1、2020年高考英语真题模拟试题专项汇编（19）书面表达-自主命题地区作文1. 【2020年浙江1月，8】阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 Im going to miss you so much, Poppy, said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions(情绪) get the better of him. His
2、 parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed. The boy lifted t
3、he last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. I guess this is it, he said. Ill see you back home in a month, okay? His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boys mother turned to the dog, Okay, Poppy, time to
4、go back home. The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didnt seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didnt. They offered the dog some of her f
5、avorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasnt her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried. What should we do to cheer Poppy up? asked Dad. Weve tried everything. I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy, smiled Mom. Without anybody
6、left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Lets get a little dog for Poppy. It didnt take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging(摆动)ev
7、er so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell. 注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右; 2. 至少使用5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Para 1. Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared._Para 2. A few weeks later, the boy arrivedhome from university._2. 【全国新高考卷，9】阅读下面材料,
8、根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges. Mrs. Meredith was a most kin
9、d and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them. One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick
10、 in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy - his name was Bernard - had interested her very much. I wish you could see him, she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to ear
11、n some money, but I dont see what he can do. After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. I wish we could help him to earn money, said Clara. His family is suffering so much. So do I, said Harry. We really should do something to assist them. For some moments, John said
12、nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成). The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. I tell you what we can do, said John. You know that big box of c
13、orn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花),and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too._ With everything ready. Bernard started out
14、 on his new business._3. 【2020年浙江卷，8】阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside the polar bear capital of the world-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is a
15、mazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When Im face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked di
16、nner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli
17、and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子). Iradioed the ca
18、mp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇), I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment. The camp manager suggest
19、ed I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears eyes, but doesnt hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头
20、语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。_4. 【2020年江苏卷，22】请阅读下面有关中国题材纪录片(documentary)的对话,并按照要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的文章。Su Hua: Hi, Li Jiang! Did you see the BBC documentary on CCTV 9 last week?Li Jiang: You mean Du Fu: Chinas Greatest Poet? Yes, I did. Fantastic!Su Hua: Just think an English actor recites Chinese
21、poems.Li Jiang: I dont really understand every line he recites, but I believe he truly loves the poems himself.Su Hua: Right. It is reported that the film is well received outside China.Li Jiang: Yeah. Its my first time to hear Chinese stories told by an English speaker.Su Hua: In fact, documentarie
22、s about our country are plentiful both at home and abroad. These films can help foreign friends better understand this landChinese literature, geography, history, food.Li Jiang: I couldnt agree more.【写作内容】 1.用约30个词概括上述对话的主要内容; 2.谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因(至少两点)。【写作要求】 1.写作过程中不能打接引用原文语句; 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称
23、; 3.不必写标题。【评分标准】 内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。_5.【 2020年北京卷，9】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。上周,你报名参加了学校组织的学生讲坛活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。注意:词数不少于60。提示词:学生讲坛Student Forum_6. 【2020北京顺义牛栏山第一中学,9】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。注意: 词数不少于60.提示词: 游乐园 amusement park
24、垃圾箱 bin_7. 【2020江苏苏州新草桥中学,23】请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 Beijing police detained (拘留) 16 students from the Beijing Midi School of Music on suspicion of drug use, after a raid on a dormitory on November 24, 2015, following a statement that marijuana was being used at the school. By June, 2015, t
25、here were more than 3 million known drug addicts in China, among whom there were more than 38,000 under the age of 18, according to an official at the drug control department of the Ministry of Justice. The Drug Danger Zone: Most Illegal Drug Use Starts in the Teenage 【写作内容】1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;2.
26、结合上述信息,简要分析材料所反映的社会现象的原因及危害;3. 根据你的分析,谈谈你对解决此问题的看法或建议(不少于两点)。【写作要求】1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句; 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。_答案以及解析1.答案：Paragraph 1: Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to wat
27、ch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get closer. With the box tipping over, out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. It didnt take long before the two played around the house, cheerfully running
28、 after each other.Paragraph 2: A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. He had been missing his parents and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time. When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to gi
29、ve her a big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. Oh my, who is this? His parents laughed at the look of surprise on his face. Its Poppys new companion, said Mom.解析： 【写作指导】做本篇读后续写时应注意以下几点。（1）明确故事的人物关系。故事中主要人物是男孩和宠物狗Poppy。（2）理清故事的主要事件。男孩要离家去上学，没有了小主人的陪伴，Poppy变得很孤单。（3）根据已知人物、事件及续写段落首句预测故事的发展
30、。续写的第一段首句讲的是盒子里有一只小狗，可知他们又买了一只小狗，接着可以描写Poppy面对小狗的反应。续写第二段首句说男孩从学校回家了，可以进一步写男孩和两只狗之间发生的事。（4）材料中给了10个关键词语，写作时需要按照这些关键词语来组织故事发展的主要线索。2.答案：Paragraph 1: When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too. Very soon, the children learnt how to pop the corn and then were busy in doin
31、g this big thing. At the same time, their mother went out to buy the paper bags that they needed. When she came back, she brought with her Rernard. Bernard felt grateful to all of them for what they had done for him.Paragraph 2: With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. Much so
32、oner than could be expected, he returned with an empty basket and so much money that he had never seen before. He was so delighted that he could hardly speak, but his bright smiling face spoke for him. For many weeks, every Saturday, the three children would prepare popcorn for Bernard to sell. This
33、 little boy therefore could help support his family. All of this was because of Johns bright idea.解析： 【写作思路】本文主要讲述的是三个孩子在妈妈告诉他们一个贫困家庭的故事后，想出一个绝妙的主意制作并售卖爆米花帮助来自这个家庭的小孩Bernard挣钱养家的故事。所给的开头合情合理，对续写很有指导性，有利于考生发挥想象补充完整这个故事。3.答案：Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. He expose
34、d his sharp teeth, glaring at us as he ran forward. And again the bear stood on his back legs, wanting to snap at the fence like a monster. It seemed that his mouth was full of blood and his eyes were red with anger. Seeing such terrible sight, I could feel a coldness flooding from my back. Eli was
35、stunned there, with the mouth widely open. I had to take action, so I picked my courage and tried to frighten him away with the pepper spray, but finally failed.Paragraph 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. It landed near our camp and its loud noises scared the bear. He looked irritated
36、and charged at us again. I cried out. Watch out! We instantly stepped away and ran as fast as we could to the helicopter. Thank goodness! We succeeded in climbing onto the helicopter, gasping with relief. Looking down at the bear, we found that he was eating the bread we just made. Several hours lat
37、er, we arrived at home safe and sound, but we realized that we should do something to help the bears.解析：【写作思路】读后续写作为高考新题型之一，突出考查了考生根据所获得的综合信息进行吸收、内化并转变成自己的语言的一种能力，同时通过对文本结构的分析和合理性地推测与想象，用自己的语言接续文本，体现了核心素养中的思维品质和语言能力。读后续写是对原文的阅读，然后进行续写，故在写作时，要注意三个读：先读原文，了解文章的大意、文章的逻辑结构、故事的6要素、情节发展等；再读10个关键词，对关键词进行合理地
38、分类，确定哪些是最重要的，哪些次之，然后进行合理的构思；最后读给出的两个首句，确定全文结尾的逻辑关系。同时，也要注意字数。4.答案：【佳作一】 CCTV 9 broadcast Du Fu: Chinas Greatest Poet, a documentary produced by BBC. This well-made film provides foreign audiences with a fresh way of better knowing Chinas past and present. Documentaries about China, produced either i
39、n China or in other countries, are becoming increasingly popular among foreigners. For one thing, the overall development over the past decades has been so striking that they feel eager to familiarize themselves with what is going on in China. For another, China enjoys a long history and rich cultur
40、e. It has always been an attraction for those who are keen on anything that is Chinese. These documentaries present a splendid picture of China in front of their audiencesits history, landscape, art, food, or even traditional Chinese medicine. Because of these films, some foreigners have begun to th
41、ink of coming to China. In this way, they can form a true picture of China themselves.【佳作二】 CCTV 9 broadcast the documentary Du Fu: Chinas Greatest Poet made by BBC, which helps foreigners know about China better and wins widespread recognition among foreigners. Why do such documentaries about China
42、 appeal to foreigners? Firstly, Chinas rising international status and groundbreaking development catch the whole worlds attention. These curious audiences long to know the underlying reasons for these. Therefore, they turn to these documentaries to help them be better acquainted with everything abo
43、ut China, thus gaining a better insight into contemporary China and its rapid growth. Secondly, the high-quality production of BBC also contributes to the popularity of such films. BBC poured tons of efforts into these films. All these efforts made the inaccessible things about China easily understo
44、od by the foreign audience. In sum, considering foreign viewers curiosity about China as well as BBCs fine production, the popularity of such films among foreigners is no coincidence.解析： 5.答案： Last Monday, I read a notice at the school gate. It was about a Student Forumn the school was to hold. I si
45、gned up, together with others. Then for three days we were all very busy after class. Each of us prepared a speech on our own topic by collecting data both in the library and from the Internet. Last Friday morning we spoke one by one in the lecture hall. I was the second to speak. At the end of my s
46、peech many students gave me loud applause. I believe I have learned a great deal from this valuable experience.解析：【写作思路】本篇书面表达为情景作文，要求考生以红星中学高三学生李华的身份，根据自己上周报名参加的学校组织的学生讲坛活动写一篇英文周记。尽管场景都比较常见，但考生在写作过程中应根据四幅图的先后顺序记述整个过程，并特别注意图片中的汉字提示，确保逻辑合理。本篇写作应以一般过去时为主介绍整个过程。考生在写作中要尽可能使用一些高级词汇和复杂结构并注意各流程之间的连贯性。6.答案：
47、 Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing. The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing
48、the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin re
49、spectively. We were tired but happy.解析： 试题分析:本文属于看图作文比较好写的题目。首先对第一幅图的内容进行描述,说明我们开班会讨论的内容及同学们各自的想法such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park.最终是决定去登山go mountain climbing.然后说明我们很早出发去爬山,当到达山顶时被美景吸引但是也看到了垃圾到处都是we were shocked to see litter here and there,最后我们开始捡垃圾,将不同的垃圾继
50、续分类,分别放入可回收的垃圾箱和不可回收的垃圾箱中we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.最后一句话结尾很累但是非常的高兴即可We were tired but happy.点评:本文的写作不难,对于叙事类文体,对文章的条理性要把握好,在写作过程注意使用“起承转合”的词语或是句型表达,多使用被动,倒装、虚拟来提升作文的美度。在平时写作时应该多进行阅读,对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累,并且学以致用,勤积累,多背诵,这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。7.答案： One po
51、ssible version:The two selections presented above clearly reveal that teenagers engage in illegal drug abuse, which has become a growing social phenomenon and to which we are supposed to attach importance.Quite a few factors give rise to the problem. For one thing, some teenagers take drugs illegall
52、y because they are curious or want to rebel against families. For another, some try them just on account of peer pressure. Drug abuse has a dangerous effect on teenagers. Drugs affect teens ability to concentrate on their study and work. Besides, drug abuse can cause both emotional and physical prob
53、lems, and even suck the life right out of a person.To protect teenagers from illegal drugs, safety education has been of great urgency. By putting more safety education into textbooks, we should make teenagers realize the risk and consequence of taking drugs. Meanwhile, parents supervision and communication play an important role in keeping teenagers away from drugs.解析：
