1、Unit 1 Women of achievementSection Guided Writing人物描写写 作 技 法 指 导 文体指导人物描写属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人、记事为主，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分，即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短的评论。时态的选择要视情况而定，若写人物的过去就用过去时态，若写人物的现在就用现在时态。1生平介绍。人物的出生时间和地点是必不可少的信息；介绍生平时要尊重客观事实，材料要真实。2事迹叙述。选材要着眼于人物的生活背景及其成就事迹，以形成对比，起到突出人物的特点和树立榜样的作用。选材要有重点，不必面面俱到。3简短的评论。对所描述的
2、人物的评论要客观公正。亮点句式1介绍人物的姓名、出身及外貌特征He has fair hair and blue eyes.Abraham Lincoln，the son of a poor family，was born in Kentucky on February 12，1809.She is an ordinary looking girl，but her kindness and consideration impress me most.He is a goodlooking，kindhearted man.2介绍人物的成就或取得的成绩During her career life，
3、she obtained 132 championships，including 4 Olympic championships.When he was still a boy，he showed great interest in literature.He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers.Her story tells us that we should value what we have，and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life
4、.3介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价He became famous for his new theory.The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.We regard him as our model.Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.满 分 佳 作 构 建 写作任务根据下面表格内的汉语提示，写一篇 100 词左右的介绍简古道尔的短文。研究领域著名的野生动物研究专家，尤其在研究黑猩猩方面 性格 谦虚、坦诚、考虑周到 主要事迹1.童年时期，她碰巧看到一本名叫泰
5、山和杜拉德博士的书。受到极大鼓舞，打算研究动物；2那个时代，妇女受到歧视，但妈妈支持她；320 世纪 60 年代，简动身去非洲研究黑猩猩，用了 25 年多的时间观察和记录黑猩猩的日常活动，完全弄懂了它们的行为。成就1.成立了几个组织，发起一项保护动物的运动；2在世界各地演讲，呼吁年轻一代参加“根与芽”活动；3被授予了多个奖项。参考词汇：1泰山和杜拉德博士Tarzan and Dr Doolittle；2“根与芽”“Shoot and Root”。审题谋篇体裁记叙文主题介绍简古道尔的生平事迹时态一般现在时及一般过去时人称第三人称 结构首段：简单介绍古道尔的性格中段：介绍古道尔的主要事迹尾段：介绍
6、古道尔的成就遣词造句.对接单元词汇1 专家2谦虚的3考虑周全的4激励；鼓励5偶然遇到consideratecome acrossspecialistmodestinspire6打算做某事7发起做某事的运动8支持9瞧不起10观测；观察11行为12发表演说look down on/uponintend to do sthcampaign to do sthsupportdeliver a speechbehaviourobserve.巧用单元句式语法(一)完成句子1简古道尔，一位著名的专家，研究野生动物，尤其是黑猩猩。(名词作同位语)Jane Goodall，studies wild animal
7、s，especially chimps.a famous specialist 2成立了几个组织并发起了一项保护动物的运动让她世界闻名。(强调句型)It is have made her famous all over the world.3这就是简古道尔，由于突出的成绩她获得了许多奖项。(定语从句)Such is Jane Goodall，for her great achievements.setting up several organizations and campaigning to protect who is awarded many prizesanimals that(二)
8、句式升级4童年时期，她碰巧看到一本名叫泰山和杜拉德博士的书。In her childhood，she which is called Tarzanand Dr Doolittle.In her childhood，she came across a book Tarzan and DrDoolittle.(过去分词作定语)came across a bookcalled5她受到了极大鼓舞，打算研究动物。She it and intended to study animals.，she intended to study animals.(过去分词作状语)was greatly inspired
9、 byGreatly inspired by it妙笔成篇【参考范文】Jane Goodall，a famous specialist，studies wild animals，especially chimps.She is a modest，outspoken and considerate woman.In her childhood，she came across a book called Tarzan and DrDoolittle.Greatly inspired by it，Jane intended to study animals.At that time，women we
10、re often looked down on，but her mother supported her decision.In the 1960s，Jane moved off to Africa to study chimps，where she spent over 25 years observing and recording their daily activities and fully understood chimps behaviour.It is setting up several organizations and campaigning to protect ani
11、mals that have made her famous all over the world.In recent years，Jane has delivered speeches all over the world，and at the same time she calls on the young generation to take part in the project“Shoot and Root”Such is Jane Goodall，who is awarded many prizes for her great achievements.点击右图进入 英 美 文 化 欣 赏 Thank you for watching!
