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1、Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.本单元以“规则”为话题,结合此话题就学校和家里的规章制度进行了论述。写作中常涉及这一话题。写作时可以发表自己的观点,在表达观点时,要有理有据,观点不能偏激。写作此类话题作文的常用表达有:(1)Ithink teenagers should be allowed to (2)Iagree that(3)Idont agree with有用的表达:1.choose ones own clothes 选择某人自己的衣服 make a choice 做选择2.allow sb

2、to do sth 允许某人做某事3.shopping center 购物中心4.drivers license 驾照5.worry about=be worried about 担心6.part-time job 兼职工作7.get ones ears pierced 得某人的耳朵被刺穿(打耳洞)have ones hair cut=cut ones hair 使得头发被剪(理发)8.serious enough 足够严肃,严谨9.work at night 在夜间工作10.wear silly earring 戴傻傻的耳环11.sb need to do sth 某人需要做某事12.spe

3、nt time with friends 花时间和朋友在一起13.be excited about sth/doing sth 对某物、做某事感到兴奋14.take photos=take a photo 照相15.use a flash 使用闪光灯新16.protect/keep /stop sb /sth from doing sth 阻止某人/某物做某事17.stop to do sth 停下来去做某事 stop doing sth停止正在做的事情 18.stay by my side 呆在我旁边19make sure 确信20 keep sb away from sth 使得某人远离某

4、物21.hurt oneself 伤到某人自己22.shout angrily 生气地大叫23.talk back 顶嘴24.think back to 回想到25.regret doing sth 后悔做过某事 regret to do sth 后悔去做某事26.encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事27.give sb a chance to do sth=give sb chances to do sth给某人机会做某事Have a chance to do sth=have chances to do sth有机会做某事28.make ones own decis

5、ion 自己做决定29.western countries 西方的国家 30.manage to do sth 设法做某事31.get to class late 上课迟到32.take the test 参加考试 pass the test 通过考试fail the text 考试失败 take the test later 补考33.be strict with sb in sth 对某人在某方面要求严格34.hobby(名,爱好)hobbies新课 35.get in the way of (doing)妨碍,挡道36.run(动,跑)runner(名,运动员,跑步者)37.runnin

6、g star 运动明星38.on ones school team 在某人的校队39.grow up 长大40.achieve ones dream =make ones dream come true 实现某人的梦想41.have nothing against doing sth没有理由反对做某事42.agree/disagree to do sth 同意/不同意做某事43.be serious about sth/doing sth对某事/做某事严肃/认真44.its fair/unfair to do sth 做某事是公平/不公平的【典型例题】国有国法,校有校规。在你的学校中一定有很多

7、的规章制度规范同学们的行为。请你写一篇短文,向大家介绍一两条校规或校纪,并谈一下自己的看法。_【优秀范文】There are many rules in our school.At our school we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. Ithink young people shouldlook smart, so Id like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wear uni

8、forms, we shouldbe allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.Although we have different views on the rules, Ithink everyone should obey the school rules.【常考类型】1 (2017浙江初三一模)为配合学校“诚信教育”活动,学校英语报开展了以“Try to be honest”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面的内容提示,写一篇征文

9、稿。(1)列举你班同学存在的不诚实现象:抄作业,考试作弊,说谎话.;(2)简述诚实的重要性,并用你的一次具体经历加以说明。注意:(1)文中不得出现真实的人名和学校名称。(2)词数100左右。(3)短文首句仅供参考,不计入总数。参考词汇:作弊cheat(v.)说谎tell a lieTry to be honestTo be honest is one of the most treasured traditional values in China._【范文】Try to be honestTo be honest is one of the most treasured traditiona

10、l values in China. The children are taught to be honest when they are very young. At schools the students are also instructed to be honest.However, with the development of society, we often hear complaints about dishonesty. Reports with the theme of dishonesty often appear in the media. For example,

11、 some people try to get rich and live a comfortable life. But they do not work hard honestly, instead they cheat others. They sell something quite ordinary at a very high price. Some peoples delaying paying back the loan can serve as another example. Some people, including some college students, get

12、 loan from the bank, and promise to pay within, say, 3 years. However, they dont do that.The dishonest people sometimes can get benefit from their behaviors. So some people assert that dishonesty can bring people benefit, while honesty only makes people suffer. Is that so? Definitely not. It is alwa

13、ys true that honesty is the best policy. It pays to be honest. The cheater selling the treasure mentioned above will surely be disclosed and punished some day. On the contrary, if he had been honest, neither the buyer nor he himself would have suffered. The people who do not return money in time wil

14、l sooner or later become infamous, and will not get the money from others again. If he had acted differently, he would have earned respect and trust, meanwhile, the bank would not have suffered from loss.【解析】这是一篇诚信征文,英语作文要注意人称和时态,注意提供的观点、材料,要注意句子的完整性,谓语动词的正确形式,句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文,要忠实于材料,不必扩展,注意用好连词,多用非谓

15、语,慎用较难的句型,一定不能写错句。2 (2019全国初三单元测试)俗话说:“国有国法,家有家规。”为了使子女身心健康、顺利成长,使家庭成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐,每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如:必须按时回家,不准玩电脑游戏等。请你结合你家的实际情况,根据下面的提示和要求,以“My family rules”为题,写一篇短文。提示:1. 家里有哪些家规; 2. 对家规的感受; 3. 对父母的建议。要求:词数100左右。_例文:My family rulesMy parents are very strict with me,and they have made some basic

16、 rules that I must obey. Firstly,I must get home and finish my homework on time after school. Secondly,I cannot play computer games,even in my free time. Thirdly,I have to do some chores,such as making the bed and tidying my bedroom. If I break one of them,I will be punished. But thanks to these rul

17、es,I can live a healthy and regular life.I think the second rule is unfair to me. I hope sometimes I could be allowed to play computer games for a while. It will make me relaxed.【解析】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,请你结合你家的实际情况,根据下面的提示和要求,以“My family rules”为题,写一篇短文。提示:1. 家里有哪些家规; 2. 对家规的感受; 3. 对父母的建议。要求:词数100左右。第二段

18、叙述“守株待兔”这一故事;第三段概括故事寓意并结尾。2.例文点评:例文采用第一人称来叙述故事内容;时态采用一般现在时为主。这篇文章语言规范,叙事清楚,时态运用正确,叙述清楚条里,语句通顺,意思连贯,特别适用了表示先后顺序的词(First, Secondly, Thirdly)使文章更具条理性,思维缜密。3.高分亮点:短语:are very strict with;after school;play computer games;such as;make me relaxed。句型: 定语从句they have made some basic rules that I must obey.条件状

19、语从句If I break one of them,I will be punished.宾语从句I hope sometimes I could be allowed to play computer games for a while.【点睛】这篇文章语言规范,叙事清楚,时态运用正确,叙述清楚条里,语句通顺,意思连贯,特别适用了表示先后顺序的词(First, Secondly, Thirdly)使文章更具条理性,思维缜密。(1)学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。(2)列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。(3)切忌堆砌词语、句

20、子,注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 (4)注意书写的规范:大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。 (5)注意检查:单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。3 (2019山东初三课时练习)你校的英语俱乐部将开辟专栏讨论“中学生赞同和不赞同的一些家规”。假如你叫王婷,请你根据下面的要点提示用英语写一篇短文向该栏目投稿。要点提示:1.列出你赞同的一条家规并陈述观点; 2.列出你不赞同的一条家规并陈述观点。要求:2.内容须包括所有的要点,可适当增加细节; 2.词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。My name is Wang Ting. As the saying goes,“

21、Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.” So there are many rules in my family._例文:My name is Wang Ting. As the saying goes,“Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.” So there are many rules in my family. I have to clean my bedroom every day. I think its a good rule. On

22、 the one hand,I should learn to look after myself from a young age. On the other hand,it is comfortable and relaxing for me to sleep in a clean bedroom. Im not allowed to have my own hobbies-singing and drawing. I dont agree with it. I think my parents should support my dreams. Thats because dreams

23、can make me study hard and be full of energy. I really hope my parents can understand me and give me more freedom.【解析】1. 题干解读:本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文,主题是对一些家规的看法,重点就是要分别具体阐述自己赞同的家规以及不赞同的家规,并且把自己的观点表达的清楚透彻,为什么赞同,为什么不赞同。2. 例文点评:文章采用先总后分的结构把意思表达的很明确。先以谚语“无规矩不成方圆”总体概括文章大意,然后分别描写自己赞同的观点及为什么赞同的原因,然后再阐述自己不赞同的观点及

24、为什么不赞同的原因,文章结构清晰,结构层次感较强,语言表述准确清晰。3. 高分亮点:短语:have to;on the one hand;on the other hand;look after;agree with;from a young age。句型:I think宾语从句;it is adj. for sb. to do sth.。4 (2019山东初三单元测试)Loving English杂志社计划进行一些针对中学生对在家生活看法的调查。假如你叫林森,请你就邮件中所提出的问题,给该杂志社的编辑回一封电子邮件,发表自己的意见,并说明喜欢或者不喜欢的理由。Dear students,Th

25、ere must be some rules in your family,right?How do you like them?Whats the best rule and whats the worst rule?Please e-mail us and share your thoughts with our readers.Loving English要求:1.回答邮件中提出的所有问题,并表达你的看法。2.词数90左右,电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。Dear Editor,There are many rules in my family,some good and s

26、ome bad. _ Yours,Lin Sen例文:Dear Editor,There are many rules in my family,some good and some bad. My parents are very strict with me. For example,I have to get up at six every morning and I have to be in bed by ten. Its hard for me but I think its necessary. Thanks to these rules,I am always in good

27、health. Also,I cant play computer games before I finish my homework. I think this is the best rule, because I can play computer games for a while after all, and it always leads me to do my homework first.But I cant go out on the night of weekdays, and on weekends, I have to go home before seven. I t

28、hink that is unfair! Students should be allowed to have their own spare time with friends. We can study together and exercise together. This is the worst rule I have ever met!Yours,Lin Sen【解析】题干解读:该题目属于材料作文,要求学生以林森的身份给杂志社回一封邮件。邮件内容要包括描述自己家的家规、你是如何看待它们的、其中最好和最差的家规分别是什么、你喜不喜欢这些家规并给出理由。例文点评:例文用第一人称展开介绍

29、,时态采用一般现在时为主。文章详细列举了一些家规以及“我”对它们的看法,特别点明了我认为最好的和最差的家规是什么,并给出了原因。文章内容符合材料要求,语言很有条理,文章层次分明。高分亮点:短语:be strict with;thanks to;for a while;after all。句型:before引导的时间状语从句;because引导的原因状语从句;省略关系代词的定语从句。5 (2019山东初三单元测试)假如你将成为一名司机,你觉得哪些事情是应该做的,哪些事情是不应该做的?请根据以下提示写一篇短文,不少于60词。要求:条理清楚,意思连贯,句式规范。提示:1. 不能无证驾驶,应懂得交通规

30、则;2. 遵守交通法规,不应该闯红灯;3. 不应该酒后驾车;4. 不应该在驾车时接打电话。_例文:If you want to become a driver, you should learn to drive carefully and understand some knowledge about driving. First, you shouldnt drive without a drivers license. You should study the traffic rules. Second, you must obey the traffic rules and dont

31、go when the traffic light is red. Third, you mustnt drive after drinking. Its very dangerous. Fourth, you shouldnt call when driving.【解析】1.题干解读:本文属于说明文写作,先总述司机要求to drive carefully and understand some knowledge about driving;接着分四点介绍哪些事情是应该做的,哪些事情是不应该做的。2.例文点评:这篇习作虽然只有一个自然段,但结构清晰,是“总分式”结构,用第二人称介绍了一些驾驶

32、常识。内容丰富,条理清楚,意思连贯,句式规范,是一篇优秀的习作。3.高分亮点:短语:want to do、learn to do、a drivers license、the traffic rules、after drinking句型:Second, you must obey the traffic rules and dont go when the traffic light is red.(复杂并列结构)If you want to become a driver, you should learn to drive carefully and understand some know

33、ledge about driving.(条件状语从句)Fourth, you shouldnt call when driving.(非谓语动词结构)【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。6(2019山东枣庄初三)假如你是班长,学校图书管理员要你根据下列提纲向你们班的同学宣布阅览室的一些规定:1阅览室开放时间:星期一至星期五的下午5:006:00;星期六上午8:0011:30。

34、2不准在阅览室大声朗读。3不准在阅览室吃零食。4不准在阅览室使用手机。5不准在阅览室吸烟。6不准把书和杂志带出阅览室。要求:1.词数:80100词;2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。_【范文】Attention,please!Id like to tell you something about the rules of the school reading room.The reading room is open between 5:00p.m.and 6:00 pm.from Monday to Friday.It is also open between 8:00 am.and 11:30

35、 am on Saturdays.After you enter the reading room,you should keep it clean and quiet.Firstly,you are not allowed to read aloud or have snacks.Secondly,you are not allowed to use your cell phones or smoke.Finally,you are not allowed to take the books or magazines out of the reading room.I hope everyo

36、ne can obey the rules.Thats all.Thank you. 【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。写作要点给出的比较详细。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写,要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。在句式运用上,可把简单的祈使句式转化为You are not allowed to do 这种句式形式。另外,为了使文章更具条理性,可使用firstly, secondly, thirdly ,finally等副词把文章串联起来。

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