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1、专题08应用文分类写作-介绍信-2021高考英语写作复习大全应用文写作|介绍信-介绍高三生活假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom来信询问你的近况。请根据以下提示给他回复一封邮件1.上周刚参加了高三开学典礼,并代表高三学生发言;2.个人的感受以及对高三的规划注意:1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_翻译小练习:1. 听到你的消息我非常高兴。到目前为止,我一切顺利。_2. 上周,我参加了学校为高三学生设计的开学典礼。_3. 在典礼上,我代表高三的全体同学致辞,感谢老师们的辛勤工作和帮助。_4. 我还承诺我和我的同学们会尽一切努力实现我们的梦想。_5. 如你所知,在中国,必须参加高

2、考的学生在高中最后一年总是很艰难,我也是。_6. 但我会勇敢地接受挑战,充分利用我的时间提高我的学习水平,同时努力保持良好的身体状态。_参考答案:1. 听到你的消息我非常高兴。到目前为止,我一切顺利。I am more than delighted to hear from you. Everything has been going well with me so far.2. 上周,我参加了学校为高三学生设计的开学典礼。Last week, I attended the opening ceremony designed for Senior Three students in our s

3、chool.3. 在典礼上,我代表高三的全体同学致辞,感谢老师们的辛勤工作和帮助。At the ceremony, I delivered a speech on behalf of all the Senior Three students, expressing our thanks to all the teachers for their hard work and help.4. 我还承诺我和我的同学们会尽一切努力实现我们的梦想。I also promised that all my schoolmates and I would spare no effort to achieve

4、 our dreams.5. 如你所知,在中国,必须参加高考的学生在高中最后一年总是很艰难,我也是。As you know, in China, the students, who have to take college entrance examinations, will always have a tough time in the last year in senior high school, and so will I.6. 但我会勇敢地接受挑战,充分利用我的时间提高我的学习水平,同时努力保持良好的身体状态。But I will take the challenge bravel

5、y, making full use of my time to improve my study, and meanwhile, trying to keep in a good state physically.参考范文Dear Tom,I am more than delighted to hear from you. Everything has been going well with me so far.Last week, I attended the opening ceremony designed for Senior Three students in our schoo

6、l. At the ceremony, I delivered a speech on behalf of all the Senior Three students, expressing our thanks to all the teachers for their hard work and help. I also promised that all my schoolmates and I would spare no effort to achieve our dreams.As you know, in China, the students, who have to take

7、 college entrance examinations, will always have a tough time in the last year in senior high school, and so will I. But I will take the challenge bravely, making full use of my time to improve my study, and meanwhile, trying to keep in a good state physically.Best wishes!应用文写作|介绍信-介绍游学团活动安排假如你是精英中学

8、学生会主席李华,你校将于2月25日接待美国某中学的游学团。你受学校委托,给美国的领队格林先生写一封电子邮件,介绍活动安排并征求对方的意见。内容包括:1.上午参观学校并交流校园文化;2.中午在学校食堂吃中国传统美食;3.下午与你校学生游览本地博物馆。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_翻译小练习:1. 我是李华,晶莹中学学生会主席。_2. 我很高兴得知你将于2月25日来我校参观。_3. 我写信是想告诉你我们为你安排了什么。_4. 上午,我们将带您参观学校,参观期间,我们学校的参观者和学生可以相互交流,谈论学校生活和文化差异。_5. 中午,我们邀请你到我们学校食堂吃午饭

9、。_6. 你可以品尝饺子、月饼和其他中国传统食品。_7. 下午,我们学校的学生会带你参观我们当地的博物馆,那里有很多中国古董。_8. 你觉得这些安排怎么样?我希望你在这里过得愉快。_参考答案:1. 我是李华,晶莹中学学生会主席。Im Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union at Jingying High School.2. 我很高兴得知你将于2月25日来我校参观。Im pleased to know that you are coming to visit our school on February 25.3. 我写信是想告诉你我们为你安排了什么。Im

10、writing to tell you what we have arranged for you.4. 上午,我们将带您参观学校,参观期间,我们学校的参观者和学生可以相互交流,谈论学校生活和文化差异。In the morning, you will be shown around the school, during which, visitors and students from our school can communicate with each other, talking about school life and cultural differences.5. 中午,我们邀请

11、你到我们学校食堂吃午饭。At noon, you are invited to have lunch in our school canteen.6. 你可以品尝饺子、月饼和其他中国传统食品。You can taste dumplings, moon cakes and other traditional Chinese food.7. 下午,我们学校的学生会带你参观我们当地的博物馆,那里有很多中国古董。In the afternoon, students in our school will show you around our local museum, where there are

12、many Chinese antiques.8. 你觉得这些安排怎么样?我希望你在这里过得愉快。What do you think of the arrangements? I hope you will have a nice time here.范文赏析Dear Mr.Green,Im Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union at Jingying High School. Im pleased to know that you are coming to visit our school on February 25. Im writing to te

13、ll you what we have arranged for you.In the morning, you will be shown around the school, during which, visitors and students from our school can communicate with each other, talking about school life and cultural differences. At noon, you are invited to have lunch in our school canteen. You can tas

14、te dumplings, moon cakes and other traditional Chinese food. In the afternoon, students in our school will show you around our local museum, where there are many Chinese antiques.What do you think of the arrangements? I hope you will have a nice time here.Yours sincerely,Li Hua应用文写作|介绍信-介绍大学报考的专业假定你

15、是李华。你的英国朋友George来信,询问你的近况及上大学准备报考什么专业。 请你回复邮件,内容包括:1. 正在认真备考;2.学医学专业;3.报考理由。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_翻译小练习:1. 我希望你一切都好。收到你的来信真是令人振奋,因为我正全力以赴准备考试。_2. 至于我的专业,我会选择医学,我知道,这是一个长期的承诺,是一个不能轻易做出的决定。_3. 但是,能够治愈人,甚至拯救人们的生命是非常值得的。_4. 尽管医生们面临着很大的压力,但我对医疗保健和帮助他人的热情告诉我,我在医学和健康领域的学习和工作不会出错。_5. 此外,医生在中国备受尊敬,

16、需求量也很大,尤其是高素质的专业人士。_6. 衷心希望我的梦想早日实现。最美好的祝福。_参考答案:1. 我希望你一切都好。收到你的来信真是令人振奋,因为我正全力以赴准备考试。I hope youre doing well. Receiving your letter is such a refresh since Im fully engaged in preparing for the exam.2. 至于我的专业,我会选择医学,我知道,这是一个长期的承诺,是一个不能轻易做出的决定。As for my major, I will choose Medicine, which, I know,

17、 is a long-term commitment and a decision that shouldnt be taken lightly.3. 但是,能够治愈人,甚至拯救人们的生命是非常值得的。But being able to cure people or even save peoples lives is so rewarding.4. 尽管医生们面临着很大的压力,但我对医疗保健和帮助他人的热情告诉我,我在医学和健康领域的学习和工作不会出错。Though doctors are faced with much stress, my passion about healthcare

18、 and helping people tells me that I cannot go wrong with studying and working in Medicine and Health.5. 此外,医生在中国备受尊敬,需求量也很大,尤其是高素质的专业人士。Besides, doctors are highly respected in China and in great demand too, especially highly qualified professionals.6. 衷心希望我的梦想早日实现。最美好的祝福。Sincerely hope my dream wil

19、l come true soon. Best wishes. 【答案】Dear George,I hope youre doing well. Receiving your letter is such a refresh since Im fully engaged in preparing for the exam.As for my major, I will choose Medicine, which, I know, is a long-term commitment and a decision that shouldnt be taken lightly. But being

20、able to cure people or even save peoples lives is so rewarding. Though doctors are faced with much stress, my passion about healthcare and helping people tells me that I cannot go wrong with studying and working in Medicine and Health. Besides, doctors are highly respected in China and in great dema

21、nd too, especially highly qualified professionals.Sincerely hope my dream will come true soon. Best wishes. Yours,Li Hua应用文写作|介绍信-介绍中医药学 假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack听说你大学准备攻读“中医药学”专业,发邮件向你询问原由,请你回复邮件。内容包括:1. 中医简介;2. 家庭影响;3. 个人愿望。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:中医药学 Traditional Chinese Medicine(TCM)Dear Ja

22、ck,_Yours,Li Hua请翻译:1. 谢谢你的来信!我很高兴回复你邮件,与你分享我在大学继续学习中医的想法。_2. 中医药已有两千多年的历史,形成了一套独特的诊疗体系,一代又一代中国人受益匪浅。_3. 每当我看到我父亲和祖父的病人带着满意和希望离开他们的诊所时,我感到非常自豪。_4. 所以我下定决心要继承他们的事业,主修中医,成为一名医生。_5. 我相信这将是我追求的一个极好的事业。_参考答案:1. 谢谢你的来信!我很高兴回复你邮件,与你分享我在大学继续学习中医的想法。Thanks for your letter! Im very glad to share with you my i

23、dea about furthering my study in Traditional Chinese Medicine at university in reply to your email.2. 中医药已有两千多年的历史,形成了一套独特的诊疗体系,一代又一代中国人受益匪浅。With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefi

24、t. 3. 每当我看到我父亲和祖父的病人带着满意和希望离开他们的诊所时,我感到非常自豪。I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction and hope. 4. 所以我下定决心要继承他们的事业,主修中医,成为一名医生。So Ive made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor. 5. 我相信这将是我追求的一个极好的事业。

25、I believe itll turn out an excellent cause for me to pursue.【答案】Dear Jack,Thanks for your letter! Im very glad to share with you my idea about furthering my study in Traditional Chinese Medicine at university in reply to your email.With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to

26、 diagnose and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit. I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction and hope. So Ive made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor. I

27、believe itll turn out an excellent cause for me to pursue.Best wishes.YoursLi Hua【解析】这是一篇应用文,要求考生写一封信向朋友解释自己大学选择中医药学的原因。第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时结构:总分要求:1.回信的目的2. 1)中医简介(中医的历史,中医对国人的或世界的影响)2)家人的影响(祖辈行医,耳濡目染)3)个人愿望(成为出色的中医) 第二步:列提纲(重点词组)be glad to do /diagnose / cure illness / made up ones

28、mind to do/ major in /turn out 第三步:连词成句I am glad to share with you why I choose TCM as my major when I attend university.With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness.It has left a long-lasting influence on Chinese even people from other countries.As

29、you know, my father, grandfather and great grandfather are all doctors.I am deeply impressed when watching them treating their patient, and feel really happy and proud when the patients get well. As if they were cured by myself.Ive made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a

30、 doctor. I believe after some studying and training, I will turn out a good doctor.第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词和从句)1. 表并列补充关系:whats more,;besides; in addition; as well as;last but not the least2. 表转折对比关系:however/ on the contrary/ but/ although/ in spite of/ despite/ on the one hand, one the other hand/ as for3. 表

31、文章结构顺序:first of all/ firstly/ second/ and then/ finally/ in the end/ at last4. 表因果关系:because/ so/ as/ thus/ therefore/ as a result第五步:修改润色(加入从句)【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句,例如:With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure ill

32、ness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit.中的which引导非限定性定语从句;I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction and hope. 中的whenever让步状语从句。范文看似短小,却言简意赅。尤其是第二自然段,总共4句话,但包括了题干要求的内容。几处长句子的使用显示了考生扎实的语言基础和表达能力。应用文写作|介绍

33、信-介绍高三年级高考百日誓师大会假如你是高三年级学生李华,请根据以下内容,写信给你在美国的笔友Peterson,告知他今年你校高三年级高考百日誓师大会(College Entrance Examination 100-day Oath Meeting的情况。内容要点:1. 大会时间、地点;2. 大会主题;3. 你的感受。注意:1. 词数:100字左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2. 信的开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数;3. 文中不得出现校名、姓名等真实信息。Dear Peterson,How is it going with you recently?_Best wishes.Yours,

34、请翻译:1. 你最近怎么样?我写信告诉你上周在我们学校举行的精彩的高考百日宣誓会。_2. 2月27日下午4点,包括学生、老师和来宾在内的1000多名参与者聚集在操场上参加这场激动人心的活动。_3. 今年的主题是“为高考而战”,校长在讲话中明确指出,学生要想在这次大考中取得成功,需要极大的勇气和努力。_4. 这次会议给我带来了很多力量,现在我坚信信心和毅力能给我带来光明的未来。_5. 如果你身边有什么有趣的事,请写信告诉我。_参考答案1. 你最近怎么样?我写信告诉你上周在我们学校举行的精彩的高考百日宣誓会。How is it going with you recently? Im writing

35、 to tell you the brilliant College Entrance Examination 100-day Oath Meeting held in our school last week. 2. 2月27日下午4点,包括学生、老师和来宾在内的1000多名参与者聚集在操场上参加这场激动人心的活动。More than 1,000 participants, including the students, teachers and guests, gathered on the playground for the exciting event at 4:00 p. m. o

36、n Feb. 27th. 3. 今年的主题是“为高考而战”,校长在讲话中明确指出,学生要想在这次大考中取得成功,需要极大的勇气和努力。The theme this year was “fighting for the College Entrance Examination” and in the headmasters speech, he made it clear that students need great courage and hard work to succeed in this big examination. 4. 这次会议给我带来了很多力量,现在我坚信信心和毅力能给我

37、带来光明的未来。The meeting brings me a lot of strength, and now I firmly believe confidence and perseverance can bring me a bright future. 5. 如果你身边有什么有趣的事,请写信告诉我。If there is anything interesting around you, do write to tell me, please. 【答案】Dear Peterson,How is it going with you recently? Im writing to tell

38、 you the brilliant College Entrance Examination 100-day Oath Meeting held in our school last week. More than 1,000 participants, including the students, teachers and guests, gathered on the playground for the exciting event at 4:00 p. m. on Feb. 27th. The theme this year was “fighting for the Colleg

39、e Entrance Examination” and in the headmasters speech, he made it clear that students need great courage and hard work to succeed in this big examination. The meeting brings me a lot of strength, and now I firmly believe confidence and perseverance can bring me a bright future. If there is anything

40、interesting around you, do write to tell me, please. Best wishes Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一封书信:假如你是高三年级学生李华,请根据以下内容,写信给你在美国的笔友Peterson,告知他今年你校高三年级高考百日誓师大会的情况。内容要点:1. 大会时间、地点;2. 大会主题;3. 你的感受。时态应为一般现在时。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如;College Entrance Examination 100-day Oath Meeting(高考

41、百日誓师大会),participant(参与者),gather(聚集),theme(主题), courage(勇气),strength(力量),confidence(自信),perseverance(坚持不懈)及firmly(坚定地)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。范文语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式,高级词汇有fight for(为而奋斗),a lot of(很多),succeed in (在方面取得成功),bring

42、 sb sth(给某人带来)以及how is it going with sb?(某人过得怎么样?),而且还使用了宾语从句“I firmly believe confidence and perseverance can bring me a bright future.”,状语从句“If there is anything interesting around you, do write to tell me, please.”,形式宾语“he made it clear that students need great courage and hard work to succeed in

43、 this big examination.”,非谓语动词“Im writing to tell you the brilliant College Entrance Examination 100-day Oath Meeting held in our school last week.”,全文没有语法错误,上下句转换自然流畅。应用文写作|介绍信-大学专业学习计划假如你是李明,刚刚高中毕业,你的美国好友 Jim 给你写信祝贺并想了解你大学的专业学习计划。请你根据自己的情况用英语写封回信,主要内容包括:1. 你的专业选择;2. 你选择该专业的理由;3. 为此你打算怎么做。 注意:1. 词数

44、80 左右;2. 文中不得出现人名、校名等真实个人信息;3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;4. 可适当发挥,使行文连贯;5. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Jim,Thanks for your best wishes!_Best wishes. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Ming请翻译:1. 我写信是想告诉你我将在大学里选择的专业。_2. 我决定主修计算机科学。我做出这样的决定是有原因的。_3. 首先,随着社会的发展,计算机在我们生活的许多方面扮演着重要的角色。_4. 其次,上网是我的爱好之一,所以我可以更好

45、地学习计算机科学。_5. 最后但并非最不重要的是,擅长计算机科学可能会帮助我在大学毕业后找到一份好工作。_6. 我知道还有很长的路要走。所以现在我必须全身心投入学习,尽我所能在所有科目上取得好成绩。_7. 如果我能随心所欲地学习计算机科学,我会专注于它,努力学习开发一些软件。_参考答案1. 我写信是想告诉你我将在大学里选择的专业。Im writing to tell you about the major I will choose in the university. 2. 我决定主修计算机科学。我做出这样的决定是有原因的。I have decided to major in compute

46、r science. There are some reasons why I made such a decision. 3. 首先,随着社会的发展,计算机在我们生活的许多方面扮演着重要的角色。Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life. 4. 其次,上网是我的爱好之一,所以我可以更好地学习计算机科学。Secondly, browsing the Internet is one of my hobbies, so I

47、can study computer science better. 5. 最后但并非最不重要的是,擅长计算机科学可能会帮助我在大学毕业后找到一份好工作。Last but not least, being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college. 6. 我知道还有很长的路要走。所以现在我必须全身心投入学习,尽我所能在所有科目上取得好成绩。I know there is a long way to go. So now I must devote myself to st

48、udy and try my best to get good grades in all subjects. 7. 如果我能随心所欲地学习计算机科学,我会专注于它,努力学习开发一些软件。If I can learn computer science as I wish, I will focus on it and study hard to develop some software. 【答案】Dear Jim, Thanks for your best wishes! Im writing to tell you about the major I will choose in the

49、university. I have decided to major in computer science. There are some reasons why I made such a decision. Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life. Secondly, browsing the Internet is one of my hobbies, so I can study computer sci

50、ence better. Last but not least, being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college. I know there is a long way to go. So now I must devote myself to study and try my best to get good grades in all subjects. If I can learn computer science as I wish, I will focu

51、s on it and study hard to develop some software. Best wishes. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封回信,向朋友讲述自己大学的专业学习计划。第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构:四段式结构。第一段表示感谢(已给出);第二段讲述大学专业学习和理由;第三段讲述为此打算如何做;第四段寒暄结束并表达期待(已给出)。要求:1.表达感谢(已给出) 2.讲述大学专业选择及理由 1)专业选择:计算机科学专业

52、(major in computer science) 2)理由(play an important role; one of my hobbies; find a good job) 3.打算如何做。(focus on; study hard) 4.寒暄结束并表达期待(已给出)第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)decide to do; major in; play an important role; graduate from college; devote oneself to; try ones best to; focus on 第三步:连词成句1. I have decided to

53、major in computer science.2. Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life. 3. Last but not least, being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college.4. So now I must devote myself to study and try

54、my best to get good grades in all subjects.5. If I can learn computer science as I wish, I will focus on it and study hard to develop some software.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)表文章结构顺序:first of all; firstly/first; secondly/second; and then; finally; in the end; at last连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句

55、子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。第五步:润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如:Im writing to tell you about the major I will choose in the university.(我写信是想告诉你我将在大学选择的专业。)这句话中“I will choose in the university”为定语从句,修饰先行词the major,从句中作宾语,关系代词可省略。There are some reasons why I made such a d

56、ecision.(我做出这样的决定是有原因的。)这句话中why引导定语从句。If I can learn computer science as I wish, I will focus on it and study hard to develop some software.( 如果我可以如我所愿学习计算机科学,我会专注于它,努力学习,开发一些软件。)这句话中if引导条件状语从句。2.使用了一些固定词组,如decide to do; major in; play an important role; graduate from college; devote oneself to; try ones best to; focus on等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

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