the discussion above,it can be safely concluded that.(4)Therefore,it is necessary for us to.【典例剖析】Writing 1 请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。GUANGZHOUAt least 25 people have been confirmed deadafter typhoon Usagi made a landfall in South Chinas GuangdongProvince Sunday evening,according to the
67、provincial flood controlheadquarters.Electricity and water supply was cut off in the Huilai county,Jieyang city,and houses were collapsed as wind speeds at the centreexceeded 180km per hour on Sunday afternoon,said Li Feng,a border police officer of the city,Xinhua reported Sunday evening.Intercity
68、trains between Guangzhou,Shenzhen and Zhuhaiwere suspended at 6 pm.and nearly 50 trains,including thosealong the high-speed lines to Beijing,Shenzhen and Hong Kong,will be suspended until Tuesday,according to the GuangzhouRailway(Group)Corporation.At a Xiecheng gas station on National Road 324 near
69、Shanweicity,where 13 of the 25 victims were killed,winds were strong enough to blow cars off the road and all traffic was stopped.Resident Li Huolong said he was on his way home in Shanwei,when the back window of his car was broken by the wind.Educational authorities in 14 cities ordered schools to
70、suspendclasses on Sunday,a school day in China because of the three-dayMid-autumn Festival which just ended.More than 47,000 fishing boats are in harbor,with nearly20,000 fishermen kept onshore.All beaches in the province have been closed.【写作内容】1用约30个词概括短文的内容要点。2用约120个词写一篇英语短文谈谈某种自然灾害造成的影响,并包括如下要点:(
71、1)你家乡有哪种自然灾害,常造成哪些破坏?(2)描述你或朋友在此灾害时的一次经历。(3)你对应对这种灾害的建议。【写作要求】1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。【写作思路】写作时,根据写作内容的三个提纲,从以下几个方面展开思路:1概括应包括以下要点:(关键词:struck,caused howmany deaths,damaged/collapsed,cut off,suspended/closed等)(1)TyphoonUsagistruck.(so
72、meplace)andcaused.(howmany)deaths.(2)It damaged houses,stopped traffic and transports and cutoff electricity supply.(3).fishermen onshore and students off school.2写作的内容应该包括:(1)你家乡有哪种自然灾害,常造成哪些破坏?(可简单列举)(2)描述你或朋友在此灾害发生时的一次经历(时间、地点、人物、事件);(3)应对此种灾害的可行性建议。【参考范文】Typhoon Usagi struck Guangdong,China just
73、 after the Mid-autumn Festival and caused 25 deaths.It damaged houses,stopped traffic and transports and cut off electricity supply.It also kept fishermen onshore and students off school.As is described in the passage,typhoon is also a commonnatural disaster in my hometown.When it is here,there are
74、oftenstrong winds and heavy rains.Young trees break and water floodsinto low-lying houses.When Usagi hit my hometown that evening,I was on my wayhome.A very strong wind slapped me in the front and tried to sweepme up into the sky.I had been told typhoon was coming but neverthought it would cause muc
75、h damage.I became scared and shelteredmyself in a shop doorway.Suddenly with an ear-splitting“bang”,an air-conditioner fell down on the ground just in front of me!I wasso frightened that I ran home as fast as I could.So I suggest that we should always take the warning seriouslyand make good preparat
76、ions.Stay at home and fasten firmlyeverything in the house.In this way we can minimize the loss thedisaster will cause beforehand.Writing 2 请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。I came from a family that never liked to waste money,and myparents taught me that living within my budget was the mostimportant thi
77、ng.I had a very comfortable childhood,and never felt the need to throw away money on unnecessary things.But things changed in my twenties,when I found myself in acity with plenty of food and shopping attractions!I burned throughmy income in the department stores on Saturday mornings,thenburned throu
78、gh my credit cards at the night clubs on Saturdaynights.Before too long,I was deeply in debt and constantlyborrowing more money from my friends.It was during this time thatI reflected on my behaviour,and decided that life was a lot morecomfortable when you werent continually stressed about money.For
79、 me,being thrifty(节俭的)is not about being short onmoney.Its about being smart with your money so you can enjoyyour life to its fullest.I love recycling and getting back to nature,and teaching the kids about eco-friendly and responsible living.Whether I like it or not,my natural feeling is to find way
80、s to do everything for less.Less money,less time and less stress!【写作内容】1用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2用约120个词就“节俭”的话题谈谈你的想法,内容包括:(1)对你来说,节俭是什么?(2)你认为节俭是否重要?为什么?(3)就生活中如何做到节俭提一些建议。【写作要求】1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。【写作思路】根据写作内容的三个提纲:(1)对你来说,节俭是什么?(2)你认为
81、节俭是否重要?为什么?(3)就生活中如何做到节俭提一些建议。写作时,应注意以下几个方面:1概要:要求能抓住文章所含的关键词,即概括应包括以下要点:(1)family never liked to waste money(2).was deeply in debt(3)being thrifty is being smart with your money.find ways to doeverything for less 2正文:三点写作内容应该注意:(1)对节俭的理解;(2)对节俭的重要性的论述;(3)就生活中如何做到节俭提出建议。【参考范文】Version 1 In the passag
82、e,the writer describes how he forgot his familysthrifty tradition and eventually met with financial difficulty.Thishelped him realize the importance of thriftiness and start to practisethriftiness again.To me,being thrifty means valuing money,making the most ofwhat I have and trying never to spend b
83、eyond my budget or onunnecessary things.Thrift is an old and dated concept to many young people.As life has become a lot easier,people tend to indulge(沉溺)in a luxurious lifestyle.Thats why I regard this nearly forgotten practice more important now than ever before.Actually,to be thrifty can be reall
84、y simple.Most of the time,its simply a matter of being more thoughtful in our everyday life:turning off lights when leaving the room,not using the airconditioners unless necessary,bringing our water bottle fromhome rather than spending money on soft drinks,using publictransport to avoid needless dri
85、ving and parking,ordering justenough food when eating out,and so forth.To do these mightmean doing things others wont do and controlling our desires.Butremember,a smart person is not one who always tries to impressothers by showing off their wealth,but one who spares no effort tosave for the future
86、and for others.Version 2 The writer recalls the stress and economic problems he had aftermoving to a big city,forgetting the thrifty habits of his youth andwasting all his money.At last,however,he learned his lesson andbecame thrifty once more.I think a thrifty person is someone whouses only what th
87、ey need and avoids wastes.Being thrifty can saveour money,but more importantly,it is necessary if we want to saveour planet.In the face of growing environmental problems,I believeit is more necessary than ever to reduce the amount of rubbish andpollution each individual produces.If we fail to contro
88、l the amount ofwaste we produce,our society and our planet are doomed(毁灭)andthis concern must outweigh any short-term satisfaction we get frombuying and consuming more.It is for the reason that I buy as much fresh food as possible,rather than packaged food,which requires much more energy to produce
89、and adds to our pollution problems.I also try to cycle or walk everywhere I go,or at least use public transport rather than getting a taxi or depending on a private car.Actions like these keep me fit and healthy,help the environment and leave me with more money in my pocket.Why dont you try these too?You might really enjoy the results.