1、1Part Writing英语名信片2本单元的写作任务是写一篇英语名信片，是告知旅游状况的明信片。内容主要包括旅游见闻，旅行感受，作者的行为，和作者下一步的行程。旅游明信片介绍景点见闻用一般现在时，谈论过去的行程用一般过去时，介绍下一步的行程用将来时。3【增分表达】1.描述景色的形容词splendid，grand，magnificent，charming2.描述旅游者行为、心情的短语be excited to see some special trees and plants，have a wonderful view 3.谈论景点的名词短语tourist attraction，tourist
2、 destination，scenic spot，places of tourist attraction，natural splendor/attraction，summer resort，national park 4假定你是李华，在海南旅游，收到朋友Sam的来信，询问你的旅游行程。请用明信片的方式给他回信介绍情况。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。5第一步：布局谋篇很关键1.确定体裁：本文是一篇_；2.确定中心人称：本文主要人称为_；3.确定主体时态：以_为主。应用文第一人称一般现在时6第二步：核心词汇想周全1._ 在旅游2._ 情不自禁地欣赏3._ 非常清新4
3、._ 成群的游客5._ 非常开心be on a tripcant wait to enjoyextremely clearcrowds of visitorsbe more than happy7第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.I _ for less than seven days in Hainan with my family.(on a trip)我和家人在海南旅行了不到七天。2.At the moment，I am staying at Sanya.It _.(lie in)目前，我住在三亚。它位于中国的南部。3.After we _，we enjoyed the beautiful sc
4、enery.(get off)下飞机后，我们欣赏美丽的景色。have been on a triplies in the south of Chinagot off the plane84.When we _ at a seafood restaurant near the beach，I _ a young man from Africa.(make a new friend with)当我们在海滩附近的一家海鲜餐厅吃午饭时，我与一个来自非洲的年轻人成为了新朋友。5.He _ Chinese culture and has travelled several _.(attract，inter
5、est)他着迷于中国文化，已经游览了很多风景名胜。were having lunchmade a new friend withis attracted toplaces of interest9第四步：句式升级造亮点1.用定语从句改写句2At the moment，I am staying at Sanya _.2.用cant wait改写句3After we got off the plane，we _ the beautiful scenery.which lies in the south of Chinacouldnt wait to enjoy103.利用状语从句的省略改写句4_，
6、I made a new friend with a young man from Africa.4.用定语从句将句4和句5合并为定语从句When having lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach，I made a new friend with a young man from Africa _ and has travelled several places of interest.When having lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beachwho is attracted to Ch
7、inese culture11第五步：过渡衔接连成篇7 JulyHi，SamI have been on a trip for less than seven days in Hainan with my family.At the moment，Im at Sanya.We went there by plane.After we got off the plane，we couldnt wait to enjoy the beautiful scenery.The weather is a little hot but the sky is extremely clear.You can
8、see crowds of visitorsthe young，the old.on the island.12Some are surfing and others diving in the deeper part of the sea.We are excited to see some special trees and plants along the road.When having lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach，I made a new friend with a young man from Africa.He is attracted to Chinese culture and has travelled several places of interest.It is definitely an exciting trip.If I have a chance，I will be more than happy to visit the place again.Sincerely yours，Li Hua13本节内容结束
