1、Unit 1Teenage LifePeriod 5Reading for Writing()写作培优课 建议信(A letter of advice)写作培优课【写作指导】话题阐释 本单元的写作任务是写建议信。建议信是向收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。建议信可以写给个人,就对方遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可以写给某个组织或机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。文体概述 建议信除了要遵循书信的格式之外,内容要简明扼要,目的明确,理由充足,有说服力。1.首段:表明写作意图,陈述事由;2.主体:提出建议并阐述理由;3.结尾:礼貌地表达希望采纳建议。框架建构Dear_,Im glad
2、to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _ _(引出对方需要建议的主题).Here are a few suggestions(引出作者的建议).First,it is important to _.Then,it also helps to _.Besides,it should be a good idea to _.You can also _.(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下)As to _,I suggest _(需要具体到某一方面).In addition,_(其他的建议).Im sure _(预测可能的结
3、果,给对方以信心和决心).I hope _(表达愿望).Yours sincerely,Li Hua【典题示例】为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下:1.表示理解并给予安慰;2.提出建议并说明理由。注意:1.词数100个左右;2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:temper n.脾气,情绪Hi Worried,Im
4、 sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment._ Yours,JamieStep 1谋篇立意体裁:应用文Tips开头:Try to understand and comfort him主体:Give him some practical suggestions and related reasons结尾:Hope he will be better 时态:一般现在时人称:第二人称为主Step 2语言支架1.知道你现在过得很糟糕,我很抱歉。_过得很糟糕_目前,现在运用宾语从句连词成句_ have a bad time
5、at the momentIm sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.2.事实上,每个人都会有这样一个事情看起来不对劲的时期,所以你不用太担心。_事实_看起来,似乎用适当的从句连词成句_ truthseem to doThe truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to bewrong,so you dont have to worry so much.3.重要的是学会控制你的脾气,为的是你不会做任何你会后悔的事或说任
6、何你会后悔的话。control ones temper_ 为的是regret_连词成句(使用不定式作表语和so that引导的目的状语从句)_ 控制某人的脾气so that/in order that后悔,遗憾The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not door say anything youll regret.4.到户外和你的朋友一起玩团队游戏,因为体育锻炼是消除愤怒的有效方法。_ 到户外team games_ 因为_消除,去除连词成句_ go outdoors团队游戏since/no
7、w that/as/because/forget rid ofGo outdoors and play team games with your friends,as physical exercise is aneffective way to get rid of anger.Step 3润色成篇Hi Worried,Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to
8、be wrong,so you dont have to worry so much.The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret.Here are three useful tips:First,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or y
9、ourself.Second,go outdoors and play team games with your friends,as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And third,remain optimistic about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as norma
10、l.Yours,Jamie【善积累获新知】话题词汇识记1.有关青少年生活的建议信的词汇:absent(缺席的,缺勤的);accustomed(习惯的);activity(活动);celebrate(庆祝);celebration n.(庆祝;庆祝会);concentrate(聚精会神);confident(自信的);crazy(着迷的;疯狂的);curious(好奇的);discuss(讨论);eager(渴望的,热切的);encourage(鼓励);encouragement n.(鼓励);favourite(最喜爱的);graduation(毕业;毕业典礼);memory(回忆,记忆);p
11、ractical(实际的;实用的);praise(赞扬,表扬);pressure(压迫;压力);pride(自豪,骄傲);progress(进步);scholarship(奖学金)2.有关青少年生活的建议信的短语:achieve success(获得成功);ask for leave(请假);be absent from(缺席);be absorbed/buried/occupied in(全神贯注于,专心致志于);be strict with(对要求严格);catch up with(赶上);cheat in the exam(考试作弊);do/make/perform/carry out
12、an experiment(做实验);drop out of school(退学;辍学);figure out(理解;明白;计算);go over(复习);graduate from(毕业于);have a good command/knowledge of(精通);make an effort to do sth.(努力去做某事);make progress(取得进步);make up ones mind(做出决定;下决心);take part in/participate in(参加);take an active part in(积极参加);spare no effort to do s
13、th.(不遗余力去做某事);team up with(与合作,与协作)话题好句背诵1.(2018北京高考)Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture,I suggest you apply for Peking University,one of the best universities in China.鉴于你对中国文化的浓厚兴趣,我建议你申请中国最好的大学之一北京大学。2.(2018全国卷)Hopefully,these suggestions would be of great help to you.I have the confid
14、ence that you will have a great time.I am looking forward to your good news.希望这些建议对你有很大的帮助。我相信你会玩得很开心。我期待着你的好消息。3.Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school.Such problems are quite normal.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会
15、有一些帮助。4.Since you are so eager to improve your English,it will prove to be a great chance.既然你如此渴望提高英语,这会是一个很好的机会。5.I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.Remember:The man who has made up his mind to win will never say“impossible”.我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:一个决心要赢的人从来不说“不可能”。6.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.我相信你会考虑我的建议。7.Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help.如果你需要帮助,不要犹豫,一定要告诉我。本课结束
