1、专题八 短文改错Proofreading 1(2016课标全国)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest
2、. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.答案My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to thatwhere I live. Though not
3、very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even hadhave to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honesthonesty. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables orand high quality oil are usingused for coo
4、king. My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in thea short period of time. Instead, he hopes that ourhis business will grow steadysteadily.解析考查宾语从句。where引导宾语从句且在从句中作状语。考查连词。though和but不能连用。though引导的让步状语从句是一个省略句,不能再省略,故只能去掉but。考查动词的时态。文章通篇叙述的是客观事实,采用的是一般现在时,且句子的主语some people为复数,故需将had改为ha
5、ve。考查名词作表语。宾语从句中的主语为名词短语the key to his success,故从逻辑上看应该用名词作表语,来解释名词短语的含义,即“什么是什么”结构。考查并列连词。此处表示并列关系,故用并列连词and。考查动词的被动语态。主语fresh vegetables and high quality oil和use之间为被动关系,故需用被动语态。考查介词。从dreams后的动名词becoming可知此处应加一个介词of。dream of梦想。考查冠词。in a short period of time“在短时间内”。考查形容词性物主代词。由句子的主语he可知,他希望他的(his)生意
6、稳步增长。考查副词。此处用副词作状语修饰动词grow。steadily意为“(发展、增长等)稳步地,持续地”。Proofreading 2(2016课标全国)The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend m
7、oney. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn
8、a lot.答案The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about howwhat to do during the holiday. We can chosechoose between staying at home and taketaking a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable butand there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about t
9、he world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden yourour view and gain knowledgesknowledge we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we canshould/ can go to places of interest nearby. I thoughtthink that it is a good idea. It does not cost manymuch, yet we can still learn a lot.解析考查“特殊疑问词
10、+不定式”。do后边缺少宾语,故用what。情态动词后应该用动词原形。和staying并列,故用taking。根据句意“如果我们待在家里,舒服而且没有必要花钱”可知前后不是转折关系。world前需要加定冠词 the。此处为“我们能开阔我们的视野”,故把your 改为our。knowledge 是不可数名词。本题考查虚拟语气。suggest“建议”后的从句的谓语动词应用“should+动词原形”,should可以省略。本句表示的是作者现在的看法而不是过去的看法。此处表示“不需要花费很多钱”,故用much。Proofreading 3(2016课标全国)The teenage year from
11、13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didnt seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my
12、 parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.答案The teenage yearyears from 13 to 19 were
13、 the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worseworst years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourselfmyself. However, my parents didnt seem to think suchso. They always telltold me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even fel
14、t my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freelyfree from them. I showed them I was independent by wearwearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home tofor college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.解析考查名词。由from 13 to 19可
15、知year应改为years。考查形容词最高级。由并列连词and前的the best可知此处应用形容词的最高级形式。考查固定结构。at first“起初”为固定结构。考查反身代词。表示“我自己”用反身代词myself。考查副词。so在此处替代前边出现的“I knew everything and could make decisions by myself”。考查动词的时态。前后文语境告诉我们应使用一般过去时,故需用该动词的过去式told。考查形容词。be free from“从释放/解脱”为固定短语。考查动名词。by为介词,其后要接动名词。考查固定结构。leave.for.“离开去”为固定结构
16、。考查代词。whenever引导的时间状语从句缺主语,由句意可知答案。Proofreading 4(2016浙江)When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, wed greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my m
17、other would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there
18、.答案When I was a very young childrenchild, my father created a regular practice I remember well years latelater. Every time he arrived home at theend of the day, wed greet herhim at the door. He would ask who we waswere and pretend not to knowingknow us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink w
19、hile she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chatchatted, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit inon the top of the fridge. It was both excitedexciting and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.解析考查名词单复数。句中
20、主语是I,为单数,故应用child。考查副词。late adj.迟到的,晚的;later adv.后来,以后。考查冠词。at the end of.是固定短语,意为“在结束的时候”,故at后应加上冠词the。考查代词。此处指的是“我的父亲”,故应用him。考查主谓一致。主语是we,为复数, 故应该是were。考查非谓语动词。pretend not to do sth.假装不做某事,所以应该用动词原形。考查时态。根据上文Every time和句中would 可知父母经常这么做,would 后加上动词原形,表示过去经常做某事。考查时态。此句是时间状语从句,讲述的是父母过去的事情,故应用一般过去时,
21、chat 应改为它的过去式chatted。考查介词。on the top of.为固定短语,意为“在顶部,在上面”,此处指在冰箱的顶部。考查形容词。此句主语是it,指孩子们被父亲放在冰箱顶部这件事是令人兴奋的,exciting 常修饰事物,故用exciting。excited 常用来修饰人。Proofreading 5(2016四川)It is Mothers Day today. Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of t
22、he houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. Th
23、e dishes what I cooked were Moms favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mothers Day!” Mom was grateful and moving.答案It is Mothers Day today. Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, sobut she has to do most of the houseworkshousework. She is a great mot
24、her. Both Dad orand I planned to do something on Mothers Day. We getgot up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in herhis hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in the kitchen. The dishes whatthat/wh
25、ich/ what I cooked were Moms favoritestfavorite. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mothers Day!” Mom was grateful and movingmoved.解析考查并列连词。两个分句之间为转折关系,并非因果关系,故用but。句意:妈妈有一份全职工作,但是她还得承担大部分家务活儿。考查名词。housework家务,为不可数名词。考查并列连词。both.and.为固定搭配,意为“和都”。考查动词时态。根据上下文以及in the morning可知本句是在叙述过去的事情,故用一般过去时。考查固定搭
26、配。句意:爸爸打扫完房子,然后就去购物了。go shopping去购物。考查物主代词。根据句中的he可知此处为his。考查冠词。此处特指家里的厨房,故在kitchen前加定冠词the。考查定语从句。先行词为the dishes,且定语从句中cooked后缺少宾语,故用关系代词that/which引导定语从句,因其在从句中作宾语,故也可以省略关系代词。考查名词。favorite最喜欢的事物。考查形容词。此处作表语,主语为Mom,故用moved(感动的)。moving感人的;动人的。Proofreading 6(2015课标全国)When I was a child,I hoped to live
27、 in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has al
28、ready become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.答案When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I thinkthought I would be happy there
29、.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in the countryside.There the air is clean orand the mountains are green.Unfortunately, onwith the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriouslyse
30、rious problem.The airsair we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. MuchMany rare animals are dying out.We must foundfind ways to protect yourour/the environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.解析考查动词的时态。由was、hoped和would be可知,此处叙述的是过去的事情,故用一般过去时。考查冠词。in the countryside“在农村/乡下”为固定表达。考查
31、并列连词。由本句句意可知,此处表示并列关系,故须用并列连词and。考查介词。表示“随着”用介词with。考查动词的语态。主语studies和动词show之间为主动关系,故须用主动语态。考查形容词。修饰名词须用形容词。考查名词的数。air为物质名词,是不可数名词。考查代词。many修饰可数名词复数,much修饰不可数名词。此处修饰复数名词animals,故用many。考查情态动词。情态动词后的动词须用原形。考查代词或冠词。此处为形容词性物主代词作定语,句子的主语为we,故须用our与之相呼应。也可用定冠词the来限定。Proofreading 7(2015课标全国)One day,little
32、Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw
33、 him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later,Tony saw parents.Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.答案One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parentparents.It was very crowded
34、.Tony saw a toy onin a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After lookslooking at the toy for some time,he turned around and found wherethat /where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begunbegan to cry.A woman saw him crying andtellingtold him to wait ou
35、tside athe shop.Five minutes later,Tony saw his parents.Mom said,“How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terribleterribly worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.解析由第五句和第八句可知Tony是和“parents”一起去了购物中心,故parent改为parents。Tony是“在商店橱窗(shop window)里”看到了玩具,故用in。此句为so.that.句型,so用来修饰muc
36、h,very为多余词,故去掉。此句中After为介词,其后应用动名词作宾语,故looks改为looking。考查宾语从句。此处宾语从句中不缺成分且意思完整,故用that引导(that也可以省略)。考查时态。and连接两个并列谓语,时态应一致。begin的过去式应为began。此处and连接的是两个并列的谓语动词,前文用的是saw,故telling改为told。考查冠词。此处提到的shop与上文提到的是同一个,故用定冠词the。此处提到的父母是主人公Tony的父母,故加上代词his。形容词worried应用副词修饰,故terrible改为terribly。Proofreading 8(2015四
37、川)Hi,Janice,Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time,I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It
38、s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity!In fact,I dont like to go anymore,so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.How do you think I should do?If you are me,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace答案Hi,
39、Janice,Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want to share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I telltold you last time,I made three new friendfriends here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time singsinging in
40、 karaoke bars.Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me manymuch.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity!In fact,I dont like to go anymore,sobut Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.HowWhat do you think I should do?If you arewere me,would you talk to himthem?Please help with me
41、 and give me some advice.Grace解析want to do为固定搭配,故在want后加to。根据时间状语last time可知,本句时态应为一般过去时,故将tell改为told。句中three表示复数概念,后面的名词应为复数形式,故将friend改为friends。spend some time (in) doing sth.为固定搭配,故将sing改为singing。much在此处为代词,表示花的钱,故将many改为much。根据“我不想再去了”和“我害怕失去他们的友谊”可知,此处应为转折关系,故将so改为but。在此句中,特殊疑问词充当第二个do的宾语,故将How
42、改为What。条件从句与现在事实相反,谓语动词使用虚拟语气,故将are改为were。根据上文可知,这里指作者的三个新朋友,此处代词指代错误,故将him改为them。help为及物动词,与me构成动宾结构,因此,with在此处多余,故去掉with。Proofreading 9(2015浙江)My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the
43、 left-hand side of the class,I could easy see the football field.In the mornings,it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance,I could not enjoy the view o
44、f snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom,I will never forget it.答案My old classro
45、om was interesting because three sidesides of the classroom were made fromof glass.I enjoyed sitsitting close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand side of the class,I could easyeasily see the football field.In the mornings,it was full of students exercising.The view from the back
46、of the classroom iswas also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around themit.Farther in the distance,I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in a hurry in the morning.The
47、 position of the classroom with its view made me feltfeel like I was dreaming.IfAlthough/Though I was only a child when I studied in that classroom,I will never forget it.解析side是可数名词,前面有three修饰,side要改为sides。be made from由制成,看不出原材料;be made of由制成/组成,看得出原材料,所以from要改为of。enjoy 后加动名词形式,所以sit要改为sitting。修饰动词
48、see应用副词,所以easy改为easily。时态误用。全文用的都是过去时,所以要把is改为was。代词误用。这里指代的是park,所以要把them改为it。根据上下文可知这里表肯定,所以把not删掉。固定短语 in a hurry仓促;匆忙。make sb.do sth.使某人做某事,所以felt要改为feel。句意:虽然我在那个教室学习时还是个孩子,但是我永远都忘不了它。根据句意可知要把If改为Although或Though。Proofreading 10(2014课标全国)Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,m
49、y sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our
50、neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!答案Nearly five years beforeago,and with the help byof our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(
51、圣女果)in our back garden.Since thenfor all these yearyearswehadhave been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As a result,the plants are growing somewhereeverywhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and tastetasty.There are so muchmany that we often share them with our neighbors.Altho
52、ugh we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but/butyet we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfullywonderful tomatoes at no cost!解析此处讲述的是过去发生的事情,和一般过去时连用的应是ago,before常和完成时连用。with the help of.在的帮助下,为固定短语。句中year是可数名词,前面的these应修饰复数形式的名词。时间状
53、语since then 通常和现在完成时连用,而不是过去完成时。as a result 结果,为固定短语。根据句意可知此处表示“圣女果到处生长”,所以用everywhere。本句中small,juicy和tasty是并列的表语,所以要用形容词。根据前面的be动词are和后面的them可知应是代替可数名词复数的many。引导让步状语从句的although不能和连词but连用,但是可以和副词yet连用。所以可以删掉but,也可以把but改为yet。修饰名词时应用形容词。Proofreading 11(2014课标全国)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and
54、ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a
55、 big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.答案My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m.and end
56、s at 3:30 p.m.TheyThere are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didntdont need to do so manymuch homework.Therefore,we have more time withfor after-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hourhours and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school
57、 looklooks like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,or satsit by the lake listening to music.The teachers here are kind andhelpfullyhelpful.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.解析表示“上午有三节课,下午有两节课”应
58、使用there be句型。全文时态是以一般现在时为主,故应将didnt改为dont。homework是不可数名词,故应用much修饰。表示时间、金钱、空间等足够/足以(用于)时,应使用介词for。“一个半小时”要说one and a half hours。主语My dream school(我梦想中的学校)是单数,谓语动词也应使用第三人称单数形式。all kinds of(各种各样的)后直接加可数名词复数或不可数名词,不用再加冠词。We can lie.,or (can) sit.listen是不及物动词,接宾语时要加介词to。and连接两个形容词作表语,故应将副词helpfully改为形容词
59、helpful。Proofreading 12(2014浙江)I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long,a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carria
60、ge began searching the ticket,which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers thei
61、r help.If we could show concern to others on need,the world would be a better place to live in.答案I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noisenoisy and filled with people.Before long,a train inspector comescame to check our tickets.A passenger realized he
62、 couldnt find his ticket butand became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching forthe ticket,which was eventually found under a seat several rows from hisits/the owner.The person who found athe ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previouspreviously
63、 spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangersstranger their help.If we could show concern to othersonin need,the world would be a better place to live in.解析此处指过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。此处作表语,应该是形容词。此处是过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。此处是顺承关系。搜寻某个东西应该用search for。此处指票的主人。此处特指在找
64、的那张票。此处应该用副词形式。此处指的是票的主人,只有一个人,所以用单数。此处是固定词组in need。Proofreading 13(2014辽宁)Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors,were hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word,your dogCleo.Weve called several time about Cleos early morning barking.It is difficult
65、to understanding why she barks every minute shes outside.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Beside,Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.This morning she starts barking even before 5 oclock.That is too much for us,considering how cl
66、osely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill,but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose答案Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors,were hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word,your dogCl
67、eo.Weve called several timetimes about Cleos early morning barking.It is difficult to understandingunderstand why she barks every minute shes outside.The early morning barking havehas been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.BesideBesides,Cleo tends to bark aan average of six ho
68、urs a day.This morning she startsstarted barking even before 5 oclock.That is too much for us,considering how closelyclose the houses are.We appreciate ouryour apologies and goodwill,but we hope that you can figure outa good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose解析bother sb.打扰某人。考查名词复数。s
69、everal times好几次。根据its difficult to do sth.句型可知。考查主谓一致。the early morning barking为单数,所以谓语动词也应为单数形式。此处应为副词besides(此外)而不是介词beside(在旁边)。考查冠词。average为以元音音素开头的单词,所以应用冠词an。考查时态。因为是今天早晨发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。考查形容词。形容词close作表语。考查物主代词。根据动词短语figure out(想出)可知答案。Proofreading 14(2014四川)Hello,boys and girls!Today,I am goin
70、g to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off.If you hear the alarm,stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and classmate.Dont panic or get out of line,and trying to remain quiet and calmly.Soon the firefighters will come and put ou
71、t a fire.If its a false alarm and there is no fire,your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt,tell your teacher immediately.答案Hello,boys and girls! Today,I am going to talk withabout what you should do when a fire alarm gogoes off.If you hear
72、the alarm,stand in line at the door and wait for your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher andclassmateclassmates.Dont panic or get out of line,and tryingtry to remain quiet and calmlycalm.Soon the firefighters will come and put out athe fire.If its a false alarm and there is no fi
73、re,your teacher will lead usyou back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing andor hurt,tell your teacher immediately.解析talk with sb.和某人交谈;talk about sth.谈论某事。主语是a fire alarm,谓语动词要用单数形式。wait for sb.to do sth.等待某人做某事。classmate是可数名词,根据语境可知不止有一个同学,所以要用复数形式。and连接的是并列的两个祈使句,前面是表示否定的祈使
74、句,后面应是肯定的祈使句,所以要用动词原形。此处作系动词remain的表语,所以应用形容词,和quiet并列。此处应该是特指上文提到的火灾。人称代词错误。前文用的是人称代词you,所以此处也应该是you。引导词使用重复,that已经引导宾语从句,所以when多余,而且不符合语境。此处应该是选择关系而不是顺承关系。Proofreading 15(2013课标)I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes
75、away.She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared
76、 my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.答案I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holdinghold me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passespassed away.She is just a distant memory for me now
77、. I remember my grandfather very muchwell/clearly.He was tall,with broad shouldershoulders and a beard that turned from black towardto/into gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himselfhim apart from others in our small town,and he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my clas
78、smates away duringwhen they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have neverever known.解析此处用used to表示“过去常常”,后面接动词原形。根据句中的I was only four可知,此处讲的是过去的事情,故用一般过去时。根据下文的描述可知,作者对自己的祖父记忆犹新。所以把much改为well/clearly。shoulder是可数名词,人有双肩,所以用复数形式。turn from A to/into B表示“由一种状态转为另一
79、种状态”。此处指深沉的声音使他和其他人不同。he was strong and powerful和He had a deep voice是并列关系。in fact是固定短语,表示“事实上”。during是介词,不能引导状语从句,when是连词,可以引导状语从句,从句中的动词既可以是短暂性动词也可以是延续性动词。此处需要表示时间的连词,所以用when。此处表示他是我曾经认识的最温和的人。由此可知用ever。Proofreading 16(2013课标)The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to
80、 have started in the early 1800s.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,that might not be served until 8 oclock at night.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting,it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器)industry.Tea in China was traditionally
81、 drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.答案The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800s.HaveH
82、aving tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,thatwhich might not be served until 8 oclock at night.This custom soon becomesbecame another meal of the day.InterestingInterestingly,it had a connection bywith/to the British porcelain(瓷器) industry.Tea in China was tradition
83、ally drankdrunk from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good cupcups with handles to suit British habits.This made for the growgrowth in the porcelain industry.解析read是一个及物动词,后面可直接接宾语,不需要加介词。Im reading是定语从句,修饰先行词the book。此处应该用动名词短语充当句子的主语,动词原形不能作主语。that不能
84、引导非限制性定语从句。此处叙述的是过去的事情,时态用一般过去时。句意:这一习俗很快成为了一天中的另一顿饭。此处修饰后面整个句子,故应该用副词形式。此处为固定搭配have a connection with/to与有关。此处表被动,应该用drink的过去分词drunk。cup是可数名词,与第六句中的cups without handles一样要用其复数形式。由该词前的定冠词the可知此处需用其名词形式growth。Proofreading 17(2013浙江)Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from
85、our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate,my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad,now I have to share a room with my younger s
86、ister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring,but I know Ill never fall sleep.Good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary答案Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you w
87、ant to know why we movemoved last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find otheranother one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmateclassmates,my school orand just everything else I love in the world.To make matters badworse,now I have to share a room with my y
88、ounger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is the/my first day of school.I am awfully tiringtired,but I know Ill never fall sleepasleep.Good night and remember,you,dear diary,isare my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary解析表示距离时,如果前面已经有具体的数词,就不用副词far。有时间状语last week,故该句陈述的是过去的事情。此处指另一份
89、工作。此处指我的同学们,应该是复数形式。此处my classmates,my school和everything else I love in the world是并列关系,而非选择关系,故用and。此处意思是“更糟糕的是”,所用的固定表达应该是to make matters worse。此处需要加上限定词,特指上学的第一天。此处指人很累,应该使用tired。fall asleep入睡。此处主语是you,故用are。Proofreading 18(2013辽宁)Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much ti
90、me with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work have made him very ill.“He has ruined his healthy.We are worried about him.”That is which other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her roo
91、m I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picture we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.答案Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much timewithon his work.With litt
92、le sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work havehas made him very ill.“He has ruined his healthyhealth.We are worried about him.” That is whichwhat other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid a visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside herhis room I sto
93、pped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I stepstepped into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picturepictures we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as manymuch as we missed him.解析spend.on sth.(在某事上花费)是固定搭配。本句是一个简单句,with little sleep and hardly any break作状语,所以要去
94、掉并列连词so。句子的主语hard work是第三人称单数形式,所以have要改为has。此处该用名词health(健康)。healthy是形容词(健康的)。say后面少宾语,而且又没有范围,所以应该是what。pay a visit to拜访,看望,是固定短语。人称代词的逻辑错误。前文是Mr.Johnson,所以此处应该是“他的”而不是“她的”。时态误用。此处应该用一般过去时态。picture为可数名词,此处表示“一些照片”,故要用其复数形式。此处修饰动词miss,所以应该用副词much。Proofreading 19(2013四川)Today we had a chemistry test
95、.I found the test difficulty,but I tried hardly to do it.Suddenly Mary,my best friend,asking me to let her to copy my answers.After think for some time,I let her copy my answers.But after the test,all of us were called to the teachers office.The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the t
96、ests.We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didnt cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why does she punish me?答案Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test difficultydifficult,but I tried hardlyhard to do it.Suddenly Mary,my best friend,askingasked
97、me to let her to copy my answers.After thinkthinking for some time,I let her copy my answers.But after the test,allboth of us were called to the teachers office.The teacher was angry because we had the same answers in the teststest.We were warned not to cheat again soor she would need to see our par
98、ents.I was very upset.I didnt cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why doesdid she punish me?解析此处意为:我发现这次测试很难。本处需用形容词作宾补,以说明the test的特征。hardly副词,几乎不;hard副词,努力地。本处需用asked作谓语,而asking为非谓语动词,不能作谓语。let后用不定式作宾补时,需省略不定式符号to。after为介词,其后需用动名词作宾语。本句用both指I与Mary。the same为固定用法。本句指的是这一次测试,不必用复数形式。老师警告我们下次不能再作弊,否则她就
99、要见家长。or否则。本句说的是过去的事情,需用一般过去时态。Proofreading 20(2013陕西)My grandfather and I enjoy fishing. One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake.We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.Before waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to
100、 get impatiently.I wanted to give up,and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught.Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.答案My g
101、randfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning wegowent fishing at a lake.We took oursour fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.BeforeAfter waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to getimpatientlyimpatient.I wanted to give up,an
102、dbut my grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there werewas a sudden pull at the pole anda fish was caught.Within the next few minuteminutes,my grandfather also caught a fish. FeltFeeling hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.解析根据One Sunday morning可
103、判定用一般过去时。充当定语修饰名词时必需用形容词性物主代词。前面是从句,此处是主句,不用连词。根据上下文判断,应是等了大约半小时后。此处get是系动词,后跟形容词作表语。根据上下文判断,此处应该表示转折。there be句型的主语是a sudden pull,故be动词用单数形式。此处指一条鱼,表泛指,故用a。在接下来的几分钟里,few修饰可数名词复数。现在分词作原因状语。Proofreading 21(2012课标)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time
104、 I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things did wrong,I got angry and broke it.For a while parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see which was happening.When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father
105、said,“Thats it.No more toys to you.”My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.My attitude changed from then on.答案I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and littleless aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was abou
106、t six,I destroyed each of my toytoys.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things didwent/didto wrong,I got angry and broke itthem.For a while my parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see whichwhat was happening.When I teartore apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,
107、“Thats it.No more toys tofor you.”My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I mustcould/might make my toys to last.My attitude changed from then on.解析根据more patient可知此处也应该用比较级。each of后应该接名词复数形式,表示“每一”。go为系动词,意为“变得”,且此处应该用过去时态;go前面加did的话表示强调。根据上文的toys可知此处为复数形式。根据句意可知此处指“我的父母”。see后为宾语从句,从句中缺少主语,故用what。根据上下文可知,此处应该为过去时态。表示“为某人买东西”,介词为for而不是to。句意:与此同时,我发现再耐心些,我也许就能使玩具持续久些。must意为“必须”,不符合句意。make为使役动词,不定式作宾补时应该省去to。
