1、读后续写微写作动作描写之“看”(一)素材积累高级词块1gape at 目瞪口呆地看2come into view 进入视野3eyes widen 瞪大眼睛4peep at/through 偷看5glance at/around/back/up/down 瞥一眼/环视/回头看/向上看/向下看6fix/focus ones eyes on 注视7lock ones eyes on 盯着8take/cast a glance at .向看一眼9catch a glimpse of 瞥见10steal a glance at 偷偷瞥一眼素材运用第一步按要求完成下列句子。1当我走近那幢房子时,远处有一棵
2、枝繁叶茂的大树映入眼帘。When I approached the house, a big leafy tree came into view at some distance .2我回头瞥了一眼以确保没有人跟着我。 I glanced back over my shoulder to make sure that no one was following me.3看到没有人注意到我,我放下圣诞礼物并按了门铃。 Seeing no other people notice me , I placed the Christmas present down and pounded the door
3、bell.(分词短语作状语)4我飞快地躲到大树后,偷偷从树后望着门。 I hid quickly behind the big tree and peeped at the door.5当詹姆斯出来看到盒子时,他惊讶地瞪大了眼睛。When James came out and spotted the box, his eyes widened in surprise .6他的目光落在那件温暖的外套上。 His eyes fell on the warm overcoat .(简单句)7他跳起来,眼睛闪闪发光地跑去喊他的妈妈。He jumped/leapt to his feet, his ey
4、es twinkling as he ran to call his mother .(独立主格结构)第二步将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵,注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇。参考范文:When I approached the house, a big leafy tree came into view at some distance.I glanced back over my shoulder to make sure that no one was following me.Seeing no other people notice me, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded the doorbell.After that, I hid quickly behind the big tree and peeped at the door.When James came out and spotted the box, his eyes widened in surprise.His eyes fell on the warm overcoat.Then, he jumped/leapt to his feet, his eyes twinkling as he ran to call his mother.