1、2016届四川省南江县高考英语书面表达（二轮）赏析新编（6）及参考范文2016书面表达训练Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay on the topic of loving our parents.Your essay should meet the requirements below:1. Describe the cartoon and the message conveyed.2. Draw a conclusion and give your comments on the cartoon.3. Word l
2、imit: 100- 120 words. 【参考范文】As is vividly shown in the picture, old parents are sitting at table, disappointed. Although they receive a lot of presents from their children, no one comes back to celebrate with them. They feel very miserable and have no appetite, since what they want most is not such
3、material stuffs but the care and love from their children and grandchildren.Nowadays, young men look so busy and independent in modern society that they will never feel free to live with their parents. They move out and mind their own business every day. On usual days, they would not like to take th
4、eir time to visit their parents with the excuses of busyness. On some festival days, they probably share a little time to drop in on their parents or even just send some presents but dont show up personally like what the cartoon above illustrates. They think that presents can represent their love, h
5、owever, to the parents, who overcame a lot of difficulties to bring them up, those stuffs are far from what they really hope for. Therefore, however busy we may be, we should spend more time accompanying our parents. Considering their selfless love, we should return them the same from the bottom of
6、our heart. 【广东省高三考前冲刺卷】基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)今天是九月九日重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)，你作为志愿者和班上的其他同学到养老院去慰问老人，以下是今天的主要活动：1向老人赠送礼物(鲜花、自制贺卡)；2为老人提供服务(做清洁、陪老人聊天)。写作内容请你写一篇日记，包括以下内容1记录当天的活动；2发表自己的感想。写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，语篇连贯。_ 基础写作【参考范文】September 9th,2011Today is the Double Ninth Festival，the tra
7、ditional Chinese festival for the elderly；we visited the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day.When we got there，we visited the elderly in their rooms in groups，presenting them with flowers and selfmade cards to show our respect and love.Then we did some cleaning and washing for them with the he
8、lp of the nurses.As some old people felt lonely，we chatted with them about their old days，changes of our city，or anything they are interested in.The elderly have done so much for their families as well as for our country，so I think we should take more care and respect for them.2016书面表达训练假设你是李华，是校英语俱
9、乐部的成员。英语俱乐部下次交流的话题是My Hero，请你写一篇英语发言稿，介绍你班身残志坚的同学王跃。内容包括：1. 他不能正常地走路； 2. 他对待生活和学习的态度； 3. 你敬佩他的原因。注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear friends,_Thats all. Thank you.【参考范文】Dear friends, My name is Li Hua. I would like to share my hero with you, one of my classmates named Wang Yue.When Wang Yue was b
10、orn, he suffered from a rare disease, which made him unable to walk normally. As a result, he has to sit in a wheelchair all day. However, Wang Yue stays positive about life. He works hard at his lessons because he has a big dream. His ambition is to become a scientist when he grows up.Wang Yue is m
11、y hero because he never gives up his dream although he has a physical disability. His example inspires us to try our best to make our dream come true.Thats all. Thank you.【广东省高三考前冲刺卷】读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。There is a story telling of a religious master who is said to be capable
12、 of moving mountains.A man came to him asking for a demonstration.The master sat in front of a mountain for a moment，then went to the other side of it and declared the end of the demonstration.All the audiences were greatly puzzled and begged him for an explanation.He said，“There has never been a wa
13、y of moving mountains；what you can do is to go to the mountain if it doesnt come.”One of my friends，though with the makings of a merchant，was bent on being a painter.He resigned from office and devoted himself entirely to painting at home.Several years，however，saw no progress in this regard.A painfu
14、l retrospection brought him to his senses.He made up his mind to take up business in place of painting.It took him only a few years to become a rich businessman.Meanwhile he spent his spare time exchanging experience and skills in painting and calligraphy.His works finally won acclamation by expert
15、painters and were on sale in art galleries and grand hotels.He had his collections published and his dream of becoming a painter came true at last.写作内容请就以上的文章写一篇读后感，内容包括：1以约30词概括短文的内容要点。2然后以约120词就“学会改变”为主题，发表你的看法，并至少包含以下的内容要点：(1)根据你的生活经历，当所面对的事实无法改变时，是否应该改变自己？(2)简述一个改变自己的例子。(3)你认为有时候改变自己，才能最终改变属于自己的
16、世界吗？写作要求1你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。2标题自定。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。_读写任务【参考范文】Get Yourself Changed When Facing Something UnchangeableA religious master and a painter tried to change themselves when they were faced with something unchangeable，and as a result they both achieved an
17、eventual change of the world around them.The stories remind me of my cousin who used to complain about English learning.He thought it unnecessary to learn a foreign language and ignored it at all.As a result，he fell behind the others in his class and even failed in the exam.After realizing that it w
18、as not only a main subject but also the most widely spoken language in the world，he developed a good attitude.Thanks to his English teacher，he was well involved in English classes.He practiced listening and speaking English after class.Whats more，he kept an English diary，which helped him think in En
19、glish.A year later，he became one of the top ten students in his class.Believe it or not，he was even awarded in an English contest in his school.As far as Im concerned，change your attitude when you find the environment unchangeable.Only in this way can you achieve an eventual change of the world arou
20、nd you.【四川省成都七中2014三诊考试】书面表达 （满分35分） 假设你叫李华，你的一个朋友John刚从美国归来，邀请你参加本周日在他家举办的朋友聚会，但你不能参加，请你根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件:1. 表达想参加的意愿;2. 忙于准备高考;3. 由于感冒,身体不适;4. 表示歉意并另约时间。注意：可适当添加细节以使行文连贯；词数120左右，开头和结尾已给，不计入总字数。【参考范文】写作：Dear John,Im extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday. It is v
21、ery kind of you to invite me to your house and I really look forward to going to your party and sharing your happy experiences abroad. Much to my regret, I will be absent from your party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, for which I am now really busy prepar
22、ing.Whats worse, I have caught a bad cold lately and Id rather I stayed at home instead of going anywhere.Anyway, we will have many more chances to get together. Would it be convenient for you if we make it after the exam?Im truly sorry. I hope you will forgive me and accept my sincere apologies. I
23、look forward to your reply!Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua【陕西省西工大附中2014第七次适应性训练】书面表达（满分30分） 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike想了解你校开设的新课程通用技术的情况，你向他作如下的介绍：1、 这门课旨在提高学生的实际运用能力；2、 通过这门课的学习，你已经学会了修理、设计和制作一些物品；3、 你的感受。注意：1、词数不少于100；2、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；3、 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4、通用技术- General TechnologyDear Mike, Thank you for your l
24、etter asking about the General Technology, a new course that_ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】书面表达：Dear Mike, Thank you for your letter asking about the General Technology, a new course that we are taking at school. Here is something about it. The new course aims to teach us students basic technical skills and
25、improve our designing ability. From the course, I have learned to use various types of common tools safely. I can even repair some things that are broken in my house and community. Whats more, I can design and make an item that is useful in our daily life. We also have to attend a written test for t
26、he course before graduation. In my opinion, we will benefit from such a practical course and we will acquire more knowledge in an interesting way. We enjoy it mainly because the course is closely related to our everyday life. 【陕西省西北工业大学附属中学2014第六次模拟】书面表达（满分30分） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友正在写一篇关于各国中学生课外阅读(extra-cu
27、rricular reading)情况的调查报告，他给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解相关情况。请你根据以下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。1. 你校学生课外阅读的现状；2. 原因分析；3. 你的看法；注意：1.根据所给提示，适当发挥，要求内容充实，语意连贯。 2.字数不少于100。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3.邮件中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。Dear Helen,Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua【参考范文】 Dear Helen
28、,Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extra-curricular reading in our school. As a matter of fact, most of the students in our school havent realized the importance of reading, especially extra-curricular reading. Therefore, the time and energy devoted to readin
29、g are limited. Besides, some students prefer to read comic books, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.I think the reasons for such phenomenon are various. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others havent formed a good habit of
30、reading. They would rather spend time on TVs or computer games instead.However, reading is obviously beneficial to both our life and study, which can not only broaden our horizon but enrich our life as well. So it is quite necessary for us students to take up reading and for teachers to lessen the amount of homework so that we can have more time to read. Best Wishes. Yours, Li Hua
