1、Section_Writing关注信关注信(letter of concern)属于应用文的范畴。关注信是作者就某一个问题或一些现象，表达自己对事件的关心，并提出自己的一些看法和解决办法。一、基本结构开头：简单介绍写信的缘由。主体：针对对方问题(如生病等)进行有针对性的鼓励和安慰，并适当提出自己的建议。注意语气一定要委婉，能体现出自己对对方的关切之情。结尾：简单的希望或祝福。二、增分佳句1开头常用语：Im shocked/awfully sorry to hear that .It was a great shock to hear that .It broke my heart to hea
2、r that .I just cant tell you how sad I was when I heard that .I cant tell you how sorry I felt when I heard that .I am writing to express my deep sympathy/care for you.2主体常用语：I understand how you feel now.I know the way you feel very well.Youll always have a support in me.Its true that attitude deci
3、des everything.So you should never give up no matter what happens.Please let me know if there is anything I can do.If I can be of any help, please dont hesitate to let me know.3结尾常用语：Im looking forward to .I hope our caring will help to comfort you.I hope that time will take away the sorrow of your
4、recent loss.Remember that my heart and my thoughts are with you.题目要求为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；2信的开头与结尾已为你拟好。参考词汇：temper n脾气，情绪Hi Worried，Im sorry to kn
5、ow that youre having such a bad time at the moment._Yours，Jamie第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为表达关注建议信；2确定人称：本文以第二人称为主；3确定时态：本文主要时态为一般现在时。二、构思第一段(表示理解并给予安慰)：很遗憾听说对方有此问题，并指出每个人都可能遇到这样的问题，所以让对方不必担心，但要学会控制自己的脾气。第二段(提出建议)：与信任的人进行交流，告诉别人你的困扰，释放自己的压力；多参加各种户外活动，多和朋友玩球类运动；保持乐观的心态。第三段(提出希望)：希望建议能够起到作用或对方的问题得到解决。第二步：
6、核心词汇想周全1period/stage 阶段，时期2go_wrong 变坏3unnecessary 不需要4selfcontrol 自控5avoid/prevent 避免6share_._with 与分享7remove_negative_emotions 驱除消极情绪8effective 有效果的9keep_an_optimistic_attitude 保持乐观态度10be_of_benefit 有益的11lift_ones_spirits 振作精神12get_rid_of/do_away_with 去掉第三步：由词扩句雏形现1每个人都会有这么一段时间，一切好像都变得非常糟糕。(when引导
7、定语从句)Everyone_will_have_one_of_those_periods_when_everything_seems_to_be_going_wrong.2没有必要担忧。(it作形式主语)It_is_unnecessary_to_be_worried.3你应学会自控，这会帮你避免去说或做你将后悔的事。(that引导定语从句)You_should_learn_selfcontrol_and_it_can_help_avoid_saying_and_doing_something_that_youll_regret.4与老师和朋友分享心情是个不错的选择，因为这样做可以消除你的消极情
8、绪。(it作形式主语，as引导原因状语从句)It_is_a_good_choice_to_share_your_feelings_with_your_friends_and_teachers_as_you_can_remove_your_negative_emotions_by_doing_so.5你应当多锻炼身体，这可让你振作精神。(which引导非限制性定语从句)You_should_take_more_physical_exercise,_which_can_lift_your_spirits.6保持乐观的生活态度，你将享受生活给你的快乐。If_you_keep_an_optimisti
9、c_attitude_towards_life,_you_will_enjoy_the_pleasure_life_has_brought_to_you.7希望我的建议对你有益。I_hope_my_suggestion_will_be_of_benefit_to_you.8祝你很快消除烦恼。May_you_get_rid_of_your_trouble_soon.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用which引导非限制性定语从句改写句3You_should_learn_selfcontrol,_which_can_help_avoid_saying_and_doing_something_that_yo
10、ull_regret.2用动名词作主语改写句4Sharing_your_feelings_with_your_friends_and_teachers_is_a_good_choice_as_you_can_remove_your_negative_emotions_by_doing_so.3用“祈使句and陈述句”改写句6Keep_an_optimistic_attitude_towards_life_and_you_will_enjoy_the_pleasure_life_has_brought_to_you.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Hi Worried，Im sorry to know t
11、hat youre having such a bad time at the moment. Actually, everyone will have one of those periods when everything seems to be going wrong. Therefore, it is unnecessary to be worried. You should learn selfcontrol, which can help avoid saying and doing something that youll regret. The following are th
12、ree suggestions.To begin with, sharing your feelings with your friends and teachers is a good choice as you can remove your negative emotions by doing so. Another effective suggestion is that you should take more physical exercise, which can lift your spirits. Last but not least, keep an optimistic attitude towards life and you will enjoy the pleasure life has brought to you.I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. May you get rid of your trouble soon.Yours，Jamie
