1、Unit1 Laugh out loud!Period 5Developing ideas()写作培优课写作素养提升描写一人物(Writing about a person)【写作指导】话题阐释 描写人物,是高考考查的热点话题,主要涉及人物传记、应用文、记叙文、说明文和议论文。此类应用文主要包括日志、书信、演讲稿等。文体概述 人物传记主要是写名人或伟人的生平、事迹。写人物传记时,要抓住其出生年月、主要事迹、人们的评论等内容进行叙述。框架构建1.总体介绍:姓名、身份、主要成就Bill Gates is_ in software and computer business.Bill Gates w
2、as born _.He grew up _.His father _.His mother _.2.具体介绍:成长经历、教育状况、兴趣爱好、性格品质、工作经历、事业成就He wrote _at high school.When he was a student _he wanted to start his own company.So he left the university.In 1975 he _.After many years of hard work,Bill Gates became_ in the world in 1995.3.总结评价:影响、启示Now his com
3、pany _.Bill Gates has become famous all over the world.【典题示例】罗温艾金森(Rowan Atkinson)是著名的喜剧大师,在英国和其他国家都拥有众多的“粉丝”。请根据下表提供的信息,写一篇100个词左右的英语短文,介绍Rowan Atkinson。参考词汇:喜剧演员 comedian 牛津大学 University of Oxford乐观 optimistic人物罗温艾金森,英国著名的喜剧演员,1955年1月6日出生于英格兰,毕业于牛津大学荧幕形象所扮演的憨豆先生风靡世界;他的荧幕形象有点傻,但是他通过这个角色告诉人们对生活要乐观表演
4、方式通过丰富的肢体动作来展示自己的幽默,使人发笑评价出色的演技为他赢得了许多奖项,被誉为继卓别林之后的又一位喜剧大师Step 1谋篇立意体裁:人物传记Tips话题:喜剧大师总结介绍时态:一般过去时具体介绍:荧幕形象、表演方式人称:第三人称总结评价Step 2语言支架1.他于1955年1月6日出生于英格兰,毕业于牛津大学。He was born in England on January 6,1955.He graduated from University of Oxford.用and合并为一句:_He was born in England on January 6,1955,and gra
5、duated from University of Oxford.2.他通过丰富的肢体动作来展示自己的幽默,使人发笑。He showed his humor through abundant body movements.They made people laugh.用which引导的非限制性定语从句将句合并为一句:_ _He showed his humor through abundant body movements,which made peoplelaugh.3.他出色的演技为他赢得了许多奖项,他被誉为继查理卓别林之后的又一位喜剧大师。won an award _被誉为a maste
6、r of comedy _用and连接的并列句翻译句子:_赢得奖项be honoured as喜剧大师His wonderful acting has won him many awards and he has been honoured asanother master of comedy after Charlie Chaplin.Step 3润色组篇Rowan Atkinson is a well-known English comedian with a lot of fans in the UK and other countries.He was born in England
7、on January 6,1955,and graduated from University of Oxford.The role,Mr Bean,played by him,is popular with people all over the world.His screen image is a bit silly,but he tells people to be optimistic about life through this role.He showed his humor through abundant body movements,which made people l
8、augh.His wonderful acting has won him many awards and he has been honoured as another master of comedy after Charlie Chaplin.【典题操练】屠呦呦是著名的女科学家。请根据下表提供的信息,写一篇100个词左右的英语短文,介绍屠呦呦。出生时间和地点1930年12月30日出生于浙江省宁波市教育状况1951年考入北京大学,主修医学,1955年毕业。毕业后,她接受了两年半的中医培训,并在北京中国中医科学院工作主要成就2011年,因为发现了青蒿素(一种挽救了数百万人生命的药物)获得拉斯
9、克奖;2015年,获得诺贝尔奖,是首位获此殊荣的中国女性影响我们要向她学习并致力于科学研究参考词汇:中国中医科学院 China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences青蒿素Artemisinin 拉斯克奖 the Lasker Award【范文】Tu Youyou,a famous woman scientist,was born in Ningbo City,ZhejiangProvince on December 30,1930.She was admitted to Peking University in 1951 and majored in medi
10、cine.Shegraduated in 1955.After graduation,she received two and a half years of training in traditional Chinese medicine and worked in China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences.In 2011,she won the Lasker Award for discovering Artemisinin,which has saved millions of lives.Four years later,she won the
11、 Nobel Prize and became the first Chinese woman to receive this honor.All of us Chinese are proud of her and her achievement.We were asked to learn from her and devote ourselves to scientific research.【善积累获新知】话题词汇识记1.laugh种种:laugh 大笑;smile 微笑;laugh heartily 开怀大笑;laugh merrily 愉快地笑;laugh foolishly 傻笑
12、;laugh a hearty/merry laugh 发出由衷的/愉快的笑声;laugh oneself sick笑得肚子疼;laugh oneself into a state of helplessness 笑得合不拢嘴;laugh oneself breathless 笑得上气不接下气;laugh oneself to death笑得要死;laugh up ones sleeve暗自高兴;laugh about 对感到好笑;laugh at嘲笑;laugh ones head off 笑掉大牙,笑破肚皮;laugh away/off一笑置之;humorous laugh 诙谐的笑;br
13、eak/burst into a laugh 忽然大笑起来;have the last laugh 笑到最后2.laugh的作用:relax 使放松;relieve stress/pain 缓解压力/减轻痛苦;relieve sb.from anxiety 缓解某人的忧虑话题好句背诵1.(2019浙江高考)What I can say for the folks that gave the most,is that they were full of smiles.对于那些给予最多的人,我能说的是,他们满脸笑容。2.(2018天津高考)When I told Sally what happened,she covered her mouth,laughing.当我告诉萨莉发生了什么事时,她捂住嘴笑了。3.(2018全国卷)They arrive at the class in low spirits and they leave with a smile.他们情绪低落地来上课,然后微笑着离开。4.laugh的谚语:He laughs best who laughs last.笑到最后的人,笑得最好。【写作点拨】写人物传记主要有以下要点:以时间为序组材,概括人物一生;突出人物重点活动,详略安排得当;介绍人物的思想精髓。本课结束
