1、35分写作规范练(七)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。2019大庆市第一次质检About two years ago a new project was started
2、 in our school. I was working with one of my schoolmate. We had never work together before but we got along well. After the project, we started to spend some time together in school. One day we decided to take walk. Ever since that walk we had been best friends.However, it hasnt only been such easy.
3、 We have gone through both easy and hard times. But Im specially grateful to the hard times, because they have taught me a lot. My best friend has changed we. She has made me to believe in myself. And now I am focusing on achieve one of my biggest dreams. Without her, I wouldnt even have realized th
4、at my biggest dream is.答案与解析：About two years ago a new project was started in our school. I was working with one of my . We had never together before but we got along well. After the project, we started to spend some time together in school. One day we decided to take walk. Ever since that walk we b
5、een best friends.However, it hasnt only been easy. We have gone through both easy and hard times. But Im specially grateful the hard times, because they have taught me a lot. My best friend has changed . She has made me believe in myself. And now I am focusing on one of my biggest dreams. Without he
6、r, I wouldnt even have realized my biggest dream is.schoolmate改为schoolmates“one of可数名词复数”为固定用法，意为“之一”，故将schoolmate改为schoolmates。work改为worked此处表示过去的过去，应用过去完成时，其构成为“had动词的过去分词”，故将work改为worked。在walk前加atake a walk为固定短语，意为“散步”，故在walk前加a。had改为have根据句首的时间状语Ever since that walk可知，此处应用现在完成时，故把had变成have。such改
7、为so此处修饰形容词easy，应用副词，故将such改为so。to改为forbe grateful to常用于表示感激某人，be grateful for常用于表示感激某事。此处表示作者尤其感激困难时期，应用for，故将to改为for。we改为us该词位于谓语动词的后面，用作宾语，故应用人称代词宾格形式，故将we改为us。删除tomake是使役动词，其后接不带to的动词不定式作宾语补足语，故删除to。achieve改为achieving此处前面的on是介词，其后应接名词、代词或动名词作宾语，故此处应用动名词形式，故将achieve改为achieving。that改为what分析句子结构可知，此
8、处为宾语从句，引导词在从句中作表语，故将that改为what。第二节书面表达(满分25分)2019湖南六校联考假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jamie来信说他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣，但在阅读时遇到了困难，比如很多汉字不认识，读不懂文章的意思等，希望得到你的帮助。请给他回信，内容包括：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：中国传统文学traditional Chinese literature；汉字Chinese characterDear Jamie，_Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua参考范文：Dear_Jamie，
9、I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. Its never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you dont have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips. First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters, Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and Im always here to help. But the most important is to keep on learning and practicing. You are sure to make progress ! Best_wishes!Yours，Li_Hua
