1、广东省佛山市2016高考英语二轮：短文改错训练（2）参考答案短文改错Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to EmeiMountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, its famous 1. _mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 2. _was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3 _the mountain. The three of them were
2、very excited. As we 4._climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5. _and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 6. _since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 7. _Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at 8. _the top of the mountain. The food w
3、as expensive and 9. _the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleepat the moment my head touched the pillow. 10. _答案及解析1. famous 前加 a。mountain 为可数名词。又是第一次被谈及， 故应在 famous 前加不定冠词。2. 此行无错。3. noon 后加 when 。It was about noon 是主句， 后面的应为从句， 故在 noon 后加when， 此处 when 意为“在时候”。4. them 改为 us。综观全文可知， 此文是
4、用第一人称的口吻来叙述的。5. visiting 改为 visited。此处climbed， visited 和 told 构成并列谓语。6. picture 改为 pictures。7. passes 改为 passed。应与全文时态一致。8. 删去 down。9. and 改为 but。饭菜很贵不是一件令人愉快的事， 而服务质量很高确实是一件好事， 故前后为转折关系。10. 删去 at。the moment直接引导时间状语从句。短文改错（一）A few days ago, Miss Wang was going home by bike. While he was76. riding in
5、 the street, she saw the man with a knife in his hand and his77. face covering with a piece of cloth running towards her. The man78. took her handbag out of the basket of her bike and ran away before79. she could do anything. There was no one she could turn for help at80. that time, for it was very
6、late at night. Lucky, she had her mobile81. phone at hand. Immediately when she took it out and phoned the82. police. She told them what the man was like and in which directions83. he had run. The police came very quickly and catch the robber. Miss84. Wang got her handbag back and felt very grateful
7、 for the police had85. done for her.参考答案-（一）76he she 77. 第二个the a 78. covering covered 79. 80. turn to 81. Lucky luckily 82. 去掉when 83. directions direction 84. catch caught 85. for what短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分） 以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号
8、（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：请在答题卡上作答。Dear Editor,Recently, my classmates have had a heated discussion about that 76. _we should have optional courses in high schools. Some students were 77. _in favor of the optional courses. They say interest is best teacher 78. _and our
9、spare time will be colorful and meaningful. Students 79. _can not only enlarge their knowledges but also improve their abilities. 80. _However, others are against the idea, said that optional courses81. _will take up too much time as well as energy. In addition to, some optional 82. _coruses have so
10、mething to do with the College Entrance Examination. They 83. _are afraid theyll fall behind their classmates if they will take the optional84. _courses. Id like to take one or two of the optional coruses, which, I think,will certain benefit me a lot. 85. _ Yorus truly, Li Hua参考答案：Dear Editor,Recent
11、ly, my classmates have had a heated discussion about that 76. whetherwe should have optional courses in high schools. Some students were 77. are in favor of the optional courses. They say interest isbest teacher 78. the and our spare time will be colorful and meaningful. Students 79. their can not o
12、nly enlarge their knowledges but also improve their abilities. 80. knowledge However, others are against the idea, said that optional courses81. saying will take up too much time as well as energy. In addition to, some optional 82. to coruses have something to do with the College Entrance Examinatio
13、n. They 83. nothing are afraid theyll fall behind their classmates if they will take the optional84. will courses. Id like to take one or two of the optional coruses, which, I think, will certain benefit me a lot. 85. certainly Yorus truly, Li Hua短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分；满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一题做出判断：如
14、无错误，在该行右边横线上划对号：如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下面情况改正： 此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原文没有错误不要改。To everyone in the world, money was a sensitive topic.61_Not one can live without money in modern society. People 62_has different opin
15、ions on it. Some people think one should 63_live to make money, when others make money to live. 64_In my opinion, the latter should reasonable. 65_We should not be the slave of money. Although money 66_means a lot in our life, but it does not mean everything . 67_We cant exchange it for friendship o
16、r love. Money indeed could 68_make a person enjoying his life for a while but not all his life. 69_On a word, money is something but not everything. 70_【答案】61, was改为is 62Not改为No 63has改为have 64when改为while 65should后加be 66slave后加s 67but去掉 68.69.enjoying改为enjoy 70On改为In短文改错（共10题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错
17、误。请再有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spendweekend with you. Luckily theI was completely tree then, so Ill say” yes. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8:
18、00 p. m. amin Friday evening.on I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toysthan I did. There was one on particular Id always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasnt looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know, Id done something wrong. Lateon, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave It back. She knows what had happened,but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
