1、2021高考二轮复习各题型分项专练书面表达60篇(4960)短文续写49、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。It was a warm and sunny morning at the Central Park Zoo. Mary and her classmates were chatting noisily with excitement as their school bus entered the zoo parking lot. Today, Marys class was going on a field trip to the zoo to learn
2、more about the animals and their natural habitats.“Before you leave the bus, please make sure you have your partner!” Mrs. Brown announced. To make sure no one got lost in the zoo, each student had a companion. Marys companion was named John. John loves animals and was also excited to go to the zoo.
3、 But sometimes, John does not follow the rules and gets in trouble. Mary hoped that today, John would follow the rules so they would not get in trouble.While the rest of the students got off the bus, Mary and John quickly ran off to explore. They found the exhibits for many different kinds of animal
4、s and learned a lot about their natural habitats. They saw the elephants playing and they saw giraffes eating. They saw the polar bears sleeping and the monkeys leaping. Mary asked John:“John, what is your favorite animal?”“I think I like chimpanzees best. They have a lot of energy, just like me! Wh
5、at animal do you like, Mary?”“I love polar bears! I think their lifestyle in the Arctic is very interesting.”A few hours later, Mary and John started to feel hungry. They made their way back to the zoo entrance to eat lunch at the Rainforest Caf. The Rainforest Caf is both Mary and Johns favorite re
6、staurant because there is an aquarium inside. The restaurant is also famous for its chocolate cake, which Mary ordered for dessert after they had finished their lunch.As Mary was finishing her cake, John excused himself to go to the restroom. About ten minutes later, an suddenly alarm began to go of
7、f and a voice came over the loudspeaker,“Attention! Someone has opened the chimpanzee exhibit! Some chimpanzees have escaped!”People were screaming and starting to run. Mary looked for John, but he was nowhere to be found.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下
8、划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:As more and more people ran out of the zoo, Mary began to think_Paragraph 2:As Mary raced up the path to the animal exhibits, she stopped_50、阅读下面文章,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事情节。 A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to
9、 sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village. On his way ho
10、me he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.The next afternoon the farme
11、r was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours?” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly(胆怯地). “Have you killed the man?” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man?” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed th
12、e man?” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet?” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. The officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the farmer didnt admit he was the murderer.注意:1
13、.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again._Paragraph 2:The farmer was lucky. A few days later_51、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 It was raining pretty hard on Halloween
14、, but that wasnt going to stop my little sister Kate and me from trick-or-treating. We decided to start at Miss Parsons house. Miss Parson was loved by us kids who lived nearby because she often shared her self-made cookies with us. We usually finished them in a second, especially when we were hungr
15、y after class. Sometimes, when we visited her or did something for her, she always gave us surprise. Kate and I wondered what kinds of treats shed offer. As we walked down the street, I held an umbrella, a bag for candy, and my sisters hand. Jack-o-Lantems gave soft light along the street. Spider we
16、bs hung in all the windows. Parents who were dressed up like monsters (怪物) stood in doorways. After we had walked a few blocks, we were wet from head to toes, and I felt Kate was trembling with cold. There was a light on at Miss Parsons house, but there were no ghosts,小妖精), or Jack-o-Lantems. We cli
17、mbed up the steps and saw Miss Parson through a window. She was drinking a cup of hot tea. Maybe she doesnt celebrate Halloween, Kate said with a sigh, disappointedly. Well, even if she doesnt, she usually likes it when we visit her, I said and knocked on the door. Miss Parson seemed surprised when
18、she opened it and saw our dressing. Is today Halloween? she asked. I completely forgot. I am so sorry!注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 Miss Parson rushed us into her house._Paragraph 2The next morning,a hot and sweet discussion ab
19、out Miss Parson and Halloween spread among us kids._52、A Mothers LoveMy mom only had one eye. I hated her. She was such an embarrassment. She cooked for students and teachers to support the family.There was one day during elementary school (小学) when my mom came over to say hello to me. I was so emba
20、rrassed.How could she do this to me? I ignored her, threw her a hateful look and ran out. The next day at school one of my classmates said, Your mom only has one eye!I wanted to bury myself. I also wanted my mom to just disappear. I confronted (面对) her that day and said, If youre only going to make
21、me a laughing stock, why dont you just die?My mom did not respond. I didnt even stop to think for a second about what I had said, because I was full of anger. I took no notice of her feelings at all.I wanted to be out of that house, and have nothing to do with her. So I studied really hard, and got
22、a chance to go abroad for further education.Then, I got married. I bought a house of my own. I had kids of my own. I was happy with my life, my kids and the comforts. Then one day, my mother came to visit me. She hadnt seen me in years and she didnt even meet her grandchildren.When she stood by the
23、door, my children laughed at her, and I shouted at her for coming over uninvited. I screamed at her, How dare you come to my house and scare my children! GET OUT OF HERE! NOW!And to this, my mother quietly answered, Oh, Im so sorry. I may have gotten the wrong address. and she was soon out of sight.
24、One day, a letter regarding a school reunion (同学聚会) came to my house. So I lied to my wife that I was going on a business trip. After the reunion, I went to the old house just out of curiosity.My neighbors said that she died. I did not shed a single tear. They handed me a letter that she had wanted
25、me to have.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:My dearest son,I think of you all the time and Im sorry that_Paragraph 2:You see, when you were very little,_With all my love to you.Your mother53、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Aliand h
26、is younger sister, Zahra, lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood. Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job, and they had only a little money with which to buy food. As they had not paid the rent for several months, the landlord was breathing down their necks(
27、盯着他们).One day, Ali took Zahras shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed, but he lost them on the way home. It wasnt until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes. He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed, so he begged his sister to keep it secret. Zahra agreed and the t
28、wo decided to share Alis runningshoes. Zahras school hours were in the morning, so she would wear them first. After school, she would rush back and give them to Ali. He could then run to his school, which began in the afternoon. Although he ran as fast as he could, Ali often arrived late and was war
29、ned by the school.Ali heard about a long distancerace that was held for the boys in the city. When he learned that the thirdprizewas a new pair of shoes, he decided to take part. He ran homeexcitedlyand promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.The day of race arrived. Ali had a strong
30、start, but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache. Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Zahra and hispromiseto her. Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength, and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners, determined
31、 to finishthird. Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runnercollided(碰撞)with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead._Paragraph 2
32、:Filled with pleasure, Ali walked home quickly._54、 阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行读后续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。 I truly learned what a best friend is in my first year in high school. Kate and I were good friends and we were inseparable (分不开的). We spent every day together and always had a good time. Then basketball season st
33、arted and we were on the same team. After a few games, however, Kate got moved up to the Rose Cup full-time. I wouldnt admit it then, but as a matter of fact I envied (嫉妒) her much. Having different practice times, we began to see less of each other and talked less. Soon I was told by others that sh
34、e was talking behind my back. One night, I called Kate to tell her about my new haircut. To my great surprise, the next day at school she told everyone that I copied her style because she had told me she wanted to get hers cut like this. As a result, I was angry and quite disappointed with her. At n
35、oon she handed me a letter and walked away instead of talking with me. I couldnt accept the cruel words on the paper. In great anger, I wrote right back to her. Over the next week, we exchanged more hurtful letters. I cried myself to sleep every night, believing our friendship was over. 注意:1.所续写短文的词
36、数应为150左右; 2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: One night my mum took me to Kates home._Paragraph 2: It has been five months since we broke up with each other._55、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 The event that stands out in Toms memory happened one mor
37、ning when Tom was only ten years old. He was at home with his elder sister Jane. Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices. At first he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud, but he soon realized this time it was differe
38、nt. Quick! Quick! Remove the motorcycles from the shop. someone yelled. Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate, a thick cloud of smoke greeted him. The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying. Jane, who had be
39、en playing the violin in her room, hurried to the living room. They rushed out of the door and along the corridor(走廊) through the smoke. They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane stopped in her track. She turned around and headed back the way they came. Tom had
40、no idea what she was doing, but he followed her. Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them, who they called Makcik, Malay for auntie. Jane began banging on Makciks door, but got no answer. As the smoke thickened around them, Tom could see many of their neighborssom
41、e still in their pyjamas (睡衣;宽长裤) running for safety. The thought of fear crossed his mind. She might have run for safety like everyone else! Tom cried. However, Jane refused to give up. I know Makciks still inside. She said she was familiar with Makciks daily routine and was certain she would still
42、 be sleeping. She pounded the door. Go downstairs. Go now! Go!注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1: Tom noticed the flame was reaching up.Paragraph 2: Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.56、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续
43、写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Jenny was a pretty eight-year-old girl.One day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace, by which she was totally defeated. How eagerly she wanted it! But when he saw the price, her heart sank a little. She gathered up her coura
44、ge and asked her mother if she would buy it for her, her mother said, “Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an awful lot of money. I can buy you the necklace, but when we get home we should make up a list of housework that you can do to pay for the necklace.” Jenny agreed immediately, feeling
45、 a burst of joy. So her mother bought the pearl necklace for her. Jenny worked on her housework determinedly and earnestly every day. Soon Jenny had paid off the pearls.Jenny had a very loving daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story. One night when he finished the story
46、, he said, “Jenny, do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you,” the little girl said delightedly, with a broad smile on her face. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” Hearing that, Jenny froze there, an anxious expression twisting her face. “Oh! Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Rosy, m
47、y favorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. Okay?” “Oh no, darling, thats okay.” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss, gently and calmly. “Good night, little one.”A week later, her father once again asked Jenny after her story, “Do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, y
48、ou know I love you.” the little girl murmured softly, trying to escape from her fathers eyes. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” “Oh, Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Ribbons, my toy horse. Do you remember her? Shes my favorite.” The little girl begged. “No, thats okay,” her father said, smili
49、ng broadly and sweetly and brushed her cheek again with a kiss. “God bless you, little one. Sweet dreams.”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语:3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Several days later, when Jennys father came in to read her a story, Jenny_Paragraph2:Holdin
50、g the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box._57、 阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。 Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldnt help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the
51、scolding from her mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat, but it was not even possible for her, since she had nothing with her. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.
52、However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles? Oh, yes but I dont have money on me she replied. Thats nothing. Ill treat you today, said the man. Come in. The seller brought her a bow
53、l of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently. What is it? asked the man kindly.Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness! said Jenny as she wiped her tears. Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother, drove me out
54、 of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger! Hearing the words, the seller smiled, Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the tim
55、es she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her? Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered mothers familiar face and weathered hands. Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted, but I have never thanked my mum for what s
56、he has done for me. On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1: Approaching the doorway, Jenny look a deep breath._Parag
57、raph 2: A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back_58、阅读下面短文,根据文章的情节续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Eric was working in a selling business. He had been on the road visiting people for more than a month without going home. He couldnt wait to get back to see his wife and children. It was coming up on Mothers Day,
58、 and he usually tried to make it “back home”, but this year he was just too busy and too tired. The day when he was driving in a small town, he saw a flower shop. He said to himself, “I know what I will do, Ill send my mother some roses.”He stopped and went into the flower shop and saw a young man t
59、alking to the girl in it. “How many roses can I get for five dollars, Ms.?” the boy asked. The girl was trying to explain that roses were expensive. Maybe the young man would be happy with something else.“No. I have to have roses,” he said, “my mom was badly sick last year and I didnt get to spend m
60、uch time with her. I want to get something special. It has to be red roses, because that is her favorite.” He was stubborn.The girl in the shop looked up at Eric and was just shaking her head. Something inside of Eric was touched by the boys voice. He wanted to get those roses so badly. Eric had bee
61、n blessed(幸运的) in his business, and he looked at the girl and silently said that he would pay for the boys roses.The girl looked at the young man and said, “OK, I will give you a dozen red roses for your dollars.” The young man almost jumped into the air. He took the flowers and ran down the store.
62、It was worth more than fifty dollars just to see that kind of excitement.Eric ordered his own flowers and asked the girl to have it delivered to his mother. After that, with relief he drove down the road. Not long after his driving, he saw the boy walking to a graveyard(墓地).注意:1、所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2、至
63、少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3、续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4、续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Eric stopped his car and followed the young man. _ Paragraph 2:Eric went into the car in tears. _59、阅读下面短文,根捤所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。When I was eleven years old, I had a big accident. I get scared even now when I think abo
64、ut that time. Iwent skatingnear my house, There were many people, and I saw them falling on the ice.It was my first time to go ice skating, so I was nervous. I was wondering how to skate. I went with a friend who was very skillful. He spent some time teaching me how to skate, but I didnt learn much.
65、 He left me and skated all around. As soon as he left, Ifell down. I envied the other people because they couldskate very well.I was bored because I kept falling so I took off my skates and just walked around on the ice in my shoes. It was cold and my hands were frozen.Suddenly, I stepped on somethi
66、ng that was not hard. What was it? It was a weak place in the ice. When I stepped there, I sank under the ice. I thought that I was going to die, but I did my best to grab something to get out from under the ice. I tried to grab the edge of the ice. But it was very difficult for an eleven-year-old c
67、hild.It seemed like a very long time, like a year. Then,fortunately, someone helped me. He grabbed my arms and pulled me up. So, I lived and Im still alive today.I thanked him. At that time, my friend came back. I was annoyed at him because he was supposed totake care ofme, but he didnt. He was emba
68、rrassed. When I took a taxi home, the taxi driver was surprised and asked what happened. I didnt want to say anything because I was tried andscared. Even now,whenever I thinkabout that time, I feel uncomfortable. I dont want to go skating again even now.注意:1所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续
69、写部分分为两段,每段的幵头语已为你写好;4.续写芫成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 It was long before I went skating once again,_Paragraph 2However, ever since then I havent found any time to go skating,_60、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一 个完整的故事。When she was 22 years old, Pat Jones decided to travel around the world and see as many
70、foreign places as she could when she was young. When she finished college at home in Britain, Pat chose to visit Latin America first. She managed to get a job as an English teacher in a secondary school in Bolivia. Pat spoke a little Spanish, so she was able to communicate with her students even tho
71、ugh they did not know much English. A sentence she had once read somewhere stuck in her mind : If you dream in a foreign language, it means that you have really mastered it. Pat repeated this sentence to her students and she hoped that someday she would dream inSpanish and they would dream in Englis
72、h. One day, Tim, one of the worst students in her class, came up to her and explained in Spanish that he had not done his homework. He said that he had gone to bed early, but slept badly. Pat was quite angry with him, for she did not think that his explanation had anything to do with his homework. B
73、ut Tim told her that he dreamed all night and his dream was in English. “In English!” Pat thought. She was greatly surprised, since Tim was such a bad student. She was also jealous (嫉妒的). Her dreams were still not in Spanish,but she decided to encourage her student and asked him to tell her about hi
74、s dream. “All the people in my dream spoke English,” Tim said. “And all the signs were in English. All the newspapers, magazines and TV programs were in English,too.” “ But thats wonderful!” said Pat. “What did all the people say to you?” she asked. “Im sorry, Miss Jones. Thats why I slept so badly
75、all night. I didnt understand a word they said. It is a nightmare (噩梦)!” Tim answered.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键 词语。Paragraph 1 :After hearing the boys words, Pat_Paragraph 2 :In order to encourage her students to speak English, Pat_ 答案以
76、及解析49答案及解析:答案: Ending1 (John did it)Para1. As more and more people ran out of the zoo, Mary began to think where John could be. With a mixture of fear and anxiety, Mary started leaving the restaurant to search for her partner. As she looked around the zoo grounds, it occurred to her that John had to
77、ld her that chimpanzees were his favorite animals. John wouldnt have left the restaurant to release the chimpanzees, would he? Oh no! Mary was sure she knew where John had gone.Para2. As Mary raced up the path to the animal exhibits, she stopped because she saw John with two chimpanzees held in his
78、arms. He offered a small, guilty smile. “I didnt mean to let them escape,” he said. “I just wanted to set them free so that they could play outside for a little while!” he continued with excitement. “I took the key from a zookeeper who wasnt looking. But then, the exhibit lock broke and” Behind Mary
79、, Mrs. Brown had begun to walk up the path and saw John holding the animals. It was clear from her serious expression that he was in big trouble.解析:略 50答案及解析:答案: Paragraph 1The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was very afraid, he thought he would be s
80、entenced to death by killing people, but he didnt, he was innocent. He must tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice. he hoped that someone could come and save him.Paragraph 2The farmer was lucky .A few days later, a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, sayin
81、g that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! He saw the police office used a knife killing the man late in the evening. he was so frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the farmer was innocent. So he took the great courage to expose the real crimi
82、nal. After the investigation, the young man was right. The police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.解析: 略 51答案及解析:答案:One possible version:Paragraph 1Miss Parson rushed us into her house.
83、“Its cold out here, she said. My sisters face was shining from the rain and Miss Parson dried her cheeks. “Thank you,” Kate said. “Trick or treat?” “Oh, right! Treats,” said Miss Parson in surprise. Then she disappeared for a moment and came back with a big smile on her face. Open those bags wide, s
84、he said. She dropped two boxes of cocoa into our bags. Winter is just around the corner,” she said. “Some hot cocoa will keep you warm.”“Thank you,” we both said. “Happy Halloween!” Paragraph 2The next morning, a hot and sweet discussion about Miss Parson and Halloween spread among us kids. We told
85、Mom about how Miss Parson had forgotten Halloween and about what she had given to us and the other kids. It sounds as if nobody was very upset, even though she forgot Halloween, said Mom. “No, we were happy,” I said. “Although she didnt give us candy, it was kind of fun for us all to get something d
86、ifferent for a change. I hope it will become a Halloween tradition to give out unusual treats.”解析: 略 52答案及解析:答案:Paragraph 1:My dearest son,I think of you all the time and Im sorry that I came to your house and scared your children. I had never thought my visit would bring so much unhappiness to you.
87、 However, I was really so happy when I heard you were coming for the reunion. I missed you day and night. But I may not be able to even get out of bed to see you. Im terribly sorry that I was a constant embarrassment to you when you were growing up.Paragraph 2:You see, when you were very little, you
88、 got into a terrible accident, as a result of which you lost one of your precious eyes. As a mother, I couldnt stand watching you having to grow up with just one eye. It was too much for youa young soul to endure such a cruel fact and a possible future full of challenges. So I gave you mine. I was s
89、o proud of my son who was seeing a whole new world for me, in my place, with that eye.With all my love to you.Your mother解析:略 53答案及解析:答案: Paragraph 1:Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.Refusing to give up at this point, he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could. He dashed acr
90、oss the finishing line and won the fourth prize. Thinking he would let her sister down,Alicouldnt help sobbing. Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won thethirdprizeas therunnerwhocollidedwith Ali was disqualified for breaking the rule. Holding theshoesclose to hi
91、s chest during the award ceremony, Ali felt overjoyed and relieved as he eventually won the shoes for his sister.Paragraph 2:Filled with pleasure, Ali walked home quickly.He could not wait to see his sister and share the good news. On his arrival, Ali found Zahra was waiting outside. Nervous and anx
92、ious, Zahra wondered whether her brother had brought her what she was expecting. Zahra, see what I have got for you. Ali said excitedly, taking the prize out of his bag with his trembling hands. The instant Zahra saw the shoes, her face lit up. So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali. Than
93、k you! Ali. Tears of joy welled up in their eyes as the brother and the sister hugged tightly together.解析:略 54答案及解析:答案:Paragraph 1: One night my mum took me to Kates home. Our mums looked at each other, nervous and worried. Kates mum asked us questions but we both remained silent. I stared at the fl
94、oor, angry and sad. Finally, I let everything out with tears in my eyes. The huge burden in my mind was slowly lifted as we each talked about how we were feeling these days. To my relief, it was all out. Suddenly, to my great surprise, Kate rose from her seat, crossed the room and hugged me with tea
95、rs. Then I could hardly hold back my tears and hugged her back.Paragraph 2: It has been five months since we broke up with each other. Last weekend we played together again, laughed a lot and had a good time. It makes me delighted that we are not only learning to care about each other more but also
96、treasure our friendship. Now I know whenever I am asked about my friends in high school, Kate will be my best friend forever.解析: 略 55答案及解析:答案: Paragraph 1: Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot. He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Jane
97、s hand tightly. By then, both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible. Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her he
98、ad. She kept pounding against the door. Tom burst out crying.Paragraph 2: Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help. A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Janes mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open w
99、ith all their might. Sure enough, Makcik was lying in bed, unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Toms joy was immense.解析: 略 56答案及解析:答案: Several days later, when Jennys father c
100、ame in to read her a story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed. When listening to the story, Jenny was totally absent- minded, with her hands holding the necklace tightly and firmly. When the story came to an end, unexpectedly, Jenny offered her beloved necklace to her father, with her f
101、ingers trembling automatically. No one knew what the necklace meant to her. She whispered to her father, softly and gently, “ Daddy, you know I love you more than the necklace.” Then, the necklace slid into her fathers hands determinedly.Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, his father dra
102、gged out a blue box. Much to Jennys amazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which set her heart racing. Jenny froze there, a thrilled expression twisting her face. Before Jenney was able to say something, her father brushed a warm kiss on her face and gathered her into
103、his arms. Holding the genuine necklace in her hand, Jenny lifted her lip, tears beginning to blur her vision.解析:略 57答案及解析:答案: Paragraph 1: Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. When she knocked at the door, she found the door was locked and her mother was not in. Tired and sad, she sat
104、down in front of the house. Where could my mother be? she wondered. Was she still angry with me? Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother. Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot abo
105、ut her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks.Paragraph 2: A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother. Here you come! Ive been looking for you, she said, tired and relieved. Jenny couldnt help throwing herse
106、lf into her mothers arms. Mum, Im so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me. She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mother smiled patting her back gently.解析: 略 58答案及解析:答案:possible version:Eric stopped his car and followed the young man. The young man went
107、up to a small monument, and knelt down. He carefully put the flowers before it and began to sob. “Dear mom, I love you. But how I regret I didnt tell it when you were with me. I knew you loved roses, but why didnt I send the flowers to you when I could still see you and talk with you? Now, you have
108、gone to another world. How I regret I didnt tell you I love you so much!”Eric went into the car in tears. His mothers home wasnt far from here, but he hadnt seen her for too long a time. He didnt have a talk with her for too long a time and say how much he loved her for so long a time. He turned the
109、 car and drove towards the road quickly to the flower shop. He asked the girl to give back the flowers because he wanted to send them personally to his mom.解析:本文是一篇读后续写作文,考查学生的读写能力。要求考生用150词写出接下来的两段,且必须使用5个以上文章中标出的关键词语,并标出这些关键词。【详解】考生在动笔前,一定要认真阅读所给故事,充分理解文字内容,认真看清题目要求,把握文章的脉络和串起文本的关键词,判断关键词语与主题内容的关联
110、程度,在此基础上,确定要选用的词语以及所在的段落位置,判断故事情节发展的方向,写作下文。重点阅读每一段的首句,进行布局、解读,布局第一段的内容时,要兼顾两段的首句;第二段的首句决定第一段的走向。注意故事要连贯,要完整。同时注意综合运用语法与句法结构,按照行文逻辑组织语言,写作时要准确运用正确的时态。尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型,不要刻意追求运用高级、新颖的词汇,强行运用复杂句型等语法结构,而忽略了与原文语言环境的符合度和连贯度。最后也要注意不要出现单词拼写错误。 59答案及解析:答案:示例一Paragraph 1 It was long before I went skating once
111、 again,accompanied by one of my friends. This time I was careful and cautious, and my friendtook special care ofme. I was so fortunate this time that I managed not tofall down. Gradually I learned toskate welland became skillful. I felt very confident and no longer scared.Paragraph 2However, ever si
112、nce then I havent found any time to go skating,it was not because I do not like skating, but because I am too busy working. Ive learned a lot from these two skating experiences. We all have moments of desperation. But if we can face them bravely, thats when we find out how strong we really are. What
113、ever you do, you must have the patience to do it as well as the skill. Remember: never get conceited because of victory or lose heart in case of failure.示例二Paragraph 1: It was long before I went skating once again, and that was when we graduated from the university. Our monitor advised us all to go
114、skating and I decided to follow his advice although I still felt a tittle scared Soon we were active on the ice. One of my roommates was very skillful and she patiently explained to me how to start .Step by step, I was able to standup on the ice myself and headed out a tittle, not so steadily and I
115、felt down many tunes. I was grateful to her for I managed to skate that day, though I couldnt be tike others, who could skate well.I had a nice time that day!Paragraph 2: However, ever since then I havent found any time to go skating,because immediately I dived into the applying for the suitable job
116、s. And then, fortunately Imet my honey and got married. As was expected, one baby came into the world and was now smiling to me every day. As for the skating, maybe I could be on the ice again when my baby is grown up and asks me one hundred times!解析:语篇导读:文章主要讲述了作者小时候很羡慕别人溜冰很熟练,自己有一天和朋友去溜冰结果掉到冰窟窿里又幸
117、运得救的故事。1.续写文章一定要保证语气、时态(一般过去时)、人称(第一人称)等与上面的文章保持一致。2.前文提到溜冰时出危险得救,想起来后怕。下面两段中,第一段可以“在经过训练后,自信心大增,在朋友的陪伴下再次去溜冰,结果很成功”方面考虑。3.第二段可以在“虽然会溜冰了,但是没有时间去溜了,因为很忙”方面考虑。还可以提出自己的一点感悟“人要自信、面对困难不泄气;面对胜利不骄傲”等。4.文章使用到的短语或词汇:go skating去滑冰;fall down摔倒;skate well滑的好;take special care of 特殊照顾某人;scared害怕。 60答案及解析:答案:One
118、possible version: After hearing the boys words, Pat felt sorry for his terrible experience and said at least that was a good beginning. She still believed in the sentence stuck in her mind, so the English teacher made a deal with her students. Though she had only a limited knowledge of Spanish, she
119、decided she should use the language more often while her students should use English the same way. In order to encourage her students to speak English y Pat also asked her students to tell their dreams in English while she did it in Spanish. It worked. Several students took turns to tell their dreams in fluent English. Amazingly, some students could finally dream in English, which made Pat almost jump with joy the moment she heard what her students said. She was not jealous this time. One possible explanation for this is that “ practice makes perfect”.解析: 略