1、写作专项提升第二讲 记叙文英 语2023高 考 总 复 习 优 化 设 计GAO KAO ZONG FU XI YOU HUA SHE JI记叙文主要用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历,以写人、叙事为主要内容,应用广泛,写作形式灵活多样。活动报道和人物介绍是高考书面表达的主要考查方式。写作模板1 活动报道活动报道是新闻报道的一个方面,是对进行的活动进行报道。第一句话通常为全文主旨句,包括时间、地点、人物和事件四个方面。后文对整个事件的过程和细节进行详细的叙述。活动报道的语言平实客观,不追求过于复杂的句式。典例示范(2020新高考全国卷)假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报
2、写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员;2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;3.活动反响。注意:1.写作词数应为100左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。范文欣赏A Cross-Country Running Race Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race,which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.The students selected from every class took par
3、t in the competition.The route measured five kilometers,from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.Every runner tried their best to finish the task,with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement.At last,all the runners managed to arrive at the finis
4、h line,receiving cheers from all directions.The activity was highly spoken of,because not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise,but also made us more cohesive.范文赏析文章开门见山,一句话说明活动的人物、时间、地点;然后详述经过、结果;最后对事件进行评价。语言丰富,使用了如witness,extraordinary,which nearly drew the attention of every student and
5、 teacher of our school(非限制性定语从句),receiving cheers from all directions(现在分词短语作状语),because not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise,but also made us more cohesive(部分倒装句)等高级词汇和句式,提升了文章的写作档次,也显示出了作者较强的语言运用能力。增分佳句开头说明事件来龙去脉的常用语:1.In order to raise awareness about environment protection,the Eng
6、lish Club of our school organized a voluntary activity this Sunday morning.为了提高环境保护的意识,本周日上午我校英语俱乐部组织了一次志愿者活动。2.During the May Day holiday,my parents and I climbed Mount Tai.We were lucky that the weather was fine that day and we were able to see the sunrise.五一假期期间,我和父母一起去爬了泰山。我们很幸运,那天的天气很好,我们看到了日出。
7、3.The Chinese Ancient Poetry Competition will be held in our school concert hall this Friday afternoon,from 2 pm to 5 pm.本周五下午2点到5点,中国古诗词大赛将会在我校音乐厅举行。4.Last week,when I was on my way home something terrible happened.上周,当我走在回家的路上时,可怕的事情发生了。中间详细叙述活动过程和细节的常用语:5.Were scheduled to gather at the school ga
8、te at 9:00 am,and take a bus to West Lake,which will take about half an hour.我们计划上午9点在学校门口集合,乘坐公交车去西湖,这大约需要半小时。6.While walking on the country road,we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view.走在乡间的小路上,我们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的风景。7.Activities include putting up posters,telling the citizens the importance
9、 of protecting the environment and picking up rubbish in the park.活动包括张贴海报、为市民讲述保护环境的重要性以及在公园捡垃圾。8.At the end of the activity,we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day.活动结束时,我们合影纪念了这个难忘的日子。结尾简要总结或者评价该活动的常用语:9.It was the most exciting moment that I have ever experienced.这是我所经历过的最激动人心的时刻。10.
10、Not only did it make us close to nature,but it also gave us relaxation from heavy schoolwork.这次活动不但让我们接近大自然,而且让我们从繁重的课业中得到放松。11.The competition will provide an opportunity for us to have a better understanding of our traditional culture.这次竞赛给我们提供了更好的理解传统文化的机会。12.The competition broadened my knowledg
11、e on the Silk Road and encouraged me to learn more about our own culture in the future.这次比赛不仅拓宽了我关于丝绸之路的知识面,而且激励我以后更多地学习关于我们的文化知识。热点演练(2021江苏如皋第二次适应性考试)假定你是李华,你们学校近期开展了以“十八而志,感恩与责任”为主题的十八岁成人礼仪式(Adult Ceremony),请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员;2.活动目的与内容;3.活动反响。注意:1.写作词数应为100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Our school has
12、 recently launched an Adult Ceremony to encourage us to live with gratitude and responsibility.Attending the ceremony were school leaders,teachers and students who are 18 years old.The president on behalf of the school expressed his wishes that we should stay hungry for knowledge and never let down
13、the high expectations of teachers,parents and others in society.After the speech of the president,we students took a collective oath and wrote down our dreams.This event turned out a great success,convincing us that its our duty to aim high while doing solid work.写作模板2 人物介绍人物介绍的内容通常包括人物生平、性格特点、业余爱好以
14、及取得的成绩。高考对人物介绍的考查通常与书信、电子邮件等结合起来,是书信或者电子邮件中的一部分内容。有时候也要求按照汉语提示对名人进行人物介绍。典例示范(2020全国卷)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1.人物简介;2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。范文欣赏The person I respect There are many respectable people around us.Mr.Zhang,aged 50,is my favorite English teacher.He is so k
15、nowledgeable,humorous and responsible that I respect and love him so much.Honestly speaking,his great patience and assistance have a great impact on me.It was Mr.Zhang who made me perceive the importance of learning English well.Had it not been for his guidance and encouragement,I couldnt have won f
16、irst prize in the English contest.Without his aid,I wouldnt have boosted my integrated skills in English.Ill definitely remember his kindness and help forever.Mr.Zhang is a very respectable teacher indeed!I do thank him for what he did for me.范文赏析文章开篇点明尊敬的人。随后介绍尊敬和爱戴的原因。最后进行评价。范文语言丰富,使用了大量亮点词汇和句型,如k
17、nowledgeable,humorous,responsible,have a great impact on,definitely 等,体现了作者扎实的语言功底。句中使用了状语从句“that I respect and love him so much”;强调句型“It was Mr.Zhang who made me perceive the importance of learning English well.”;虚拟语气“Had it not been for his guidance and encouragement,I couldnt have won first prize
18、 in the English contest.”和“Without his aid,I wouldnt have boosted my integrated skills in English.”提高了表达难度和写作档次,增加了文章的亮点。增分佳句开头介绍人物基本信息的常用语:1.My friend Li Hua,aged 27,graduated from Peking University five years ago,and has just received his doctors degree.我的朋友李华,今年27岁,5年前从北京大学毕业,又刚刚拿到了他的博士学位。2.Li Mi
19、ng is my best friend.He looks handsome.He is tall and strong.李明是我最好的朋友。他长得很帅,人又高又壮。中间介绍具体个人事迹的常用语:3.He is good at sports such as running,football,basketball and table tennis.他擅长运动,例如跑步、足球、篮球、乒乓球等。4.Being kind-hearted and easy-going,he fits in well with others easily wherever he goes.由于心地善良,性情随和,他每到一
20、处总会很容易地与他人相处融洽。5.We have much in common regarding our study,interests and hobbies.我们在学习和兴趣爱好方面有许多共同之处。6.With their help,I regained my confidence and began to make steady progress.在他们的帮助下,我重获信心,并且开始取得稳定进步。对该人物进行评价的常用语:7.True friendship lasts a long time.I believe the friendship between Li Ming and I
21、will last forever.真正的友情是持久的。我相信我和李明之间的友谊会到永远。8.In my opinion,distance cant cut off the friendship.Only if we miss each other,our friendship will last forever.在我看来,距离不能阻断友谊。只要我们彼此想念,我们的友谊就会永存。9.He devoted himself to scientific research and made great contributions to the country.他致力于科研工作,为国家作出了巨大贡献。1
22、0.Considered to be one of the greatest writers in the world,he was awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature.他被认为是世界最伟大的作家之一,被授予了诺贝尔文学奖。热点演练假定你是李华,你校英文报正在征稿,题目是The Most Impressive Woman in My Life,请你写一篇稿件,投给校英文报。内容包括:1.这位女士的特点;2.这位女士对于你的影响。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。The Most Impressive Woman in My L
23、ife During my life there are many people who impressed me deeply.But my English teacher Miss Zhao is the most impressive woman in my eyes.Miss Zhao is a warm-hearted lady with a charming smile on her face.As a teacher,she is ready to help those students in need.Besides,she is strict with us and resp
24、onsible for her work.There was story after story of how Miss Zhao,tired after a days work,went late at night to grade our papers.Under her guidance,I became interested in English.Without her help,I couldnt have made rapid progress.Such is Miss Zhao,an excellent teacher who makes a deep impression on me and wins my respect.
