1、第三部分 高考题型突破题型六读后续写题组1 无下划线关键词语Writing 1 2021山东中学联盟大联考阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was lunchtime. Jerry, David, Tom and I went to the dining hall to have lunch. I glanced across the busy cafeteria and saw the new student, Jack. He was holding his plate and waiting in line.David noticed him
2、 too. Why is the new kid dressed like the headmaster? he asked. Tom and Jerry laughed.Jacks cool. Hes in my English and history classes, I said. However, I kept the truth that Jack and I had become friends when we worked on a project together. We discovered that we were both enthusiastic readers som
3、ething I would never admit to Jerry, David and Tom.I saw that Jack was walking toward us. Dont do it,I thought, but in seconds he was at our table. My friends raised their eyebrows. Jerry, David and Tom piled their backpacks on the table and chairs so that there was no space left for another person
4、to sit down. David said,I dont think we have room.This awkward situation froze the air. I could feel Jack looking at me, but I stared at my lunch as if it had contained precious pearls of wisdom instead of rice and beans. After a long, uncomfortable pause, Jack left. I should have spoken up for him,
5、 but I couldnt walk away from my three friends, could I?Jack didnt speak to me after that meeting. He was soon hanging around with another group of kids. A few months later, I saw an announcement about Jack being chosen to be president of the school book club. I was happy for Jacks achievement, but
6、I realized I had made a big mistake when I said nothing at the lunch table that day. Why was I so afraid that my friends might find out that I like to read?As I stared at the announcement, I knew I needed to apologize to Jack even if he did not want to become my friend again. I thought that my three
7、 friends would not agree. I also thought that I risked losing them as well. However, I knew that I would lose myself if I did nothing.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Paragraph 1:As the dismissal bell rang, I gathered up my books, took a deep breath, and went to find Jack. _ _Paragraph 2:Jack nodded, and
8、 then mentioned my three friends._Writing 2 2021广东广州阶段训练阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ada! Milk! Mama called.It was Adas turn to get milk. Ada sighed and shut her first-aid book.Her head ached from reading in the dim morning light, but how else could she learn?Ada tied the cow close to a tree
9、. Somewhere down the mountain, some volunteer doctors were teaching medical skills to village nurses. Ada heard Doctor Betty drive off hours ago.She should have taken me with her. She thinks Im too young, but shes wrong. I am already 16!Ada thought.Ada carried the milk back to Mama,and then wandered
10、 up the road. Roy,a village boy,got a donkey, and some kids gathered around to see it. Roy was always doing something to get attention. He was trying to stand on the animals bare back.No wonder they dont trust kids with anything important, Ada thought,sighing. She had just turned away when she heard
11、 a thud and a few screams. Roy lay on the ground nearby moaning in pain. The donkey stood several meters away.Roy! The kids nearby ran towards him.Get Betty, one said. Ada shook her head.Bettys gone to the city. The other kids seemed frozen.Ada ran to where Roy was lying. She dropped to her knees on
12、 the dusty road.Roy! Can you hear me? Roy moaned in agony. Ada saw that one of his legs was crooked,bent a little sideways between the knee and the ankle. A broken leg!She remembered what the first-aid book had said about broken legs: if there is no ambulance,straighten the bone before moving the vi
13、ctim. There certainly wouldnt be any ambulance here. Ada looked back up the road. The other kids were still standing there,watching.Victor! Ada called to one of the boys.Go and get Roys mama,and find someone with a truck. She turned to the others.Give me your shirts. We need something to tie his leg
14、 with.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Paragraph 1:Ada then found a strong stick, which she would use to keep his leg straight. _Paragraph 2:The next day, Betty came to Adas home._Writing 3 2021湖北黄冈模拟阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Through our lives, we can gain a lot and lose much. But we should a
15、lways be honest, as honesty is always regarded as a virtue. Every time I talk about the topic, something crowds into my mind as if it had just happened.I was 16 when one morning, Dad told me I could drive him to Mijas and then take the car to a nearby garage to get it serviced. At that time, I had j
16、ust passed the driving test, and I hardly had a chance to use the car, so I said yes without hesitation.I drove my father to Mijas, promising to pick him up again at 4 pm, and then I went to a nearby garage, and put the car in there. Since I had several hours to spare and there was a movie theater n
17、ear the garage, I decided to go to the movies. However, I was so absorbed in the movie that I forgot the time. When the last movie finished, I looked at my watch 6 pm. I was two hours late!I thought my father would be very angry if he knew what I was doing. And he would never let me drive again. So
18、I decided to make up an excuse. Then, I drove to the appointed place. My father was sitting in a corner, waiting patiently. I first apologized for being late, and then told him that I wanted to get there as soon as possible, but something was wrong with some of the main parts of the car.I would neve
19、r forget the way he looked at me. Im very disappointed that you thought you had to lie to me, Jason. My father looked at me again and said, When you didnt show up on time, I called the garage and asked if there was anything wrong. They told me you never picked up the car. So, you see, I know theres
20、nothing wrong with the car at all.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Paragraph 1:A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late. _Paragraph 2:But father, its exactly eighteen miles home from here, and its dark. You cant wa
21、lk back, I begged. _Writing 4 2021山东日照校际联考阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。As the mother of an eleven-year-old girl, I have read several books that tell parents how to bring up a girl to be beautiful, elegant, confident and rich. However, I have always believed that girls need to be brave above
22、all else, but this is easier said than done.I still remember I couldnt see the screen directly when my daughter switched to the animal channel, which was broadcasting a show about snakes. I stood as far away from the TV as possible, too scared to open my eyes. However, my little angel was not scared
23、 of the snakes. In fact, she watched the show with a keen interest. I was relieved that my daughter didnt get too many genetic phobias(遗传恐惧症). Even to this day, she is still obsessed with challenging herself with new things.This year, I got a chance to study in Singapore for six months. After the no
24、velty(新奇) of the first few days had gone, I found myself missing my family. With the summer vacation approaching, my husband agreed to make good use of the fact that I was staying in Singapore. He brought our daughter out to visit me and to enjoy a new experience in a new country.The reunion day fin
25、ally came. My husband and my daughter arrived in the second week of July. I was so looking forward to seeing them. I had made many preparations for their visit. On the first day, I arranged to see Gardens by the Bay. When we walked out of the MRT station, we were amazed by the sight of the Super Tre
26、es. When my daughter saw lots of people walking on the Skyway, she couldnt help shouting excitedly. She wanted to have a try. The Skyway is a 22-meter high suspension bridge, from which you can enjoy a birds eye view. When I came here with my friends last time, I firmly rejected their repeated attem
27、pts to challenge me to go up there. It was like the day with the snakes all over again. But could I really reject my little angel?注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Paragraph 1:My daughter was waiting for my reply._Paragraph 2:Halfway across the bridge, I had to stop._Writing 5和谐人际关系阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两
28、段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Alice had just been appointed in the multinational bank. After one month of severe training, today was her first day to go to work.She got up a bit earlier than usual, and decided to skip her gym workout as she did not want to risk being tired or getting late to her office on her first
29、 day. She went through her morning routine and spent a lot of time in selecting what to wear. None of her dresses seemed to appeal to her they were either a little too casual or too dull and she definitely wanted to make an impression right from the start. Finally she settled on a white embroidered(
30、刺绣的) dress.She waved bye to her mom and set off cheerfully towards the bus stop. But she saw a bus leaving the stop just as she crossed the street. Now she would have to wait for a good 15 minutes. 15 minutes passed and then 30 minutes and there was no sign of the bus. It must be stuck in heavy traf
31、fic, a kind lady who was also waiting for the bus told her. Hearing that, Alice got anxious. She had to reach her office on time. Then she saw a taxi approaching but when she tried to stop it, the taxi driver sped by without even taking a glance at her. Alice was wondering what she could do. It was
32、then that a car stopped near her and a man waved to her. The driver asked her where she was going and after Alice told him that she was going to the bank at Nariman Point, the man said, Oh, my office is in the nearby building. Can I give you a lift? Alice hesitated for a moment and got into the car.
33、 They exchanged names and began to talk for a while. Then the driver switched on the radio and was absorbed in the song. Alice looked out of the window and imagined her first day at work, worrying whether she was capable of the new job, and if she could get along well with her colleagues. After abou
34、t ten minutes, Alice realized they were not on the familiar route to her office.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Paragraph 1:She began to worry that she might get into the car of a bad man. _Paragraph 2:Then the car turned around a corner and Alice saw the tall building where her office was unexpectedly.
35、 _Writing 6亲情阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Growing up on a small farm, I lived a life that I took for granted. My father worked in the city as a plumber(水暖工). He was not highly educated, but he was smart, looking at problems in an engineers way. He was a man made of leather, brass and chewing
36、 tobacco who tried to teach my brother and me useful things, including respect. He also had a temper and was strict with us for he would scold us when we made some careless mistakes. Sometimes, my father seemed like a distant enemy to me and I didnt like him very much.One day I came home from primar
37、y school and his car was already there. Once inside, I was told by my mother that he didnt feel well. His back hurt. My father never missed work; in fact, when he came home, he often went to the barn to work. I once looked at him secretly around the corner as he lay on his bed in the middle of the d
38、ay.Later, my mother told me he got multiple myeloma(多发性骨髓瘤), a type of cancer. As the cancer grows, the person will shrink because the disease destroys the bodys energy and the abnormal antibodies cause problems for other cells and tissue. Bones eventually look like Swiss cheese, and when they break
39、, they may never heal. But I didnt realize that my fathers time was rather limited and just treated him the same way I used to.For the last year of my fathers life, his entire day consisted of rising from his hospital bed in the living room and walking to his chair to sit and think. He was predictab
40、ly on that bed when I came home one day during the ninth grade. I do not remember where my mother and brother were, but the two of us were alone. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Paragraph 1:He asked me to sit down and what he told me still moves me these decades later._Paragraph 2:At that moment, I real
41、ized that he was doing more than telling._题组2 有下划线关键词语Writing 7 2021浙江温州适应性测试阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Amanda felt as gray as the sky outside when she looked across the table at her three-year-old sister. Li sat on a booster seat, drinking from her sippy cup. Wondering why Li was still afraid of
42、 her, Amanda took a cookie off her plate and held it out to Li, Want a bite?As soon as Li saw Amanda reaching out her hand, her eyes widened. She jumped down from her seat and raced to her room. What an annoyance! Amanda complained to Mom that she had thought being a big sister would be fun. Mom too
43、k Amandas hand, reminding her that Li was in a new country with a new family and how scared she might be.Honey, she is still getting used to you, Mom added. Its only been two weeks.Over a year ago, Amandas parents said that they were adopting a daughter from China, and Amanda danced with excitement.
44、 Shed dreamed of taking her sister to the park, reading books to her, and teaching her to ride a bicycle. Those didnt happen, though. In the weeks since their trip to China, Li only let their mom and dad near her. Amanda drew pictures for her, read to her, and made funny faces, but none worked. When
45、ever she got close, Li ran away.I just wish I knew how to help her, Amanda said to herself, thinking of Lis frightened eyes. As she sat onto the couch, she turned on the TV and began to watch a cartoon about a dog and a cat. After a few seconds, Amanda realized that the cartoon was in another langua
46、ge. The show looked funny, but she didnt understand any of it. She frowned, turning off the TV. It reminded her of the time when they were in China. She got frustrated when people talked in Mandarin, the language spoken in Lis country.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好
47、;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Thats it, Amanda sped to her room._Paragraph 2:Mom came to the door and found them sitting side by side. _Writing 8阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。The tiny village of Sundial never seemed to get very cold. In the ten short years of his life, Andy had only ever see
48、n snow on three occasions. Due to the extreme heat this year, the villagers of Sundial were rather surprised when a snowman walked down from the mountains and into their tiny village.The snowman wore a thick white coat and a large blue hat over his round head. The villagers stared at the man made of
49、 snow. Is he a monster? They whispered among themselves, afraid that he would attack them. The snowman, however, just wandered into the library, grabbed some books, and began reading.Andy, ever a curious boy, walked up to the snowman. Why are you wearing such thick clothes? Are you cold? The snowman
50、 shook his head. Want to go play? Andy asked. The snowman nodded and they spent the day running through the woods, playing hide-and-seek. As the sun set, the snowman waved goodbye to his little friend and left Sundial, passing by Andys home on his way back to the mountains.Andys father, the village
51、head, saw the snowman when he looked out of the window at the setting sun. Cold sweat dripped down his face. The following Sunday, he gave the villagers a very different meeting.The next time the snowman came to the village, the people of Sundial were ready, armed with rocks and torches(火把). The str
52、ike was cruel. One of his coal eyes was knocked out, rolling down into the snowfield. As the snowman desperately tried to flee, Andys father struck him with a little torch, setting his coat on fire. The melting snowman rolled around, struggling to put out the blazing flames. As his melting body exti
53、nguished the flames, the snowman fled the village of Sundial.Let him go,Andys father said. If hes smart, he wont come back. He turned around to find his son on his knees, crying. Its alright,son. He wont bother us again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标
54、出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:That night, Andy didnt come home but left the village to look for the snowman._Paragraph 2:The snowman walked into Sundial once more. _Writing 1阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。One windy day in March, Kitty Miller was on her way to school as usual. There was a bakery by th
55、e roadside. When she glanced at the store window, several pieces of lovely cakes came to her eyes.Oh, she said to herself, how lovely! If only Mamma could have one! Kittys mother was very poor. She had been a dress-maker ever since Mr. Miller died in a car accident, but could barely make ends meet.
56、Therefore she had worked so hard to earn a living for herself and Kitty that she had become sick. She had to lie in bed all day, and when Kitty was away at school, the cold house felt very lonesome to the sick.When Kitty reached the school that day her thoughts were on her sick mother and the cakes.
57、 She was a good scholar, but today she made so many errors that the teacher looked at her in surprise. She said nothing when the teacher came to ask what the matter was. The little girl could only sit at her desk, with her book before her, and dream of those attractive cakes. When school was dismiss
58、ed, Kitty started slowly homeward. How she desired a piece of cake for her mother! She had gone only a short distance when she saw a gentleman in front of her drop his wallet. Running quickly forward she picked it up. It felt quite heavy in Kittys little hand.There must be a good deal of money in it
59、, thought Kitty. How I wish I could keep it. Then I could buy Mamma a piece of cake and so many other things she needs. But she knew this would not be right, so she hurried after the gentleman. Touching him on the arm, she said, Please, Sir, you dropped your wallet. Thank you, dear, said the gentlem
60、an taking the wallet gratefully from the bottom of his heart. Then noticing how poorly dressed she was, he asked, Why didnt you keep it, my child?注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式作答。Paragraph 1:Because that would be stealing, replied Kitty._Paragraph 2:The bakery owner happened to look out and saw her._Wr
61、iting 2阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was a hot June day, and Sammy Armstrong couldnt wait to get in the water. The ten-year-old was on a camping trip at McKinney Falls State Park with his mom, Kelley, his dad, Stacey, and his brothers, Ben, eight, and Willy, two.Around 11 a.m., Sammys moth
62、er and little brother Ben dropped the boat into Onion Creek, a river travelling through the parks 750 acres, and went in for a short trip. Sammy and Willy accompanied their dad to Upper Falls, which marks the point where Onion Creek falls 12 feet over a rocky ledge(岩架). At the top of the waterfall,
63、a pathway made of white stones crosses the river bed. Below is a swimming hole, 20 feet deep in some places.With his father watching from the rocks above, Sammy jumped in. He was a good swimmer hed been on the swim team in his hometown of Cypress, Texas. Sammy played in the water for a while, eventu
64、ally pulling himself out and onto a large warm rock and watching a group of children walk through the river bed above. They were summer campers from Austin who were headed back to the visitors parking lot after a morning hike. As the kids passed Stacey and Willy, a tiny five-year-old girl reached do
65、wn to grab a water bottle and lost her balance. In an instant, she was swept over the falls.A girl went over the waterfall! Stacey shouted. Sammy caught a glance at the girls arm and the top of her dark head as the roiling currents pushed her into the low area beneath the rocky ledge, hiding her fro
66、m the crowd above. She struggled in the deep water. I was shocked and afraid at that point, Sammy says now. His father, with Willy under one arm, walked toward the edge of the waterfall to try to locate the girl, but Sammy was the one within striking distance. You have to get her out of there! Stace
67、y yelled down at him. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式作答。Paragraph 1:The ten-year-old was nervous and took a few seconds to consider the situation._Paragraph 2:Soon, someone came and pulled both kids away from the water._Writing 3阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。I was watching TV in the living room w
68、ith my grandpa when a blinding flash of lightning(闪电) flashed across the sky, followed by a deafening sound, and the pictures disappeared with that sound. Before I knew it, a gray-white shadow had rushed in through the window and flown over my head. Bang! It hit the wall and slid off the wall to the
69、 floor. I was shaking with fear. I came closer and saw that it was a pigeon(鸽子). It looked at me in fear, trying to open its wings, but powerless. So I gave it a helping hand. I felt a few drops of warm liquid on my hands as I lifted it. They were blood! I gently spread its wings and there were a fe
70、w red feathers inside. Dont worry. Well get it out alive, Grandpa said to me. Then he took some cotton. We dried the blood, cleaned the wound, and then put it under a hair dryer to dry. All went better, for it had no strength left to resist. There happened to be an empty birdcage at home, so I put i
71、t in, and added a little water and some grains. After settling it down, I went to take my lunch break.For the next few days, as soon as I got home from school, I would run to feed the pigeon. Little by little its strength returned. One evening, while I was drawing at the table, I found it was eating
72、 biscuits. A few days later, its wound was better, its feathers grew and it became brave. Whenever I sat at the table to eat a biscuit, it did not wait to one side as before, but instead looked up at me for a biscuit. To my joy, I could not only feed it the biscuit, but also touch it with my fingers
73、. To my delight, I gently fingered its head, and it playfully pecked (啄) at me. After it completely recovered, I tied an orange rope around its leg to make it look pretty. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式作答。Paragraph 1:One day, I went out to play and asked Grandpa to tidy up the birdcage for me._Paragrap
74、h 2:Two days later in the afternoon, I suddenly saw two pigeons flying into the house!_Writing 4阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。A tornado(龙卷风)hit a small town nearby, leaving many families completely destroyed. Afterward all the local newspapers carried many human interest stories featuring som
75、e of the families who suffered the most difficult period to appeal to peoples attention and assistance.One Sunday, a particular picture especially touched me. A young woman stood in front of a simple mobile home, with a depressed expression on her face. A young boy, seven or eight years old, stood a
76、t her side, eyes downcast. Hiding behind her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera, wide eyes with confusion and fear. The article that went with the picture gave the clothing size of each family member. With growing interest, I noticed that the sizes of the family closely matched ours. T
77、his would be a good opportunity to teach my seven-year-old twins, Brad and Brett, and three-year-old Meghan to help those less fortunate than themselves.We have so much. And these poor people now have nothing, I said. Well share what we have with them. I brought three large boxes down from the room
78、upstairs and placed them on the living room floor. Meghan watched seriously, as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned goods and food. While I sorted through our clothes, I encouraged the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their less favorite things. The boys were pleased t
79、o join. Brad rose and went to his room fast. He came back bringing his action figures that he played with not so frequently. Brett also jumped up and ran to fetch some of his Matchbox cars and airplane models. Meghan watched quietly as the boys piled up abandoned toys.The boys placed the objects the
80、y had chosen to donate into one of the boxes while I filled the third box with clothes. Meghan walked up with Lucy, her worn, faded, best-loved rag doll hugged tightly to her chest. Ill help you find something for the little girl, too, I said to little Meghan. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式作答。Paragraph
81、 1:Mommy, I will give Lucy to them, Meghan turned to me._Paragraph 2:Recognizing what little Meghans gesture meant, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes. _ 答 案题型六 读后续写题组1无下划线关键词语Writing 1【文章大意】Jack是一位新来的学生,他热爱阅读,作者和他成了朋友。有一天在餐厅,Jack朝作者走了过来,但是作者的一个朋友却拒绝Jack就座。作者能感觉到Jack在看他,但作者却什么都没说。至此,二人形
82、同陌路。几个月后,Jack成了校读书俱乐部主席,作者想要去给Jack道歉。【写作指导】考生需要认真阅读故事,抓住主题友谊和五个关键人物的性格特征以及事件,结合续写两段给出的首句,合理构思故事的走向,让故事富有逻辑性且意义完整。整篇写作应以一般过去时为主。根据续写第一段首句并结合材料最后一段可以推断,续写第一段应讲述作者去找Jack道歉的事。再结合材料中提到的作者喜爱阅读、Jack成了校读书俱乐部主席及续写第二段中的Jack nodded可推知,考生应在本段写出作者提出加入读书俱乐部的想法。而续写第二段首句Jack nodded, and then mentioned my three frie
83、nds则表明,Jack心胸宽广,不计前嫌,同意了作者的请求。考生需要在本段构思一个能巧妙帮助作者解决与三个朋友之间可能出现的隔阂的好方法,并给故事一个合理的结局。【参考范文】Paragraph 1:As the dismissal bell rang, I gathered up my books, took a deep breath, and went to find Jack. A wave of uncertainty overwhelmed me. On the way to Jacks classroom, I had butterflies in my stomach. Howe
84、ver, urged by the strong feelings of guilt, I quickened my pace. The classroom door opened. Here came Jack. Looking into his eyes, I made an apology, explaining that I wanted to join the school book club.Paragraph 2:Jack nodded, and then mentioned my three friends. With hesitation, I had no idea how
85、 to answer him. Seeing through my mind, Jack smiled and put forward a good idea. The next day, we were having lunch when Jack approached, holding a notice to recruit new members, saying that if someone wanted to join the club, he must take three other students to form a group. To my surprise, my fri
86、ends were also interested in the book club. In a flash, Jack and I beamed at each other.Writing 2【文章大意】Ada是一个16岁的女孩,她想跟着村里的志愿者医生Betty学习医学,却被Betty以年纪太小为由拒绝了。一天,淘气顽皮的Roy从毛驴背上摔了下来,摔断了腿。然而,医生Betty不在村里,周围没有一个会实施急救的医疗人员。情急之下,Ada准备按照急救书上的知识给Roy简单包扎,并让小伙伴去叫人来帮忙。【写作指导】 根据材料最后的We need something to tie his leg
87、 with可知,Ada要给Roy实施急救。再根据续写部分的段落开头语可知,续写的核心内容是Ada如何对Roy实施急救以及Betty对Ada救人行为的肯定。按照读后续写正向发展的逻辑,Ada的热心行为应该得到表扬。续写第一段:由开头语可知,本段主要续写Ada用棍子对Roy实施急救的过程。根据材料中的Go and get Roys mama,and find someone with a truck可知,可以添加Roy的妈妈对Ada表示感谢,最后上车前往医院等细节描写。续写第二段:由开头语可知,第二天,Betty来到Ada家。本段可以从Betty对Ada的认可,同意Ada去上医学课,教她医术等方面
88、进行描写。【参考范文】Paragraph 1:Ada then found a strong stick, which she would use to keep his leg straight. She gently wrapped the shirt around Roys broken leg and the stick. Roy was clearly in a lot of pain and his clothes were soaked with sweat. Ada tried to comfort Roy, I know it hurts. Hold on. Youll be
89、 taken to the hospital immediately. Then came Roys mama, followed by a villager driving a truck. Roys mother ran to Ada and held Adas hands, Thank you, Ada, she said. Ada helped them get Roy into the truck. After that, they drove down the hillside to the hospital.Paragraph 2:The next day, Betty came
90、 to Adas home. I heard what you did. Good girl! Betty praised. You kept calm in an emergency. That means a lot for saving people. Ada smiled to her. May I go to the medical class now? Im already 16! Ada asked eagerly. Betty nodded, Sure. Now I know you have medical talent and youll be a good doctor.
91、 Come tomorrow and I will teach you medical skills. Years later, Ada became a surgeon and she always felt proud at the thought of this incident.Writing 3【文章大意】一天早晨,作者的父亲要求刚拿驾照不久的他载自己去Mijas,然后让作者开车去附近的修理厂保养车。作者趁着空当去看了几场电影,错过了约定去接父亲的时间。作者怕父亲生气再也不允许自己开车,故而编造借口说汽车出了问题,耽误了时间。但父亲已经了解到汽车一点问题都没有,并因作者认为必须对自己
92、撒谎而十分失望。【写作指导】文中的Im very disappointed that you thought you had to lie to me暗含续写故事的主调,父亲认为自己作为父亲没有做好,以至于儿子做出撒谎的选择。 续写第一段:根据第一段提示语可知,作者向父亲坦白了事实真相,那么父亲的反应是什么?他会说哪些话?第二段提示语提到父亲决定走回去,他为何会做出这样的决定?这些都是本段续写要回答的问题。续写思路作者请求父亲原谅,父亲认真听完作者的解释,认为错在自己,自己没有做好父亲这一角色,以至于儿子在这件小事上对自己撒谎,故而最终决定自己走回家,反思自己的过往行为。续写第二段:根据第二段
93、提示语可知,作者请求父亲不要走着回去,那么父亲会作何反应?作者接着做了哪些努力?由文章第一段中的Every time I talk about the topic, something crowds into my mind as if it had just happened的暗示可知,这件事是让作者终生难忘的关于诚实的一课,故最终父亲应该是徒步回家。这件事给作者留下了哪些感悟?续写思路作者无论怎样请求都无济于事,父亲艰难地徒步前行,作者开着车紧随其后,看着父亲,作者内心无比煎熬,这件事给作者留下了终生难忘的记忆。【参考范文】Paragraph 1:A wave of guilt swept
94、 over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late. Dad listened carefully as a sense of sadness filled his heart. Im angry, not with you but with myself. I realize that I am a failure as a father because you feel that you have to lie to me
95、. I have failed because I have brought up a son who cannot even tell the truth to his own father. Im going to walk home now and think where I have gone wrong all these years.Paragraph 2:But father, its exactly eighteen miles home from here, and its dark. You cant walk back, I begged. My apologies an
96、d the rest of my words were useless. I let my father down and I was about to learn one of the most painful lessons in my life. Dad began walking along the muddy road. I quickly jumped in the car and followed behind. I apologized all the way, telling him how sorry I was, but he simply ignored me. For
97、 eighteen miles he kept walking. Seeing my father in so much pain was the most awful experience that I had ever had. However, it was also the most successful lesson.Writing 4【文章大意】我认为对女孩子来说,勇敢是很重要的品质。我是一个连看到电视上的蛇都会害怕的人,但令我宽慰的是,我女儿并没有很多遗传恐惧症。我丈夫带女儿来新加坡看我时,我带他们去玩,我女儿看到许多人在悬索桥上行走,她就想试一试。我非常害怕。【写作指导】文章第
98、一段中的However, I have always believed that girls need to be brave above all else, but this is easier said than done是具有主题句性质的句子,即brave(勇敢)这一品质对于女孩们来说尤为重要,但说起来容易做起来难。续写部分的核心内容为我克服自身恐惧,在女儿和丈夫的鼓励下战胜恐惧心理。续写第一段:由续写第一段开头语可确定本段主线女儿在等我的回答,而当时我心里极为害怕、矛盾、担心。假如拒绝女儿的请求,担心她不高兴;假如同意,自己害怕在悬索桥上行走。本段可对在给出女儿答复之前我的心理活动进行
99、描写。由续写第二段首句可知,我最终走上了悬索桥,反推本段主线是我经过一番思想斗争,最终答应一起过悬索桥,本段应重点对我的思想斗争、女儿的反复央求、丈夫对我的决定的影响、我初次踏上悬索桥的感受进行描写。续写第二段:故事的发展可以根据以下两个不同的思路来续写女儿用实际行动帮助我走完了悬索桥;女儿和丈夫用语言和目光鼓励我走完悬索桥。【参考范文】Paragraph 1:My daughter was waiting for my reply. I was secretly worried. My daughter kept begging me, and I cant bear to refuse h
100、er. So I nodded slightly, with my daughters frowning face slowly showing a smile. My response surprised my husband,who was very excited as we headed for the Skyway. When I stepped on it, I found myself frightened by its height. I caught hold of the railing and could hardly move.Paragraph 2:Halfway a
101、cross the bridge, I had to stop. I was worried about whether I could walk across the bridge, because my legs trembled despite my attempt to stay calm. Under the bridge, a green wave formed at the top of the trees, threatening me. Just then, I heard a familiar voice saying Mum, you are the best. You
102、can certainly cross the bridge. Looking down, I saw my little angels bright smile. Finally, we finish the journey. My husband was surprised at my courage, but I knew it was because of my little daughter that I was so brave.Writing 5【文章大意】今天是Alice上班的第一天,她早早地起了床,收拾完毕后出门坐公共汽车,然而却久久没等来车。正在她着急时,一辆小汽车停在她附
103、近,主动提出载她一程,犹豫之后,她决定搭这辆顺风车。【写作指导】Paragraph 1的开头是她开始担心自己可能坐了一个坏人的车,续写部分第二段开头提到Alice意外地看到了自己办公室所在的大楼,因此她会感到担心,询问司机,但是司机并不是坏人,她没有遇到危险。故续写的第一段应该描述Alice和司机的对话以及她的心理活动。Paragraph 2的开头是然后汽车转过一个弯,Alice的办公室所在的大楼意外地出现在她眼前,所以接下来会讲到Alice最终顺利到达大楼,她意识到自己误会了司机,感到内疚等。【参考范文】Paragraph 1:She began to worry that she migh
104、t get into the car of a bad man. So she asked cautiously whether they were going to her bank. The driver said that they took a new shortcut, as there was usually heavy traffic on the other roads at this hour, and continued his song. That made some sense and Alice didnt say anything more. Another fif
105、teen minutes passed, and the road was even stranger to her. The man was driving speedily and Alice became more and more anxious. She decided that when the car stopped at the next traffic lights she would jump out.Paragraph 2:Then the car turned around a corner and Alice saw the tall building where h
106、er office was unexpectedly. She breathed a sigh of relief. Within minutes, they reached the gate of the building. Here we are! the driver pulled up and said. Alice got out of the car, her face turning red. She felt quite sorry for having doubted the driver. She believed there were indeed more kind p
107、eople in the world. She said, Thank you very much! with a big smile, and hurried to her office with great expectations. She knew she would have a good day.Writing 6【文章大意】我在一个小农场长大,我的父亲整天忙于工作和农活,他对我和弟弟一直比较严格,因此有时我感觉他对我来说就像一个远处的敌人。这种情况直到他身患癌症也没有发生改变,直到有一天他把我叫到病床前,跟我敞开了心扉。【写作指导】根据Paragraph 1的开头他让我坐下来,说
108、了一些几十年后仍让我感动的话可知,接下来第一段续写的内容应该是父亲跟我说的具体内容,应该是与他生活息息相关的内容,也会有对孩子的些许愧疚等。Paragraph 2的开头是在那一刻,我才意识到父爱无言可知,第二段侧重讲我对自己与父亲之间关系的感悟或对父亲离去的不舍等内容。【参考范文】Paragraph 1:He asked me to sit down and what he told me still moves me these decades later. Lying on the hospital bed, he told me about his life on the farm, h
109、is family, his loves, and his heartbreaks. Although he was tortured by the cancer, his inner self rushed out to me in a great flood as if a pipe had burst all of a sudden. He had been speaking for maybe an hour or more and mentioned that he actually felt regretful about being so strict with us.Parag
110、raph 2:At that moment, I realized that he was doing more than telling. He was asking to be forgiven. All it took was to understand that was what he needed, and I forgave everything, immediately. The thought of my father being an enemy disappeared, with tears rolling down my face. I held my fathers h
111、ands tightly, enjoying this deep but quiet love. Although he has gone for a long time, I still always remember that moment and the realization that I love him.题组2有下划线关键词语Writing 7【文章大意】Amanda的父母收养了中国女孩Li,但陌生的环境使Li害怕和姐姐Amanda亲近。一心想要帮助Li适应新生活的Amanda最终会如何赢得Li的心,并改善两人之间的关系呢?【写作指导】根据Paragraph 1的开头对啦,Aman
112、da(一边说着一边)快速回到她的房间可知,本段续写的内容应涉及Amanda找到了能够改善自己与Li的关系的方法以及她具体是怎样做的。再结合Paragraph 2的开头可知,本段还应提及两姐妹的关系开始变得融洽了,且她们的行为引起了母亲的注意。写作时可用关键词语:Amanda, Li, raced, excitement, worked, language等。根据Paragraph 2的开头妈妈来到门口,发现她们并排坐着可知,本段应描述母亲看到的场景、她的心理活动以及动作,还可涉及母女三人从中感受到的爱与幸福等。写作时可用关键词语:new, family, reading, realize等。【
113、参考范文】Paragraph 1:Thats it, Amanda sped to her room.Excitement bubbling up inside her, she searched out an English-Chinese dictionary and determined to learn Mandarin. After Amanda could speak some simple Chinese words, she raced to Lis room and spoke the language to her by the door. To her surprise,
114、 Li opened the door and inched out with curiosity. It worked! Amanda was so glad that she almost yelled out. Calming herself down, she tenderly asked if she could get in and got a big yes. Thus, the room echoed with the voice of speaking Chinese, drawing Moms attention.Paragraph 2: Mom came to the d
115、oor and found them sitting side by side.Reading a Chinese book with difficulty, Amanda pointed at the book and peeked at Li, as Li sat quietly with a smile on her face. Realizing that Li and Amanda had built their friendship, Mom tiptoed in, embraced her two daughters in arms and kissed them on the
116、hair. Im so glad that you could adapt to the new family. A beam of sunshine streaming in, happiness danced with the three peoples love in the air and warmth flew inside Amanda.Writing 8【文章大意】一个叫Sundial的村庄这一年经历了极端的天气,但令村民们相当惊讶的是,一个从山上下来的雪人走进了他们村,村民们都怀疑雪人是只怪兽,害怕遭到雪人的攻击。充满好奇心的Andy却主动和雪人交谈,并和他一起玩耍,两人成了朋
117、友。然而Andy的父亲村长看见雪人后却直冒冷汗,于是在雪人再次到来的时候,他组织村民对雪人进行了围攻。【写作指导】Paragraph 1的开头是那晚,Andy没有回家,而是离开了村庄去寻找雪人,根据文章第一段的信息可知,雪人是从山上来的,故Andy是去山中寻找雪人,再结合续写第二段的开头可推测,山中天气寒冷,常年生活在温暖地区的Andy可能在寻找朋友的过程中遇见麻烦,最后被雪人送回村庄。写作时可用关键词:Andy,snowman,whispered等。Paragraph 2的开头是雪人再次走进了Sundial村庄,再结合上文信息可知,接下来应该描绘雪人将Andy送回村庄,以及村民和Andy父亲
118、的反应。写作时可用关键词:coat,father,torch等。【参考范文】Paragraph 1:That night, Andy didnt come home but left the village to look for the snowman. He followed the trail of melted snow up into the mountains. As he walked farther, the trail disappeared, fading into the snowfield. Shaking in the biting wind, the poor li
119、ttle boy walked through the icy mountains, searching for his friend, before collapsing from the cold. As he fell into unconsciousness, he felt someone pick him up. Andy opened his eyes with an effort, only to see the snowman carrying him in his wooden arms. Im sorry about the others, Andy whispered,
120、 managing a weak smile.Paragraph 2:The snowman walked into Sundial once more. Andys limp body was held in his wooden arms. Wrapped around Andy were the snowmans coat and hat, given to the boy in an attempt to keep him warm. The snowman placed Andy at the feet of the villagers. Andys father threw dow
121、n his torch and ran to his boy, looking at the snowman, tears in his eyes, Thank you. The snowman walked away without saying a word, never to come back.Writing 1【文章大意】Kitty在上学的路上看到面包店橱窗里摆着诱人的蛋糕,她多想给生病卧床的妈妈买一块啊。可Kitty买不起一块蛋糕,她一整天都在想着这件事,放学路上,她捡到了一个钱包,虽然很想留下这个钱包,但她还是将钱包还给了失主。【写作指导】 第一步:根据上文发展和续写首句提示确定
122、续写方向和大致内容。第一段应描述Kitty与掉钱包的男士的交谈,并且Kitty最终有钱去买蛋糕。第二段可描写Kitty在面包店的情景以及她买到蛋糕回家后妈妈的反应等。第二步:根据写作内容,确定关键词(组),如:honestly(诚实地),smile kindly(和善地笑笑),present(礼物),recognize(认出),pick out(挑选出),及truthful(诚实的)等。第三步:连词成句,连句成文,写作时使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。【参考范文】Paragraph 1:Because that would be stealing, replied Kitty.But,
123、 she continued honestly, before I thought I must give it back to you, I did wish I could keep it, for then I could buy Mamma a piece of cake. The gentleman smiled kindly and said, Its kind of you to return my wallet. I would like to give you a little present and then you can buy the cake. He handed
124、her a few dollars and then waved her goodbye. Surprised and grateful, Kitty headed toward the store.Paragraph 2:The bakery owner happened to look out and saw her.As soon as Kitty approached, he recognized the little girl who had looked so longingly at his window. He quickly picked out the freshest,
125、fanciest cake he could find and took it out to her. When Kitty reached home with her gift for Mamma, she found her mother fast asleep. So she put the cake on a plate and her mother could see it when she awoke. When Mrs. Miller was told the wonderful story, she kissed her little daughter and said, Yo
126、u see, dear, it always pays to be honest and truthful.Writing 2【文章大意】10岁的Sammy跟着家人去游玩,热爱游泳的他一到目的地就迫不及待地开始游泳,然而不一会儿一个小女孩被冲进瀑布,震惊又害怕的Sammy要怎么做呢?【写作指导】由第一段续写的开头语和第二段开头的pulled both kids away from the water可知,Sammy救了小女孩,续写第一段可描述Sammy帮助遇险女孩的过程、小女孩的反应等。根据第二段续写的开头语可知,Sammy和小女孩成功脱险,该段可围绕两个孩子的状态以及Sammy和他的家人的感
127、受展开。【参考范文】Paragraph 1:The ten-year-old was nervous and took a few seconds to consider the situation.Then he dived in, cutting through the waterfall. In a few seconds, he was next to the struggling girl. Panicky, she tried to climb on top of him. Sammy went under for a little while, and then came bac
128、k up. Staying an arms length away from the girl, he asked her if she could swim. When she said no, Sammy carefully pulled her onto his back and swam toward the bank.Paragraph 2:Soon, someone came and pulled both kids away from the water.The little girl lay on the ground, coughing and too frightened
129、to cry. When Kelley walked onto the scene after her trip with Ben, she saw the crowd gathering near the swimming hole, and her heart sank. Then a woman came up and told her Sammy had saved a girls life. Relieved, she hurried to Sammys side and gave him a big hug. You are my pride and joy, she whispe
130、red in his ear.Writing 3【文章大意】一只鸽子在电闪雷鸣时飞入作者的屋子里,不幸撞在墙上而受重伤。在作者和爷爷的精心照料下鸽子痊愈了。【写作指导】基于所给文本和续写段落首句提供的信息,采用围绕中心提问的方法构思要续写的故事情节。一般分为四步:第一步:根据已给出的文本判断文章的立意。根据文章第二段作者和爷爷精心照料鸽子可推断出本文的立意应是爱护动物。第二步:根据续写第二段所给的段落首句倒推续写第一段应包括什么内容。分析续写第二段的段落首句可知,续写第一段要写到鸽子飞走了,这样才能确保续写的两段是衔接的。第三步:围绕续写第一段所给出的段落首句以及上面的分析进行提问构思:(1)
131、 How did the pigeon fly away?(2) What did Grandpa say when the writer returned home?(3) How did the writer react when he learned the pigeon had flown away?第四步:围绕续写第二段所给的段落首句进行提问构思:(1) Was there the pigeon flying away in the two pigeons?(2) How did the writer find one of the two pigeons was that one
132、flying away?(3) What did the writers pigeon do?【参考范文】Paragraph 1:One day, I went out to play and asked Grandpa to tidy up the birdcage for me.When I came back to see the lovely pigeon, I saw the empty cage. Grandpa embarrassedly said, I left the cage open while changing the water, so it flew away. W
133、hen I heard this, tears poured down my face. That night, I looked at the empty cage, as if the pigeon had come back. I imagined that it was eating the biscuits and I was patting it. When I came back to earth, I found my fingers had gone into the cage.Paragraph 2:Two days later in the afternoon, I su
134、ddenly saw two pigeons flying into the house!As I came closer, I saw the gray-white pigeons leg with an orange rope! Dear, youve not only come back, but youve brought your mate, I said happily. When it saw me coming, it looked from me to its mate. Then it flew away with its companion and joined a gr
135、oup of pigeons nearby. Watching it fly away made me sad again, but sadness was soon replaced by joy. It could get free and happy, and wasnt it better?Writing 4【文章大意】一场龙卷风袭击了附近的一座小镇,破坏了很多家庭。我在报纸上看到消息后,决定和双胞胎儿子及三岁的女儿一起帮助一位年轻的女士和她的两个孩子。在我们捐出自己不太需要的东西时,三岁的小女儿却要捐出自己最爱的布娃娃。【写作指导】根据第一段续写的开头语和上文提到的Meghan wa
136、lked up with Lucy, her worn, faded, best-loved rag doll hugged tightly to her chest可知,Lucy是Meghan最爱的布娃娃,因此可推测下文会描述我们听到她这样说时的惊讶以及Meghan对布娃娃的依依不舍。根据第二段续写的开头语可知接下来的内容应该是我也像女儿一样放入了自己珍爱的东西。我们捐东西是为了帮助受难的那一家人,因此本段很有可能会讲到我们对这一家人的祝福和关心。【参考范文】Paragraph 1:Mommy, I will give Lucy to them, Meghan turned to me. O
137、h, honey, I said. You dont have to give Lucy. You love her so much. Meghan nodded seriously, eyes glistening with tears. Lucy makes me happy, Mommy. Maybe shell make that little girl happy, too. She paused in front of the box that held the toys, pressed her round little face into Lucys flat face, ga
138、ve her a final kiss, then laid her gently on top of the other toys. The boys watched, open-mouthed, as their baby sister placed her favorite doll in the box.Paragraph 2:Recognizing what little Meghans gesture meant, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes. I replaced it with the new green ja
139、cket that I bought last week. I believed the young woman in the picture would like it as much as I did. The boys were inspired by our behavior and offered their beloved things to the family. We all wished the family could pass the difficult period as soon as possible and that they would love the things we gave them with all our heart.
