1、规范练(三十) .短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()画掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Tom，How are you？ I am just writing to tell you I had wonderful time at your place in New
2、 York.I arrived home， safely and sound. I have something to ask for you. I have been looking through my bags for my favorite red shirt， or I cant find it somewhere. Im sure I might have left it at your place. Could you look around your house for it？ By the way， I am planning my parents wedding anniv
3、ersary celebration. I had already invited you and your parent. I wonder whether you would like to come to Chicago this time. What do you think of it？ Take care of you and write to me soon. Giving my regards to Uncle Bernard and Aunt Norah.Love，Diana答案：Dear Tom，How are you? I am just writing to tell
4、you I had wonderful time at your place in New York.I arrived home, and sound. I have something to ask you. I have been looking through my bags for my favorite red shirt, I cant find it . Im sure I have left it at your place. Could you look around your house for it? By the way, I am planning my paren
5、ts wedding anniversary celebration. I already invited you and your . I wonder whether you would like to come to Chicago this time. What do you think of it? Take care of and write to me soon. my regards to Uncle Bernard and Aunt Norah.Love，Diana.书面表达假定你是李华，担任学校外教Allen的学生助手。请你给回美国度假的Allen写一封email，告诉他学
6、校扩建改造后的变化。主要内容包括：1.重建了教学楼，实验楼；2.学生教室设在二楼和三楼，教师办公室搬至一楼尽头；3.原来的车库改建为新食堂。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Allen，Im Li Hua， your student assistant.Yours，Li Hua参考范文Dear_Mr._Allen，Im_Li_Hua，_your_student_assistant. How about your vacation in America？ Im writing to inform you of
7、 the changes in our school.With the increasing number of students， we have rebuilt the old teaching building and laboratory building， which have become cleaner and wider than before. Classrooms are arranged on the second floor and the third floor， and the teachers office has been moved to the end of
8、 the first floor. What used to be the garage has been changed into our new school canteen， which is twice as big as the old one. In addition， the big news for you is that coffee and steak are served during the lunch time. Im sure you will enjoy them.Im looking forward to your early return， Mr. Allen
9、.Yours，Li_Hua阶段回顾(规范练二十六三十)单词积累1.plunge v.骤降2.heartbreaking adj. 令人心碎的3.witness v. 目击4.rub v. 搓5.extinction n. 灭绝6.revive v. (使)苏醒，复活7.conservation n. (对自然环境的)保护8.endanger v. 危及，使遭危险9.prehensile adj. 能抓住东西的，缠绕性的10.nocturnal adj. 夜间活动的11.predator n. 捕食性动物12.definitely adv. 肯定，当然；确切地plicated adj. 复杂的，
10、难懂的14.perceive v. 注意到，意识到；视为，认为15.conflict n. 冲突，争执，争论16.positivity n. 积极性17.topography n. 地貌18.latitude n. 纬度19.longitude n. 经度20.dread v. 非常害怕，极为担心短语整理1.be supposed to do sth.被期待去做某事2.a couple of 一对3.trick sb. into doing sth. 欺骗某人干某事4.be crucial to sb. 对某人至关重要5.figure out 计算出；理解难句分析1.One value of
11、Thai culture that I do not accept is that young people in Thailand have to respect and obey old people all the time.分析本句中第一个that引导定语从句作value的定语；第二个that引导表语从句。翻译我不接受的泰国文化中的一条价值观是泰国的年轻人必须一直尊重并且遵从老年人。2.The couples eight children said the two had been inseparable since meeting as teenagers， once sharing
12、 the bottom of a bunk bed(床铺) on a ferry rather than sleeping one night apart.分析这是一个复合句。said的后面是宾语从句，sharing.是现在分词作状语，其逻辑主语是“the two”。翻译这对夫妇的8个孩子说，夫妻二人自青少年时期相遇后就没有分开过，他们曾经挤在渡轮上的双层床的下铺，也不愿分开睡一个晚上。3.The wristbands were scanned as eventgoers entered and left the location，so Guinness had a head count at
13、 all times.分析The wristbands were scanned. so.(so连接并列句)并列分句1：The wristbands were scanned as eventgoers entered as引导时间状语从句and left the location并列分句2：Guinness had a head count at all times翻译参与活动的人们进入和离开场地时需要扫描腕带，这样吉尼斯可以随时记录参与的人数。4.That means when your daughter is anxious at bedtime because of a scary m
14、ovie she saw or because she went through a bout(一阵) of separation anxiety at day care，you take an extra 15 minutes to hug her and calm her down before leaving the room.分析主句：That means.从句：when your daughter is anxious at bedtimewhen引导时间状语从句because_of a scary movie she saw or because she went through
15、a 介词短语作原因状语because引导原因状语从句bout(一阵) of separation anxiety at day care， you_take_an_extra_15_minutes_to_hug_her_and_calm_her_down before leaving the room. 这是宾语从句中的主句翻译这就意味着当你的女儿因看了一部恐怖电影或者在日托所经历了一阵分离的焦虑而害怕得睡不着觉时，你需要在离开房间之前多用15分钟去拥抱她，使她平静下来。5.So despite the lack of privacy and having to live by their parents rules again， the advantages outweigh the disadvantages for many young workers who choose to stay at home even if theyre not kids anymore.分析这是一个复合句。even if引导让步状语从句；句中的who choose to stay at home为限制性定语从句修饰先行词many young workers。翻译因此尽管缺少了隐私，并且又在父母的管理下生存，但是对于许多即使已经不再是小孩子了而仍然选择了待在家里的年轻工作者来说还是利大于弊。
