1、单 元 写 作 专 项Unit10Ifyougototheparty,youllhaveagreattime!本单元主要谈论人们做某事可能出现的后果,并针对实际情况提出合理的建议。要求学生会用if引导的条件状语从句来提出具体问题,特别要注意主句和从句的时态;同时掌握提建议的常用句型。【高频词汇】1.环游世界_2.犯错误_3.逃避_runawaymakemistakestravelaroundtheworld4.解决你的难题_5.保守秘密_6.把切成两半_cutinhalfkeeptooneselfsolveyourproblems【开头句】1.IhaveaproblemnowandIneedy
2、ouradvice.我现在有个难题,需要你的建议。2.Ihavethesametroubleasyou.我和你有一样的麻烦。【中间句】1.Ifyouhaveproblems,youshouldtalktootherpeople.如果你有麻烦,你应该跟别人聊聊。【结尾句】1.Imsurethatyoucansolveyourproblemsifyoufollowtheadvice.如果你按照这些建议做,我相信你能解决你的难题。【名言警句】1.Twoheadsarebetterthanone.两人智慧胜一人。2.Tohelpothersistohelpyourself.帮助别人就是帮助你自己。【写
3、作任务】Tom是一名中学生,他沉迷于电脑游戏,并因此影响了学习。假如你是Dave,作为Tom的好朋友,你打算怎么帮助他呢？请根据下面所给的提示写一封不少于80词的信。提示:giveup;wastetime;beinterestedinDear Tom,I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now._ Yours,Dave【写作点拨】1.审题:(1)确定人称。本文主要是给好友提建议,主要用第二人称。(2)确定内容。核心内容是写给Tom 的建议,可以灵活运用提建议的句型。(3)确定时态。向Tom提建议,可以用一般将来时或一般现在时,也可用should
4、,may等情态动词。2.写作提纲【范文点评】DearTom,Imsorrytohearthatyouareintroublenow.Dontworry,andletmehelpyou.Now,Illgiveyousomeadvice.Ifyouspendtoomuchtimeoncomputergames,youwillwastelotsoftime.Dontworry,andletmehelpyou.起到承上启下的作用,使文章更加流畅。if从句清楚地交代了playingcomputergames的缺点。Asaresult,youllhavelittletimetodoyourhomework
5、.Ifyougiveupplayingcomputergames,youmaybeinterestedinotherthings,likestudyorsports.Itsgoodforyoutotakeupnewhobbiesinstead.Forexample,youcanlearnpaintingortakedancinglessons.Ofcourse,youcanplaycomputergamesforashorttimewhenyoufeeltired.asaresult这个短语直接描述了沉迷电脑游戏的后果。Ithinkifyoufollowtheadvice,youllhavea
6、greattimeatschool.if从句使文章首尾呼应,结构完整。Ithinkifyoufollowtheadvice,youllhaveagreattimeatschool.Yours,Dave史密斯先生由于工作压力大,睡眠出现了问题。下面是他给心理专家Dr.Green写的一封信。如果你是Dr.Green,请根据以下提示给史密斯先生写一封回信,提出一些合理的建议帮助他恢复健康。DearDr.Green,Iwashealthybefore,butthesedaysIcantsleepverywell.Ialwayscantstopthinkingabouttheworkinthedayti
7、me.IdontknowwhatIshoulddo.Couldyougivemesomeadvice,please?Thanksalot!Yours,Mr.Smith提示:1.尽量不想白天的工作;2.睡前适当做些运动;3.听一些音乐。要求:1.语句通顺,可适当发挥;2.词数80左右。_DearMr.Smith,Imsorrytohearthatyoucantsleepwell.Therearealotofthingstodo.Theymayhelpyousolvetheproblem.First,youshouldtrytoforgeteverythingabouttheworkinthedayafterwork.Next,ifyoucandosomesportsbeforeyougotobed,youwillgetrelaxed.Then,itisgoodforyoutolistentosomequietmusicwhenyougotobed.Besides,whydontyoureadsomethinginterestingbeforesleeping?Ifyoudothese,Ithinkyoullfeelbetter.Yours,Dr.Green_谢 谢 观 看Thank you for watching!
