1、专题十六书面表达之开放类【写作话题】高考24话题之(十六)：文学与艺术(Literature and art)为了营造一种“多读书，读好书”的良好氛围，我班将举行一次主题班会，要求以“A good book can affect our life”为题作演讲，向同学们介绍一本自己读过的好书，并谈谈自己的感悟。语法填空语法改错_Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man.My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book_touched my heart.From the book, I learn
2、ed that whenever we come_difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give_or run away.It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggle in her long and hard learning period.Instead, we are supposed to face them brave and try to find ways out.Reading can not only
3、 improve our ability to understand world, but also wash our souls.范文背诵Boys and girls, As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man.A good book can affect our life in one way or another.My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart.It is about how Helen overcame her physi
4、cal disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.From the book, I learned that whenever we come across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away.Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out.Reading can not only imp
5、rove our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls.To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, lets read more good books！Thats all.Thank you！自主空间根据范文画线部分仿写下面情景：正如俗话所说，“读万卷书，行万里路。”_， “Reading ten thousand books is like traveling ten thousand miles.”我们应该多读一些文学作品以提高我们的文学素养。We _in order to
6、improve our literary attainments.【自主诊断】语法填空：Asasacross；in语法改错：struggle改为strugglingbrave改为bravelyworld前面加the自主空间：As a saying goesare supposed to read more literature works限时25分钟(2016浙江)“Planning is good ，but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100120词的短文。要求如下：1简述你对这句名言的理解；2用一个具体事例加以说明；3给出恰当的结尾。注意：1.文
7、章的标题已给出(不计词数)；2文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。Planning Is Good, But Doing Is Better_审题谋篇审文体本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目判断作文主要介绍要将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能走题。审人称第一人称审时态阐述道理用一般现在时；举例用一般过去时。列要点1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。范文展示Planning Is Good, But Doing Is BetterPlanning is good as it decid
8、es in detail how we do.However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that, I set out to read
9、widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.I know how I achieved my success.It came from good planning and better doing combined.名师点睛本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简练
10、，时态人称准确，很好地完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施这点非常重要。在文中作者用到了短语in detail, bear no fruit, carry out, set out to等短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do, It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。.题型特点分析1文体特点(半)开放作文一般只给出主题、两三点提示、一段素材或漫画，然后由考生在此基础上充分发挥想象力
11、，自由发挥，自由创作。2常见的命题形式(1)话题式即围绕题目中所给的特定的话题说明、叙述、举例，最后谈谈自己的感想或发表自己的看法。(2)漫画式即要求考生根据一定提示(一般是一段约20个词的英文提示或一幅漫画)，写一篇短文。要求考生充分发挥想象力和创造力，自由拓展主题，组织篇章结构，这样既能体现出学生活跃的思维，又能表现出他们的逻辑思维能力和灵活运用英语的能力，从而把对考生写作能力的考查上升到一个新的高度。(3)常考文体记叙文一般给出一段材料，然后要求考生根据所给材料的内容，运用逻辑推理的方法，给故事添加开头、发展过程及结尾。议论文要求考生根据所提供的信息材料(一般为漫画)，在描述漫画信息之余
12、，发挥自己的想象，展开简单的议论，并略谈自己的观点和看法。.技巧微课【规范答题步骤】1描述漫画内容描述漫画内容的基本条件是看懂漫画。要求：审图要准，定位要清；描述时言简意赅，不可越位。要注意：不要花太多时间挖掘图画深意！2阐述对漫画的理解所谓对漫画的理解，是指围绕漫画反映的基本事实进行较为细致的解释。要求：逻辑清晰，合情合理。3总结、升华主题联系实际生活中和漫画中主体所反映的同类现象，表明自己的看法、感想或人生感悟等，及时表明自己的态度，在遇到类似情况时，应该采取的措施：向图中主体学习其精神状态或是摒弃其做法，最后号召大家应该怎么做。.写作素材1描述漫画常用句式As is shown in t
13、he picture/As we can see in the picture, .In the picture, we can see clearly that.The picture describes a/an interesting/common/serious phenomenon that.The picture is trying to tell us that.On seeing this picture, I am struck.2挖掘漫画所反映的社会现象和蕴含的哲理常用句式The.shown in the picture really astonished me.The p
14、icture reflects a common social problem that.The picture vividly shows that we people are ruining our own health.The picture reminds me of those who.The picture conveys a message that.The picture makes me think a lot about.3对漫画中反映的问题做出评价或建议的常用句式From the picture we can draw a conclusion that.Only wit
15、h combined efforts/in this way, can we.Personally/In my opinion/As far as Im concerned/From my point of view.Some effective measures should be taken immediately to deal with.I strongly argue that we should.黄金模板As is shown in the picture, 要解决的问题 is becoming more and more serious.First, 说明要解决问题的现状Seco
16、nd, 举例进一步说明现状 Confronted with 要解决的问题， we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, 解决方法1.For another 解决方法2.Finally, 解决方法3.Personally, I believe that 我的解决方法Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because 带来的好处限时15分钟A(2016四川)某中学生英文报正举办“
17、The Season I Like Best”的征文活动，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容应包括：1你最喜欢的季节；2你喜欢该季节的两条理由(如：气候、景色、活动、感受)。注意：1.词数100左右；2题目已为你写好；3行文连贯，语篇完整；4文中不得透露个人真实信息。_ 参考范文The Season I Like BestIf someone asks me which season I like best, I can tell him without hesitation that spring is my favorite of the four seasons.Two reasons may
18、 account for why I like spring best.In spring, the weather gets warmer and the days get longer.Everything begins to grow.Many kinds of flowers start to come out, which give the earth a pretty coat, making this world a better place to live in.Besides, I like to go camping in spring and I feel so refr
19、eshed in the surrounding of nature.I will forget all my bad moods when walking in nature.Spring is my favorite season.B(2016北京)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1该人物是谁；2该人物的主要贡献；3该人物对你的影响。注意：1.词数不少于50；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim, _Yours，Li Hua参考范文Dear_Jim，Its
20、great to hear from you.I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.As for my favorite figure in Chinese history it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China.That
21、 opened our eyes to the world.In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college, to be a bridge between China and the world.Interested in knowing more？I can find you some books！Just let me know.Cheers!Yours，Li_Hua专题滚动检测(十六)(限时：40分钟语法填空短文改错书面表达).语法填空(2016赣州市一模)As I am getting older, I find a ter
22、rible problem that my memory is getting even 1._(bad)I always forget 2._(do) what I have exactly done.Whats wrong with me? I think I shouldnt have been so forgetful just 3._Im not old enough to forget things.It must be horrible if the situation 4._(continue) in the next years.Now, I have to take a n
23、ote 5._(avoid) missing something I should do.However, several years ago, I took great 6._(proud) in my good memory because I would keep something in my mind easily.Thats 7._I dont think study was a problem when I was in high school.Perhaps, recently I was busy 8._some little things both in family an
24、d work so I was 9._(complete) tired.But meanwhile I had to admit that time had taken away my energy not only physically but also mentally.No matter who you are or how strong you are, youre certain to be weak in front of 10._(nature) law.语篇解读本文属于记叙文，介绍了随着年龄的增加，作者的记忆力急剧下降，总是忘记事情。1worse考查比较级。本句中比较级wors
25、e与前半句的older相呼应。随着我变老，我发现我的记忆力也变得更差了。2doing考查固定搭配。短语forget doing sth.“忘记做过某事”；forget to do sth.“忘记要做某事”。根据空格后what I have exactly done“我已经做过的事情”，可知使用doing。句意：我总是忘记实际上已经做过的事情。3because考查状语从句连词。句意：我认为我本不应该如此健忘，只是因为我还没有老到忘记事情。句中的连词because引导原因状语从句，副词just表示强调。4continues考查时态。在时间状语从句和条件状语从句中，通常使用一般现在时代替将来时，所以
26、本句中使用continue代替将来时。5to avoid考查不定式。句意：现在为了避免错过我应该做的事情，我要记笔记。本句中不定式作目的状语，表示我做笔记的目的。6pride考查名词。形容词great的后面要接名词，动词take的后面也要接名词作宾语，所以使用形容词proud 的名词pride，构成动词短语take pride in“以自豪”。7why考查表语从句。本句中why引导表语从句，表示结果。句意：那就是为什么在高中的时候我认为学习并不是一个很困难的事情的原因。8with考查形容词短语。短语be busy doing sth.“忙于做某事”。句意：最近我忙于家庭和工作上的小事，以至于我
27、非常疲惫。9completely考查副词。在英语中通常使用副词作状语修饰形容词、副词或动词。本句中使用副词completely修饰形容词tired。10natural考查形容词。横线后面的名词law需要使用形容词作定语来修饰该名词。句意：无论你是谁，无论你多强壮，在大自然的法则面前，你都是微不足道的。.短文改错(2016威海市二模)Dear Ms. Lee, Im delighting to have you as my English teacher.English has become a global language, so Im convinced that learning Eng
28、lish is of great useful.We should learn English well to better understand that happens around the world.But my English is rather poor.One of my problems are that I often feel nervously when speaking in public.Besides, I feel difficult to learn words by heart.I really hope you can offer us more chanc
29、es to speak with English.But I also hope youll give me some advices on how to learn new words.I believe I can make many progress than ever with your help.Thank you!Li Hua答案Dear Ms. Lee，Im to have you as my English teacher.English has become a global language, so Im convinced that learning English is
30、 of great .We should learn English well to better understand happens around the world.But my English is rather poor.One of my problems that I often feel when speaking in public.Besides, I feel difficult to learn words by heart.I really hope you can offer us more chances to speak with English. I also
31、 hope youll give me some on how to learn new words.I believe I can make progress than ever with your help.Thank you!Li Hua.书面表达(2016鹰潭市一模)人们完成工作的方式通常有两种：独立完成和合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以“Working Individually or Working in a Team”为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文：独立完成：自行安排、自己解决问题。合作完成：一起讨论、相互学习。我喜欢的方式和理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以
32、使行文连贯。Working Individually or Working in a Team_参考范文Working Individually or Working in a TeamThere are basically two ways to get work done.One is to work individually.In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it.Whats more, they will be able to learn how to solve
33、 problems on their own.People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other.Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them.As the work can be divided among several people, it can be done efficiently.Teamwork is always important.
