1、Unit 3Under the sea Section Writing投诉信一、基本结构投诉信一般分为三个部分：第一段：点明写作意图。第二段：表述投诉的原因。第三段：提出具体要求。二、增分佳句(一)投诉信的开头常用句式点明意图1I am writing to you to complain about.我给你写信是为了投诉2I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with.我写此信以表达我对的不满。(二)投诉信的主体常用句式表述原因1There are some problems with my flat that I wish to bring
2、your attention to.我的房间有些问题，希望能引起你的注意。2I can hardly bear/tolerate/put up with it any more.我几乎不能再忍受它了。3Im afraid I have a complaint to make.恐怕我要提点意见。4Thats not what I had in mind.我想要的可不是这个。5Its not what I hoped for.我期待的可不是这样的。6That leaves a lot to be desired.太不让人满意了。7That doesnt quite suit me.这个对我来说不是
3、很合适。8Im not at all satisfied with the surroundings here.我一点也不满意这儿的环境。9Im really very annoyed about it.我对此事真是很生气。(三)投诉信的结尾常用句式具体要求1I hope that you will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as you can.我希望你能考虑我的建议并尽你所能改善这种局面。2I hope that you will take this matter seriously and make
4、 an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.我希望你能认真对待此事并努力防止此类事件的再次发生。3I hope you can give me a satisfying reply and deal with this matter reasonably.我希望你能给我一个满意的答复并合理处理此事。4I must warn you that unless you do something about the situation, I will be forced to take legal action.我必须警告你，除非你尽力改善这种局
5、面，否则迫不得已我会采取法律行动。5I will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.如果你愿意弥补损失，我将不胜感激。题目要求假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示向国际野生动物组织写一封投诉信，反映非法捕猎海洋生物的现象。1非法捕猎越来越严重；2由于在全世界鲸鱼成为非法捕猎的对象，五年来它的数目在急剧减少；3我们曾经毁掉森林，带来了干旱和洪水；如果非法捕猎海洋生物得不到阻止，我们将失掉家园。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为投诉信；2确定人称：本文的主要人
6、称应为第一、二人称；3确定时态：主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分，点明意图海洋非法捕猎严重，鲸鱼数目锐减。第二部分，表述原因保护海洋的重要性。第三部分，具体要求认真对待，防止再次发生。第二步：核心词汇想周全1complain抱怨2the_illegal_hunt 非法捕猎3creature 生物4witness 见证；目睹5target 目标；靶子6be/become_aware_of 意识到7consider 考虑8stop/prevent 阻止；防止第三步：由词扩句雏形现1在过去的五年中鲸鱼的数目急剧减少。The number of the whale has sharply decr
7、eased in the past five years.2在全世界鲸鱼成为非法捕猎的主要目标。The whale has been the main target of the illegal hunt in the whole world. (target n)The whale has been targeted by the illegal hunt in the whole world. (target v)3一旦生态平衡遭到破坏，我们将遭受很多灾难。Once the balance of nature is_destroyed,_we will suffer a lot.4曾经有段
8、时间我们没有意识到植物的重要性。There was a time when we were not aware of the importance of plants.5干旱和洪水同时到来。Drought and flood came hand in hand.6如果我们不阻止非法海洋捕捞，我们将失去我们的家园。If we did_not_stop the illegal hunt in the ocean, we would_lose_our_home.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用witness改写句1The past five years has witnessed the sharp de
9、crease of the whale.2用独立主格结构改写句3The balance of nature destroyed, we will suffer a lot.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear Sir or Madam，I am writing to complain that the illegal hunt for ocean creatures is becoming bad to worse; as a result, the past five years has witnessed the sharp decrease of the whale because it ha
10、s been the main target of the illegal hunt in the whole world.The balance of nature destroyed, we will suffer a lot. There was a time when we were not aware of the importance of plants, and then drought and flood came hand in hand. If we did not stop the illegal hunt in the ocean, we would lose our home.We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.Yours，Li Hua
