1、Unit 5 Meeting your ancestorsSection Guided Writing描写考古发现写 作 技 法 指 导 文体指导 1概念:描写考古发现的文章为说明文。2分类:(1)说明事物的特征、外表形状、结构及用途的说明文。(2)介绍考古发现的时间、地点及形成历史年代的说明文。3内容安排:介绍考古发现的时间、地点及形成的历史年代,重点描述考古发现的主要特点,考古发现的意义。4语言特征:(1)简明扼要地描述考古发现的时间、地点及形成的历史年代。(2)重点详细地描述考古发现的主要特点及考古发现的意义。5注意事项:将考古发现的特点描述之后,还要介绍考古发现的时间、地点及其形成的历
2、史年代。亮点句式 1Located/Lying in the west of the city,it gives a vivid picture of the process of how paper was made during the Song and Ming Dynasties.2 The discovery presents the skilful technique and vivid imagination of our ancestors to us,attracting much attention from every corner of the world.3 Peop
3、le believe that it is the earliest and largest ancient paper-making workshop site ever found in China.4It is believed to be the earliest and largest ancient paper-making workshop site ever found in China.5It enjoys a worldwide fame as a traditional Chinese cultural site.满 分 佳 作 构 建 写作任务 请根据以下提示,写一篇介
4、绍“大克鼎”的英语短文。1大克鼎 1890 年出土于陕西省扶风县,可追溯到西周后期,现收藏于上海博物馆。2.大克鼎由青铜铸造,高 93.1 厘米,重 201.5 千克。口沿(mouth rim)装饰有兽面纹(animal mask motif),腹部装饰有流畅的波曲纹,内壁刻有 290 个字。3大克鼎一直被认为是研究西周经济和文化的重要物品。注意:1.词数 80 左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:大克鼎 Da Keding;青铜 bronze;腹部 belly;内壁 inner wall;西周 the Western Zhou Dynasty;出土于 unearth;用于祭献的
5、sacrificial 审题谋篇 体裁说明文时态一般现在时和一般过去时 主题 介绍大克鼎人称第三人称 结构第一段:简单介绍大克鼎出土的时间、地点。第二段:详细介绍大克鼎的特点。第三段:概要总结大克鼎所反映出的文化意义。遣词造句.对接单元词汇 1追溯到 2厘米 3原始的,远古的 4假定 5意义,重要性 date back to/date fromcentimetreprimitiveassumesignificance.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子 1Da Keding,_,was unearthed in Fufeng County,Shaanxi Province in 1890.(用
6、which 引导非限制性定语从句)大克鼎 1890 年出土于陕西省扶风县,可追溯到西周后期。which dates back to/dates from the late WesternZhou Dynasty 2Da Keding bronze.It is 93.1 centimetres high and weighs 201.5 kilograms.大克鼎由青铜铸造,高 93.1 厘米,重 201.5 千克。3 In primitive times,Ding was used to represent/symbolize the social status and power of it
7、s owner _(用 not onlybut also 连接)在原始社会,鼎是社会地位和权力的象征,也用于烹饪和祭祀。but also usedis made ofnot onlyfor cooking and sacrificial ceremonies4Therefore,Da Keding is of great significance to the study of the economy and culture during the Western Zhou Dynasty.(it 用作形式主语)因此,大克鼎一直被认为对研究西周经济和文化很重要。5People one of th
8、e precious treasures to the study of Chinese history.(用现在完成进行时)人们一直认为它是研究中国历史的珍宝之一。have been regarding it asit is assumed that(二)句式升级 6用非谓语动词连接句 2 7用 as 引导非限制性定语从句改写句 3 Made of bronze,Da Keding is 93.1 centimetres high and weighs201.5 kilograms.As we all know,in primitive times,Ding was not only use
9、d torepresent/symbolize the social status and power of its owner but also usedfor cooking and sacrificial ceremonies.8它被认为是研究中国历史的珍宝之一。(用现在完成进行时)It is regarded as one of the precious treasures to the study of Chinese history.People have been regarding it as one of the precious treasuresto the study
10、of Chinese history.妙笔成篇 【参考范文】Da Keding,which dates back to/dates from the late Western Zhou Dynasty,was unearthed in Fufeng County,Shaanxi Province in 1890.It is now preserved in Shanghai Museum.Made of bronze,Da Keding is 93.1 centimetres high and weighs 201.5 kilograms.Its mouth rim is decorated
11、with animal mask motif and its belly(is decorated)with smooth-like patterns.Besides,290 characters are neatly carved in the inner wall.It is assumed that Da Keding is of great significance to the study of the economy and culture during the Western Zhou Dynasty.And people have been regarding it as one of the precious treasures to the study of Chinese history.点击右图进入 英 美 文 化 欣 赏 Thank you for watching!