1、 专题 09 读后续写之高分句型-新高考满分作文读后续写高分突破目录1. 非谓语动词.， 主语+谓语.2. 主语+谓语， 非谓语动词./独立主格结构3. 主语+谓语.， 谓语.， and谓语.4. 形容词/副词， 主语+谓语.5. 倒装句6. 强调句7. 状语从句8. 定语从句9. 随堂练习 句型 一 非谓语.， 主+谓. 1. （2023届江苏省南京市第一中学高三一模试题）Having finished reading this article, I was praised by Ms.读完文章后，MS表扬了我。2. （湖北省高中名校联盟2022-2023学年高三试题） Taking a d
2、eep breath, I pressed their doorbell and the front door opened.3. （2022年全国新高考I卷） Hearing my words, David turned to me tremblingly with tears spilling out of his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determination to finish the cross-country run. 口气，我按响了门铃然后前门打开了。4. （河北省衡水市部分学校2022-2023学年高三上学期测试） Wan
3、ting to do something for her in return, I went to the store with a small gift several days later and told her how grateful I was. 句型 二 主+谓.， 非谓语/独立主格 1.（2020年浙江卷1月读后续写）My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. 我的心疯狂的跳动，不知道该怎么办。2.The girl began kicking and swinging, trying to get free of the man
4、s hold.女孩开始又踢又晃，试图摆脱这个人的控制。3.Her brother was lying on his back, trapped under the truck. 她哥哥仰面躺着，被困在卡车下面。5. “Shut up!”James yelled out , his voice quivering with rage. “闭嘴！” 詹姆斯喊道，他的声音因为愤怒而颤抖。6. (湖南省长沙市雅礼中学2022-2023学年高三读后续写) “Doing what is right is not always easy,” he said, handing me the phone, “I
5、 am proud of you.” 句型 三 主+谓.， 谓语.， and谓语. 1. They put on performances, chatted, and then said goodbye. 他们表演，聊天，然后道别。2. She stopped the truck safely outside the garage and then rushed back to the basement.她把卡车安全地停在车库外面，然后冲回地下室。3. (2022年新高考全国I卷读后续写) “Good job, David!” he caught my eye, flashed me a to
6、othy grin and said, “That was easy!” 他吸引了我的目光，对我咧嘴一笑，说：“这很容易！” 句型 四 形容词/副词， 主+谓. 1. (河北省衡水市部分学校2022-2023学年高三上学期测试) Thankfully, this time my husband answered my phone and came to my assistance as soon as possible. 谢天谢地，这一次我丈夫接了我的电话并且尽快的来帮我了。2.Eager and excited, she waved her hands, trying to attract
7、othersattention. 她即热切又兴奋，挥动双手，想引起别人的注意。4. Exhausted and scared, Jane lay down near a stone, missing her family. Jane又累又害怕，躺在一块石头旁边，想念着她的家人。5. Immediately, absolute darkness ruled the forest. 刹那间，森林里一片漆黑。6. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my h
8、orse.我害怕会伤害到这个可爱的小家伙，于是不由自主地叫了一声，让我的马停下来。6. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.她高兴地说不出话来，紧紧地抱着儿子，眼里泪水涌动。 句型 五 倒装句 1. Not until then did he know what had happened. 2. Only then did he know what had happened. 到那时他才知道发生了什么事。3. (2022年浙江卷1月读后续写
9、) I started to wait to leave immediately we arrived at the place, and so did he.我们一到达便开始着急离开，他也是一样。 句型 六 强调句 1. （2021年新高考I卷读后续写） It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. 并不是礼物本身，而是孩子们对她的爱让她十分感动。2.( 湖北省高中名校联盟2022-2023学年高三上学期11月期中试题） It was on that night
10、 that I finally realized why my Mom always helped people with her kind heart.在那个夜晚我终于意识到我妈妈一直善良的在帮助人们。3.It was at the crucial moment that an excellent idea occurred to me.在这个关键时刻，我急中生智想到了一个好主意。 句型 七 状语从句 1.（2022年浙江卷6月）As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. 当他们向我这个方向时
11、，我露出了灿烂幸福的笑容。2. (江苏省南京市第一中学2022-2023学年高三上学期质量检测) When the boy woke up hungry, he was amazed at the wonderful food made by Jeff, who was really good at cooking. 当男孩饿着醒来时，他惊讶于杰夫做的美味实物，杰夫真的很擅长做饭。3. (2022年浙江卷1月读后续写) He was a little surprised to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flowers and f
12、ruits. 当看到我拿着鲜花和水果走进病房，他有一点点吃惊。4. (2022年新高考全国I卷读后续写) As I started to shout encouragement, other voices around me took up the call. 当我开始大声鼓励时，我周围的其他人也跟着喊了起来。5. (2022年浙江卷1月读后续写) Though I wanted to share my ideas with him fully, I failed to do so for fear that I would hold him back. 虽然我想跟他充分地分享我的想法，但是我
13、没有这样做，因为我害怕会阻碍他。 句型 八 定语从句 1. （江苏省南京市第一中学2022-2023学年高三上学期质量检测） He held David all the time, trying to give the little boy some warmth, which considerably relieved Davids sadness.他一直抱着大卫，试图给这个小男孩一些温暖，这大大缓解了大卫的悲伤。2.（安徽省十校2022-2023学年高三上学期英语试题） Someone surprised David with his very own Xbox, which of cou
14、rse made the boy overjoyed. “I was about to cry upon seeing the gift,” said David.有人用自己的Xbox游戏机给了大卫一个惊喜，这当然让男孩欣喜若狂。“看到礼物我都快哭出来了，”大卫说道。2. （2021年新高考I卷读后续写） Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. 父亲帮他们调解火，这是成功的关键。 随堂练习 (2023届粤湘鄂名校联盟高三上学期第一次联考英语试题)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成
15、一篇完整的短文。Cody always knew his family was different. While other kids went to the beach for summer vacation, he and his mom visited the worlds largest basket, or the worlds largest baseball bat, or the worlds largest fork. These are real things. And Codys mom had photos of them during those trips hang
16、ing on the wall. As a little kid, Cody thought these vacations were the best ever. But with time going by, he started to feel embarrassed. When his classmates would ask where hed gone for vacation, hed say, “No place special.”On a Sunday morning, his mom said, “I was reading this article about the w
17、orlds largest gathering of people dressed as turkeys. It was in Texas, and it was only 661 people! Five times as many people live in our town. I want to hold a similar event here around Thanksgiving Day, which is a few weeks away.”“Mom,” Cody said. “No.”“Yes!” Mom said. “I just called the newspaper.
18、 The announcement runs tomorrow. The day after Thanksgiving, everyone will meet in the town square dressed as turkeys!”A few days before Thanksgiving, Cody and his mom sat down for dinner. Cody set down his fork. “Do you have any idea what the kids at school think about the turkey dress-up?”“No,” Mo
19、m said. “Well, they have a lot to say.”Mom looked down at her fingernails, then looked at Cody. “Im afraid its too late to call it off, sweetie.” At last, it was the day of the great turkey dress-up. But instead of bouncing around the house as shed been all week, Mom was sitting on the living-room f
20、loor, shoulders slumped (耷拉着). “I cant believe the DJ is sick,” she said. “What am I going to do? Music is what makes a festivity festive! I dont know how to work all this stuff.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Mom sighed and leaned back against the couch. _With the happy memories brought back
21、by the photos on the wall, Cody said, “Ill do it.” _【答案】【参考范文】Mom sighed and leaned back against the couch. With no music, the turkey dress-up might actually have to be canceled, which meant there would be no more embarrassment. Cody realized this was his chance. Before his blurting out what was in
22、his mind, his eyes fell on the framed photos from their vacations over the years which hung on the wall above the couch. Cody looked at the first one. He was about five when they went to Kentucky to see the worlds largest baseball bat. His smile was almost as big as the bat while his moms smile was
23、even bigger. Suddenly, Cody changed his mind. With the happy memories brought back by the photos on the wall, Cody said, “Ill do it.” “Do what?” asked Mom, sitting up. “Ill be the DJ. I can figure out the equipment.” She gave him a big hug. “Cody, youre a lifesaver!” Cody had the music set up, and t
24、he town square was full of people dressed as turkeys. Codys mom was decked out in extra-long feathers. They all appeared to be having fun. Best of all, his mom was having a blast. He realized he and his mom had always been there for each other, trying to make each other smile.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了科迪和其妈
25、妈的故事。科迪一直都知道他的家庭与众不同，一开始他还觉得这是好事，但是他逐渐觉得很尴尬。他妈妈决定举办一次活动，遇到了困难。后来他在旅游照片的启发下，帮助妈妈解决了困难，举办了活动。与其同时，他也意识到他和他妈妈一直都在身边，努力让彼此微笑，是最重要的事情。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“妈妈叹了口气，靠在沙发上。”可知，第一段可描写科迪妈妈面对此次困难做出的行动以及科迪的反应。由第二段首句内容“带着墙上的照片勾起的美好回忆，科迪说“我会做的。”可知，第二段可描写科迪和其妈妈采取的措施以及活动的举办情况。2.续写线索：科迪态度变化妈妈计划举办活动DJ生病科迪受启发帮助妈妈3.词汇激活行
26、为类意识到：realize/aware of/recognize改变：change /convert/alter使回忆起：bring back /recall/recollect情绪类尴尬：embarrassment /awkwardness积极：have fun /enjoy oneself/have a good time【点睛】高分句型1 With no music, the turkey dress-up might actually have to be canceled, which meant there would be no more embarrassment.（由连接词which引导的非限制性定语从句） 高分句型2 He was about five when they went to Kentucky to see the worlds largest baseball bat.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句） 高分句型3 He realized he and his mom had always been there for each other, trying to make each other smile.（由省略that引导的宾语从句及现在分词作状语）
