1、第2讲应用文(二)(邀请信&道歉信&申请信)典例 (2019 全国卷)注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【要点盘点】1.第一段点题:邀请Allen 参加你校的音乐节Im glad to invite you to _(参加我校下周举行的音乐节).attend the Music Festival inour school next week2.第二段主体段落展开:音乐节开幕时间、活动安排音乐节:开幕时间、地点The Music Festival _(将在6月5日上午9:00于我校体育馆进行).will start at 9:00 am on June 5th ato
2、ur school gym音乐节:活动安排a._(校长将致辞)the festival at the beginning.b.There are many _(不同风格的音乐表演).The headmaster will addressshows of different styles of music3.第三段表达期望:希望Allen 表演一个节目All the students expect you could _(代表外教们表演一个节目).give a performanceon behalf of foreign teachers【我来升级】1.把句和句合并为一个含非限制性定语从句的句
3、子Im more than excited to invite you to attend the Music Festival,_.which will be held at 9:00 am on June 5th atour school gym2.活动安排:具体化,条理化(1)使用定语从句,补充说明节目内容。On the first day,the headmaster will address the festival at the very beginning,_(之后学校乐队将演奏海顿、莫扎特和贝多芬的乐曲).after which the schoolorchestra will
4、 play masterpieces of Haydn,Mozartand Beethoven(2)使用非谓语动词,进一步解释节目特点。On the second day,Chinese traditional instruments will take the stage,_.(演奏中国古典音乐,如二泉映月梁祝).presenting Chinese classics like Er QuanYing Yue and Liangzhu(3)使用倒装结构,使表达更生动On the last day,_(节目的精彩部分到来了),where a live rock show given by co
5、ntemporary stars such as Wang Feng will bring their brilliant and typical performances there.here comes the highlight of the festival3.给出建议,使文章更具说服力All the students expect you could give a performance on behalf of foreign teachers._(请带着吉他,准备好在节目那天弹奏你最喜欢的音乐).Please take your guitarand get ready to pl
6、ay your favorite music at the festival【五档满分范文】Dear Allen,How is everything going?Im more than excited to invite you to attend the Musical Festival,which will be held in our school from June 5th to June 7th lasting 3 days.The Music Festival will start at 9:00 am at our school gym.A wide variety of ac
7、tivities will be included in the festival.On the first day,the headmaster will address the festival at the very beginning,after which the school orchestra will play masterpieces of Haydn,Mozart and Beethoven.On the second day,Chinese traditional instruments will take the stage,presentingChinese clas
8、sics like Er QuanYingYue and Liangzhu.On the last day,here comes the highlight of the festival,where a live rock show given by contemporary stars such as Wang Feng will bring their brilliant and typical performances there.As you can imagine,what great fun it will be.All the students expect you could
9、 give a performance on behalf of foreign teachers.Please take your guitar and get ready to play your favorite music at the festival.Look forward to your early reply and hope to enjoy the wonderful moment with you.Yours,Li Hua【阅卷老师点评】1.该题目写作时容易犯的错误:(1)时间地点不明确,作为被邀请人不明白何时何地参加。(2)活动安排要么写得过细过杂,不够条理;要么写得
10、过于笼统,被邀请人不明白音乐节的主要特色和活动安排。(3)邀请对方表演节目的措辞过于生硬:you should sing a song for us.2.委婉建议的表示方式有:I hope you will not mind.I wonder if you could.It would be nice to.【技法点金】1.邀请信、道歉信和申请信写作结构段落邀请信道歉信申请信第一段简要说明活动,并邀请对方参加表示歉意介绍自己,简要说明信息来源,并提出申请段落邀请信道歉信申请信第二段活动的具体内容介绍,说明受邀人参加的理由说明具体原因;提出补救办法突出自己特点,具体说明胜任理由第三段期待对方接受
11、邀请,并表示感谢再次致歉,希望得到理解请求给予机会,期望尽快回复2.邀请信注意事项(1)邀请信一定要将邀请的时间(年、月、日、时刻)、地点、场合写清楚,不能使接信人存在任何疑虑。(2)邀请信重点应该放在第二段,具体交代邀请原因;邀请内容;有关要求和希望。3.道歉信注意事项(1)道歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意,请求对方谅解自己的过失。写道歉信时要明确不是找借口为自己辩护,不要强词夺理,而是承认自己的过失并提出弥补的具体建议和方法。(2)此类信件的关键是用词准确,表达真诚。(3)详略得当,明确本文重点写的是什么,信结尾的客套语句要简要明了地处理。4.申请信注意事项(1)申请信是写信人就某一职位或学位等向收信人提出请求。作为一种公务性的正规信件,申请信的语言要求既有礼貌又有专业水准。(2)开篇应点明主题,语言简洁。接着说明做此申请的原因,即自己所具备的申请条件,这一部分需重点明确,论述充分。(3)考生在写作时还应该注意信息的可信性,在强调自身经历和优点时应把握尺度。(4)申请信最后请求回复并表示感谢时,应采用礼貌、诚恳的措辞。
