1、1Section Reading for Writing介绍地点的说明文本单元的读写任务是先读一篇关于爱尔兰的文章后，再写一篇介绍地点的说明文。.Pre-writing()Learning to write after the modelBEAUTIFUL IRELAND AND ITS TRADITIONSIrelands beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions.The country has a long history of producing great wr
2、iters and poets.Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all,offering something for each of the senses.The peaceful landscape of the“Emerald Isle”and its many green counties is a true2feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.And down by the sea,the roar of t
3、he ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.On a quiet morning in the mountains,feel the sun on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.With all this beauty,it is not surprising that Ireland has devel
4、oped strong traditions that include music,dancing,and dining.To have a chance of experiencing this,stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer.Better yet,enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew.If you are lucky,you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and the
5、dancing,too.And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face,you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.34()Preparation for writingwords and phrases_ 有着悠久历史_ 美丽的乡村景色_ 宁静的风景_ 真正的视觉盛宴_ 起伏的绿色山丘上点缀着牛羊_ 一个宁静的早晨_ 美味的传统美食_ 传统音乐_ 友好的面孔have a long historybeautiful countryside
6、the peaceful landscapea true feast for the eyesthe rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattlea quiet morninga delicious traditional snacktraditional musica friendly face5.While-writing假设你是河源市的李华，你市为吸引国外游客，拟制作英文版河源旅游宣传手册，并公开征稿。请根据下面信息，用英语写一篇短文应征。1.位于广州的东北方向，离广州约198 公里。2.由五个县(county)组成，人口约 324 万
7、。3.历史悠久，名胜众多；万绿湖(Wanl Lake)景点优美；湖水清澈；鱼类繁多。4.博物馆中有各种恐龙蛋化石(fossil)，吸引了来自全世界的游客。6Step 1List the outline of the passage.Paragraph 1：_Paragraph 2：_Paragraph 3：_the brief introduction of Heyuanthe body of the passage,including its population,history,tourist attractions and its museumthe endinginvite visit
8、ors to go sightseeing7Step 2List the words,phrases and sentences.1.Words and phrases_ 悠久的历史 _ 由组成_ 人口_ 名胜_ 旅游胜地_ 各种各样的_ 恐龙蛋化石_ v.展出_ v.吸引_ adj.令人愉快的a long historyconsist ofa population ofplaces of interesta tourist destinationa variety ofdinosaur egg fossilsdisplayattractenjoyable82.Sentences河源市位于广州
9、的东北部，离广州198公里。(which引导的非限制性定语从句)_河水如此干净以至于里面有各种各样的鱼。(so.that.的倒装句)_有很多恐龙蛋化石在当地博物馆中展出。(there be句型非谓语动词)_Heyuan lies to the northeast of Guangzhou,from which it is about 198 kilometers away.So clean is the water there that there is a variety of fishes in it.There are many dinosaur egg fossils displaye
10、d in the local museum.9Step 3Draft the article by using the following words and phrases.thus,in addition,I believeHeyuan,with a long history,lies to the northeast of Guangzhou,from which it is about 198 kilometers away.The city of Heyuan,consisting of 5 counties,has a population of about 3，240，000.T
11、here are many famous places of interest in Heyuan,one example of which is WanlLake,an inviting tourist destination.So clean is the water there that there is a variety of fishes in it.In addition,there are many dinosaur egg fossils displayed in the local museum,thus attracting visitors from every cor
12、ner of the world.Why not give it a try？I believe your trip to Heyuan is sure to be enjoyable and worthwhile.10.Post writingpolishing the passageExchange your passage with your partner and pay attention to the following points.1.Does the writer start with an image,quote,or question?2.Is the descripti
13、on well-organised and easy to read?3.Has the writer included sensory details?4.Does the writer use specific words and give examples?5.Is the ending effective?6.Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes？11篇章结构第一句为该段第一层，也是该段的主题句，说明爱尔兰的乡村美景对其居民及传统有着深远的影响。该段第二层(第二句至第六句)描述了爱尔兰美丽的风景，由近及远，由动到静。第三层(第七句至
14、最后)叙述了爱尔兰人在这种美轮美奂的风景中形成的独特传统和习俗。12常用词汇1.be located/lie in.位于2.cover an area of.占地3.with a history of.有的历史4.date back to/from.追溯到5.the most popular tourist attraction 最受欢迎的景点6.places of interest 名胜7.enjoy great popularity 深受欢迎138.attract v.吸引9.feature n.特色10.be worth doing 值得做11.make sb unwilling to
15、leave 使某人流连忘返14亮点表达1.基本信息It is located/lies in.,with an area of.It covers an area of.,with a history of.,located in.and covering an area of.,is one of Chinas most famous scenic spots.The history of.dates back to.It has become the most popular tourist attraction since.152.特色There are many places of i
16、nterest,such as.You can enjoy.,which has a high reputation both at home and abroad.With.，.is/are attracting more and more tourists.An interesting feature of.is.With its pleasant climate,rich natural resources and beautiful scenery，.is one of Chinas major tourist cities.A trip along.will enable you to get to know.163.总结陈述.is well worth visiting.is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave.17写作技巧1.地点描写的方法一个让人惊讶的开头。详实的主体段落。回味无穷的结尾。2.地点描写的语言特点surprisingmake the reader eager to read your writinguse sensory detailsgive examplesinviting18本节内容结束
