1、2021届高三复习英语名校联考质检卷精编（9）应用类作文1.假定你是李华,你校国际部要举行一场校园音乐会,并请你在开幕式上致辞。内容包括:1.活动目的;2.活动组织;3.活动预期。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。注:选拔赛-qualification trialLadies and gentlemen,_2.假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华,请你写一则通知,为学校近期要举行的排球比赛(the 2020 Student Volleyball Match)招募志愿者。内容包括:1. 招募目的; 2. 招募条件; 3. 培训时间和地点。 注意: 1. 词数8
2、0左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _3.新华中学近期组织了校园劳动周(Campus Labor Week)活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇简短的英文报道。内容包括:1.活动的时间与地点;2.活动的过程;3.你的评论。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_4.假定你是李华,你校与新西兰一所学校定期举办交流活动,最近有一组来自该校的学生要到你校进行访问,你校计划为此举办一场欢迎会。请你写一篇演讲稿,并在欢迎会上致辞。内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.活动安排;3.期望和祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾已给出,不
3、计入总词数。Dear friends,_Thats all.Thank you!答案以及解析1.答案：Ladies and gentlemen, Firstly, please permit me to show rest welcome to all of you present today. I feel greatly honoured to make this speech o of the organizing committee.This concert is organized to raise students interest in music and to provide
4、a platform for those with music talent to show themselves. Lots of students signed up for the show, so we arranged a qualification trial to choose the best ones. Therefore, the performances will be very impressive.I have more students will take interest in music afterthe activity and everyone here w
5、ill have a wonderful time today.Thank you for your attention.2.答案： NOTICEOur school is going to hold the 2020 Student Volleyball Match. In order to ensure the smooth running of the event, it is necessary to recruit volunteers to provide quality services such as guidance and support. The volunteers a
6、re required not only to be healthy and organized, but to be able to respond to the emergencies. In addition, the ones with related experience are preferred. Once accepted, the volunteers will receive appropriate and efficient training in the gymnasium on 6th Dec., beginning at 5 pin and lasting one
7、and a half hours. Call 010 -6275 3588 for further information.Students Union解析：高分句型:1.In order to ensure the smooth running of the event, it is necessary to recruit volunteers to provide quality services such as guidance and support.为确保活动顺利进行,需要招募志愿者提供指导、支持等优质服务.In order to ensure为动词不定式做目的状语;it为形式主语
8、,后面的不定式to recruit volunteers 为真正的主语.2.Once accepted, the volunteers will receive appropriate and efficient training in the gymnasium on 6th Dec, beginning at 5 pm and lasting one and a half hours.一旦被录用,志愿者将于12月6日在体育馆接受适当和有效的培训,从下午5点开始,持续一个半小时.Once accepted为once引导的条件状语从句.beginning at 5 pm and lasting
9、 one and a half hours为现在分词短语作状语. 3.答案： In order to enhancestudentsphysicalquality, our school organized a “Campus Labor Week” activity.It was held from May 15th to 19th in our school. Some lectures on labor skills were given on the first day, from which we benefitted a lot. Cutting trees and waterin
10、g flowers were attractions to Senior One. Varieties of other labor projects gave us unforgettable experiences. Undoubtedly, not only can this event enrich our school life but also offer us opportunities to learn more daily practical skills!4.答案： Dear friends,Welcome to our school! Its my honour to b
11、e here to say something about this event whose theme is Chinese traditional culture.During this week, some activities will be organised for you to experience the rich Chinese cultures, such as paper-cutting and Beijing Opera. And youll have the chance to attend a lecture, learning to make paper-cutt
12、ing under the direction of some famous folk artists.I do hope youll get a meaningful experience here. And do not hesitate to ask us for help if you have any questions or needs.Thats all. Thank you!解析：本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,要求考生为欢迎会写一篇演讲稿,表示对来自新西兰学校学生的欢迎,介绍活动安排并表达期望和祝愿。 【详解】第一步:审题 体裁:应用文 时态:根据提示,时态应为一般将来时和一般现
13、在时。 结构:三段式:第一段表示欢迎;第二段介绍活动安排;第三段表示期望和祝愿。 要求:1. 表示对来自新西兰学校学生的欢迎 2. 介绍活动安排 3. 表达期望和祝愿 第二步:列提纲 (重点单词及词组) Its ones honour to do sth. (做某事是某人的荣幸); organise (组织); such as (例如); paper-cutting (剪纸); Beijing Opera (京剧); learn to do sth. (学习做某事); under the direction of sb. (在某人的指导下); folk (民间的); meaningful (有
14、意义的); hesitate to do sth. (犹豫要去做某事); ask sb. for help (向某人寻求帮助) 第三步:连词成句 1. Welcome to our school! 2. Its my honour to be here to say something about this event. 3. During this week, some activities will be organised for you to experience the rich Chinese cultures. 4. And youll have the chance to at
15、tend a lecture. 5. I do hope youll get a meaningful experience here. 6. And do not hesitate to ask us for help if you have any questions or needs. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) 1. 表文章结构顺序:first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second ; and then; finally; in the end; at l
16、ast 2. 表并列补充关系:Whats more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only but also; as well as; bothand 3. 表转折对比关系:but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand, on the other hand; some, while others 4. 表因果关系:because; because of; for; so; since;
17、thus; therefore; as a result; why 5. 表总结:in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。 第五步:润色修改 根据写作内容需要,加入高级句式,如名词性从句,定语从句,状语从句等。 Its my honour to be here to say something about this event.本句用来引出下文,介绍我们要举办的活动。可以使用定语从句,进一步介绍活动的主题
18、是什么。润色修改为:Its my honour to be here to say something about this event whose theme is Chinese traditional culture. 【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句,如:Its my honour to be here to say something about this event whose theme is Chinese traditional culture,这句话为whose引导的定语从句;其次,使用了一些固定句型,如:Its ones honour to do sth; learn to do sth; hesitate to do sth.等,使语言更加丰富;同时使用了一些高级词汇及短语,如such as; meaningful; under the direction of sb.等,让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
