1、2012口岸中学高考英语书面表达辅导-书面表达体裁内容分类模版江苏省口岸中学 徐春秀一、图表作文的模板写作点拨：1 仔细观察图表，认真阅读图表前的提示。了解图表所反映的类容，研究图表所反映出来的规律，用简洁的语言概括图表的内容，2 处理相关数据。对数据的处理不必面面俱到，但要概括出特征，为后文分析原因、揭示规律、发表看法做铺垫。3 用好关联词。注意短文内容的衔接、过渡和前后呼应。常用的词语有：compared with, on the other hand, however, in my opinion等。4 确定文章结构。此类文章的结构一般为：开头简明扼要，直接切入主题；通过数据说明基本走势
2、；比较数据，揭示显著特征；必要时对今后的走势做出估计；分析出现这种趋势的原因；指出现实生活中存在的问题后，用一两句话呼应短文的主题。Asisshown/indicated/illustratedbythefigure/percentage in the table (graph/picture/pie/chart), _ hasbeenonrise/decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadilyrising/decreasingfrom_in_to_in_.Fromthesharp
3、/markeddecline/riseinthechart,itgoeswithoutsayingthat_.There are at least two good reasonsaccountingfor_.On the one hand,_.Onthe other hand,_is due to the fact that_.In addition,_isresponsible for_.Maybe there are some other reasons to show_.But it isgenerally believed that the above mentioned reaso
4、ns are commonlyconvincing.As far as I am concerned,Iholdthepointofviewthat_.Iamsuremyopinion is both sound and well-grounded.例一：右图是反映城乡教育差别的一幅图，请以Equal Educational Opportunity for All Children 为题写一篇英语短文。简要说明图片中的内容，然后从社会关注、政府投入等方面提出你的建议。注意：1.字数150左右； 2.可适当增加细节。Equal Educational Opportunity for All Ch
5、ildren_Equal Educational Opportunity for AllChildren The picture shows the wide gap between the city and the countryside in education. As we can see from it, a city boy is sitting on a comfortable chair, reading happily, while a boy from the countryside can only sit on the stone to study, with some
6、farm work to do. The educational inequality has become a serious problem we are faced with at present. Urban schools have good teachers and first-class teaching equipment. By contrast, however, some rural schools are poorly equipped, let alone good teachers. I feel it is our duty to help the childre
7、n in the poor areas. Its high time that we took some measures to solve this problem. On the one hand, the whole society should pay close attention and call on people to do all they can to help them. On the other hand, the government must maintain the equal supply of educational resources and provide
8、 more money for schools in the rural area. In addition, good teachers should be encouraged to teach there. Only in this way can all children enjoy the equal educational opportunities whether they live in the city or in the countryside.例二：以下两幅图是关于学生零花钱的问题。请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的理解。短文必须包括以下内容：1. 图画反映了什么？ 2.你对
9、其原因的分析。 3.你的建议。 注意：1、必须包括所有要点，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2、词数150左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。3、文中不得提及你所在学校与本人姓名。With the development of our modern society, children have more and more pocket money, which is of public concern._With the development of our modern society, children have more and more pocket money, which is of publi
10、c concern. As is seen from the pictures, nearly sixty percent of the students take 50-100yuan or more from their parents every week while forty percent get less than 10yuan. Although four in ten parents refuse to give the money when thinking its not reasonable, half of them seldom refuse their child
11、rens request and one in ten cares little about how the money is spent. Therefore, some students with a large amount of pocket money may not know how to use it appropriately. Just as the picture shows, to show off how rich he is, one student treats his classmates to dinner, asking them to order whate
12、ver they like. I think the main reason for this is that children arent taught the skills to manage money. So I have some suggestions to make. First, parents should help kids learn money-management skills such as spending with a plan. Besides, more opportunities should be offered to kids, helping the
13、m know earning money is hard work. Only in this way will kids treasure the money. (170 words)例三：读柱状图表写调查报告 注意句式变换 Middle school students have some ideas about their future jobs.The most striking contrast is in teaching: 30percent of the girls would like to become teachers while only 5percent of the
14、boys want to do the job. 20 percent of the boys want to do business and another 20 percent want to become lawyers, while girls make up 15percent in these two fields. What boys like to do most is to become managers and the second largest group would like to be scientists. Besides teaching, the second
15、 choice for girls is to be scientists and managers. The number is not small. Girls also expect to show their abilities in these two fields.例四：我国学生过暑假的方式的变化。请根据这两幅图表， 用英语写一篇100词左右的文章。参考词汇：图表chart 社会调查social investigation 减少decreaseFrom the two charts we can see that in the past ten years, students wh
16、o go traveling and do social investigation have greatly increased while those who stay at home have decreased a lot. There are several reasons for the changes. Firstly, with the development of economy, students can get support from their parents for traveling. Secondly, tourism has greatly developed
17、 over ten years. In addition, school has been encouraging students to do social investigation in both cities and villages. From the changes we can predict that more and more students will make their summer vacation colorful and meaningful by going outside instead of staying at home.例五:对学生课余生活进行了调查，结
18、果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余生活，并针对图2中的任何一个数据所反映的情况写出你的看法。词数不少于60。分析：1.仔细读图，对图表进行说明；2.描述当前情况，用一般现在时2. 由于是说明学生的情况,应用第二人称3. 要点很清楚Sample writing: Chart1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. The students put the most time93 minutes into
19、their homework, next in line is watching TV, which takes up 46 minutes. They put in about the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer, 34 minutes and 30 minutes each. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework. As is shown on Chart2, only 10%
20、of the time is taken up with sports activities. I think the school should encourage the students to do more exercise after class. This way, they may be healthier and more energetic.二、阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义分析并举例使其更充实 The good old proverb -（名言或谚语）reminds us that -(释义). Indeed, we
21、 can learn many things form it.First of all,-(理由一). For example, -(举例说明). Secondly,-(理由二). Another case is that -(举例说明). Furthermore , -(理由三) In my opinion, -(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say-A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, youll necessarily benef
22、it a lot from it.例一：“低碳经济”是一个具有广泛社会性的经济前沿理念，最早是在2003年英国政府发布的能源白皮书我们能源的未来：创建低碳经济正式提出的。低碳经济包括低碳发展、低碳产业、低碳技术和低碳生活等经济形态，是指在不影响经济发展的前提下，通过技术创新和制度创新，降低能源和资源消耗，尽可能最大限度地减少温室气体和污染物的排放，实现减缓气候变化的目标，促进人类的可持续发展。Protection of Environment1. 目前环保还存在着许多问题。2. 为了保护环境 3. 各国政府做了大量的工作。4. 我的看法。One possible versionThere ar
23、e still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to peoples health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reduced wit
24、h the rapid growth of modern cities.To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most
25、 important role in the environmental protection today.In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put t
26、he population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves. 例二:可持续发展已成为全球共识，如何实行
27、可持续发展是摆在世人面前的重大问题。请就下面表格所提供的内容进行陈述并谈谈你的看法。目前的状况自然资源日趋减少环境问题依然严重人的环保观念淡薄贫富差距越来越大已采取的措施制定了相关的法律法规投入了大量的资金改善环境对民众进行教育加强了国际间的相互合作你的看法注意：不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥；词数：150左右；文章的开头部分已给出。参考词汇：差距 gap； 相关法律 relevant lawsThe idea of sustainable development has been accepted by the world. How to keep sustainable development
28、is a big problem facing our planet. . The idea of sustainable development has been accepted by the world. How to keep sustainable development is a big problem facing our planet. The present situation is worrying. First, natural resources are becoming less than before. Second, as some people are not
29、aware of the importance of the environmental protection, the problems with it remain extremely serious to some degree. The gap between the rich and the poor has the tendency to become wider and wider. To our great joy, many countries have taken action. On one hand, they have made relevant laws and r
30、egulations and put large amounts of money to the environmental protection. On the other hand, popularized educational as well as international cooperation is being carried out. As for myself, I should take the responsibility to devote myself to sustainable development, or our future and the lives of
31、 our children and our grandchildren will be in danger. 三、对比观点题型（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1有一些人认为2另一些人认为3我的看法 The topic of -（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of -（支持A的理由一）What
32、 is more, -理由二). Moreover, -(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),-（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),-(理由三). From my point of view, I think -（我的观点）. The reason is that -(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons
33、 to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .例一：当今我国大学生就业成功率很低，除了全球性的金融危机影响外，还有就是大学生对工作的选择。有的人认为应该优先选择自己喜欢的工作，而不是自己擅长的；另一部分人相反。你班学生就此事进行讨论，请客观地介绍情况并谈谈你的看法。观点理由一部分人喜欢比擅长重要。兴趣是最好的老师，精通与擅长的可能性会大大增加等。另一部分擅长比喜欢重要。擅长更容易成功，后天努力培养兴趣。你注意：1. 短文须包括所有要点, 可适度发挥。2. 开头已为你写好, 但不计人总词数。3. 词数:120
34、左右。Recently the students in our class have discussed the following topic: which is more important for college graduates to choose jobs, being interested in it or being good at it?_Recently the students in our class have discussed the following topic: which is more important for college graduates to
35、choose jobs, being interested in it or being good at it?Some agree that the love of job is very important because interest is the best teacher. People are often willing to do what they like doing. If you are not good at it in the beginning, you can work hard and gradually improve your skills to make
36、 you good at it. Others hold their view that if you are good at it, you have more chances to achieve success very soon. While you work, you can do all you can to gain the interest in it little by little.From my point of view, I think we should make full use of our strengths to change them each other
37、 regardless of the fact that you like it or you are good at it.例二：参与报社等讨论稿（带手机利弊）Dear Editor:引出话题 Im a senior three student. Im writing to tell you my opinion on whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones. 赞成I think they can do that. Because students can keep in touch with th
38、eir friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun. 反对 However, every coin has 2 sides. There are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom. Another students is that some students can spend too
39、much time and money on phone calls and sending messages. 个人观点 In conclusion, I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive, the owner should take good care of it. Yours sincerely, Li Hua（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Some people believe that -（观点一）. For example, they think -（举例说明
40、）And it will bring them -(为他们带来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,-(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, -(反对的理由之二)Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that -(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)例一：据报道，法国生产汽车的雪铁龙公司(Citroen)在广告中使用了我国领导人毛泽东的照片。此事在我国网民中引起了激烈的争论。请你根据下面的调查表所
41、提供的信息，给某英文杂志社写一篇文章，简要叙述此事件并发表自己的看法。被调查者的态度 所占比例抗议使用 453 不反对使用 416 无所谓 131 要求： 1.行文应连贯流畅，内容要充实完整； 2. 词数120150之间，It is reported that the French ear-maker Citroen has used the photo of the late Chinese leader Mao Zedong in the advertisement. This amused heated discussions among Chinese Internet users.
42、According to a recent survey, about 45.3% of the people were against it while 41.6% of the people were for it. Only 13.1% of the people didnt express their opinions.In my opinion, it is wrong for Citroen to use Chairman Maos photo in their advertisement. As we all know, Chairman Mao was a beloved le
43、ader in China. We think this action insulting to Chairman Mao the whole Chinese nation. China is a big auto market for Citroen. If the Chinese people are hurt by the ad, they wont buy Citroen cars in the future. Whats more, from the business aspect, it is a violation of the rights of citizens. So th
44、is action is both politically and culturally unacceptable.四、解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径问题现状怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) In recent days, we have to face I problem-A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, -(说明的现状)Second, -(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with
45、the situation. For one thing, -(解决方法一). For another -(解决方法二). Finally, -(解决方法三). Personally, I believe that -(我的解决方法). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because -(带来的好处).例一：假如你是李华，请根据以上报道给你在外地的朋友Tom写信，介绍你校目前学生的健康状况以及学校为了防治红眼病所采取的一些具体措施，并表达你对他所在城市该病情的关注。目前学校情况有部分老师同学患病，有老
46、师为了不传染别人，戴着墨镜坚持上课具体措施每天坚持多次洗手少去人多的地方，减少集会尽量避免与患者接触注意：不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。信的开始和结尾已给出。词数150字左右。请将答案写在答题纸上。Dear Tom, How are things going? I am writing to tell you about the “pink eye” control here in our school._How is the “pink eye” control in your city? Please let me know about it. I hope everythin
47、g is going well with you.Take care! Yours Li Hua.Dear Tom, How are things going? I am writing to tell you about the “pink eye” control here in our school.The situation of the disease is serious in our school. Some teachers and students, especially those younger students in junior grades have suffere
48、d from it already and many of them have returned home to receive medical treatment. We are deeply moved by a teacher in our school. Recently she wears a pair of dark sunglasses while giving classes to her students because she suffers from the disease but doesnt want to give up her students studies.W
49、ith the rapid spread of the “pink eye”, schools in our city have been taking various preventive measures and our school is no exception. Every day, our teachers remind us to wash hands as often as possible, especially before three meals. Besides，we are also advised not to go to the crowded places or
50、 big gatherings. If several cases of “pink eye” are found in a class, the students have to stay home until they have recovered. In my opinion, the most effective way to protect ourselves is not to use others goods casually and form a good habit of eye using. How is the “pink eye” control in your cit
51、y? Please let me know about it. I hope everything is going well with you.Take care! Yours Li Hua例二：请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面：1. 描述这幅漫画的内容。2. 是否同意他们的教育方式, 并陈述理由。3. 对家庭教育提出建议。注意：1. 词数：150左右。 2. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。3. 参考词汇： 溺爱 spoil v. As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate thei
52、r child in different ways. _As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways. Father educates their child with a ruler but Mother with a bar of chocolate. What is illustrated in the picture is that Father is too hard on their child while Mother spoils him. They a
53、dopt strikingly inconsistent methods, which makes their child confused.I subscribe to neither of their education methods. If we always give children severe punishment, they will become nervous and lack self-confidence or become violent and aggressive, following in the fathers footsteps. If we always
54、 love children too much, they will turn out to be self-centered and dependent, tending to do whatever they want to.So far as I am concerned, it is better to use appropriate methods based on childrens individual personalities. Since praise and criticism both play vital roles in childrens education, i
55、t is essential that parents should try to maintain the balance between love and strictness. Only in this way can children benefit from proper family education and achieve all-round development. (157 words)五、说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）说明事物现状事物本身的优缺点（
56、或一方面）你对现状（或前景）的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First -(的优点之一). Besides -（的优点之二）. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that -(
57、的第一个缺点)To make matters worse,-(的第二个缺点) Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to -(我的看法)(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circums
58、tances we are in. Only by this way, -(对前景的预测)例一：吉尼斯世界纪录近年来在中国受到不少人的追捧，但同时有些记录也受到了一些人的质疑。下表是支持者和反对者的主要观点，请根据此表用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。 观点支持者4. 在观看挑战中得到了快乐，同时增长了知识，开阔了视野。5. 挑战者坚持不懈的精神值得敬佩。反对者有些人申报的吉尼斯世界纪录是无意义的、浪费的、甚至存在很大的危险性你的观点注意：1.行文应连贯、内容应完整2.开头已经给出 3.词数:100-120词左右这是一篇议论文, 可采用二段式论证法. 第一段提出问题(总写), 并用论据进行正
59、反两方面的论证（分写）；第二段用一两句话谈谈自己的看法。Sample writing : Nowadays more and more Chinese people are interested in Guinness records. They say that its a pleasure to watch the challenges and they can learn a lot from them. Whats more, the determination of the challengers deserves our respect. Others say that some
60、records which are applied for are meaningless, wasteful and even dangerous for challengers. In my opinion, we shouldnt waste a lot of time and money in participating in meaningless challenges but devote ourselves to some interesting, helpful and inspiring activities.例二：最近，山东省教育厅下重手整治全省中小学加班加点的现象。作为一
61、名高三学生，请结合自己及身边的实际谈谈你对这一举措的认识。Shandong Provincial Education Department has recently taken strict measures to make sure that no student has to go to school on weekends or during official holidays. _Shandong Provincial Education Department has recently taken strict measures to make sure that no student
62、 has to go to school on weekends or during official holidays. For the first time in our senior middle school life my friends and I enjoyed a full-length winter vacation ,and for the first time in years we are free to do what is necessary and important to meet our personal needs .In the past years ,w
63、e kept working hard from morning till night in order to get a higher mark in the college entrance exam. We omitted everything (such as art classes ,social activities ,etc. )that did not have a direct relationship with that goal .Consequently ,many of us are weak both physically and mentally. Over 70
64、 percent of my classmates are near-sighted If the whole generation of us continue to live this way, what would the future of our nation be like?! Id like to express my heartfelt thanks to our responsible government for its wise and timely decision to bring all that to an end.(147 words).精品资料。欢迎使用。高考资源网w。w-w*k&s%5￥u高考资源网w。w-w*k&s%5￥u
