1、 遂宁市高中2023届第一学期教学水平监测英 语 试 题本试卷分第卷（选择题)和第卷(非选择题)两部分。总分150分，考试时间120分钟。第 卷（选择题，满分100分）注意事项：1答题前，考生务必将自己的姓名、班级、考号用0.5毫米的黑色墨水签字笔填写在答题卡上。并检查条形码粘贴是否正确。21-60小题选出答案后，用2B铅笔填涂在答题卡对应题目标号的位置上，非选择题用0.5毫米黑色墨水签字笔书写在答题卡对应框内，超出答题区域书写的答案无效；在草稿纸、试题卷上答题无效。3考试结束后，将答题卡收回。第一部分：听力（共两节，满分30分）做题时，先将答案标在试卷上。录音内容结束后，你将有两分钟的时间将
2、试卷上的答案转涂到答题卡上。第一节（共5 小题；每小题1.5分，满分7.5分）听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项,并标在试卷的相应位置。听完每段对话后,你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。1. What are they talking about?A. Fruit.B. Food.C. Drink.2. Whats the weather like at the weekend?A. Fine. B. Sunny. C. Windy. 3. Whats the relationship between the t
3、wo speakers?A. Teacher and student. B. Mother and son. C. Renter and customer.4. How much does the woman have to pay if she wants to stay there for three nights?A. 50. B. 100. C. 150.5. Where does the conversation might take place?A. At the womans home. B. At the mans home. C. At the womans office.第
4、二节（共15小题；每小题1.5分，满分22.5分）听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。听第6段材料，回答第6、7题。6. What are the two speakers talking about?A. Weather. B. Beijing. C. Trees.7. Where are they now?A. At school. B. At home. C. At hotel.听第7段材料
5、，回答第8、9题。8. Whats the relationship between the two speakers?A. Friends. B. Doctor and patient. C. Salesman and boss.9. Where will they go?A. Home. B. Hospital. C. School. 听第8段材料，回答第10至12题。10. What is the woman doing now?A. She is learning playing the pipa. B. She is working as a music teacher.C. She
6、 is learning a new English song.11. Why does the woman practise everyday English?A. Because she wants to sing some English songs.B. Because she has some difficulty in explaining Chinese things to her foreign friends.C. Because she wants to teach the man a new English song.12. What do we know about t
7、he man?A. He knows well about the pipa. B. He knows nothing about the pipa.C. He also likes to practice English every day.听第9段材料，回答第13至16题。13. Why didnt the woman enjoy herself?A. She couldnt enter the park. B. She couldnt see the fireworks clearly.C. She couldnt find her friends.14. When did the wo
8、man get to the park?A. At 8:00 p.m. B. At 8:10 p.m. C. At 7:50 p.m.15. How did the man manage to get a good view?A. He and his friends got there early.B. He and his friends climbed up a hill.C. He and his friends had a picnic together.16. What did the man do for going home?A. He got on a bus as soon
9、 as he could.B. He pushed his way home at midnight.C. He waited for a while and took an extra bus. 听第10段材料，回答第17至20题。17. Who writes the letter?A. An Editor. B. A student. C. A teacher.18. What do 45% of the students think about taking physical exercise every day?A. Taking physical exercise can do ha
10、rm to us. B. Taking physical exercise can benefit to us.C. Taking physical exercise can make us study better.19. How many students support taking physical exercise every day?A. No one of the students. B. Minority of the students. C. Majority of the students. 20. Whats the authors opinion of taking p
11、hysical exercise?A. Taking proper physical exercise. B. Taking much physical exercise.C. Never take physical exercise. 第二部分 阅读理解(共两节，满分40分)第一节（共15小题，每小题2分，满分30分）阅读下列短文，从每篇短文后所给各题的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。 AA Couch PotatoForty-three-year-old Bob Black from Birmingham is sitting on his sofa a
12、nd telling me about his perfect day. When I wake up I dont get up immediately. I turn on the television and watch the childrens programmes and old movies until about half-past ten. Then I get up, go downstairs and switch on the TV in the living room. For lunch, I have biscuits and a glass of milk, a
13、nd I watch the news. In the afternoon, I often watch another old film theyre showing some good ones at the moment. In the evenings, I often watch TV series or sport and the news again. I like the main news at six oclock. At half past nine, if there is a good play on BBC 2, I switch over and watch it
14、. Then at night, I watch more films and I usually switch off the TV at about two oclock. I never watch TV all night.I watch TV for sixteen or seventeen hours a day. I also do some exercise every day. I take Tina, the dog, for a walk every afternoon. I dont go far, of course. I walk to the wall outsi
15、de my house. I always take my portable TV and I sit on the stone wall while the dog walks round in a circle.Of course, I couldnt live this lifestyle without a good wife. Shes not here now because shes working, but she always makes my meals. We havent got much money, you know, but were happy. Sit dow
16、n and watch TV. Heres the remote control. Youve got the world at your feet. And in your hand. Great! 21. Which of the following statements can best explain the title “a couch potato” ?A. Having a biscuit and a glass of milk for lunch.B. Doing some exercise everyday.C. Taking the dog for a walk every
17、 afternoon.D. Watching TV for sixteen or seventeen hours a day.22. When walking the dog, what does Bob Black always take?A. A cellphone. B. His portable TV. C. Some books. D. Plastic bags.23. What can we know about Bob Black from this passage?A. He loves his wife pretty much.B. He often quarrels wit
18、h his wife.C. He likes his lifestyle.D. He is a pet lover.BBe a good touristTourism can be both good or bad. Yes, it brings in money for the local economy and creates lots of jobs for locals, but it may also bring some problems.One growing problem is tourists who want to prove that they have visited
19、 someplace. Tourists have used paint, rocks or even keys to write on the Luxor Temple in Egypt, the Colosseum in Rome, Stonehenge in the UK, memorial stones at the bottom of Qomolangma, and many, many other places. Thousands of tourists sites are being destroyed by tourists who “love them to death”.
20、 I have three words for people like this: please stop it. If you want to leave a mark on the world, do it by changing someones life with kindness and love. Pass kindness along to future generations, not destruction. Another big problem in some places has been tourists disturbing(打扰) the local people
21、 and life. Some tourists wander around and take pictures of local people without asking for their permission. For example, Chiang Mai University in Thailand and Yonsei University in South Korea have great numbers of tourists visiting their campuses and walking through their libraries and other publi
22、c areas, taking pictures of students and disturbing their studies. I have three words for tourists like this: please be considerate. Have fun in a way that does not disturb others.The number of problems from tourists is endless: walking in large groups without considering others who need to walk by,
23、 crossing roads without observing local traffic laws, and many more. The only way to solve the issue of the terrible tourist is to make sure that you are not one! Be the best, kindest, most polite tourist possible. Remember, whenever you step outside your countrys borders, you are representing(代表) y
24、our country to the rest of the world. 24. What does “them” in the second paragraph refer to ? A. Memorial stones. B. Jobs for locals. C. Tourist spots. D. Marks left by tourists.25. What kind of mark does the writer suggest that tourists should take ?A. Kind behaviour that can change someones life.B
25、. Love and destruction that will have an effect on future generations.C. A lot of money brought by tourism.D. Only beautiful pictures taken by tourists.26. What does the writer intend to tell us by the third paragraph?A. Tourists can wander around and take pictures anywhere.B. Tourists should try no
26、t to cause trouble for local people and life.C. For all universities, admission should be free and everybody iswelcome.D. More universitycampusesshouldbeopentothepublic.27. According to the writer, what is the only way to solve the problem of the terrible tourist ?A. Providing better service. B. Dev
27、eloping local economy. C. Being a polite tourist. D. Making friends during traveling.CAnti-smokingadcampaign Every year millions people around the world die because of smoking. Every pocket of contains poisonous chemicals that can lead to lung cancer and heart disease. This costs countries a lot of
28、money and causes great damage to the welfare of the people. There are huge numbers of smokers in Asia. This is why anti-smoking is chosen as the subject of our ad campaign.The target audience is high-school teenagers. Our main aim is to discourage young people from smoking. Our research shows that h
29、ealth and future is what young people care about. We will educate them about the bad physical effects of smoking and how smoking affects those people around them. We will explain all the advantages of not smoking, such as saving money which can then be spent on other things. Our interviews also indi
30、cate that young people are concerned about what is cool and what their friends like. We will show how smoking is not cool or attractive, because it makes people smell terrible, and gives them bad teeth, skin and fingernails. If we can convince young people not to start, they might then urge their pa
31、rents and other people to give up smoking, too. Our campaign will start on 31 May, World No Tobacco Day. We will put large posters around the school with our logo and slogan. Our website will provide students with more information about smoking. We will also publish an article in the school magazine
32、 informing students about the dangers of smoking, and we will organize an essay competition as well. Our slogan: Smoking kills! Many people think that smoking is cool or enjoyable, but they are not fully aware of the damage that it does to their health. This is why we choose this picture as our logo
33、. We want to shock people into realizing that many smokers die all too soon from illnesses and diseases related to smoking.28.Whatisoneofthereasonsforanti-smokingaccordingtoparagraphone？A.Smokingwillnotcauselungcancerdeathsandotherrelateddisease.B.Websitewillprovidestudentswithinformationaboutsmokin
34、g.C.Thewelfareofpeoplemaybepositivelyaffected.D.ThereisalargenumberofsmokersinAsia.29. What is the main aim of the anti-smoking campaign？A. To prevent young people from smoking.B. To informcontinuous improvement efforts by school. C. To attractwidespread mediaattentionaround the world.D. To educatep
35、eopleaboutthebadphysicaleffectsofsmoking.30. On which day will the campaign start？A. On 31 May. B. On 30 May. C. On 30 March. D. On 31 March.31. Why do they choose the pictureSmoking kills as their logo？A. Because theyhave organizedacompetitionfor this logo.B. Because manypeoplethinksmokingcoolorenj
36、oyable.C. Because people have realized the damagesmoking does totheir health.D. Because people are fully unaware of harm smoking causes to peoples health.DAvoiding a handshake may have been considered impolitea couple of years ago, but it is now getting more and more common, especially because of th
37、e outbreak of the novel Coronavirus( COVID-19) .Health officials have expressed the importance of completely washing our hands and maintaining proper hand hygiene(卫生). As a result, people around the world are creating alternatives for handshakes such asfist bumps(碰，撞）and “elbow-bumps.”Lets take a lo
38、ok at some of the common greetings that are used around the world in place of the famous handshake and more of the alternatives people are using instead of shaking each others hands.If you have ever traveled to Asian countries like China, India, or Cambodia, you may notice that it is common to see p
39、eople bowing to greet each other.Bowingis a traditional sign of respect in many Asian cultures and has been a custom for centuries.Meanwhile, in parts of Europe like France, Italy, and Spain; countries in Latin/South America like Mexico, Peru, and Brazil, theair kissis more common. Various rules reg
40、arding gender, relationship, and form also exist within these different countries. Officials in countries including France are recommending people avoid direct kisses.Some other unique greetings include sniffing(嗅，闻) one anothers faces in native cultures in the island nations of Greenland and Tuvalu
41、, sticking out ones tongue in Tibet (a region of China), and clapping ones hands in the African countries of Zimbabwe and Mozambique.With the spread of COVID-19, people are getting creative with the ways they greet each other. A trend that has gained advantage is the “Wuhan Shake,” a greeting where
42、two people gently bump each others feet with each foot.Additionally, people, including famous figures like Prince Harry, US Vice President Mike Pence, and celebrities and athletes, have been giving up the formal handshake for elbow bumps.Although officials have not clearly issued warnings against sh
43、aking hands, many doctors and health specialists have praised the handshake alternatives as a way to continue maintaining proper hygiene.32. How do people commonly greet each other in India according to this passage ?A. By hugging each other. B. By formally shaking hands.C. By bowing to greet each o
44、ther. D. By touching noses.33. What is the unique greeting in Tibet ?A. Sniffing one another s faces. B. Sticking out ones tongue.C. Bowing with ones hands. D. Clapping ones hands.34. What is the “Wuhan Shake” ?A. It is a greeting of tapping each other s feet.B. It is a greeting in which people do e
45、lbow bumps.C. It is a greeting where social isolation happens.D. It is a greeting where air kisses are recommended.35. What can be the best title for the text ?A. The Impact Of COVID-19 On LivingB. Good News On COVID-19 VaccinesC. Formal Greeting Ways around the worldD. No Handshake? No Problem!第二节（
46、共5小题，每小题2分，满分10分）根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项，选项中有两项为多余选项。Albert Einstein said, “If you want to live a happy life, tie it to a goal.” I agree. Goals are important in many ways. Setting goals gives you a focus in life. By setting goals now, you are deciding what you want to achieve in the future. 36
47、37 Dont push yourself to achieve more than what is possible. Instead, you should set goals based on your abilities and skills. 38 When you do so, they will seem easier to reach. You will be proud of yourself when you realize each small goal. This will also give you the encouragement to achieve your
48、long-term goal. 39 It is a good idea to put your goals where you can see them. You can keep the list on your bedside table. Or you can stick it on your bedroom wall. This will remind you of what you are working for and keep you focused.After you set a goal, it is important to stick to it and work ha
49、rd towards it. You may find achieving goals difficult. But you should not give up. 40 You will succeed in the end.A. Setting goals also helps you develop good habits.B. The tips below may help you.C. Write your goals on paper.D. Set goals that can be achieved.E. Instead, stay positive and confident.
50、 F. Break big goals into small ones. G. A goal is a dream that needs action. 第三部分 英语知识运用 (共两节，满分45分)第一节 （共20小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分）阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。How far would you go to help a friend? Jeremy Savage, aged 17, and Ian Marshall, aged 16, both from Canada, had their friendship te
51、sted to the limit on a recent trip to the Rocky Mountains with their parents.On Saturday morning, the two boys decided to 41 Cathedral Mountain by themselves while their parents relaxed at the 42 . After three hours, they reached the 43 and enjoyed the beautiful view from the mountaintop. 44 , troub
52、le began when they started the climb down. On one very dangerous part of the mountain, Ian 45 three metres off the side of the path. Jeremy climbed down to where Ian was and found him badly injured and not able to 46 . Jeremy had to decide what to do. He needed help but he did not want to leave his
53、friend. He 47 the dirt and blood from Ians face and hands, and then tried to help Ian stand up, but Ians right leg was hurting too much. They had to 48 and hope that help would come.Meanwhile, as darkness started to fall, their parents back at the campsite became very 49 that the boys had not return
54、ed. They got in touch with park workers and began 50 for the boys. Soon more than 20 people were looking for them on Cathedral Mountain.While they waited for 51 , Jeremy gave Ian his food and water and let him lie on his jacket. As the evening grew 52 and the temperature dropped, Ian told Jeremy to
55、leave him and go back to their parents but Jeremy 53 did not leave. He thought it was too dangerous for Ian to be 54 on such a cold, windy night. Jeremy used his jacket and an extra shirt to keep Ian 55 and they rested together through the night.At sunrise, Jeremy 56 that the only way to help his fr
56、iend was to carry him down the mountain. So, they started the long climb back to the campsite. Sometimes Jeremy carried Ian on his back. Sometimes he carried him in his arms. 57 , after four long and tiring hours, they came 58 their relieved parents, who were still looking for them on the mountain.
57、“I will always remember what Jeremy did for me,” said Ian 59 . “He saved my life. That is the greatest thing that a person can do for his 60 .”41. A. jumpB. climbC. travelD. walk42. A. campsiteB. hotelC. restroomD. mountain43. A. edgeB. bottomC. topD. side44. A. HoweverB. ThereforeC. OftenD. Usually
58、45. A. lostB. brokeC. wentD. fell46. A. turnB. runC. moveD. keep47. A. washedB. cleanedC. repairedD. moved48. A. waitB. sitC. leaveD. try49. A. scaredB. worriedC. disappointedD. amazed50. A. workingB. settingC. enteringD. searching51. A. helpB. adviceC. informationD. service52. A. colderB. shorterC.
59、 darkerD. longer53. A. alwaysB. alsoC. stillD. even54.A. homelessB. uselessC. caringD. alone55. A. hotB. warmC. coolD. bright56. A. wonderedB. wantedC. askedD. decided57. A. QuicklyB. FinallyC. ShortlyD. Immediately58. A. acrossB. alongC. awayD. after59. A.againB. recentlyC. afterwardsD. simply60. A
60、. familyB. memberC. manD. friend第 卷（非选择题，共50分）注意事项：1请用蓝黑钢笔或圆珠笔在第卷答题卡上作答，不能答在此试卷上。2试卷中横线及框内注有“”的地方，是需要你在第卷答题卡上作答。第三部分 英语知识运用（共两节，满分45分）第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）阅读下面短文，按照句子结构的语法性和上下文连贯的要求，在空格处填入一个适当的词或使用括号中词语的正确形式填空，并将答案填写在答题卡标号为6170的相应位置上。As the new school year 61 (begin), Jim was quite happy. But the
61、 writing assignment troubled him because the English teacher, Mrs Peabody, asked the students 62 (write) something related to summer vacation. That night he stared 63 a blank sheet of paper for quite a long time. He didnt think his summer vacation was fun. So, he made up a science fiction story abou
62、t life on a 64 (distance) planet. He also made sure that he used proper spelling and grammar as Mrs Peabody required. Next day after 65 (hand) in the story, Jim stayed 66 (wake) that night. He feared that he had ignored Mrs Peabodys requirement. He was worried that his writing would disappoint Mrs P
63、eabody as most students might write 67 (essay) about their summer vacation. However, it turned out that Jim was the only student 68 got an A. Mrs Peabody thought he had been 69 (create). What 70 great surprise !61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间
64、交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 A woman which has recently had plastic surgery on her face now regrets the decision. The surgery takes place more than a m
65、onth ago, but Ella Edwards still suffers from daily pain. This is stopping him from returning to a normal life. She has been to several hospitals and all the doctor say that the pain is unlikely stop any time soon. She may need to take painkillers for a long time. In an addition, Miss Edwards says t
66、he surgery makes her look unnaturally and that she is unable to make certain facial expressions. Miss Edwards is unhappy with the results of the surgery. “I wanted to become more beautiful, and it hasnt turned out well at all. I really regret have the surgery,” she said. “Im very anxious for it.” 第二
67、节 书面表达（满分25分）假定你是高一学生李华，请你结合阅读理解第一节A篇文中Bob Black的生活方式，给他写一封信，谈谈你的一些看法，内容包括：1. 对Bob Black的生活方式的看法：2. 推荐健康生活方式的养成途径（饮食、锻炼、作息三方面）；3. 你对他生活方式转变的期盼。参考词汇：recommend（推荐）schedule（日程安排）routine（常规）注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 写作过程中不能直接引用阅读理解A篇中的语句;3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Mr. Black, This is Li Hua, a senior one student from Chi
68、na. _Yours,遂宁市高中2023届第一学期教学水平监测英语试题参考答案第 I 卷第一部分：听力（共两节，满分30分）15 BCCCB 610 AAABA 1115 BBBCA 1620 CBACA第二部分：阅读理解（共两节，满分40分）21-25 DBCCA 26-30 BCDAA 31-35 DCBAD 36-40 BDFCE第三部分：英语知识运用（共两节，满分45分）41-45 BACAD 46-50 CBABD 51-55 ACCDB 56-60 DBACD第 II 卷第三部分 英语知识运用（共两节，满分45分）第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）61. began
69、62. to write 63. at 64. distant 65. handing 66. awake 67. essays 68. who/that 69. creative 70. a第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）A woman which has recently had plastic surgery on her face now regrets the decision. The who/thatsurgery takes place more than a month ago, but Ella Edwards st
70、ill suffers from daily pain. This is tookstopping him from returning to a normal life. She has been to several hospitals and all the doctor her doctorssay that the pain is unlikely stop any time soon. She may need to take painkillers for a long time. toIn an addition, Miss Edwards says the surgery m
71、akes her look unnaturally and that she is unable to unnaturalmake certain facial expressions. Miss Edwards is unhappy with the results of the surgery. “I wanted to become more beautiful, and it hasnt turned out well at all. I really regret have the surgery,” she said. “Im very anxious for it.” but h
72、aving about 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）Mr. Black, This is Li Hua, a senior one student from China. I read about one essay about your lifestyle. Im afraid I dont totally agree with how you are spending your days. In my view, you can erase it by making a change.First, a health diet is based on variety and balance
73、. So more vegetables and little alcohol will help your bodies run well. Second, daily exercise can strengthen and better body condition. You can perform several ball exercises for fitness.In addition, scientists say good sleep can ease the work pressure and improve peoples health. So in order to kee
74、p healthy, youd better wake up early and go to bed early. Dont stay up late. How to make a change and how to handle it is crucial to you. I hope you will make a difference by being yourself.Yours Li Hua七、书面表达评分细则1. 关于要点一:要有表达你对Bob Black生活方式看法的关键词或者相关意思表达：am not favor of, disagree with等等。2. 关于要点二:要有介
75、绍饮食、锻炼、作息的关键词或者相关意思表达：diet, food, eating habit, exercise, routine, daily schedule ,sleep, wake up, go to bed等等3. 关于要点三:因为是推荐健康生活养成途径，所以介绍三个方面养成健康生活方式的内容一定要比较具体, 只写have healthy food, take exercise, set daily schedule三种“干点子”的不算具体内容的表达, 即认定该点缺失。至少要对到三个“干点子”进具体例证才能算内容表达完整。如果没有结合阅读理解A篇中关于这方面的论述（下文划线部分）表达
76、建议的，原则上只能取该档低线。A Couch PotatoForty-three-year-old Bob Black from Birmingham is sitting on his sofa and telling me about his perfect day. When I wake up I dont get up immediately. I turn on the television and watch the childrens programmes and old movies until about half-past ten. Then I get up, go d
77、ownstairs and switch on the TV in the living room. For lunch, I have biscuits and a glass of milk, and I watch the news. In the afternoon, I often watch another old film theyre showing some good ones at the moment. In the evenings, I often watch TV series or sport and the news again. I like the main
78、 news at six oclock. At half past nine, if there is a good play on BBC 2, I switch over and watch it. Then at night, I watch more films and I usually switch off the TV at about two oclock. I never watch TV all night.I watch TV for sixteen or seventeen hours a day. I also do some exercise every day.
79、I take Tina, the dog, for a walk every afternoon. I dont go far, of course. I walk to the wall outside my house. I always take my portable TV and I sit on the stone wall while the dog walks round in a circle.Of course, I couldnt live this lifestyle without a good wife. Shes not here now because shes
80、 working, but she always makes my meals. We havent got much money, you know, but were happy. Sit down and watch TV. Heres the remote control. Youve got the world at your feet. And in your hand. Great! 4. 关于要点四:表达你对他生活方式转变的期盼，语气要委婉。要有关键词：look forward to, hope, wish等等。（二）评分细则 整体评分原则A. 内容和要点的完整性;B. 语言质
81、量, 包括语篇的连贯性、用词的准确性、语法的正确性、句法的多样性；C. 通常根据内容的完整性和语言质量两个方面的要求来衡量给分。归档与打分 五档(21-25分)1) 表达出所有内容要点, 表述充分, 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 2) 很好的语言能力, 意义表达准确流畅, 词汇丰富, 句法多样, 语言地道。有个别小的语言错误, 但不影响表达。 3) 语篇结构完整。有效地使用了衔接手段, 全文连贯。 四档(16-20分) 1)表达出所有内容要点, 表述较为完整充分, 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 2) 较好的语言能力, 意义基本表达准确流畅, 用词和句法有一定的变化。有个别小的语言错误, 但不影响表
82、达。 3) 语篇结构基本完整。能较好地使用了衔接手段, 全文连贯。 三档(11-15分) 1)基本表达出内容要点, 表述基本清楚, 基本达到了预期的写作目的。 2) 语言能力一般, 句法结构单一, 词汇使用有限。语言错误较多, 在一定程度上影响了意义表达, 但要点关键意义能表达出来。 3) 语篇不够连贯。意义衔接有明显的问题。 4)如果考生表达出所有要点, 且有所阐述, 有一些语法和语义正确的语句, 原则上不降入第二档。 二档(6-10分) 1)部分表达出语言要点, 表述不清楚、不充分。未达到预期表达以获得交际的目的。 2)语言能力较差, 语言错误很多, 严重影响了意义表达, 仅少许句子能比较
83、意义。 3)语篇结构混乱, 意义衔接有比较严重的错误。 一档 (0-5分) 要求虽然努力完成写作任务, 但语言能力极差, 基本无完整句子, 仅有一些单词与实体的要求相关。 其他评分重要说明1. 考生的语法或者词汇搭配出错, 属于语言错误, 但其要点表达基本清楚,也要认定为要点。2. 如果学生写出了健康生活方式的细节, 但是没有表达出food，diet, exercise等之类关键词, 本点算全点, 但是只能取该档低线。3. 如果学生写出了健康方式的建议，但没有结合阅读文章内容提出建议，本点算全点，但原则上只能取该档低线。4. 要点齐全, 句子表达清楚, 但全文只有三句或者四句干点子, 无相关内容支撑或者具体阐述, 降入第二档再根据情况打分。5. 缺一个要点, 但语言较差或只有三个要点, 但语言比较出色, 最高可以打到17分。6. 写作内容如果和试题无关, 或者空白卷, 零分。
